Well last chapter wasn't well written since I kind of rushed through it and had more than my usual errors. I think this chapter is better and way more exciting since a lot is gone happen just wait[hehe]. I'm not sure but I heard that I could get an editor if I can I would like to have one so if anybody knows something about it please tell me. I'm also writing a second story if you wanna check it out and tell me if it's any good. Anyways thank you for all those who follow my story and help me with a comment I really appreciate it. Enjoy this exciting chapter.

Dark Naruto talking

Normal talking


Chapter 9

The clouds were starting to gather, they had a black and gray color. The sound of loud thunder could be heard from a distance and lightning could be seen almost touching ground. The winds were blowing hard signaling a storm was coming soon. This was just like when Naruto was betrayed. Somewhere in Konoha, in a not so populated place, and old building was standing. Inside there was Naruto {Dark Naruto mode] facing neji. Dark Naruto had control of Naruto mind that's why he didn't pay much attention to Hinatas condition but he was boiling mad inside. They stared at each other as Dark Naruto gave his insane smile at neji.

"This end here, your fate is sealed "said Neji as he ran to attack Dark Naruto. Neji attack with several punches and kicks in gentle fist mode but Dark Naruto just dodge them at last second with not much of an effort. Neji kept on attacking him but couldn't lay a hit on Dark Naruto at all.

"Are you just gone keep dodging forever because sooner or later ill hit you" said Neji with a smirk. Neji threw a punch aiming at his stomach and did a flip in the air as he a kick a Dark Naruto's face. The kick was so close when Dark Naruto just tilted back to dodge the kick. Neji was starting to get frustrated and started to attack more randomly.

"What's wrong, have you lost your temper" said Dark Naruto with a smile.

"SHUT UP "said neji as he aimed a punch at Dark Naruto stomach and hit. Neji smirked at him finally hitting him but his smirk soon faded when he noticed he wasn't the bit hurt. Neji aimed another one with much force but Dark Naruto didn't even flinch.

"Are you done yet "said Dark Naruto as he gave a bored sigh.

Dark Naruto got annoyed at waiting and pushed him back and aimed a punch at Neij's face but didn't hit. He smirked "So you finally decided to join Kakashi, don't think that hit was dodged, it's purpose was exactly for this "said Dark Naruto as he smiled "to bring you in to the fight, things are getting too boring around here" he said as he gave sinister smile.

Kakashi took off his part of the mask that covered his sharingan eye and stared at Dark Naruto. Kakashi then signaled Neji to attack when he does. "Shadow clone justsu "said kakashi as he ran towards Dark Naruto, multiple kakashi's jumped in the air as they tried to kick Dark Naruto in the face while three of them headed towards him with a kunai. Dark Naruto smiled and grabbed his swords on his back and disappeared. All the clones in an instant disappeared, Kakashi than heard a whisper beside him "can't keep up "that came from Dark Naruto with a laugh. Kakashi than felt a little bit of pain in his cheek close to his eye. He looked at his hand he had blood, a small cut was there close to his eye. Kakashi turned around to see him stand there. Then suddenly Dark Naruto heard "You're in my range "coming from neji as he had his Byakugan activated."164 palms "[A.N I think that the right number] said neji as he attacked Dark Naruto with several strikes. Just as that occurred Kakashi shouted "Chidori" as he approached Dark Naruto. Dark Naruto was getting attacked so he didn't notice Kakashi, when he saw him it was too late. The "Chidori "went through Dark Naruto's stomach. Dark Naruto just gasped in pain as blood came out of his mouth and held the huge wound on his stomach [A. N a big hole in his stomach]. Kakashi and Neji just smiled as Dark Naruto fell to his knees.


Meanwhile

Close to the building where the battle was taking place where Naruto friends and old teammates were heading towards the building. [A.N-I don't say Dark Naruto because Dark Naruto is like another person or spirit so they're friend is Naruto].

"its right there "said Alexis pointing at the building as the started to run faster.

"I can feel that the battle already begun "said Shikamaru

"I don't think Naruto can handle both Kakashi and Neji at the same time "said Sakura worried. Alexis and Chris just laughed at her comment. "what's so funny "asked Sakura kind angry at their reaction.

"If I were you I would worry about the people that are fighting Naruto flat chested girl "said Alexis still laughing at it.

"What do you mean "said Sakura surprised

"Well, you see pinky, Naruto's bloodline is so strong it makes the sharingan look as weak as you" said Chris smiling with a little laugh

"idiot" said sakura look at Chris.

"Don't worry your still beautiful "said Chris as he winked. Sakura made a blank expression at his comment.

"Idiot, you can flirt with pinky when we get Naruto "said Alexis sighing at what bad taste Chris had.

"You jealous "said Chris wiggling his eyebrows [A.N imagine lee wiggling his eyebrows]

"NOOOO" said Alexis angry this time

"Wait so Naruto- "said Shikamaru but was cut off by Tenten who said they had arrived. As they arrived the saw Naruto on the ground with a whole in this stomach and blood.

"Naruto noooo" screamed Tenten, Sakura, and Ino at seeing Naruto like that. Alexis and Chris saw Hinata in the chair tied up and in a bad condition. They went to help her not caring at all what the others concern was about since they knew what was going on.


Back to the battle

Kakashi and Neji were smiling at Dark Naruto on the floor when then suddenly they heard a laugh. They turned to see leaf ninja in there and some other shinobi who were helping Hinata. [A. N they're Naruto's friends and old teammates]. They looked at them but it didn't seem like the laugh came from them. Kakashi was about to stop them when he heard "You're not finish with me". Said Dark Naruto who was behind them leaning on a wall. Neji eyes went wide as he saw what they thought was Dark Naruto's body turn into black chakra as it returned to Dark Naruto's eye.

"What! How? "said neji confused and angry. Kakashi got ready to attack and so did neji.

"Alright, it's my turn to have some fun, let's start with kokoshi dude "said Dark Naruto as he cracked his fingers.

"Its Kakashi "he said angrily.

"Like it matters anyway "said Dark Naruto as he disappeared. Kakashi looked around to see where he was gone appeared but suddenly felt a sharp pain in his back. Dark Naruto had made a huge cut on his back, blood splattered everywhere. "You can't not even keep up with me yet you think you can beat me "said Dark Naruto. Neji meanwhile was trying to find him with his Byakugan but suddenly felt a punch in this stomach that made him question his fate. Neji could barely catch his breath when Dark Naruto appeared in front of him. Dark Naruto used his eye to look into Neij's memory. Neji was lost in Dark Naruto's eye it was like looking at a galaxy itself. He was hypnotized by it, Dark Naruto than looked into his memory.


Flashback

Neji looked at Hinata in the eyes as she sat in a chair tied up. "You know you're so beautiful I might keep you and have some fun with you" said Neji with an evil grin. He then licked Hinata from her ear all the way down to her chest close to her breasts. "Once I'm done with Naruto I'll keep you as my sex slave or something "he said as he started to unzip her shirt with his right hand. With his left hand he touched her cheeks than suddenly pulled her hair back. Hinata struggled and cried at Neij's actions which made neji smile. He had already taken off her shirt and undergarment. The only thing she had on was her purple bra on top. Neji than smiled as ran his tongue down the middle part of her breast all the way to the bottom of her stomach. He then started to squish her breast as he started to take of her bra. Hinata just moaned and cried as a tear went down her eye. You could tell Hinata was crying for help. Neji smiled at her tears "Aww are you crying, DID YOU NOT LIKE IT BITCH" he said as he pulled her hair down harder and punched her several times in the face. Hinata cried but it couldn't be heard since she had something in her mouth to cover her voice and screams. She was bleeding with several bruises in her face. Neji than started to unzip her pants and pulled them down. He ran his finger on her left leg all the way down to her feet. He had that perverted smile on his face as he grabbed a kunai and ran it on her right leg and when it reached her knee he stabbed her making the kunai go all the way in. Hinata moved and struggled as she silently cried at the intense pain.

"There you go again with your perverted fun Neji "said kakashi who walked closer to him.

"Yea and you interrupted, what do you want "neji said as he moved away from Hinata.

"Well, its seems the tournament is going like we planned "said kakashi

"Yea kiba is an idiot, his so in love with Hinata that he did anything to keep her to himself, but the idiot went an hit Hinata in front of Naruto "neji said with a smile "that Naruto just came to get in the way but I'll get rid of him soon although his power worries me, he will pay "he said as he punched the wall "but for now I'll just get my anger out on this BITCH" he said as got some wires that were connected to a battery. Hinata cried as a million tears came out and neji just laughed. After a while he just stopped as he left "I'll be back "he said with a smile.


Flashback end

Dark Naruto started to get angrier, his arms started to gain more muscle and his eye started to get darker and the red [x]in his eye started to get redder. Around his eye's, veins started to come out around it. All his body started to gain muscle and his facial appearance changed to a more mature one. The black chakra was so intense that powerful black lightning started to form around him. The air was like poison, the black chakra burned what it touched. Dark Naruto just tilted his head to the side in a weird way as he looked intensely at neji and kakashi to. "How dare you touch her "said Dark Naruto as the air around started to get really powerful. He tightened his fist and with the other hand grabbed one of his swords. "I'm sorry Hinata I wasn't thinking, WHAT THE HELL WAS I DOING ALL THIS TIME "he screamed inside his mind. [A.N. that part wasn't written in italics because its the actual Naruto thinking this]." Your gone pay for this Neji, you thought you were a monster by what you did to her well get ready for your real torture "he said as the pulled out just one of his swords that he had on his back. The moment he pulled it out, a burst of high pressured air was released. The air was so strong neji and kakashi fell down as well as Naruto's friends. The place was starting to collapse. Naruto's friends had gotten Hinata out of the chair and managed to escape before the building collapse.

There was rubble and rocks all around, the remains of the building. Suddenly Neji and Kakashi came out of the rubble." [cough, cough] what the hell, almost died "said Neji he looked around to find Dark Naruto a couple of feet in front of him. "So your mad because I hurt your Hinata, it was so fun the way she cried and moaned when I touched her "he laughed "but the best part is how you never came to save her and her screams wouldn't come out because she had her mouth shut. I loved the way she showed me her fear, the superiority I felt, she is nothing but scum "said Neji as he laughed. Dark Naruto just showed his creepy smile as he tilted his head and started to walk. He suddenly disappeared, Neji activated his Byakugan to try to find him but failed. Dark Naruto than appeared with Kakashi on his hand, he had his hand choking him. Kakashi was full of blood and grunted in pain from the broken bones. He then let kakashi go and Kakashi fell to his knees. He then used his right hand and with it brutally pulled out Kakashi sharingan out. "Aaaaaah!" Said kakashi in pain as blood came out of his eye. Neji's laugh than faded quickly and his eye's widened in fear. He tried walking away slowly from him but Dark Naruto suddenly appeared in front of him. Dark Naruto than with his hand grabbed his face and forcibly open his mouth and made him eat kakashi's eye (A. N he didn't just made him eat it but chew it). Neji tried to vomit it but Dark Naruto made him swallow it. He then used his sword and turned where Kakashi was standing. From where Dark Naruto was standing he swung his sword and a strong black chakra burst came out of it, it reached Kakashi and cut him in half. Neji was now even more scared he basically pooped himself from fear. The power from the sword didn't just kill Kakashi but also left a slash in the ground that went a far distance. Dark Naruto than smiled and opened Neij's mouth as neji struggled to close it. Dark Naruto than pulled his tongue out, neji had a lot of blood coming out, he couldn't even scream. "Well, how does it feel, answer me "he said" ohh that right you can't talk or scream "he laughed insanely. He then attacked him with his knee in the stomach so hard he vomited blood. Neji fell on his back to the ground, Dark Naruto than gave his creepy smile again as he used his sword to cut off his penis. "That's what you get for treating Hinata like that "he said with a smile. He then used his sword again to cut his legs and arms off. Neji had tears coming out from pain as Dark Naruto put his sword back. "I'll let you live because it would be kindness to let you die "he said as he walked off.


Naruto's mind

Naruto was sitting on a chair and in front of him was a table. The room was dark and no furniture around. The color of the walls couldn't be seen since it was so dark. In front of him was Dark Naruto sitting on another chair, he had a cup of glass full of red wine.

"So can I go back now "said Naruto

"I guess I'll let you take control again "said Dark Naruto

"Next time warn me when your gone take control "said Naruto annoyed

"Yeah, yeah whatever "he said rolling his eyes.

"Well see you later, but thanks for what you did to those bastards, I'm gone go to Hinata-chan now "he said as he opened a door and left.

"Sure, your gone regret trusting me "he said with a dark smile as he took a drink of his wine.


Back to reality

Naruto started walking to his friends who were not that far only a couple yards away. Naruto felt light and his body was totally different, all his muscles were more defined and noticeable. He had blood in his hand so he just wiped it off with some dirt but didn't work much so he just kept on walking to them. Neji was bleeding out and about to die. Naruto was so close to get to Hinata, he had tears of sadness and happiness. He was sad about what happened to her and for not being there to evade it, instead he was flirting with Orihime which just mad him angry at himself. He was also happy to see her finally even if she was in that condition they were finally gone be together or so he thought." Hinata "he said as tears fell from his eyes. The storm had passed and the sun was shining which made Naruto's eyes sparkle.

"Naruto over here "he heard his friends say.

"I'm coming guys "Naruto responded happily. Suddenly somebody appeared in front of him. A man about 6ft tall he had a red and a blue eye. He had no shirt on, all of his muscles were very defined. He had a scar on his chest going all the way down to his stomach. He wore black pants and walked in bare feet. His hair was black and spiky. He had needles instead of kunais and a Naginata on his back [A. N a long staff with a blade at the end of it]. The blade on it was long and sharp and the point of it was orange.

"Who are you" said Naruto looking at him knowing he was not a good guy.

"Well I hate to introduce myself unless it for a lady since I am a gentleman. Unfortunately, I have to tell you my name, its Jiro and I'm telling you you're not gone forget it" he said as he smiled.

"What do y- "Naruto said as he felt a punch in his stomach. The punch was so strong the ground behind him started to crack and pulse of strong air was released. Naruto looked around to see who it was revealing Jiro. Jiro than did a flip in the air sideways and grabbed Naruto's head from the back and smashed it to the ground. He was so fast he couldn't block his attack; Naruto's head was smashed to the ground. Jiro than walked to his right leg and stomped on it. His bone could be heard being crushed." Aaaaaah" Naruto screamed.

"Naruto! "said Chris as he ran towards him. "Ice dragon slash "Chris said as swung his sword at Jiro. Jiro grabbed quickly a needle and threw it at Chris. Jiro dodge the slash as Chris received the needle in his chest. Chris grunted in pain and fell to the ground.

"Chris "Alexis screamed as she rushed to help him. She noticed he was holding his chest as he screamed in pain. She opened his shirt quickly and saw that a portion of his chest had been rotten. Sakura jumped in the air to hit him" Cha" said sakura as she went for the strike. Jiro grabbed her hand and twisted her arm with force breaking the joint in her arm. Jiro than kneed her in the stomach and smashed her in the ground. Sakura lost consciousness, Jiro than suddenly felt like he couldn't move. "Shadow possession complete "said Shikamaru "now lee "screamed Shikamaru. Lee jumped in the air "Leaf dance kick "said lee as he aimed for Jiro head. Jiro tilted back dodging it and disappeared. Lee landed in the ground "look out lee "said Shikamaru pointing at Jiro. Lee tried to block but the Naginata sliced his arm. Lee fell to the ground as he grabbed his right arm. All the flesh on the arm was starting to infect and lee screamed.

"How did he-AHHHH" said Shikamaru went he felt the Naginata go through his back and came of his stomach. Shikamaru spit blood several times before his vision faded and lost consciousness.

"Shikamaru!, you BASTAAARD" Said Choji and Tenten as they both came from each side to attack Jiro. Jiro smiled and threw the Naginata at choji and disappeared quickly and appeared in front of Tenten. Tenten saw him and tried to attack him but it was too late, he attacked her with his left arm in the throat and pushed her head down to the ground. Tenten quickly lost consciousness. Meanwhile choji saw the Naginata coming at him and flip sideways and dodge it. As soon as he turned Jiro had appeared in front of his face. Jiro attacked him the same way he did to Tenten and choji passed out. Jiro started walking towards Naruto again but was cut off by Alexis.


Meanwhile

Hinata was regaining consciousness, her vision was blurry. She looked around as she struggled to get up she barely managed to sit down. She looked around and saw rubble, dirt, and brick. Hinata then saw people on the ground. She activated her Byakugan barely and she was shocked at what she saw. All her friends were badly injured, maybe even dead. After looking more around she saw the dead body of Kakashi and remains of Neij's dead body. Even if she hated Neji by now she wouldn't want him to die like that or even die. [A. N yea hinatas kind]. What shocked her most was when she saw Natsu all beat up. [A.N. she doesn't know it Naruto yet}. Then she heard a girl talk she couldn't understand her at first but figured out what she said.

"YOUR GONE PAY FOR WHAT YOU DID TO NARUTO "screamed Alexis as she looked at Jiro. Hinata heard what she said. "Now way it couldn't be, so it is Naruto "she thought. She kind of thought it was him even when he said he was Natsu but this confirmed it. Tears started rolling down hear eyes "its him "she said happy at finally seen Naruto but her smile faded when she remembered his condition. Hinata than slowly started to drag herself to Naruto.


Back to the battle

Jiro and Alexis faced each other. "You to want to end up like them "said Jiro sighing.

"No I won't, ill, make you pay "she said as she ran towards him

"Sure, whatever" said Jiro rolling his eyes.

Alexis took out her swords "Devil Diamond Twin Slash "she said swinging her sword in an x way. Jiro looked at the attack and with his red eye he changed the trajectory missing to hit him. "No way "she said shocked

"My turn "he disappeared and appeared behind her. Alexis managed to turn around in time. "Demon Scorpion bite "Jiro said as he attacked Alexis. She thought she had dodged it, but when she looked at the Naginata, it was the non-blade part. Jiro smiled and like lighting turned and cut Alexis on her stomach. Alexis backed up and fell to her knees grabbing the right part of her stomach. The venom quickly went through her and she screamed in pain. She started to have concussions and her eyes were white. After a minute she lost consciousness.

"Now let's finish Mr. uzumaki up "Jiro said with annoyed look at the trouble they caused. He was walking to Naruto and got ready to stab him with his Naginata. Naruto looked at him and tried to move but couldn't. Jiro was about to do it when somebody grabbed his arm. Jiro looked to see a dark haired girl with pale lavender eyes.

"No Hinata leave "said Naruto who couldn't move but grabbed Jiro legs. "RUN HINATA "screamed Naruto. Hinata didn't listen "I-[cough]wont-le-t-you –[cough]hurt Naruto "she said weakly.

"oh, so this is your girlfriend "said Jiro smiling "well to bad your gone lose her "he said making sad puppy eyes. He disappeared and appeared behind her. For Naruto its seemed like time slowed down as he saw him stab her with his Naginata. Naruto screamed" NOOOO "as the weapon went through her chest. Jiro pulled it out and waved goodbye as he left the place and smiled. Naruto eyes were in shock, he couldn't believe what tears, no scream it was like he was frozen a statue.

Hinata mouth was open and her eyes were lifeless, blood was coming out of her mouth as she fell on her knees. "I—love-you-Naruto "were Hinatas last words as she fell to the ground with a tear that shined and seemed to say more than a million words as it hit the ground. Hinata smiled one last time

Naruto stood there on the ground once again not being able to help. "no, why I wasn't able to help her again, all this power and I still failed "he cried finally "I LOST HER THIS TIME, I CAN'T LIVE WITH OUT HER, IM A FAILURE I WAS TO BUSY IN THE STUPID TOURNAMENT AND FLIRTING "he tightened his fist so hard blood came out of it. "IM AN IDIOT, I WAS TO ARROGANT TO NOTICE ANYTHING, "he cried as he punched the ground. His vision started to blur as he was losing consciousness. Hina-ta-I'm –Sorry-I-love-you "he said as he hit the ground and a tear of love went down his face and remember Hinatas last smile.


Well that's it for this chapter I know its really long but I had a lot planned out for this chapter. Hope you enjoyed that ending [hehe].

Thor94-well as you saw Neji got his ass kicked well worst hehe

sasdeadlock-Yea I rushed through the chapter but glad you like it and I like your story

Car-yea I kind of suck at grammar and I'm not good at dialogue but glad you like it, I'll try to find an editor

La8231-Thank you and yea I just felt like using American names but people weren't too happy lol.

Vegeta1648-yea I know last chapter had more than my usual errors since I didn't read it after.

Well hope you liked it even if it was long. I was thinking of going through a flashback for Naruto and one for Hinata for the next chapters about the years I skipped. So I can tell you what happen while Naruto was out and what happen to Hinata and everyone. That's up to all of you people if you want me to do the flashback or just go on with the story. Also I'm thinking of doing another story but from another anime so if anybody has some suggestions I will gladly appreciated. I also have a wattpad account if anybody wants to check it out the name is ivanchavez428. Well I talked to much already sorry, anyways thank you so much were close to 100 follows yay, review and follow laters.:)