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Well, actually 'top-of-the-page'. xD If you have any questions or statements you've asked, since my comp. spazzes when I reply, I post them here. Buhahaha. Review and you may get up 'ere.
Naruto Ninja44- Oh yea. I totally read that. Since I couldn't think of a name for Numbuh 10, I thought Belle fit her, so I adopted that name. Si. I'm glad you're so excited about my sotry-rifficness. X3
Nigel's Leading Woman- 3 Oh. You'll see Lizzie's temper in this chapter, I promise. And little Harvey…:K Oh. You don't wanna know what he's planning.
The Real Numbuh 55- Thanks for loving my story. 3 Yea, that's why I made Angie. To annoy, stalk, jump on, destroy, annoy, and ruin Harvey's schemes.
Lillyfan123- 3 I did like writing chapter 8 the best. It's kind of fun, plus I had much more to write about in this one.
A/N: So, here I go! 3
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"Nigel I-I…" Rachel echoed, her mind frozen in shock. Was this- her fantasy- coming true? Was Nigel going to dance with her, if she said that one singe word that would make her day. Her eyes suddenly left Nigel's and glanced at Lizzie.
That look on her face- even if Rachel didn't particularly like Lizzie, hurt Rachel. That look of complete sadness, despair and heartbreak, I mean, if it was Rachel whose date asked some other girl to dance, she'd be very upset. So Rachel smiled and helped Nigel up.
"Nigel, you're here with Lizzie; not me." She said, hoping the smile on her face wasn't fake. Nigel was awestruck, but nodded. That was what he liked- no loved about Rachel, she cared about other people more so than herself. He smiled and walked over to Lizzie. He looked Lizzie in the eyes, attempting to get her over her anger.
"I'm sorry Lizzie." he said, doing that charm that Rachel had fallen for so badly. Nigel then turned to see Rachel, gave a slight wink, and looked back at the punch.
Color rose to her cheeks as Rachel walked toward the drink table. She grabbed a glass of water and drank it, seeing Numbuh 10 in a orange dress to her knees, and surrounded by a lot of boys; including Numbuh 2 and a certain Patton, who will be important soon, I assure you. Rachel smiled and waved, though several guys turned to her.
"Wow, Rachel looks H a w t." Patton said, nudging Hoagie. Hoagie nodded frantically. The two stared at her up and down, drool rolling down their faces.
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"Eye'm not so sure eye should do 'is…" The girl said, at the door. Her eyes lurched up to see the all too familiar black haired boy, Patton, gawking at Rachel. Fanny scowled.
"NOW, eye'm sure." She said, taking three steps forward. Silence fell over the room once more. Every eye was on Fanny. She didn't plan on all these eyes, but she sure had both of Patton's.
"Wow…I didn't think Fanny could look good in a dress…" Patton said. Hoagie dropped the pastry he was eating. That meant OMG.
Fanny's red hair was pulled into a ponytail, and a few strands floated around her slightly pink face. She had on a dark red corset, with a long red slightly proofed out bell. A golden belt was slashed across her waist, and Fanny turned to face Patton singled out, a bit of mascara lined her eyelashes, just a bit. Enough to get Patton's attention. She turned and walked inside.
"Es still me." Fanny said, putting her hands on her hips. She walked over to Patton. She glared at him. His eyes were 'elsewhere'.
"MY EYES ER UP 'ERE" Fanny yelled, jolting Patton's gaze up to her eyes. Patton gulped.
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"Hey Harvey, isn't Fanny like, REALLY pretty in that dress!" Angie chirped. Harvey blinked. He had never seen her all dressed up. Angie giggled.
"She's trying to get Patton's eye." She said. Harvey blinked.
"But she never would do something like that!" Harvey said, still observing the scene. Angie laughed. By now she had jumped on Harvey, demanded a piggy back, and so was being carried around.
"Girls act weird when they're in love." She said. Harvey scowled.
"Are YOU in love then? Because you're ALWAYS weird." He asked/said. Suddenly he felt Angie's weight fall from his shoulders and a slap on the forehead.
"WHAT POSITION ARE YOU IN TO ASK THAT?!" She exploded, then turned on her heels and walked out.
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"Hi Rachel!" the familiar voice of Herbie said, walking to her. Rachel smiled politely. She glanced over him; which wasn't hard at all; at Nigel.
He was just talking with Lizzie, but it was how he did it that captivated her. He did it so smoothly, so perfectly. Once again she was frozen there, just looking at him. However, when he turned around to see who was staring at him, she quickly looked like she was in a deep conversation with Herbie, when she really didn't care that much about whatever it was he was talking about.
"I'm going for some punch, be back soon Sir- I mean, Rachel." Herbie said, giggling. He obviously liked calling her by her first name, like he was /close/ to her. Rachel sighed and looked at Nigel, who was currently in a fickle all his own accord. Lizzie had dragged him outside.
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"NIGEL UNO!" Lizzie yelled, as Nigel blocked his ears. Obviously his charm had only worked until she had caught him staring at Rachel again. He looked Lizzie in the eyes; how he wished that she was more like Rachel, then maybe he could be more interested in her…maybe.
"How could you!" Lizzie said, tears visible in her eyes. Nigel winced. He couldn't stand it when girls cried over him. He looked at her.
"Look Lizzie, I'm sorry but…" Nigel said, suddenly looking down. His two hands were in fists, and his heart raced. But, he couldn't keep hurting Lizzie, he had to tell her- and he had to break up with her.
"I'm sorry but…I can't pick who I like." He said. Lizzie's look- it pained Nigel to see his girlfriend, with eyes full of wet tears, make-up running down, and the look she gave him, of utter and complete heartbreak.
"Nigel you…NIGEL!" Lizzie said, her hands going up to her face and tears streaming down. Nigel made a move to comfort her, but Lizzie ran into the room and across the floor, into a closet and cried. Nigel walked into the room, glancing sadly at Lizzie. He didn't think she'd take it that bad…
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Meanwhile…
"Lizzie?" Herbie asked, seeing the redhead run across the room. He got no replay as she ran past him, but Herbie could see she was upset. Herbie ran after her, following her and glancing coldly at Nigel. He opened the closet door. It was a huge closet, big enough for one more person.
"Are you OK?" Herbie asked, seeing Lizzie. He put his arm around her shoulder. Obviously, Lizzie thought that Herbie was Nigel and shook his arm off her shoulder.
"N-NO." Lizzie said. "I'm good as dumped!" She wailed, crying harder. She moved her hands. Mascara ran down her face, and blush, eye shadow, and lipstick were in random places around her face. Herbie grabbed a towel from the closet and wiped the make-up off.
"He doesn't know what he's throwing away." Herbie said, looking at Lizzie's now clean face. Lizzie blinked and took her hair down and combed it with her hands.
"R-Really?" She asked, a hint of blush on her face. Herbie nodded.
"You're just saying that." Lizzie said. Herbie smiled.
"Am I?" he asked. Lizzie blinked and looked at Herbie. She smiled weakly.
"Thanks." She said, walking out of the closet, Herbie behind her. "I need air." She said, walking outside. Herbie followed her out.
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Meanwhile as well….
"Hey Harvey, Lizzie looked upset." Angie said, looking at Lizzie. By now, Angie got bored so she got off of Harvey's back and was standing between Harvey and the snack bar. Harvey nodded, then glared at Nigel. His plan was going downhill! He scowled. He only had one option left, and he REALLY didn't want to, but it wasn't like anyone would know it was HIM.
"Do you think Nigel broke up with her?" Angie asked. Harvey shrugged. He then turned to Rachel with a scowl. "Hey Harveyyyyyyyy" Angie said, poking him. Harvey scowled.
"DON'T. TOUCH. ME." He hissed. Angie giggled. She then looked at Rachel. She smiled. Her plan was unfolding. There was something of a dark aurora to her. Harvey even backed up as she grabbed a pastry and laughed evily.
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"I'm sorry, Lizzie." Nigel said, sighing. He walked into the room, all eyes were on him. He sighed and looked up. He saw Rachel and slowly walked over.
"If I did that to Lizzie, she'll be even madder at me if I don't go for it." Nigel thought out loud in a whisper. He turned to Rachel and held out his hand.
"We're both dateless." he said. Rachel nodded.
"I hope that Herbie can keep Lizzie company." She said. Nigel nodded and looked Rachel in the eyes. Rachel knew the question he was about to ask her, and the answer she would give.
"Rachel, would you dance with me?" Nigel asked, once again.
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Longest one yet! I think.
I was gonna say, "I can't pick who I love", but that seems a little too mature for a 10 year old to say/I/ think.
Harvey or the snack bar…snack bar or Harvey…xD
déjà vu x3
Thanks for likening this! I'm coming to an end of this story, but I'll work on s'more long ones like this. ;)
