AN: OMG! I UPDATED! IT IS A MIRACLE! ^_^ Not much action in this chapter, I
gave a lot of background info though! You people all have such great OC's!
I can't use 'em all so I decided to mix them up. Maybe one of your
character's traits is in her... look closely. ^_~ I will try to get the
chappie's longer and submitted closer together! But if I force myself to
write it comes out pretty bad. If anyone here likes Digimon and Daisuke I
wrote a one-shot! Go read!
The reason I never got the chappie out for so long is because I read this story that said people who ask for chara's from the reviewers are bad writers and have no imagination. I was in a sensitive mood at the time and it made me stop writing. BUT I'M BACK IN BUISNESS!
Disclaimer: I OWN DBZ! YAY! *wakes up* DAMN!
~*~
Chapter 6: Lost
~*~
So there he was. Technically all alone in a sea of idiots. Short, tall, fat, thin you name it; he saw them in his group. 'Let's get this over with.' Not lifting his face from its safe cocoon, he told them about himself...kinda.
"Soun, You have a life and so do I, stay out of it."
He then proceeded to fall back to sleep. Hey, he did his best. Wink, Wink. Nudge, Nudge.
The rest just stared at him, two of them giving no notice at all.
"Right okay, uh... This is my father Vegeta, He kinda thinks he's a prince and has anger management problems." Vegeta glowered but said nothing, the boy would pay later. Pan was next.
"This is my father Gohan, he's a workaholic and...stuff." Gohan rolled his eyes. So much for his daughter's descriptive skills. Goku nudged Pan in the shoulder.
"Oh ya! This is my grandfather Goku! He loves to eat and won the martial arts tournament years ago." Goku flashed a 'victory' sign and Vegeta 'hmph'ed. How come HE got a good introduction? Then it was Marron's turn.
"Kuririn, He used to be bald and now he's not." The person in name sweatdropped "Thanks a lot."
"No problem, dad!" Kuririn shook his head.
Every looked towards the three remaining people yet to say anything. Bra just shrugged and motioned towards Vegeta.
Freak and Mysterious said nothing on their parents, and as the others looked around they noticed there were no other adults in their group.
"Seems they couldn't come."
The two nodded.
"Rian, Parents are at work, I like rock. The end." He can talk! CALL THE MEDIA!
"Kodin, no it's not a boy's name. Parents not available and I know I'm skinny. Don't bother me while I listen to music and I won't rearrange your face. Okay? Okay." Pure angel that one, pure angel.
So Freak and Mysterious had names.
...
They seemed really nice.
Goku did his trademark sheepish look and looked around as if saying 'what do we do now?' They looked to one another and then at the teacher. Goten rolled his eyes in the darkness of his arms, didn't they notice the paper the teacher dropped in the middle of their table like two seconds ago? I guess not.
Not lifting his head he shot his arm out to grab the paper.
"Read this, then maybe you'll get an idea." He struggled so hard not to say idiots.
Kodin smirked at him and watched her reflection in her walkman. This was going to be 'fun', oh she could tell. "One of you read it out loud." No one argued as the paper was read by Gohan, loud enough to be heard but whispered as not to be distracting to the other groups.
It read..
~*~
Father's Day Fun
The day has been split into 8 parts. Each part is an estimated hour long. This is the schedule for group C.
***
First Hour- Introductions (I expect a story about the parent of your choice [Not your own] finished for grading.)
Second Hour- Nature Hike (Your equipment and notebooks have been placed in the tool shed north of the courtyard.)
Third Hour- Baseball (Equipment will be on the field.)
Fourth Hour- Lunch (Discussions... You must eat in the east courtyard.)
Fifth Hour- Recreational
Sixth Hour- Design (You are expected to critique another's work.)
Seventh Hour- Presentation on what you have observed (Including a paragraph per student.)
Eighth Hour- Home
***
Enjoy your day! The teacher will tell you when the hours are up.
~*~
Goten checked his watch. 30 minutes left. "Who wants to tell a story first?" Goku smiled and started to ramble on about catching a fish or some other boring and incredibly stupid thing. He didn't care about this stupid report. He'd just skip at Sixth Hour and woohoo! No work.
Goten's eyes wandered as they fell on Kodin. She had raven hair in a flipped chin-length style. Piercing raven eyes, long sharp raven nose, he wouldn't be surprised if she transformed into a raven every full moon. He snickered to himself; she even had the body physique, sickly skin and a bony body.
Hey, she wasn't ugly, but not exactly 'Barbie' either.
Rian was totally different. He was just... strange. He had a weird sense of 'Stay away' around him and it made Goten pretty wary in the decision if he was trustworthy. He put his head back in his arms. Yawn.
Not to be surprised Goten spent the next 30 minutes taping his foot along to Kodin's CD player.
He couldn't help but tap his foot along to Castles in the Sky.
~*~
He was back with his family again. They were eating dinner happily and everyone was talking up a storm. Or in other words, ChiChi was talking up a storm and everyone else was eating.
Together. Happy. He loved it.
Suddenly the table broke. His family's faces contorted with anger and disappointment.
NO!
They where so happy! But it was too late. His family turned their backs on him and walked away.
Happy together. Without him.
The scene changed and he was in a white space. But not for long, the walls started bleeding a swirl of colours all morphing together to create a red.
Blood red.
His adopted Grandparent's voices flitted around him and he fell to his knees.
He was lost.
'Soun, Soun, Soun.....'
~*~
"What?"
Looking drowsily around through half-closed eyes he spotted Pan shaking his shoulder. "The hour's up, we have to go outside now." Goten sighed and pulled himself up from his seat.
He really was lost.
~*~
YAY! ANGST! I'm kinda in a strange angst mood so. don't ask. I'm probably going to do an 'Hour' a chapter so next chappie is the NATURE HIKE! Some action there folks!
Reader Responses (Only the ones that reviewed for Chappie 8!):
darkshadow-23- I think I already answered this.
Jacky- Thanks!
Demonstarchild- I'm gonna use your pink sunglasses idea in the next chappie! And thanks for the compliment!
little-princess- OMG! You write that really good Gundam Wing story! A New Life! I LOVE THAT STORY! And I no about the chappie's I think this one is pretty long... well longer than normal. ^_^;; And Thanks for submitting! We'll see! ^_~
Cyberdoll-91991- Don't die on me! Love the name!
V. Highwind- I LOVE your chara! So she was pretty much the base person. You have a great imagination! Keep it up!
Makaveli- I love your name also, lol. This really isn't SOON but hey I tried! ^____^
Celirene no Oujo- You said you hated when people took and didn't ask... and my e-mail's currently out of order. So I couldn't use your chara. I wanted to respect your wishes. *_*
Kookey- Oh he will... MUSHASHASHASHA! Lol. I love her chara too! Thanks for the compliment!
Emerald-Forest- LOL! Hope it's not too confusing! ^_^
Linkz- Linkz, Linkz, Linkz. THERE MY OREO'S! ..I like frogs said the orange.
Rebecca- Oooooh! I got you starting to read it again? YAY! Tell your sister's I said hey, and I would love there opinion!
Heafuru- Thanks! I'll check it out!
Phew. That took awhile. This chappie is a little choppy and kinda in a different writing style... but hey! It's out! I hope you enjoy.
Signing out, YL
The reason I never got the chappie out for so long is because I read this story that said people who ask for chara's from the reviewers are bad writers and have no imagination. I was in a sensitive mood at the time and it made me stop writing. BUT I'M BACK IN BUISNESS!
Disclaimer: I OWN DBZ! YAY! *wakes up* DAMN!
~*~
Chapter 6: Lost
~*~
So there he was. Technically all alone in a sea of idiots. Short, tall, fat, thin you name it; he saw them in his group. 'Let's get this over with.' Not lifting his face from its safe cocoon, he told them about himself...kinda.
"Soun, You have a life and so do I, stay out of it."
He then proceeded to fall back to sleep. Hey, he did his best. Wink, Wink. Nudge, Nudge.
The rest just stared at him, two of them giving no notice at all.
"Right okay, uh... This is my father Vegeta, He kinda thinks he's a prince and has anger management problems." Vegeta glowered but said nothing, the boy would pay later. Pan was next.
"This is my father Gohan, he's a workaholic and...stuff." Gohan rolled his eyes. So much for his daughter's descriptive skills. Goku nudged Pan in the shoulder.
"Oh ya! This is my grandfather Goku! He loves to eat and won the martial arts tournament years ago." Goku flashed a 'victory' sign and Vegeta 'hmph'ed. How come HE got a good introduction? Then it was Marron's turn.
"Kuririn, He used to be bald and now he's not." The person in name sweatdropped "Thanks a lot."
"No problem, dad!" Kuririn shook his head.
Every looked towards the three remaining people yet to say anything. Bra just shrugged and motioned towards Vegeta.
Freak and Mysterious said nothing on their parents, and as the others looked around they noticed there were no other adults in their group.
"Seems they couldn't come."
The two nodded.
"Rian, Parents are at work, I like rock. The end." He can talk! CALL THE MEDIA!
"Kodin, no it's not a boy's name. Parents not available and I know I'm skinny. Don't bother me while I listen to music and I won't rearrange your face. Okay? Okay." Pure angel that one, pure angel.
So Freak and Mysterious had names.
...
They seemed really nice.
Goku did his trademark sheepish look and looked around as if saying 'what do we do now?' They looked to one another and then at the teacher. Goten rolled his eyes in the darkness of his arms, didn't they notice the paper the teacher dropped in the middle of their table like two seconds ago? I guess not.
Not lifting his head he shot his arm out to grab the paper.
"Read this, then maybe you'll get an idea." He struggled so hard not to say idiots.
Kodin smirked at him and watched her reflection in her walkman. This was going to be 'fun', oh she could tell. "One of you read it out loud." No one argued as the paper was read by Gohan, loud enough to be heard but whispered as not to be distracting to the other groups.
It read..
~*~
Father's Day Fun
The day has been split into 8 parts. Each part is an estimated hour long. This is the schedule for group C.
***
First Hour- Introductions (I expect a story about the parent of your choice [Not your own] finished for grading.)
Second Hour- Nature Hike (Your equipment and notebooks have been placed in the tool shed north of the courtyard.)
Third Hour- Baseball (Equipment will be on the field.)
Fourth Hour- Lunch (Discussions... You must eat in the east courtyard.)
Fifth Hour- Recreational
Sixth Hour- Design (You are expected to critique another's work.)
Seventh Hour- Presentation on what you have observed (Including a paragraph per student.)
Eighth Hour- Home
***
Enjoy your day! The teacher will tell you when the hours are up.
~*~
Goten checked his watch. 30 minutes left. "Who wants to tell a story first?" Goku smiled and started to ramble on about catching a fish or some other boring and incredibly stupid thing. He didn't care about this stupid report. He'd just skip at Sixth Hour and woohoo! No work.
Goten's eyes wandered as they fell on Kodin. She had raven hair in a flipped chin-length style. Piercing raven eyes, long sharp raven nose, he wouldn't be surprised if she transformed into a raven every full moon. He snickered to himself; she even had the body physique, sickly skin and a bony body.
Hey, she wasn't ugly, but not exactly 'Barbie' either.
Rian was totally different. He was just... strange. He had a weird sense of 'Stay away' around him and it made Goten pretty wary in the decision if he was trustworthy. He put his head back in his arms. Yawn.
Not to be surprised Goten spent the next 30 minutes taping his foot along to Kodin's CD player.
He couldn't help but tap his foot along to Castles in the Sky.
~*~
He was back with his family again. They were eating dinner happily and everyone was talking up a storm. Or in other words, ChiChi was talking up a storm and everyone else was eating.
Together. Happy. He loved it.
Suddenly the table broke. His family's faces contorted with anger and disappointment.
NO!
They where so happy! But it was too late. His family turned their backs on him and walked away.
Happy together. Without him.
The scene changed and he was in a white space. But not for long, the walls started bleeding a swirl of colours all morphing together to create a red.
Blood red.
His adopted Grandparent's voices flitted around him and he fell to his knees.
He was lost.
'Soun, Soun, Soun.....'
~*~
"What?"
Looking drowsily around through half-closed eyes he spotted Pan shaking his shoulder. "The hour's up, we have to go outside now." Goten sighed and pulled himself up from his seat.
He really was lost.
~*~
YAY! ANGST! I'm kinda in a strange angst mood so. don't ask. I'm probably going to do an 'Hour' a chapter so next chappie is the NATURE HIKE! Some action there folks!
Reader Responses (Only the ones that reviewed for Chappie 8!):
darkshadow-23- I think I already answered this.
Jacky- Thanks!
Demonstarchild- I'm gonna use your pink sunglasses idea in the next chappie! And thanks for the compliment!
little-princess- OMG! You write that really good Gundam Wing story! A New Life! I LOVE THAT STORY! And I no about the chappie's I think this one is pretty long... well longer than normal. ^_^;; And Thanks for submitting! We'll see! ^_~
Cyberdoll-91991- Don't die on me! Love the name!
V. Highwind- I LOVE your chara! So she was pretty much the base person. You have a great imagination! Keep it up!
Makaveli- I love your name also, lol. This really isn't SOON but hey I tried! ^____^
Celirene no Oujo- You said you hated when people took and didn't ask... and my e-mail's currently out of order. So I couldn't use your chara. I wanted to respect your wishes. *_*
Kookey- Oh he will... MUSHASHASHASHA! Lol. I love her chara too! Thanks for the compliment!
Emerald-Forest- LOL! Hope it's not too confusing! ^_^
Linkz- Linkz, Linkz, Linkz. THERE MY OREO'S! ..I like frogs said the orange.
Rebecca- Oooooh! I got you starting to read it again? YAY! Tell your sister's I said hey, and I would love there opinion!
Heafuru- Thanks! I'll check it out!
Phew. That took awhile. This chappie is a little choppy and kinda in a different writing style... but hey! It's out! I hope you enjoy.
Signing out, YL
