Kyane: lol...-mysterious authoress- gets a lolipop! Oh and I changed it to general because...well...general gives me more space for like humor,romance,action,adventure, and angsty..but not to much...

Twitch: But I agree with authoress...Jinx a dad? That...er...something not too mean...uh guy? Just crazy...

Ember: Yea but it'll twist the story a bit!

Errol: I think she's twisting it too much...

Twitch: Trust me...this was broken in the last chappy so she bought a new one...

Kyane: Oh...reviewers of mine...don't hurt,strangle,kill,burn,drown,cut,shoot,sue,or any loss of limbs from or onto me on this chapter ok?

Twitch: They're gonna hate you for this one ya know?

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Intruders:Chapter 9: F.E.A.R.

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9AM

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A certain girl of ours was in the kitchen making something for the guys before they woke up."Ok...eggs...bacon...bread...chicken in oven for lunch...and...that's all for now!" She turned around and bumped into Errol.

"Hey watch it!" Errol rubbed his eyes before looking down at Ember." I just woke up and not in the mood for anything."

Ember looked at her watch." It's only 9 so what's the problem?"

Errol looked around." I got duties today with the KG officers and they're total asses."

" I'll come with ya! I really want to meet these 'asses' of yours!"

"Uh...no you don't."

"Yes I do."

"No you don't..."

Ember raised an eyebrow." And what'll you do if I come?"

"Nothing of course!" Jinx walked in and gave Ember a kiss on the cheek."It'll do ya good if you let her go."

" Oh and Jinx? I wanna give you a test ok?"

"Ok...hit me."

"Father?"

"Makes me feel old."

"Dad?"

"Still makes me feel old."

"Daddy?"

"Good enough and Jinx is fine too."

"Ok! I'm going to get ready and breakfast is on the table."Ember skipped out of the room to get ready.

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12 PM

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Again we see our friends at headquarters for the KG. One was in his outfit for the day. And the other had a white tube top with black shorts that go up to her knees and combat boots with a familar racer mask on her head.

"Ok..." Errol took in a deep breath and opened the door and was meet by some cat calls and wolf whistles.

" Who's the girl?"

" She yours?"

" She's not livestock idiot."

"What's her name?"

"She taken?"

"Can i get her?"

"Big no no,and NO!"Errol walked in with Ember who was slightly blushing,and sat at a table." Don't mind them. They just pigs."

"I thought you had some since to not call a woman a pig Errol?" A blonde girl her age sat next to Ember."Hi I'm Tess, the gun supplier, and I was fixing some when you walked in."

Ember felt relief go through her realizing she wasn't the only girl here." I'm Ember and I felt bored so I tagalonged with Errol to get here."

Tess turned to Errol." She's like a bright ball of sunshine!" Tess looked over Ember to the person next to her."Aren't you going to introduce yourself?"

Ember turned to her left and saw a raven haired guy with green eyes shuffling his feet and looking down." I'm...er...Cain! And...I'm...um...Tess's...and...Errol's friend!" He looked up at Ember,who smiled, and looked down again.

"He's shy, a new recruit here so don't mind him!" Tess said, looking at Errol."What's the prob,E?"

Errol was glaring at every guy in the quarters."Hm...nothing important..."He looked at Ember." What are you doing?"

Ember was poking Cain who eventually showed her something before putting it back in his pocket."Lemme see it again!" She poked him again.Cain glanced at her and put a baby Metal Head stinger on the table. Ember picked it up and put it on her head." Isn't it adorable!"

Errol shook himself." No it's not! And take it off your head. They're poisonous!"

Ember didn't even look at Tess, who was scolding Errol."You're not poisonous are you?" She took it off her head and petted it." You're sooo cute!" The baby hissed at her."Can you understand me?" The baby hissed twice and curled its tail up so it won't poke anyone." See Errol!" Ember held out the baby which was clutching onto her wrist like a bracelet." It likes me."

" It's not a pet! Now give it back and go home!" The baby hissed loudly at Errol before climbing up Ember's arm.

Ember started giggling when it climb up her neck and onto her head."Can I keep it Cain!" Ember turned to him and gave him puppy dog eyes and pouted.

Cain stared for a bit before brushing his shoulder length hair back."Uh...sure? It likes you...so why not?"

Ember grinned and gave a flustered Cain a big hug."Thanks! I promise to take care of it!"

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" That was awesome!"Ember said,jumping around with her stinger on her hand." I want to come again on another one of your patrols!"She turned around."Errol?"She thought for a second." Oh yea! He had to stay there for a bit to work on something!"

Ember skipped along when she saw an alley."Shortcuts!"She turned into it."Doo do dee ba bum da!" Ember turned a corner and was pulled roughly into a dead end.She turned around and saw two guys with Keira.

'You shouldn't go into dark alleys by yourself. You never know what's lurking in there."Keira smirked and motioned to the guys." I'm going to teach you a lesson for hanging out with my guy and my friends!"

The guys cornered Ember.One jumped at her and she kneed him in the groin.The second grabbed Ember's arm and twisted them to her back. Ember kicked him in the shin and ran. She turn the corner and a certain aqua haired girl hit her in the back of the head.Ember fell to the ground.Bfore she blacked out she heard them talking.

"Don't go to far. Just scare her or something."

"Sure..."the big guy crossed his fingers behind his back and nodded to Keira.

Keira smirked before leaving Ember in the alley way, and when she was out of sight, the big guy blindfolded Ember and it begun.

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11PM

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Ember woke up,shivering,feeling violated. Then it hit her. Ember curled up and started crying. Keira was a bitch but even she wouldn't do this. Ember got up and put on her clothes. Ember wobbled before falling down. She started crying again, finally feeling the hurt of the bruises inside and out.She felt dirty and like a toy that was used and thrown away.She heard hissing and found her baby stinger with the tail ripped off. Ember reached for it and tore off a piece of her shorts and tied it over the stingers wound. "I can't believe it..." She sniffled and picked up the stinger.It moaned..literally.

"I'm sorry,"Ember said, pushing against a wall a got up."I promised to protect you. And not only did I lose that,but I also lost my innonence and diginity."She staggered for a bit before shuffling towards the exit of the alley. Ember peeked outside and saw that no one was there and walked out towards Jinx's house,brushing herself off and soothing her pet.

Ember went inside and slumped on the couch. A million of questions and thoughts went through her mind but two stood out.Why? and fear.

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2PM

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"Ember?"

"Leave her alone."

"She got some nasty cuts and bruises."

"Shut it! She's waking up!"

Ember opened her eyes and saw three blurry figures. She cringed but once her vision cleared,she saw it was only Errol,Twitch and Jinx.

"You ok Em?" Twitch reached out and Ember started screaming and jumped off the couch.

"Get away from me!"

"Moony what's wrong?"Jinx asked approaching her slowly.

"Leave me alone! Haven't you done enough!"Ember ran out of the house and straight towards the Metal Head part of the city,ignoring the stares of the passerbys.

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Back at the house

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"Wonder what's wrong with her"Twitch said,sitting down on the couch where Ember was laying.He found it smelled weird and was wet.Twitch looked around and saw that the guys ran after Ember.

Twitch got off and sniffed the spot.It smelled like tears and...Oh God...!

It smelled like the after bed kind,like the smell coming from over sexed people.

Twitch sat down and started crying.

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Kyane: I cried while writing this...please don't hurt me! -Jumps for cover-

Tess:Poor girl...and the guys can't be reach right now...

Kyane: It'll get better...hopefully

Surfer ottsel:Before...

Leader ottsel:Hopefully before...

Dummy ottsel: KABOOM!