HELLO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Gosh I just feel so energetic right now!!!! So did you guys answer my questions because if you didn't, I. Will. Kill. You! Just kidding!! lol! If you don't know what i'm talking about or you don't want to be killed I will tell you after you read this chapter!! yay!!!!!! hyper

DISCLAIMER: I DO NOT OWN MAXIMUM RIDE, which is really sad :(

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MAX POV

I walked up to their front door and the others followed. I carefully grabbed the door nob but when I touched it, it fell off the door. i really have a bad feeling about this. I look back to everyone 's face looked really worried and Fang was staring at the door.

I put my hands on the door and gently pushed, the door fall to the floor. ops!

"That didn't sound good," Iggy said pointing towards the door.

"It wasn't and i think the house won't be much better," I told him.

I slowly walked inside, my heart thumping so loud i was sure Iggy and the others could hear it.

"Hello? Hello, anybody here?" I called into the house. We were all still, listening for anyone.

"Upstairs," Iggy said bluntly and we all ran up the stairs. As soon as we were up there we looked at iggy.

"In there," he said pointing to what looked like the master bedroom.

I slowly opened the door and saw a man on the floor. This man looks familiar.

Angel and Gasman's Dad!!!! I thought.

"Mr. Flounder, are you okay? What happened?" I asked as we all rushed in and surrounded Mr. Flounder.

He groaned.

"Let's get him cleaned up and something to eat," Nudge suggested. I nodded. Me and Fang lifted up Mr. Flounder and brought him into the kitchen.

ELLA POV

Mom looked at me and walked over to the door, I followed. When she opened the door, I saw two police man with a woman with black hair, a woman who looked like a hangover, and a woman with blond strawberry hair. Now why do I get the feeling like I've seen these people before?

"Mam, these people said your daughter took their children, do you know anything about this?," a police officer asked.

"Uh, come in please I'll tell you what i know," I looked at my mom flabbergasted (lol funny word!!!)

The woman and the police officers came in and sat down on the couch. I slowly sat down in a chair glaring at them the hole time.

"So when was the last time you saw your daughter?" the dude asked mom.

"Um I saw her a week ago before I went to work and when i came back my youngest daughter told me she left," mom told him. he nodded and looked and the woman with blck hair.

"Well I was her about five days ago when she came in with my son, they were both bleeding and then they left," she said, a little angry.

Of course that's Fang's mom. Wait! what does she have against Max?

"You mam'," he said looking at the blond.

"Um well i never actually saw her but my son disappeared about four days ago and left this note," she said handing the officer a note.

Iggy's mom

They all pasted the note around and when it got to me i almost smiled.

the note said

Dear mom,

I'll be gone for a little bit. I met up with some old friends. (Max and Fang)

luv you,

Iggy

"I don't know what happened to James, what if he's hurt?" she sounded really scared.

oh please just because Iggy's blind doesn't mean he is helpless!

"And you," he said looking at the hangover.

"Ah i don't remember. I left her with all my children I came home last night and she was gone along with the oldest but he has work. My other kids say she left with three teens," she slurred.

Poor Nudge, Max will not let her go back there!!

"Well, do you know where else she would be going?" the officer looked st mom.

please don't spill mom please!!

She nodded

ARG!!!!!

"To the Gasman and Angels house, in California," she said quietly.

"well as soon as we find her officer she better go to jail or i will sue," said Fang's Mom (now referred to slut)

That. Is. It!!!!!!

"Excuse Me, but if it wasn't for my sister all of your children would have been goners and she was the one who found you guys in the first place!!!" i said angrily, I turned to Nudges mom "You don't even deserve to have children, you can't take care of them and you look like you've been drinking for two days!"

I turned to the blond "IGGY can to find without your help he can sense some things miles away and does not need your help for every single thing!" she looked shocked.

I turned to slut but before i could lecture f=her she yelled at me!

"Now listen here Missie do not tell me I can't fend for nick, he is my property and can never see that bitch that you call sister ever again!" she exploded.

"Okay, there were many things wrong with that sentence. 1) counseling 2) Call my sister a bitch and she will break your neck 3) max and fang have been best friends since birth and nothing you doe could separate them, Nothing!" That Slut, she is so stupid!!!!

"Watch me," she said and walked out the door.

"Ella Martinez go to your room," mom said calmly but I knew t=she was exploding inside. i nodded and went upstairs. Fave minutes later I herd the door shut and mymothers silent tears. I went over to the window and looked at the sky.

"Please be careful Max," I whispered.

MAX POV

"what happened?" i asked the man in front of me.

"Well it was late and the kids were in bed and then all of a sudden I herd her scream and I opened my eyes and saw these robotic things in my room and then everything went black. That's all I remember," he said.

"Here go to this address and tell them Max sent you," i told him giving him my mothers address. gosh i feel like a spy!

"Lets go find A cave somewhere," I told my flock. They all nodded. We left.

LINDA POV (aka, Fang's mom - aka, the slut)

That little brat, telling me i can't raise my own child.

No matter, her mother said they would be heading to California, I'll just head on over there.

"Don't worry Nick. I'm coming.

DR. MARTINEZ POV

After Ella went up stairs the officer said that if Max wasn't found in three days she would be charged for criminal activity. He also said Ella had to watch her mouth. She was right though, Max should have custody over some of the flock, I mean Fang and Iggy are old enough but still.

Oh what will i do!

Maybe I'll call jeb, in th mourning.

Please be okay max please!!

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