Invisible girl

by Jasmin the critic from Hell

As Stephanie Williams goes to hogwarts for her fourth year her life gets turned up side down by the Marauders, Hot Pink braces and a lisp. Marauders Era, obviously

10. To rewrite or not to rewrite?

My Dear Readers,

I apologize for the long break between updates and I'm sorry to say this is not an update either : (. However I am currently rewriting Invisible girl as we speak as I do not really like how she's turning out. In my head she's become too… dependant. And she's too Mary-Sueish. She's not the independent female character with a devil-may-care attitude that I was hoping at project her as. Instead she's become a pity object, with a slight save-the-maiden complex. Therefore I shall rewrite and depending on how the readers review (and you must review or I will just scrap this and walk away from this FOREVER!) I may just keep writing this. However the readers want I shall write and shall attempt to update regularly.

Sincerely,

~Jasmin the Critic from Hell