Ok, I'm back! So lets see were Ravenstar and her clan end up. Ok, lets go!
We flew quickly and with out a sound, in our conditions we wouldn't be able to fight off a well feed full grow hawk. I was shaking from the effort of flying this long, and I was gasping for breath.
'Preyclan hadn't done any real damage, all the cats of my clan were hurt and hungry and most of our wounds reopened.'
"We would have won if we had a better leader. And why didn't Starclan worn us, because they're powerless. Now we have no home! We should kill off Raven and just make a new leader! There is only one cat suitable for this task, me." Honey ranted on and on to Yin who was beside her gliding. I knew this because they were right behind me. I felt a small stab of pain as she suggested trying to kill me. I would rather die in battle then end up being killed by someone trusted.
"We must travel by foot soon, the mountains ahead are having a storm." Crow said over to me and I nodded, I starred blankly ahead, it scared me to think about my demise. But I found myself stuck to the fact, even as I landed on a open mountain plain. We stalked along the mountains paths, leaping over holes and gaps. I was harder for the ones carrying Skyfall, who had not woken up yet. We stopped in front of a large gorge, we wouldn't be able to leap across here so Crow and I carried her across.
"Be careful when you jump!" I yowled over, the other's nodded and leap over one by one until only Cometleaf was left. She leap and landed, only the ledge cracked and fell from under her. As she fell I raced and grabbed her tail. 'We could try and fly to get her...' I though slowly.
Lightning struck just over my head, almost startling me enough to drop the cat that was in my jaws. If anyone tried to fly now, they would be fried . Cometleaf frantically clawed the rocks below me, I saw her and heard her. I was scared of losing her to Starclan and scared of both of use falling. I felt my claws that I had anchored into the ground forced forward. Soon we would both go over the edge, and could do nothing to stop it. Cometleaf suddenly smiled, I looked at her with confusion until I felt her slipping her tail from in-between my teeth. Suddenly her tail was freed from my grip and I looked over the edge of the cliff the see her twisting violently in the air and smashing into rocks, I gasped as her one of her wings were torn from her back. She then disappeared into the shaded darkness below. Surly ready to strike the ground.
I turned from the edge looking downward, everyone else looked over the edge, as if the fallen cat would reappear from the depths of the cliff. I shrew my head back and let out a long dragged out yowl of pain. The others joined me in my cry, we cried threw out the storm. The first of the small clan was gone. I was scared, horrified, were would we stay now? I did not know, but I could sense that my clan was starting to lose hope, and,
so was I.
I know, I know short chapter, but what ever, it was sad! So review for poor dead Cometleaf!