A/N: I Admit It, "I Had Writer's Block!"
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92 Reviews all together!! Was going to type "90" but I realised I had another 2 more! Hooray! I had 80 reviews last week so that makes another 12 more reviews to the total! Thanx guys for all the "love" and the wonderful support you keep giving to myself and this story; it's the reviews that keep this story alive and keeps me writing! So, whatever you do, please, if you love or at least like this fanfic, review!! Please keep reviewing! Thank you! OK, so the total of view for this fanfic so far is 3509! Thanx for reading guys! But only 98 of you have read all the way to "Chapter 9" which is actually "Chapter 8"(I'm saying it like it's a bad thing! lol. At least people are reading it!). So, keep reading and keep this fanfic alive! Thanx!
Dun...dun...dun!! What time is it? It's Recommendations Time!
Whose fanfi will I recommend this week? Drum roll, please... (Drum roll)...
My first recommendation is smithbrandon91 fanfic Theodore Seville is Gay! This fanfic is awesome so far! In this Fanfic, a rumour is spread across the school that "Theodore Seville Is Gay" What does Theodore do? Who does he turn to? And, most importantly, who started the rumour? And does Theodore actually feel...a little...gay? READ THIS NOW (But, please remember to come back and read this! lol) My second recommendation is DC's Princess very first AatC fanfic story It's Not Easy Being Green!Yes, this is her first her attempt at AatC story...and what a story it is! Eleanor has developed feelings for Theodore and she can't wait to tell him her feelings. But when a rumour is spread around the school that Eleanor loves Alvin Seville, things get a bit out of hand! Go read it already! And my last recommendation for this week is... xxSimonxxJeanettexx's fanfic A Chipmunk Story! For all you Simon/Jeanette Shipper's out there, this one is for you! It's a not so small tail of how Simon and Jeanette first met. And it's actually quite cute! For story of romance and humour, this story will have you smiling all the way through! (Wow! I sound pretty good when I recommend fanfics! Maybe I should think of a career a critic? What you guys think?)
And that, unfortunately, ends this week's Recommendations! I hope you all like the stories I recommended!
You know what's next; real A/N:
Real A/N:
Yes, I know, I know, didn't update by last Sunday as I said I would and I apologize to everyone who was looking forward for this chapter last week! Although, if you go back and read the last bit in my A/N, you will clearly see I said I would "try" to update by Sunday. I didn't promise
anything that it would defiantly be up by Sunday, so, please don't say I "promised" it would be up by Sunday cause I never said that. OK, now that I put that out the way, you're all probably wondering why I didn't update by Sunday. Well, I'm goanna explain that right. Now if you guys would stop shouting and screaming at me about how long you had to wait for this chapter and how psed off with me you are! (lol – And I deserve it! ) OK, so imagine this; last week Saturday, A 17 year old boy in his bedroom, window shut, TV off, door closed (My mom and dad would of been thinking "What is he doing in there?" LMAO!), and door shut. (I never write good if there's any noise in my room or if there's something that's going to distract me – that's why I turned off the TV, just to let you know) Am at my computer, Word document up on the screen, writing a very good opening to "Meet The Chipettes Chapter 9 – Part 1" (Yes, this is "Part 1" I'll explain that latter), I'm writing what the characters are doing, how they feel and stuff, put in a funny comment here and there, dialogue is perfect...until, I come to a sentence and my brain goes dead – off, not working, buzzed out – whatever you like to call it. This was the first time I had writer's block in writing this fanfic! And boy, what a block it was! How I got around it, I don't know? I don't even think I got around it in the end! lol Hence the "Part 1"! I'm just sitting there thinking "What happens next?" I rewrote this chapter 2 times altogether which isn't bad with how big of writers block I had. Most of the last part of the chapter was re-written (I'll put a A/N comment to show you where!) I hope this never happens again because, I don't usually get writers block when I'm writing – but, on that day, I did. Well, you're probably thinking "Wait, if you finished it by Saturday, why didn't you upload it on Sunday?" (I should become a psychic! Lol) This is where it gets a little boring so if you don't want to read rubbish, I suggest you skip to the next paragraph! Well, there's a reasonable explanation for that! (More like "excuse" lol) You see, on Sunday my Wireless was going out of whack! Seriously, I couldn't get connected to the internet at all. I did fix it in the end which was on Tuesday! I connected to the internet and straight away I get an Automatic Update from Windows. I install it, restarted my computer, try to connect to the internet and, would you believe, no connection! I worked on the problem for four days and I finally fixed it. It had something to do with my firewall and the update. The update was blocking the firewall from the internet meaning blocking my computer from the internet! Well, I got up now! Hope you all didn't fall asleep reading that long blabbering "excuses"! Hears snoring WAKE UP!!
OK, so you realised in my long blabbering paragraph above, that I said "Part 1" of Chapter 9. Why "Part 1"? Well, as mentioned above, I suffered from serious writers block (Don't you feel sorry for me? You Don't!!") which meant I couldn't write properly. In the end, I was able to write "something" which I hope you guys like. But, I warn you, it's not my best so be nice in the reviews! Thanx! To make a long story short, (and to save up on reading space – lol) I didn't how to end the chapter, so I ended it on a funny joke and left it there. (Yes, it keeps you hanging!) I wanted to end the chapter, officially, with a song – yes, there is a song coming in "Part 2" of Chapter 9 – But, I couldn't be bothered to write anymore that day – my head was hurting and I just couldn't think anymore! So I decided to make this chapter a 2 parter. Part 1 is immensely longer than Part 2, BTW.
Copywriting My FanFic:
OK, A couple of weeks ago, a user by the name of jeanettesimon4ever brought out her own fanfic for an "Alvin and the Chipmunks" sequel. Her fanfic is called "Alvin and the Chipmunks 2: Meet The Chipettes" Her first chapter (if you read it) has a lot of similarities to the first chapter of my story – (I pointed this out in a review I left the chapter with) E.g. the title is the same, certain dialogue is the same and what's going in the chapter is the same. Despite these similarities, I assure you that her fanfic is completely different to my fanfic!! I REAPEAT, HER FANFIC IS DIFFERENT TO MINE! Yes, there are similarities in the first chapter, but the rest of chapters (There's only 4 so far) is different! So, whatever you do, please don't go sending flames at her! What she has written is "her" fanfic, not mine!
While I'm on the subject of copywriting, may I say this to everyone: Please, please, please do not deliberately copy anything from my fanfic! This is my fanfic that I have written and I wouldn't like it if someone stole my work! (Well, actually this fanfic is everyone's as everyone can read it) But, anyway, please don't! Thank You!
Reply's To A/N's:
Some people have asked me a few questions and here are my replies!
NOTE: Please read reviews to know what is being said!!
It would be a good idea if people could sign in when they write me a review. That way I would know who said what and then I could read your fanfic's and they might be on my recommendation's segment if I like them.
Reply To Chipmunklover:
HAHAHA!
It was funny you said there was a few spelling mistakes in my chapter (which I know there is) because in your review, I saw a spelling mistake! LOL Go back and see if you can spot it.
I hope you like my writing style in this chapter. Like I said, I had writers block so be gentle when you review for this chapter.
No problem about the recommendations! I like your stories!
Yeah, I noticed I spelt "Claire" wrong in my author's note. I went back and fixed it straight away. Thanx for the heads up! And, yes, Claire will be introduced into the story soon...and Miss Miller! Yay!
Reply to cool cat100:
Wow!
That's a lot of "ty's" you've put in that review! How long did it take you to type that up?? 5 minutes?
I'm so happy you like my fanfic. If you want to write your own AatC fanfic, I would be more than happy to help you! Would do you need help? Just PM me and we could talk. If you have msn or an IM, that would really help in talking to you!
When did I lie? What did I lie about?
If you are referring to the whole "update by Sunday" thing, please read the first 3 paragraphs!
Hope we can talk soon!
Reply to GirlNextDoor228:
Wow, someone who actually likes the cliff-hangers! Now that's, a first!
Why is weird for you to say that the "Mighty Chipmunk" line coming from Brittany is priceless?
And, I'm also happy you understand about me not always updating on time! (I hate my busy life! Agghhh!)
Oh, and I'm sorry that don't always update fast enough!
Hope you like this chapter!
Reply to olivia:
I'm sorry I didn't update by (last) Sunday!
Well, the chapters up now so, what you waiting for? READ IT NOW!
Enjoy!
Reply to xmyMCRmyx:
Thanx for the review!!
When are you going to start writing the sequel to "The Ghost Of You"? Please let me know – I wanna know!
Yeah, I really like getting the readers involved with my stories. Why? Well, it just makes them (you) more part of the story and fan fiction. It's also really fun!
What yours plans are; I will keep them to myself for know. I want tell anyone! Lol
Reply to emmiexcutie:
Hey!
I know, I really like my cliff-hanging chapters! I was keep you off the edge of your seat.
You don't have to be HAAGIN' anymore!
Enjoy the chap!
Reply to Girl4Christ15 (AKA DC's Princess):
I'm glad you're liking the story!
Yep, that's what the chipmunks sing n the Opening Intro to the 1980's intro! I remixed a bit of it (added my own lines and verses/choruses) I got the lyrics off the internet, BTW.
No need to wait any longer! Go ahead and read this chapter! Enjoy!
-END SEGMENT-
So, this first "Part" is how the Chipettes and Chipmunks meet! A lot of readers have been looking forward to this – seeing the interaction between the chipmunks and the Chipettes and everything...and their reactions of course! The chipmunk's reactions are hella funny! Well, I thought they are! – so a lot of pressure was on me to make this a very good chapter – maybe that's why I got writers block...to much stress! – I also tried to make this funny which I think I did a very good job at. A lot of people love the "Mighty Chipmunk" line from the last chapter, so I wanted to top that line...if I could, which I think I did! I think a lot of you are goanna really like this one (I know I say this in every chapter A/N, but trust me!) This chapter is all "feel good" and "funny" So, to everyone who's sad and down – I hope this chapter will put a smile on your face! Cheer up! The first Part "Part 1" is much bigger than "Part 2", as I've said above in my "Real A/N" "Part 1" without the A/N is about 2,289 words long! Whereas, "Part 2" (which I'm writing at the moment, BTW) only has 560 words. But, I assume "Part 2" will be a little bit longer that 500 words as I'm still writing it.
But before you do read it (Why don't I just let you read the chapter already? lol) I should let you know that this chapter is not my best work. Although the jokes are superb and all, I think I could have written it a lot better. (Damn writers block!) My writing style is all the same but, I don't know, I think this chapter is my weakest yet. But don't let the writing annoy you – the story is great and the characters are great, as always.
And now... (Drum roil)...for the most anticipated chapter so far, everybody's been dying to read it! Here is "Chapter 9 – Meet The Chipettes – Part 1"! (Don't I sound too smug?)
WARNING: (In a deep voice that I still sound funny) This Chapter is suitable for everyone to read! Enjoy!
Disclaimer: I do not own Alvin and the Chipmunks (I wish I did tho...lol) or The Chipettes (Their cute! Lol)
Sorry for bad grammar and spelling!
Alvin And The Chipmunks 2: The Chipettes
Tagline (Writing at the bottom of a poster): Here Comes Trouble...Again!
Written by mpkio2
Chapter 9
Meet The Chipettes: Part 1
Alvin starred, open-mouthed at the auburn brow chipmunk who had just spoken to him...yes; she had spoken to him in plain English! He couldn't believe his eyes or ears or any of his senses for that matter and, by the looks on Simon's and Theodore's faces, neither could they. Was he really seeing what he hoped he was seeing? Was he hearing what he so desperately wanted to hear? Was he really feeling anxious, nervous...excited? Who were these chipmunks? How did they end up in the Seville's household? What were they doing here? All this and many more questions rushed through Alvin's head. He was confused but at the same time, excited; was this all real or was it a just a messed up dream?(1)
Simon was shocked; he couldn't believe, or understand, how these three female chipmunks ended up in the Chipmunks house. "Hope they tell us how they came to be here," he thought hopefully. "Why on earth were they in a big cardboard box?" At that question, Simon thought that Dave had ordered the three female chipmunks as a surprise for Alvin, Theodore and himself...but he brushed that thought away quickly; He soon remembered that earlier the same night, Simon had asked Dave what was inside the box and, after a "bomb" scare, Dave had replied that he didn't know and that he hadn't looked inside the box yet. "Someone must have sent the box to the house," Simon thought. "But, who?" (2)
Theodore was bursting with excitement; at last he had some new friends to play with, or that he hoped they would be his friends. He thought at how much fun he and his brothers would have with the three new female chipmunks; how they would laugh at jokes, enjoy playing games, having meals and just simply...talk. It wasn't that Theodore didn't have any fun with Alvin or Simon, no, he had a lot of fun with his brothers, but, sometimes, he just wished their were more people...more...chipmunks to play with, to talk to, to eat with, to have fun with. And now, here were three new chipmunks in the house!! What would he say to them? Would they like him? Would they be with friends with him? Theodore didn't know...(3)
Jeannette stood as close back into the cardboard box as possible; she was very shy. But, at the same time, she was very intrigued at the three male chipmunks. She surprised to see they were wearing clothes...yes, clothes! Why they were wearing clothes, she didn't know, but she wanted to learn more; she wanted to find out how they lived, who they lived with, what food they ate,
why they were wearing clothes and, most importantly, if they could talk? If only she wasn't so shy...(4)
Eleanor's heart was racing. She couldn't believe how the events of her and her sisters went through to reach America ended them in a house with male chipmunks. She also found very ironic; three female chipmunks in box and then find themselves in house with male chipmunks; if that wasn't ironic, Eleanor didn't know what was. She wasn't starring at the three other chipmunks; her head was down. She too was shy but she wasn't as shy as Jeanette. She just wished someone would break the awkward silence...(5)
Brittany stood in front of the red capped chipmunk, her smile wide on her face. His mouth was open, his eyes were stone: Brittany could tell he was shocked. She had a pretty good look at the shocked chipmunk; he was wearing a red hooded sweater on, a red cap placed on his head and in his right paw he held a toothpick. "He does look kinda cute," Brittany thought to herself as she looked at him in the face. "But I can't let him know that," she thought, determinly. (6)
The awkward silence dread on for a few more moments...that is, until Brittany broke it...
"Erm...hello?" she said, happily as she stock out her paw for Alvin to shake. But Alvin just stood with his mouth wide open, his brain dead.
"Err...hello?" Brittany repeated, waving her arms in Alvin's view. "I'm talking here," But no matter how hard she tried, she just couldn't get Alvin's attention...well, full attention that is (7). Brittany then turned to face her two nervous sister's, who were still standing near the cardboard box, and asked:
"What's wrong with him?"
Jeanette and Eleanor didn't reply to their confident sister's question; they were both still shy.
"Let me rephrase that; what's wrong with you two?" Brittany asked her two non-replying sisters.(8)
"We're...just...a...little...shy, Brittany," Eleanor replied quietly and shyly.
"Shy? Shy of what?" Brittany asked not believing what she was hearing. "They're just chipmunks!"
"We know," came a faint voice from in the cardboard box. "But, we're just a little scared of meeting them, that's all,"
"Oh, come on Jeanette!" Brittany said loudly so her shy sister could hear her. "Their harmless; look at them!" Brittany gestured a paw to the three, still, open-mouthed chipmunks.(9) "Now come out of that cardboard box and meet them!"
"I...I..." came a shaky voice form the box. "I don't...w-want to, I'm...fine in here,"
"Eleanor, would you please get your sister out of their?" Brittany asked her small chubby sister.
"Err...OK, I'll try," Eleanor said as she scampered into the cardboard box.
After a moment or two, talking could be heard from the cardboard box; one voice was persuasive, the other; unsure. In the end, the persuasive voice won over the unsure voice. Eleanor and a very, nervous, Jeanette came out of the box. They both scampered up to where their confident sister was standing, patiently.
"You see Jeanette?" Brittany gestured towards the three male chipmunks. "They're harmless,"
"I don't know," said Jeanette in an unsure voice. "Are they friendly?"
"I wouldn't know," said Brittany as she starred at the three open mouthed chipmunks. "They haven't said one thing since they've seen us!"
"Well, maybe they can't talk," said Jeanette in a matter-of-factly voice.
"Can't talk?" said Brittany in an unbelief voice. "Didn't you hear what they were saying just moments ago?"
"No," said Jeanette. "I didn't. Don't you remember what happened?"(10)
"Oh, yes, sorry Jeanette," Brittany said in apologetic voice.
"Maybe we should say "Hello"?" Eleanor advised.
"I've tried that already!" Brittany said, impatiently. "Look!" Brittany put out her paw and said to the red capped chipmunk: "Hello," Alvin and his brothers didn't respond.
"You see!" said Brittany as she looked at her two sisters. "Nothing! They just stand there looking at us, open mouthed! Ain't they ever seen a female talking chipmunk before?"
At this statement, Eleanor looked at the three male chipmunks with their open mouths and looked back at Brittany to give her, her reply:
"Apparently not, Brittany" (11)
"Well, maybe you should try a different approached," said Jeanette, smartly.
"A different approach, eh?" thought Brittany, cunningly. "If I know anything about males, I know they don't like to be insulted by a female," And at that thought, an idea came to Brittany. "I just hope this works!" she hoped in her head. (12)
"Come on girls," said Brittany, smugly, as she grabbed Eleanor and Jeanette by their arms. "We're getting out of here. I never knew how stupid boys were!"
And Brittany turned on her heels and dragged her two sisters away from the three open-mouthed chipmunks.
"What are you doing, Brittany?" Eleanor asked. "We're leaving them!"
"Don't worry," Brittany said in a reassuring tone. "I have a plan!"
"I just hope you're so-called plan works" groaned Eleanor.
"Don't worry, my plan will take effect in three...two...one..."
And at that moment, a high pitched voice could be heard from behind the Chipettes; a loud angry voice:
"Hey girl!" came the angry voice. Brittany turned around, Eleanor and Jeanette doing the same movement as Brittany still had hold of them. Brittany could see that the chipmunk in the red hat expression had changed; his mouth was no longer open, it was closed but in its place, he wore an expression of anger.
"Yeah, I'm talking to you!" the red capped chipmunk, shouted. "Come back here and say that again!"
Brittany smiled. "Bingo!" she whispered (13). Her plan had worked. She started to walk back to the three male chipmunks, Eleanor and Jeannette walking beside her. "What did I say?" she said to here sisters excitedly. "What did I say? I told you it would work!" She had now let go of Eleanor and Jeanette.
Closer they came to the three male chipmunks, closer, and closer, until, they were a foot apart.
"Say what again?" asked Brittany in an innocent voice.
"You know perfectly what you said you...you...female!" Alvin shot at the "innocent" chipmunk.
"Oh, so you know what a girl is, do you?" Brittany said in a patronizing voice. "Well, you're not as dumb as you look, are you...you male!"
"The name's Alvin!" said Alvin through gritted teeth. "And you remember it...girl!"
"I'm Brittany!" Brittany shot back. "And you better remember it...boy!"(14)
Alvin reached boiling point. "That's it!" At that moment, Alvin was going to attack Brittany...that is...if Simon hadn't stopped him.
"Don't, Alvin!" said Simon as he tried to restrain Alvin from hitting Brittany. "It's not worth it, leave it,"
"Yeah, you do as your older brother tells you to do!" said Brittany, mockingly.
"I'm the oldest!" Alvin corrected her.
"Oh, well...you do as your "younger" brother tells you to do, then," Brittany snickered.
Alvin started to get lose out of Simon's firm grip; he tried to wiggle free but Simon had him firmly locked. Simon could sense he wanted the female chipmunk...but was it out of anger, he could sense?
"Brittany, please stop teasing him," Jeanette asked her sister, calmly. "Can't you see your making him worse?"
"Yes, I can," Brittany smiled.
Suddenly, Simon was looking straight at the chipmunk who had just spoken; Jeanette. She was like him; she had to stop her older sister from getting into fights with other people.
"I'm Simon," Simon greeted. (15)
"I'm Jeanette," She replied the greeting with a smile.
Simon smiled back.
"Awww," Brittany continued in a baby mocking voice. "Big brother Alvin can't get out of hs younger brothers grip?"
"I'll show you, baby!" Alvin replied, in a determined voice.
As the two chipmunks roared and argued, with two of their siblings trying to control the raging argument, the two youngest siblings had already started to talk...
"You know, I really hate it when she's like this!" Eleanor groaned deeply.
"Me too!" Theodore agreed. "Well, except Alvin's a boy,"
Eleanor giggled.
"When Alvin and Simon get into a fight, I usually try to stop the fight," Theodore explained.
"I do the same when Brittany gets in arguments with other people!"
"When I sort the argument I usually go and..." But Theodore's sentence was finished by the chipette.
"...get something to eat," concluded Eleanor.
Theodore was surprised; "How did she now that?" he thought.
"My name's Eleanor," The youngest chipette smiled at the youngest chipmunk.
"I'm Theodore" Theodore said, happily as he smiled back at Eleanor. Had he just made a friend? A real, true friend? Someone he could talk to, someone he could play with, someone he could rely on if he ever felt down? Theodore hoped the answer was "yes"... (16)
"Err...maybe we should stop them two from fighting?" Eleanor asked a dazed Theodore.
"Huh? What?" asked Theodore as he came back to reality.
"Do you think we should stop them two..." She pointed in the direction where Alvin and Brittany were still arguing. "...from fighting?" she asked the green sweatered chipmunk.
"Yeah," agreed Theodore. "I don't want anyone to get hurt," And with that, the young chipette and the young chipmunk scampered over to where Alvin and Brittany were arguing.
"OK," Eleanor announced to the whole group of chipmunks and Chipettes so she could get their full attention. At once, everyone stared at her. "Enough with the arguing; this isn't the time, nor place, to be having an argument!" She starred at her older sister and the oldest chipmunk, pointed at them and said:
"You two; stop acting like babies and apologize to one another!" Eleanor ordered in a strict-motherly tone.
"Why should I have to apologize?" asked Alvin, defiantly, his back facing Brittany with his arms crossed around his stomach. Simon had let go of him, now; he was calmer but he was still pretty mad. Simon was close to Alvin just in case he lost it, again.
"Because, you started it!" answered Brittany as she pointed directly at the hot headed chipmunk.
"Did not!" Alvin replied, defensively. He was now facing Brittany.
"You did!" replied Brittany in a loud, angry voice.
"Quiet!" shouted Eleanor. Both, Alvin and Brittany, ceased arguing. "Alvin, I don't really know you much, but, by what I've seen and heard of you from the past 20 minutes, is that...you're very arrogant and self-centred," (17)
"What!" Alvin squeaked in a voice of disbelief. "I'm not arrogant or self-centred...I just have a high opinion of myself, that's all!" (18)
"Yeah, nothing self-centred about that," Simon said sarcastically.
"Anyway," Eleanor continued her speech. "Even though you're all those things, can't you just say you're sorry?
"Hmm...let me think..." Alvin said as he rubbed his chin in concentration. "...No!"
"Alvin, please say you're sorry," squeaked the youngest chipmunk in a pleading voice.
"No way, Theodore! There's no way I'm goanna say I'm sorry to that...that..." Alvin had trouble to find the words to describe Brittany..."...hot-headed, look at me, talk about self all the time...female!" (19)
"Yeah, same back to you buddy!" Brittany shouted back at Alvin.
"Agghhh!" Eleanor moaned in frustration. "You know what? I give up!"
Alvin and Brittany looked at her.
"Yeah! I give up!" she said loudly for all to hear. "There's just no way for both you to apologize to each other!"
"That's the truth," said Alvin, his back facing Brittany, again.
"You said it, sister!" replied Brittany, her back, now facing Alvin, her arms crossed.
"You know what's wrong with you two?" said Eleanor in a frustrated voice.
"No," Alvin replied.
"Tell us; we're all dying to hear!" said Brittany in a sarcastic voice.
"You're both so alike!" Eleanor blurted out. At once, both Alvin and Brittany faced her and said, defiantly:
"No, we're not!" (20)
"Oh, I stand corrected!" said Eleanor, sarcastically.
"Err...as much as I like to hear how much you two are alike," said Simon. Alvin and Brittany both glared at him. "...I do believe we all should be officially introduced to one another,"
Alvin took the moment to glance other his shoulder. Out of the corner of his eye, he could see Brittany was doing the same thing he was doing. "This girl is so stubborn!" he thought in his head. "Well, if she won't make the first move, Alvin Seville will!"
"OK," Alvin said in a firm voice. Alvin turned around to face Brittany, his arms down by hi sides. Brittany, soon, turned around to face him. She was still pretty mad.
"OK, then!" Simon said, happily. "Maybe we should all get in a two separate lines; male chipmunks on one side, female chipmunks on the other,"
There was a murmur of agreement and, in no time, all the male chipmunks (Alvin, Simon and Theodore) were standing in a one line facing their female counterparts (Brittany, Jeanette and Eleanor).
"OK, great," said Simon as he introduced himself. "Err...hello, I'm Simon. The...err..."
"Dumb one," said Alvin finishing Simon's sentence. Alvin laughed at his comment but stopped when Simon elbowed him in the side. It was Alvin's turn next... (21)
"I'm Alvin...the..."
"Arrogant one," said Simon finishing Alvin's sentence. (22)
"Hey!" said Alvin in a defensive tone. Theodore went next...
"And I'm Theodore, the...err...the...?" Theodore rubbed his head, thinking. "Err, guys?" Alvin and Simon looked at him. "Which one am I?" Theodore asked in an innocent tone. (23)
"You're the baby one, Theodore," Simon informed the "baby" of the group.
"Oh, OK, I'm the baby one!" Theodore squeaked happily, telling the female chipmunks which "one" he was.
"You're turn," Alvin said in a tone that said "let-me-see-you-do-better"
Jeanette went first:
"Oh, hi," she said nervously, as she waved to the male chipmunks. "I'm Jeanette, the...the... "
"Clumsy one," Brittany finished Jeanette's sentence. "I'm sorry, Jeanette but, it's true," (24)
"I know, you're probably right, Brittany," Jeanette sighed.
"I'm Brittany, the glamorous one," said Brittany in an "I'm-better-than-anyone" tone. (25)
"And I'm Eleanor, the sweet one," said Eleanor as she waved at all three male chipmunks. When she came to Theodore, he looked at her. She could feel her checks glowing red. She could also see that Theodore was looking at the ground: Was he blushing as well? (26)
"Well, it's nice meeting you ladies!" Alvin said in a friendly manner but his tone changed quickly. "Now, get out of our house!" he said as he pointed to the front door of the house. (27)
"What!?" exclaimed the other five chipmunk in unison.
"I'm kidding!" said Alvin trying hard not to laugh at their reactions. (28)
TO BE CONTINUED IN PART 2...
A/N:
A/N Chapter comments:
(1): For Alvin's sake, I hope it's not a dream.
(2): Yes, Simon, the one whose always thinking. Hmm...How did the box end up in their house? Was It Ian? If it was Ian, why would he put the box on the door step? I don't know!
(3): Aww...Theodore wants some friends. Don't worry Theo, I have a feeling their goanna like you!
(4): Yep, Jeanette's shy. But, at the same time, she wants to get close to them.
(5): Eleanor has always been the sweet one in my eyes...but, she does think things over.
(6): Brittany is already feeling some feelings towards Alvin! But will she show them? Let's find out!
(7): Alvin's face is a picture! His still shocked!
(8): Brittany's always confident.
(9): LOL! Their still shocked!
(10): What happened to Jeanette? I don't remember anything happening to Jeanette! (This will be explained soon!)
(11): LOL XD!
(12): She has a plan; but will it work? Let's see...
(13): Wow – she's good!!
(14): I loved writing this part! The interaction between Alvin and Brittany is pretty...interesting? LOL Love the arguments they have!
(15): Love how these two introduce themselves!
(16): Aww...Theo wants a friend! Will Eleanor be his friend? This is where I got writers block! Everything after this point, I had to re-write 2 times! Seriously!
(17): How does Eleanor know that about Alvin? All will be revealed soon!
(18): That's Alvin, right there! I love that line. LOL
(19): HAHAHA I don't know how I came up with that!
(20): Yeah, their nothing alike! LOL
(21): Simon; dumb? Alvin's so funny!
(22): Well, Alvin did the same to him...What goes around comes around.
(23): Aww, that was so cute! Which one am I? LOL
(24): Brittany's mean to her sisters, but, at heart, she cares about her sisters.
(25): Cue the "Glamorous song sung by Furgie LOL
(26): Ooooo! Eleanor's already feeling something around Theodore...and I think Theodore feels the same, too!
(27): This line is from the first movie. It's when Dave first meets the chipmunks and he says this to Alvin, Simon and Theodore. I thought I'd give this line to Alvin!
(28): LOL!
The most A/N comments for all the chapters! This is the secound longest document in all of the chapters! :)
So, how was it? Funny? A little bit funny? I finished it off in the worst possible place, I know, but remember this is "Part 1" So this will be concluded in "Part 2"
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