Woot! Last chapter! Anyways…I figured out that people actually write drafts first! No wonder theirs are so good…
I basically sit down on my bed and figure out what sounds right and write it down without second thought…
Meh…first time writing a lemon so go easy.
Just saw the "Pianist" on Wednesday…so sad…Anyone else see it? Anyone?
I'm starting to get interested in Harry Potter fics so if you know any good fics pm me or whatever. HP/HG fics only plz…thank you. Or if you know any good Avatar fics that is also appreciated! (Though I probably already read all of the good ones)
'Three months' Katara thought 'Three straight months of pure torture…wonderful, amazing torture.'
Katara groaned as she turned around to face her Aang. Aang's arms tightly wrapped around her body. Katara smiled smugly as she move closer to her love. 'Yeah…my Aang.'
Katara reluctantly sat up and looked around at her surroundings. The room was given to them by Zuko again, this one bigger to accompany two people. She looked over at the still sleeping Aang, smiling at the fact that out of all of the people in the world, Aang chose her, a lowly peasant.
Despite this she felt…unsatisfied. She wanted more…more than just passionate kisses and sleeping in the same bed together. Sure that was okay, but Katara couldn't help but worry. Worry that Aang would leave her…she wanted to make sure that he was hers and she was his. She wanted to bear his children. She wanted…wanted to be married.
It had been her dream for the last few months. It haunted her dreams…her dream of passionate sex with the love of her life. It made her crazily wet at times. Yet…Aang hadn't gone any further…he didn't even talk about the betrothal necklace, which Katara wore ever day. She even took off her mother's necklace in order to wear the betrothal necklace properly…and that is saying something.
It wasn't helping that Aang had to attend tons of parties and meetings. It really wasn't helping when during those stupid parties, hundreds of girls were flirting with Aang…her Aang. Even when she was holding Aang's hand, even with her pressed against Aang.
Aang barely spent any time with her…always having some random meeting and coming back late.
It didn't make Katara angry…it made her furious. Everyday they argued like crazy when Aang came back to their room late, arguing over her staying up worrying about him or lack of attention or "why weren't you here for..?". The truth was, in the back of her head, she thought Aang was cheating on her. It tore her heart, but like always, the arguing and worrying always ended with Aang pushing her against the wall, kissing her passionately and telling her over and over again how much he loved her.
Still…it worried her…it tortured her…just thinking that Aang didn't love her…was cheating on her and it felt like hundreds of swords were piercing her heart.
'And these damn dreams…these damn dreams of passionate sex...' Katara thought gloomily. It was as if the dreams were taunting her…at some times the feelings were so strong, it took all of her self-control to not push Aang up to the wall and start stripping him.
'Maybe he isn't mature enough…maybe the monks never told him…' A voice in her head said.
Katara immediately dismissed the thought. 'Aang is the most mature guy I know…as for monkhood…if they never told him, then how the hell did he become a great kisser and how did they reproduce then?'
Though there was still a thought resting in the back of her mind…his monkhood.
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It all started at another party. This time for the birthday of the Earth king's daughter.
Katara rolled her eyes, as she started to get dress. 'Another pompous, rich girl…probably going to flirt with my Aang.'
She decided to dress up in her elegant water tribe dress. It was very much like her green kimono, except it was blue and was actually a 2-piece, held together securely by a silver silk belt. The designs on the dress were completely different and there were slits from her lower thigh down on both sides of her dress. Her hair still down and she still had her hair loopies. She never wore makeup…well anymore…it was her official policy now. She slowly put on her white sandals; she absolutely despised high heeled shoes and only felt comfortable in sandals, boots, or barefooted. Finally she put her most prized possession on, the betrothal necklace.
'Hopefully this will get Aang to look at me…' She thought gloomily as she took one last look into the mirror.
"Katara! Are you ready yet?" An anxious Aang called.
"Yeah" Katara replied as she walked out to meet her love.
Aang was dressed up in his traditional Air nomad clothes with part of his shoulder exposed. Aang's mouth gaped as he saw a beautiful Katara step out of the room, thought luckily Katara's eyes weren't on his face.
"Nice...very original" Katara commented dryly, her eyes though were glued on the muscle practically bulging from the opening. She barely saw his bare chest anymore, it seemed thought Aang decided to cover his entire chest since they became a couple.
'Damn his stupid monkhood…'
"Thanks…shall we?" Aang said, offering his arm to Katara, which she took hastily.
Katara felt mischievous… "Race you there!" She yelled, running as fast as she could to the ballroom in the fire nation. Just as she reached the door, she took a left, hiding in the shadows. Aang came a few seconds later, knowing it was smart to let the lady win. Just as Aang was about to open the door, Katara came out of her hiding spot and tackled him.
Katara pulled him into a rough, passionate kiss. Their tongue tasting each other, outlining each others mouth. Katara felt like she was in heaven every time she kissed him. She suddenly felt bold, she slipped her hands underneath Aang's tunic, tracing his every muscle. She loved how…it felt…every muscle defined, she felt as if she could go on tracing it forever. Aang's hands were not idle, slowly going up and down her back. Down…down lower...and lower until it came to rest on Katara's ass.
Katara yelped into their mouths as Aang suddenly squeezed. Surprise became pleasure, as Aang started to caress it; she started moaning and sighing, loving the feeling.
'Spirits! When did Aang change from innocent monk to…a…a dirty monk?! Well whatever happened…I'm glad it happened.' Katara managed to think before what seemed to be a cloud overcame her mind, a wonderful, pleasurable cloud.
Katara managed to get the top of Aang's clothes off, her hands still tracing the muscles. She whimpered as Aang's lips left hers, but it was quickly replaced by more moaning as Aang started to move his wonderful lips to Katara's throat and sucked on her pulse. Katara closed her eyes, none of their kissing had ever been this intense. Katara took off Aang's scarlet silk belt, she needed to feel him. Before she could remove the rest of Aang's clothes, Aang grabbed onto her wrists.
"We...should…stop." Aang panted out.
Katara gaped at him, visibly hurt. She could have punched him right then, instead she curled her hands into a fist. Her body was shaking with rage. It was like giving her a small taste of heaven then taking it away as soon as she was about to savor it.
"Fine" She hissed out, she hastily stood up, straightened out her clothes and opened the doors, not once looking at Aang.
"What's wrong with me?" Aang asked himself.
'I know what's wrong with you…you're nervous that is what's wrong with you…even when the nomads told you everything you probably need to know...you are still nervous…pathetic.'
'Don't you ever say anything nice?'
'I'll say something nice when you make the right decision and not before that!'
Aang quietly walked into the large ballroom, his head hung down from dejection. He took his seat next to the head of the table, right next to the king and Katara. Aang snatched a glance at Katara, her head was still turned around to not face him. Aang sighed as he gloomily listens to another one of the king's speeches about the improvements.
After what seemed to be the hundredth speech, the music started to play and the King announced the start of the dance.
Aang's heart skipped a beat as he knew that this was probably his only chance to gain Katara's good side back...the side that made him feel…feel amazing.
Just as Aang was about to turn around and ask Katara, the King pulled Aang away and insisted that Aang dance with his daughter.
'Spirits…this is awkward…I don't want to risk losing the King's favor…but I love Katara and I might lose her. Damn that fat bastard!' (A/N fat king)
Aang looked over to Katara for her support or help at least, but Katara didn't even look at him.
" Just go" Katara snapped, waving her hand as if to dismiss him. Aang felt his heart drop, but before he could even talk, the overeager daughter pulled Aang onto the dance floor.
Katara silently watched the two, disgusted by just the sight. Katara couldn't take it anymore, it was tearing her heart apart. She felt like crap, like Aang never love her…like a mistress for the Avatar or some figure to make him more popular… Katara ran out of the room, not caring what everyone else thought. Her face streaked with tears, she ran…ran somewhere…ran any were…any were just to get away from Aang.
At this point Aang was running out after Katara, his mind beating him for such a stupid decision. He should have declined immediately… screw the king's favor. His eyes rapidly searching for some sign of Katara, he saw her hair fly out of the palace doors. He sprinted after her; he felt his heart break as he heard her sobbing.
Katara collapsed beneath a tree…she took a moment to look around and realized she was at the pond. It was one of Katara's and Aang's favorite spot. Katara felt sader...she buried her head in her own clothes, wishing that Aang actually loved her. She suddenly ripped off the betrothal necklace and threw it onto the ground. 'Why the hell is my life so horrible?!'
"Ka-Katara?" Aang said.
"You can't keep doing this to me…" Katara whispered.
"Wh-what?! If you're talking about that dance, I know I made a mistake, I-"
"No…it wasn't just that one was it…all those other parties…those supposive meetings…I can't take it anymore…it's killing me…"
"What?! What the hell are you talking about?!"
"The reason you didn't want to marry me…or take our relationship further…" Katara couldn't take it anymore; she collapsed onto the ground, sobbing hysterically.
Aang just gaped at her. He had always thought Katara wanted to take it slowly, if he knew this before, he would have already married her.
Aang ran up to her and engulfed her in a hug. True, it probably wasn't the best thing, but it was the only thing he could think of.
Katara, too weak to struggle, just gave in to the hug. It felt awkward, but it felt so right.
"I'm so sorry Katara, I'm so sorry…shhh…I'm sorry…I haven't been cheating on you…I…I guess I was just nervous…and with all those damn meetings…it's put a lot of stress on me"
Katara looked up; she saw that Aang wasn't lying. All she saw was the warmth and love pool in his eyes.
"It's okay Aang…I guess I'm just over-reacting." Katara sniffed as she moved up to grab the betrothal necklace off of the ground, but before she could pick it up, Aang tackled her onto the ground and pulled her into a rough kiss.
Katara moaned as Aang pushed his tongue into her mouth; it slid all around her mouth, mapping every ridge, every bump. Katara would never get tired kissing Aang, but Aang had a different idea in mind.
Aang's hands slowly went to her silver silk belt, his fingers pulling on it, silently asking for permission. Sure Katara wanted it, but Aang couldn't help but think that he is still going to fast.
Instead of answering, Katara took off of Aang's red belt and quickly took the top part off. She ran her hands over Aang's amazing body, loving how his muscles felt.
Aang slowly removed his lips from hers and move towards her neck. Aang planted kisses all over her neck; leaving wet lip marks every where. He finally found her sensitive spot on her neck and sucked on, causing Katara to moan in pleasure. Feeling bold, his right hand brushed Katara's right bosom. Katara closed her eyes and moaned louder, pleasure seeping to every part of her body…well almost everywhere. She wanted him to hold her bosom, to suck on her peaks, to take her in everyway.
Katara's hands traced Aang's arms until they reached what they wanted. She pulled Aang's hands to her belt again. Aang took the hint and quickly took it off. Underneath, Katara was wearing her white bindings; Aang almost fainted as he saw how…beautiful she was. Suddenly Aang couldn't take it anymore, he frantically unwrapped the bindings covering her bosoms. Aang gaped at what he saw, he always thought Katara was beautiful…but this, this was too much.
It took all of Katara's will to not cover herself up, afraid that Aang didn't like what he saw. All rational thoughts left as Aang went to kiss her neck again. Katara moan and arched her neck back, giving Aang more access. Aang started to kiss lower…and lower until he reached the valley between her bosoms. Katara gasped as Aang started to kiss around her bosoms, purposely avoiding her peaks.
"Aang!….please…no teasing" Katara panted out. Aang looked up from his work, he mischievously smiled.
Katara groaned, her eyes shot open as Aang slowly licked her left bosom, his hand cradling the other.
"Aang…please." Katara groaned out, her back arched back to give Aang more access, her hands pulling Aang's head closer. Despite that, Aang managed to stay far away…far enough to leave Katara longing.
Aang decided Katara had suffered enough; he took Katara's peaks into his mouth.
"Aang!" Katara sighed with pleasure. Aang moved from one bosom to another, giving each the same amount of attention.
Katara was so disoriented that she didn't notice that Aang took off the bindings covering her womanhood.
Aang was so intoxicated by her scents that it took all of his self-control not to drive into her. Instead he slowly kissed lower, his hands still caressing her bosoms. Finally, Aang reached her womanhood.
Katara saw the pause and looked down, seeing Aang stare at her womanhood. Katara blushed and suddenly felt shy. Katara used her hands to cover up her womanhood, afraid that Aang didn't like it.
Aang looked up and saw her shyness and smiled. He slowly moved up until his lips were just millimeters away from her ear.
"You're beautiful" Aang whispered in a low voice. Katara felt her heart beat race…the way Aang said it…was intoxicating. She slowly removed her hands, her whole body shaking from apprehension. Her breath came in short, raspy gasps.
Aang went back to his observation…just staring. Katara was just about to yell "Do something!' when Aang tenderly brushed his hand over Katara's womanhood. Katara arched backwards, sighing happily. Aang liking the effect, inserted a finger inside of her womanhood.
"Aang!" Katara yelled.
Aang smiled. "What?" Knowing that he was in control, he decided to tease her.
"Please…don't…stop."
"As you wish." Aang stuck another finger inside.
Katara yelled his name again. Aang started to pump his fingers in and out, each time getting wetter. Katara moaned louder, it felt like she was in heaven…why hadn't they done this sooner?!
Katara felt Aang's fingers pull out, she whimpered from the loss. Realization dawned on her as she felt a slippery muscle push into her womanhood.
Aang never tasted anything better…it was like…like…he could even describe how wonderful it was. It was incomparable…and the groans and screams…everything seemed so erotic right now that his mind wasn't thinking straight. His tongue frantically licked her clit as his fingers pushed in and out of her womanhood.
"Aang! Yes Aang! Lick me harder Aang! AANG!" Katara yelled as she climaxed, her chest heaving, her eyes closed from the lost of energy. Aang was busy licking up the last of the cum.
When Katara got some of her energy back, she pushed Aang over onto the ground.
"My turn" Katara growled and before Aang could say anything, Katara kissed him roughly on the lips. Her hands deftly pulled down Aang's pants, allowing Katara to see his member for the first time.
Now it was Aang's turn to be embarrassed. His cheeks glowed as he saw Katara just staring at it.
'Does she like it? Is it too small? Too big?' Aang pondered.
'Wow…how in the world am I going to fit this in my mouth?!…much less my womanhood!'
Aang was become twitchy….Katara had been kneeling between his legs for what seemed to be hours. It was amazingly hot that Katara, the love of his life, is kneeling naked in front of his member. He didn't know how long he could last this…torture.
Finally, after what seemed to be eternity for both of them, Katara hesitantly reached for Aang's large member. Aang felt electrified by just the simple touch, he tried to suppress his groans. This suppression didn't last as Katara slowly moved her hand up and down his member, causing him to groan. Katara smiled, now she was in control. Katara slowly lowered her head closer…and closer till Aang could feel her breath on his member. It made Aang crazy, just waiting.
Katara gulped in apprehension. 'What if I do something wrong?!...I have no damn experience in this! What if it doesn't fit?!'
Aang saw this and started stroking Katara's hair.
"It's okay…we can stop if you want."
That only encouraged Katara; imagine Aang wanted to stop even though it was only Katara who got the pleasure of a climax. Katara frowned and was about to smack him…smack him for being so damn nice and suggesting that idea even when he knew that it was what she wanted…but then thought better of it. She had another way of torture.
Katara slowly licked the head of his member…just once. Aang groaned and tried to pull Katara closer, but of course Katara was able to stay just far away to tease Aang. It made Aang mad with desire. Katara slowly licked the head again, just enough to taste it. It tasted so good…like…like nothing I've ever even imagined. Suddenly Katara took the member into her mouth, slowly licking it over and over again. Aang groaned with pleasure.
Katara knew at that moment that Aang was hers and hers only…and she was his. No more stupid arguments, no worrying, just love.
She moved up and down his member at an antagonizing slow pace.
"Katara…please" Aang moaned, his hands running through her hair.
Katara only smiled and continued her slow pace. Katara gasped as she felt the member at the back of her throat…it felt amazing. Katara's hands suddenly grabbed Aang's balls and started to caress it. Aang moaned louder.
"Katara…more…"
Katara complied this time, wanting to taste him...to please him. She slowly picked up her pace, her head bobbling up and down, her tongue licking every part of his member.
"Yes Katara! KATARA!" He yelled as he climaxed into Katara's mouth. Katara felt as hot cum spilled into her mouth, she never felt more turned on. She did the only thing that she could do, she swallowed it.
'Spirits! It's so good!'
Katara crawled up and laid her head on Aang's chest. Aang stroked Katara's hair, trying to recover his energy. After a few minutes of silence, Aang decided to ask.
"Katara…I love you…and I was wondering…if you would marry me?"
Katara gapped at him, shocked. She always thought moments like these were only for fairy tales…the love of her life wants to marry her and they just had sex. Just like in her dreams...just like she imagined.
"YES! OF COURSE!" Katara yelled as she wrapped her arms around his neck.
Aang got up from underneath her and walked to the fallen betrothal necklace and slowly put it back onto Katara's neck. He encircled his hands around Katara, bringing her flush up to him. He kissed her on the cheek, tasting the salty tears of joy running down her face.
"Uh…do you want to..." Katara asked suddenly, her face blushing like crazy.
"Only if you want to."
"Yes…unless of course you don't want to" Katara said seducively, her eyelids lowered. Aang's mind flashed back to the secret party they had at the Fire Nation, the same look on her face…lowered eyelids…innocently seducing him. It made him crazy with desire.
Aang felt as if he would jump off of a bridge if Katara told him to.
Katara yelped as Aang pushed her down to the ground and captured her lips into another fervent kiss.
Aang broke the kiss and slowly positioned himself to enter her. He took a quick look at Katara's beautiful, cerulean eyes, to get her approval again. Katara pulled him into another kiss, giving Aang all the approval he would ever need. Aang slowly entered her, feeling her tight, wet, warm walls all around him member. Aang felt Katara gasped, causing her to withdraw from their passionate kiss. Aang finally move far enough to feel her hymen, blocking his path.
"Are you sure?"
"Yes…just be gentle…please."
"Of course." Aang said, capturing Katara's lips again as he pushed cautiously through her hymen.
"OH Spirits! Are you okay Katara?!" Aang said, looking at Katara's pained expression, rogue tears streaming down her face. He quickly tried to pull his member out of her womanhood, but was stopped.
"Don't you fucking dare!" Katara said, while brushing strands of hair from her face.
Aang stopped moving though.
"Move…I'm okay."
Aang complied, moving slowly to allow Katara to become accustomed with his size.
"Yes…Aang…harder…YES! AANG! FASTER! MAKE ME PREGNANT!" Katara yelled out of pleasure, she didn't even realize what she was say, it just sounded right at the moment.
Aang complied, moving as fast as he could. Soon Katara was moving her pelvis with him, their rhythms matching like pieces of a puzzle.
"YES AANG!" Katara yelled as she felt Aang move faster and faster, warmth and pleasure seeping to every part of her body as well as in Aang's.
Aang felt Katara's muscles constrict around his member as she climaxed.
"AANG!"
Aang pumped a few more times till he too climaxed.
"KATARA!" Aang managed to yell, before he collapsed next to Katara.
Katara curled up against Aang, trying to keep warm during the cold night. She rested her head on his chest, her mind slowly catching up to what happened.
'I just had sex with Aang...wonderful, passionate sex with Aang…who use to be my best friend at one time…'
"I love you" Aang said.
"I love you too." Katara mumbled as she slowly drifted into her dreams…her memories…and her thoughts about what her baby will look like.
THE END!
P.S.- I have two other stories already posted:Save me from Me and The Second Chance at Life. So if you like my amazing writing skills (lol) you should check it out! As I said before...I think these stories will be straight out romances instead of love triangles...everyone hates the triangles if I'm too vague on it.
Another P.S.- A special thanks to coolmac1718 for putting up with my pms (sorry for the missunderstanding before). Thanks 86theTomato for sticking with this story even thought ppl thought it was Zutara. Thanks Avatar Wolf for the support when I was feeling down...I really needed that (seriously).
YAY! DONE! Review plz ppl…I know it was rushed, but I have school stuff to do srry. I might edit it if I feel particularly bad about this chapter.
Its been a good ride ppl! kind of disappointed by the confusion, but now I know...don't do confusing crap like hormonal boys...lol anyways Ill try to be better next time.
Okay...since there still is a bit of confusing left I've decided to update this chapter's author note! YAY!
Summer Sweetheart: thanks for the review. Again...I already sent you a reply, but just in case let me reiterate. Yeah I know it is not the best lemon...first time writing a fan fic after all. I see your point in OOC Katara because she always puts others first before her needs or emotions most of the time, but in times like the waterbending scroll and the runaway, she does about anything to get something she wanted. Also...she has been through a really tough time in this story...always crying, etc and because of this she probably craves attention (I know I would). Also, the fact that Katara thinks that Aang is cheating on her is breaking her heart as well as break her self-esteem (she thinks Aang doesn't want to have sex because she is ugly, doesn't love her, etc). Sex is basically her way of making sure that Aang is hers...etc and its not just sex she wants, she wants a family, to get married, etc. I know you don't really care about it, but for all of you guys who agree with Sweetheart and are pissed off about it...there you go. BTW- I can't really tell if you like it because you seen worse or if you really like the story, plot, etc.
Sorry if this isn't the reply you are looking for...I'm really tired and disoriented so if I miss took your question or if I answered it in a way that didn't make sense...pm me.
Derek and Okami: thanks for the review, glad you liked it. Uhh...I already have an idea on what to write but this time I'm going to take it slow and try and improve my writing techniques/plot, so I won't post for a while, sorry.
Stargirlrox-hearts-Avatar: Thanks for the 3 reviews! Hope you enjoyed the story! I guess you can say it can return to "normal".
Julia: I've never really thought of putting Toph into the plot...she just wasn't important to it. Sorry if I ruined the suprise but this story was getting so many bad reviews just because they thought it was totally Zutara! WHEN IT SAID KATAANG IN THE FREAKING SUMMARY!! GAH!! lol sorry...anyways thanks for the review and I hoped you liked the story.
Bookgirl239: glad you liked the story! I am writing others stories, but not one like this...love triangles leave ppl really angry. I might do one just for fun, but right now I have two stories already up and running.
AurouraandRosalieWannannabe: Sorry if I spelled you username wrong...anyways! Thanks for the review! I glad you liked the story.
Oh...and 38 reviews now! yay!
Also- For those who still are pissed off about the OOC thing...I was in a real writer's block and I basically made it off of the top of my head. I can't spend too much time on this because of school...sorry.
Anyways- keep the reviews coming!