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okay guys, its me. to anyone who is still reading this, i apologize for not updating AGAIN. I know I promise you guys again and again that I will and I never do, but I'm trying.
So, this update may seem a little weird to you, but I've decided to post a guide to the Blackthorne Boys sophomore class on here. It's basically a guide to each of their appearances, personalities, ethnicities, code names, etc. I had originally created this list before I started writing this story and I have to refer back to it ALL the time when I'm writing the chapters. I thought that maybe it might get confusing for some of you too, trying to keep up with them, so I've decided to post the list I made for your reference as well. If you're ever feeling confused about who is who, just come back to this and it should give you some answers (hopefully). If you want to know anything else about them, pm me.
Also, farther down I also included excerpts from this story and the prequel, "The Way to Blackthorne," that describe the boys' appearances and personalities.
I really hope this helps you guys like it helps me, even if you're just curious.
Bye,
-katiebear95 ;)
P.S. There's a poll on my profile about the amount of zach/cammie fluff I should put in this fic and its really important to me that my readers visit that and hopefully fill it out because I love hearing what you guys think. I mainly put it up because I had been getting some contradictory reviews as to the amount of sexy zach/cammie fluff I had been putting in, so this would also really help me writing the chapters. (hint hint, wink wink, nudge nudge, the sooner I get some info the sooner I update...)
P.P.S. And I promise, I WILL finish this story.
P.P.P.S. (this is getting unnecessarily long) please review! believe it or not, it really does help me. and I really want to know what you think of my writing; tell me what i could improve on, what I'm doing wrong or what I'm not doing enough! flame me! I want to know what you think! thanks, love you, bye. (for real this time)
Blackthorne Boys: (and appearances)
Zachary Goode (Zach) "Ghost"
Dark brown hair, emerald green eyes (clear, deep, guarded)
Tall, muscular
American
Grant Newman "Muscles"
Tan, dark golden-brown hair, brown eyes (shiny, bright)
Medium height, broad, muscular
American
Jonas Anderson "Virus"
Dark hair, dark blue eyes (clear, understanding) , fair
Medium height, scrawny
American
Nicholas (Nick) Taylor "Falcon"
Brown hair, caramel eyes (reflective, clear, open), fair
Medium height, lean, average
American
Christopher (Chris) Reynolds "Napoleon"
Dirty blonde hair, hazel eyes, (flecked, sharp, observant)
Medium height, lean, muscled
American
Mario Garza "El Toro"
Dark hair, dark eyes , tan
Short, broad, average
Hispanic
Dmitri Ivanovo "Prince"
Dark haired, purple eyes (guarded, secretive, reflective), fair
Tall (lanky), lean, muscled
Russian
Justin Phillips "Bearded Lady"
Black hair, light blue eyes (loud, open, humorous)
Medium-height, broad
American
Logan Evans "Dagger"
Pale blonde hair, white-grey eyes (sharp), fair
Medium height, lean, muscled
American
Austin Lewis "Acrobat"
Dark blonde, light green eyes (clear, observing, dangerous), tan
Tall, lean, muscled
American
Tyler Hill "Cadet"
Brown hair, brown eyes (clear, simple), fair, average looking
Medium height, lean, average
American
Michael Church "Angel"
Strawberry blonde hair, blue eyes (clear, accepting, protecting), fair
Tall, lean, average
American
Daniel Lee "Fugitive"
Black hair, dark blue eyes (quiet, self-assured)
Tall, lean, average
Asian
Matthew (Matt)Moore "Bull Dog"
Blonde, moss green eyes (observant, shy)
Medium height, lean, muscled
American
NAMES (other possible boys)
Declan
Elliot
Eli
Liam
Jack
Adrian
Damian
EXCERPTS
On the walk from Blackthorne Cammie had gotten to know the boys a little better. Chris was sort of like Zach's second in command. Then there was Justin, the clown; Nick, the fast one; Dmitri, the bad boy; Mario, the short smart-ass. Logan was the scary one; Austin had the temper and Michael was the angel boy. Tyler was the pavement artist; Daniel the quiet, self-assured one; and Matt the observant one. And then there was Grant, the strong one; Jonas the computer geek; and Zach the self-appointed leader.
— Chapter I, 'Back to Gallagher'
When Cammie looked up she met the stares of all the boys curiously, her gaze flickering from boy to boy. From Justin's ice blue eyes to Mario's dark eyes; from Nick's caramel ones to Dmitri's strange violet ones; from Chris' hazel gaze to Logan's white-grey stare; from Austin's clear olive-colored eyes to Tyler's clouded brown eyes; from Michaels angelic blue to Daniel's sapphire blue to Matt's moss green eyes; from Grant's twinkling chocolate brown eyes to Jonas' bottomless blue eyes; and finally to Zach's sparkling emerald eyes.
—Chapter III, 'Back to Gallagher'
Michael came to our defense. "I'm sure whatever it is they have a good reason for hiding it." Good ol' Michael, always protecting the underdogs.
—Chapter VII, 'The Way to Blackthorne'
"All right, all right already," Grant interrupted. "Let's get a move on! I'm starving over here," he whined.
Cammie let out a gasp, trying to catch her breath. Bless that boy and the bottomless pit he calls a stomach.
—Chapter II, 'Back to Gallagher'
"Gallagher Girl, tell me what happened. Please."
Cammie looked up, surprised. Zach Goode just said please— Zach Goode, who never begged for anything, ever.
—Chapter III, 'Back to Gallagher'
Zach's eyes lifted to the other boys. Half of them looked like they wanted to help and the other half looked like they wanted to throw their hands up and run. Most of them had never seen a girl cry before, at least not a girl they knew, and this was making a lasting impression.
—Chapter III, 'Back to Gallagher'
Now they stood crammed together, closing in on Cammie, but not in a threatening way. They took on more of a protective stance. They could see that Zach was clearly in love with the girl, and Zach was their brother. That made Cammie as close as a sister to them, and no matter how many jokes or jibes they threw her way, no matter how much they disliked her personally, they would protect and care for her in ways they had never done for anyone outside their brotherhood before.
—Chapter III, 'Back to Gallagher'
"Dude, it isn't like we want to leave—" Zach cut Chris off midsentence.
"No! You sure as fucking hell shouldn't want to fucking leave!" Zach screamed furiously. "There is something seriously wrong here! Bex and Liz and Macey— they fucking disappeared! This isn't some Cove. Ops test where everything is going to be okay! This is the real thing! The thing we've been training for our whole lives! People could die if we don't so something! And you want to fucking leave?" Zach's enraged words turn from a scream of hate to a deadly hiss, seeping into every corner of the room. "The day hell freezes over is the day I thought I would see you all runaway!"
—Chapter IV, 'Back to Gallagher'