A/N: Hey guys! i have see a lot of review say the grammar was bad and th story was a bit well off... i looked back and though what i fudging idiot i am! also wanted to ask:

do i just make a better more ordered version of the story or keep going with this one? can you guys tell me what you think and i'll just do what the majority says

sorry if the story was off for you please tell me what you think!

*CHOW*