Hellllooooooo! Thank you for all of the reviews you posted, please keep it up as they are very encouraging and helpful. In answer to some of your questions about Flo's dad, he will come into the story as soon as the gang get back home off their holiday which will be in a couple of chapters depending on how I feel. If you have any more suggestions or questions please pm me and don't forget to review! Ok so chapter 10…

Disclaimer: (Same as always)

Previously…

I scream as the world blurs in front of my eyes and I collapse on to the floor. The last thing I see is Four turn to look at me, before my head hits the ground and everything goes black…

Four

I see Tris fall to the ground in pain. My heart rate picks up. Oh no, I think. I sprint back towards her unconscious body and lean down over her.

"Tris! Tris can you hear me? Please stay with me" I speak urgently to her, holding her face in my hands. I look around and realise that the house is still a way off but I have to reach it. You can do it for Tris. You must do it for Tris. You will do it for Tris! I say in my head. I grab my phone out of my pocket and hit the speed dial; Zeke's number comes up and I hold it to my ear. He picks up after about the 4th ring.

"Hey man, where are you? Did you leave the house 'coz I can't see you anywhere?" He says sleepily, yawning near the end of his sentence.

"Zeke. Listen, Tris has passed out when we were running through the vineyard back to the house. I will carry her back but I am gonna need help, ok? Make your way down the garden and through the gate at the back, then continue down through the vineyard, about half way. You will see us." I shout down the phone with a pleading tone. I never plead and Zeke must have known this because his voice suddenly turns serious.

"Ok dude. Bring her as far as you can and I will take her from you. I will be there soon just hang on." He says quickly and there are the sounds of squeaks on the marble floor of the holiday home which means that he is already making his way to us. I sigh internally in relief but know that Tris still isn't out of danger.

"Hurry man!" I hang up and scoop Tris up into my arms gently and begin running towards the house, the intense heat burning my head and shoulders. I'm not aware of how far I have gone until I feel Zeke take Tris from me and continue back to the house with me in tow. He places her down on one of the sofa's in the lounge and calls for everyone to get down here, before grabbing 3 waters from the fridge and handing one to me.

Christina is the first one down the stairs and when she sees Tris her mouth falls open and she gasps. Everyone is right behind her and they just stop, watching as Zeke tilts Tris' head up so he can pour water down her throat.

"Oh my word! What the heck happened?!" Shauna shouts as she rushes over to grab a cold towel and puts it on Tris' head. She is first aid qualified so I trust her to help Tris. I would too, if I wasn't almost passing out myself.

"Four, what happened to my sister?!" Caleb screams at me, getting in my face.

"Look, all I know is that we were running back to the house from the stables and she collapsed. I have no idea why!" I shout back at him.

"Guys! Will you calm down please! She probably has heat stroke and is dehydrated. Just sort this out later, ok?" Shauna screams at us

We all sit quietly after that and just watch as she sees to Tris. All through this, I can't stop wondering how I let this happen, even though I didn't do anything to contribute to it. After about 20 minutes Tris starts to toss and cough whilst holding her head. I get up and offer here another bottle of water and hold her hand. Caleb comes over too, squats down beside her and holds her other hand.

"Tris, you passed out when we were running back from the stables. You were out for about 30 minutes and you were dehydrated. Zeke and I carried you back here and Shauna took care of you. I'm so sorry I didn't mean for any of this to-"She holds up her hand to cut me off. I suddenly start to feel scared that she is angry at me but relief floods through me when she hugs me tightly to her and smiles.

"Tris, you probably shouldn't talk for a while because you are still dehydrated and it will hurt. Just make sure to drink lots of water through-out the day though, ok?" Shauna says in a caring but firm way. Tris just nods and sits up with the help of Caleb and I. "I'm gonna take you upstairs so you can rest now" I speak soothingly and slide her into my arms with Caleb by my side. I open her bedroom door and place her gently on the bed, making sure she is comfortable. Caleb assures everything is ok and then leaves her to get some rest, all the while I stand there watching over her.

"Four" I hear her croak as I am about to leave. I turn back to her and she pats the space on the bed next to her. I willingly lie down next to her and she places her head on my chest. I end up drifting off to her even breathing in time with mine.

Next chapter will be posted by the weekend so please r&r! Thank you for reading, if you have any questions you would like answering, please let me know. Btw sorry this chapter is a bit boring; the next one will have a party in it… xxxx