Before I begin, I just want to say, thank you, for the supportiveness, the feedbacks, and the likes and favourites, that you guys had sent my way. Like seriously, I'd crack a grin everytime I see a new review, favourite or follow, it makes my day seeing something like that.
Like before I did this, I thought of it as one of those stories that wouldn't make the spotlight, but now after a few chapter updates, the amount of reviews, favourites and follows skyrocketed and I was like "Goddamn, I really did it". I was amazed and thrilled of how popular this story became, and the most popular amongst my other works.
Now without further ado, let us begin!
METALHELLSPWN: Okay are there any more warhammer references in this cause if so I would like to recommend any of the legendary Greenskin warbosses Azhag, Grimgore, Skarsnik, or Wurrzagg if not enemies then allies of such as a WAAAAAAAAGH! Showing up and fighting one of Hero's enemies while his forces are also fighting as well.
Answer: Well there are pretty much plenty of warhammer references, and you will see that a lot in this fanfic (As I am a Warhammer fan myself). Example, the Moroi and Strigoi states are inspired by the vampires and ghouls from warhammer fantasy, beastmen tribes from warhammer fantasy too and now Mount Angkor inspired by Mount Gunbad, except with a lovely and sexy twist inside ;). Although, there is one main reference, from old warhammer lore itself, that are on their way from the horizon.
Stratos263: Good luck Nero. So putting in fairy tail elements in this. I like it.
Answer: Thanks for the compliment! And yeah, I am putting some Fairy Tail elements (Erza and Knightwalker as of right now)
Ben56 - I haven't yet finished reading the last chapter, but so far i like your story, so i will be waiting the next chapter. About other hentai animes you can use: Kyonyuu Fantasy (they have already tell you of course), Ikusa Otome Valkyrie (this was the first and the worst hentai ending i have see, it deserves something better), Monster Musume (you can use the female centaurs, minotaurs, ogres and monoeye), Monster Enciclopedia to, and Elf Hime Lilian. I don't remember more. Thanks for the story.
Answer - You're welcome! And Thanks for the suggestions and feedback!
Chapter 10 - Noticed
Time Skip, a few days later
"Shields up!" Nero commanded the warrior hoplites, as they quickly formed a defensive dome around him with their shields just in time to block incoming arrow fire from the goblin archers.
Many of the Twilight elven archers and shadow archers managed to duck into other shield domes created by other groups of warriors and Alshari swordsmen to avoid the hail of arrows, but an unfortunate few warriors and swordsmen were taken out by the volley of crude goblin arrows.
"Loose!" Vera commanded the archers, pointing her sword at the goblins. The moment the arrows stopped coming in, the quickly shields opened up, allowing for the archers to step out and fire back at the goblins, hiding in the forest with their own volley of arrows. Some of the goblins scattered and ran while others died in the face of the volley of arrows, with a large majority standing their ground, much to the surprise of Vera; who expected goblins to route at such superior arrow fire. When the arrows finally stopped firing, the goblins quickly reformed their lines and fired back, forcing the archers to take shelter once more behind their shield dome. The goblins would have fired off even more arrows, if not for the sound of horns, as Alshari Cataphracts, who had finally finished their battle against a combination of Squig Goblin riders and Orc boar boyz, charged down; their laces pointed towards the goblins who attempted to flee from the sight of the horses.
"Status report" Nero asked Vera, who glanced around, counting the losses, which took a while, leaving Nero with time to order Jacob to start collecting the armor and weapons of the dead, so that the mages could teleport them back to Lithathrad for processing.
"15 dead on the first volley, 10 on the second one, and 20 by those flying goblins, I can say that the goblins got us good" Vera reported
"And not just the Infantry that got good" it was Cassander who said this, as he rode up beside Nero, instantly getting off of his Warg mount; which now has armor plating protecting its body "Cavalry too, 50 dead, mostly the warrior riders, but we lost some good alshari riders"
"This ambushed was planned well, but not well enough" Vera spoke "Like why would you send such a small force to stop us, unless-"
"It's to slow us down" Nero finished
"Or even test our strengths" Cassander suggested "Besides, we are facing against a goblin warlord"
"Yeah" Vera sighed "A very smart one at that, like why can't they just all be dumb or something, like the rest of the other orc and goblin bosses that we've killed"
They had fought against many orc and goblin tribes now, and every single orc or goblin boss that they fought against were nothing but lusty beasts, that would kill anything just to get to their price, which is always a female's hole for them to stick their disgusting dicks into. Those are the kind of orcs and goblins that they have dealt with in their ambush just now, however these goblins and orcs, are different. They are more organized, than their counterparts, more fierce and capable fighters than the lusty orcs and goblins that she knew for her entire life, and this orc and goblin tribe prove to be such that they would go as far as testing their strength with a small force.
"It seems that this tribe's warboss is a smart one, as for the goblins that follow him" Nero deduced, after careful thought "it would make sense, considering the 'flying goblins' a few minutes ago"
Cassander nodded in agreement "It would make a lot of sense though, as they wouldn't just charge in squig hoppers that recklessly, unless they were supported, and supported they were, in the form of a flanking manoeuvre by boar boyz, and speaking of the boar boyz, they seem rather different than the orcs here"
"How different?" Nero asked him
"They were greener than usual. Don't know why, but it screams trouble"
"We'll need to deal with this orc or goblin warboss, before he would grow powerful" Nero said "but even though, we just might be a little too late for that, who knows how long this warboss was working on expanding his horde"
"Waaagh" Cassander corrected his leader "Orcs and goblins call it a waaagh, and it is rare to see waaagh's formed in the first place, since orcs and goblins are rather to be hired as mercenaries to other known powers due to the reward of pleasure"
"Well that's what drives them, question is what makes these orcs and goblins different from the rest?" Vera raised an eyebrow whilst asking this question
"Maybe they are from the north" everyone turned to see it was Aiko that said this. She was carrying a slingbag that contained valuable herbal and medicines inside the bag.
"Aiko" Nero said surprised "I thought you were busy with the wounded?"
"Casey's dealing with the wounded right now" Aiko told him "and as for what I said, I believe these orcs are from the north, same as the recent beastmen tribes that we have heard from scouts on our northern border. As you would know there are different orc and goblin breeds, but to what really differentiates them is location; Southern Orcs, are like Cassander said, are horny sons of bitches that we all hate and scorn" Aiko explained to them "they care about mouths and pussy instead of actual fighting, hence why they are fat, whilst as northern orcs are more warlike and fierce than their southern counterparts, and if you're wondering how I know, I am a traveler remember, I travel" She reminded them
"Well this is troublesome indeed" Vera sighed "We are use to simpleton orcs and goblins around here, not barbaric, war-born orcs from the north"
"True" Nero nodded "I don't think we are even prepared for something like this"
"Guess we'll need to fall back and rethink of our approach" Vera concluded, sheathing her sword back into its scabbard
"Have everyone fall back, until we figure out our next move against these northern orcs and goblins then there is nothing we can do, besides we don't even know their complete numbers and their capabilities" Nero ordered
"Yes my lord" Cassander nodded, as he went off and do just that, with his Warg ride following behind.
"Oh!" Aiko suddenly remembered something that she was mean to say to Nero as well "I just remembered! The two succubus that you sent to the Black Citadel came back!"
"Really?" Nero asked "Where?"
"They're currently resting in one of the wagons, and let's say that they didn't came back empty handed" Aiko added, making Nero raise an eyebrow in curiosity
"What do you mean?"
Henrietta groaned softly as she slowly opened her eyes. She had to close them a couple of times as the sunlight, coming from the opening of the wagon. After a few attempts of opening her eyes, her eyes quickly got adjusted to the sunlight and looked around to find herself in a wagon. She looked to her right and next to her, tending to her still unconscious friend, Dani, was a female Twilight Elf. Without saying a word, Henrietta slowly got up, only to groan in pain, as a hand reached up to where the pain was coming from; which was in fact the side of her stomach. Her groan alerted the twilight elf as she turned away from Dani to look at Henrietta now.
"You should be resting, not moving around too much" The elven nurse sternly told the succubus, forcing her to lay back down on her bed once more.
"Mou, let me up" Henrietta complained, attempting to move away from the elven nurse, only to feel the pain in her abdomen once more
"You had an arrowhead lodged into your abdomen and you're telling me that you want to go?" The nurse raised a valid point, making Henrietta groan
"But it's important that I tell him what happened!" Henrietta argued back, still struggling against the nurse's grip, as she tried to put her back down on her bed.
"And what is so important that you would like to tell me, Succubus?"
Both females turned to the entrance of the wagon, to see that Nero had entered the wagon. Both woman got out from each other's grips and quickly bowed in front of him
"Overlord!/Master!" Both females addressed the Seventh Overlord
"Cathy" Nero addressed the elven nurse "Let her go for a while, I need to talk with her anyways, and I know that the injured comes first, but this is an important matter that needs to be discussed urgently"
"O-of course my lord" Cathy, bowed "I will leave her to you then"
"Come on" Nero motioned for Henrietta to follow him outside "We might as well get this over with so that you can go back resting your wounds"
"I see" Nero sighed, pinching his forehead at the pending headache that is in his head right now.
Henrietta, as he had learnt, immediately debriefed him of their job at the Black Citadel; which was to retrieve the Tower Heart from a hidden room in the castle; it's location specifically pointed out by the Fourth Overlord. They were successful at retrieving the heart, but as well as that, they also managed to locate the two dark elf females, who were kept imprisoned in the dungeons; with one of them thrusting in and out of the other one with a strap-on. They managed to grab the one that was thrusting, but before they could grab the other, they were quickly found out by the Kuroinu guards, who sounded the alarm, and alerted the ongoing orgy upstairs to their presence. The two Succubus barely escaped with their lives.
"Forgive me milord" Henrietta apologized. A sultry smile appeared on her face "I'm sure that I can deeply show you how sorry I am-"
"If you haven't dilly dallied in the citadel than you wouldn't have been caught by the Kuroinu" Nero sharply said to Henrietta, who flinched at the usage of a stern tone on her
"I-i'm sorry my lord" Henrietta bowed "It won't happen again". Nero sighed, scratching the back of his neck "Well at least you weren't caught or anything"
"Yes, we were lucky" Henrietta agreed, nodding
"Where's the elven girl that you brought along with you?" Nero asked the succubus
"We dropped her off with Balthazar, who immediately took her back to the cave to heal"
Henrietta told the overlord, who nodded
"Thank you, Henrietta" Nero smiled. To Henrietta's shock, as soon as those words left his mouth, Nero pressed his lips against hers, surprising her, but no doubt savoured it as she returned the kiss, only with more ferocity, something that Nero found enjoyable as he kissed back aggressively as well. They both remained like that for a minute before they had to separate for air
"I'd be more than happy too to accept your apology" Nero told her with a smile "After you heal of course"
"Yes sir~!" Henrietta chirped happily, saluting. Yes! She is definitely gonna get wrecked by her master!
*Ow!*
She gripped the side of her abdomen in pain
Well she will be, after a short resting period of course
Omake - Summoning gone Wrong (It's my first time doing an Omake, hope you enjoy it)
"Is it ready yet?" Nero asked Balthazar, who was currently on his knees on the wooden floor of one of the elven houses. Balthazar was currently drawing something on the floor with some blood; that he acquired from some chickens, while Nero was simply chilling nearby on an oak chair.
"There all done" Balthazar nodded, satisfied at his now completed work "With this, we can now transport objects and minions from one location to another. Now as we speak, Cassander is currently setting the other circle back home, so if this works whatever he placed on the other circle would teleport here"
"Don't we have a specific spell for that kind of thing?" Marty raised an eyebrow.
"Yes, but this way is much quicker" Balthazar explained
"How do we know that it's not just going to summon some genderbent king, or a blondie with terrible puns instead?" Khairn raised a valid point
"Relax, Khairn" Balthazar assured him "It's not like it's gonna do just that"
*Insert spongebob voice* A few minutes later…
"COME ON!" Balthazar screamed irritatedly at the magic circle in front of him, childishly pummeling the ground in front of him with his bare fists
"Calm down man" Marty said "Maybe you should give it a minute?" He suggested, but this only seem to tick Balthazar off even more
"I DID AND IT WON'T FUCKING WORK! FUCKIN WORK YOU PIECE OF SHIT! WORK!" Balthazar raged. Nero, Marty and Khairn all sweatdropped at the site of their most powerful minion caster having a tantrum; akin to a child's tantrum
"Maybe you need something? Like a Catalyst?" Nero suggested
"And how do you know that it needs something like that!?" Balthazar asked the Seventh Overlord
"I'm just saying Balthazar" Nero sighed "The circle might need a Catalyst as like, fuel for it to work?"
"Oh yeah, fuel" Balthazar sarcastically responded "Yeah, like I just toss this golden crown here" Balthazar picked up a golden crown, which surprised all three people, as they wondered where did balthazar got that crown. "And just toss it in here" He then threw the crown onto the magic circle "And there we go! IT FUCKIN DOES NOT WORK, LIKE I TOLD YOU!"
"Balthazar chill man, that's our lord we're talking here" Khairn tried to calm the enraged Caster. But only ended up enraging him more
"Lord me arse! I care about my circle not working than that!" Balthazar screamed.
"Ummm, Balthazar?"
"WHAT!?" Demanded Balthazar screamed at Marty, who flinched "What could possibly be so important, that you get my attention as of right now!?"
"Your circle's glowing"
"Yeah, no shit sher-wha?" Balthazar stopped mid-sentence at Marty's response, turning around to look at the circle that is now glowing
"Told you that it needs something for the fuel" Nero smirked
"While you may be right my lord, but shouldn't magic circles not glow this much?" Marty raised a point, pointing at the circle in front of him. Before Balthazar could say what he wanted to say, the circle exploded. Everyone coughed, as they waved the smoke and dust away from their respiratory cavities. When the dust settled down however, they were greeted with the sight of a young woman in a fancy red dress-
"Oh god I can see her panties!" Nero screamed mentally. He can literally see her panties for fuck sake!
"Greetings! Praetor! I am your humble servant, Saber!" The girl introduced herself.
Somewhere deep down, Nero knew, that they made a mistake, and possibly had fucked up whoever needed this woman anyways.
1) You all got clues about the next opponent of Nero. Warhammer fans would know this better than anyone. Smart. Goblin. Squig. ;)
The poll has ended, and looking at the results, you dirty perverts couldn't resist an Overlord x MGE x Violated Hero Fanfic, and a few days later after, I had published the first chapter of the story. It's available right now for you to read. Anyways, I just want to make an announcement here as well.
Fate/The Unsung, a Fate/Stay Night story that I had been doing for a while, will be placed on Hiatus, as it is currently being rewritten for better quality and stuff. I thought about giving up on that story at first, as I was getting no reviews or any form of likes or stuff, but I refuse! Not after coming up with a good story idea like Fate/The Unsung only to throw it away in the end! I will not abandon that story and idea that I thought up, and will make sure to make it better. Also I am looking for a beta-reader for that story. I attempted to message a few for their help but so far they are unresponsive to my messages, so If anyone wants to help beta-read my Fate story, please let me know and I'll be happy to send you the documents for you to look at. A forum was also opened for this story and is available if you want to learn more about it, although it is still missing a few stuf here and there (A Guide to Fate/The Unsung)
Plot: 5 years have passed since the last 5th Holy Grail War, and a new one is about to start. The Cornelii; a dying Clan, have created their own holy grail and are attempting to fulfill their own ambitions. The Association responded with a force of Magus to apprehend them, but failed. But their failure to apprehend them, has not only sparked the start of a Fake Holy Grail War, but the summoning of new servants; all unknown to the masters and to the world at large, as the grail was damaged during the fighting. 8 servants, each having their own story to tell, each possessing abilities and skills unlike any other, and 8 masters; old and new, stepping forward to fight in this war.