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missi malfoy: You're awesome because you take the time to beta(?) my horrible grammer mistake story, so thanks, and you're way to patient with me. Also, I like your youtube video! Thanks to you I ( I can't believe I'm saying this) like Slytherin... crazy, I must be high on Mountain Dew or something... also, did you have to go to school all year round? I start school in two weeks, I'm scared to death... new school, new people, and I'M A FRESHMAN.. A.K.A FRESH MEAT!! so yeah... lucky you.. anywho, words can't describe the happiness that your my beta!
Tizzle: Once I read LOTR, I will tell you all about how awesome it is... but here's the bad news... the chick who checked them out lost thet first one!! AHHH! So yeah, I might try to watch the movies til the library gets a replacement( or when the chick finds the book!) I have blond hair. I imagine you have blue eyes... or GREEN.. hm.. you seem like the person who like "Paper Planes" by MIA...hmm...anywho I LOVE Avril Lavigne too! Also, I'm afraid to say that I'm that lousy of a person and I don't want to help you get over the addiction..lol.. sorry... TIZZLE FRIZZLE!!..sorry, can't help it! Thanks for the review, also, dang girl you review fast!
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Alice4Ever: I want to Lily and James to get together soon also! Seriously, the writer of this story is stupid( thats me) for not putting them together. The thing though is.. would you people still read my story after I put them together? I'll say.. probably 3 more chapter of this.. then I'll probably confess their love to eachother.. or maybe 30 more chapter of this.. haha!! Sorry, I know I'm being mean.. ( tear) why did Breaking Dawn have to be like that?! Hopefully, I'll like Midnight Sun, (Edward's P.O.V of Twilight) and the MOVIE!! AHH!! I can't wait! Have you seen the previews for it? ( dies) I love it..
RachelElizabeth: Seriously do you come from a different planet? First the smiley face, now fantabulous! ? Lol, I'll use it in my next chapter just because I think fantabulous is such a fanfabulous word!.. Ok, that was a little corny.. oh well.. hey is you name actually Rachael Elizabeth? That's kewl!
Holy Cross Baby: MissiMalfoy (my beta) recommended that I add James playing Quidditch.. I thought what the heck, I'm writing a story about witches and wizards which is already a little farfetched, why not go a little more?lol.. thanks fo reviewing my story! It makes me happy!.. :)... see I'm happy!
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...OO.. HE ASKED YOU OUT!! AHHH!! OHMYGOSHOHMYGOSHOHMYGOSH!! Where'd you go to? Did he call you and ask you out? Or were you hanging out and he asked you? Did your mom go crazy?! AHH!! I'M SO HAPPY!!.. sorry I have no life... so are you nervous about going out with him? AHH.. details woman..DETAILS!! also, that would make an interesting 1-shot..hmm.. I'll think about that...
WerewolfWitch: That's ok, I forget to review to.. say hi to your adorable 8-year-old cousing for me- k?lol, thanks for saying that to my beta, no on else told her thanks! It means a lot to me that you did that!Est-ce que vous vivez en France? That's cool, wow .. .. Je n'ai pas de vie, je parle en français pour la bonté souci ..
heartsnpokidots: My favorite flavor of kool-aid is black cherry, but I LOVE all the flavors though,lol..I'm glad you like the chapter, thanks for the review! 3
LiliaGryffindor'sHeir376: I'm trying to make it less choppy, lol, I'm horrible when it comes to sentence fluency! Anywho, how do you think I can improve on it? You seem like your a grammer girl, so thanks for helping me in ways I can improve! :).. Don't you wish there were more James(es) (?) out there? I agree GO JAMES!! I can't believe some people think that she should have gone with Snape.. I'm thinking about bringing Snape in the story soon, what do you think about that, make it more spicy..lol.. anywho thanks for the review!
flowerypetal: I'm one of those girls that LOVE Edward/ Bella fluff,I thought BD was lacking in it, I thought the whole book centered around the baby, huh, so yeah, some of my friends LOVED the book while other didn't even finish reading it because they hated it so much..lol.. also, I didn't like that Jacob imprinted on the baby, I was hoping for Jacob/Leah, I don't know, hopefully I like Midnight Sun better. and the movie.. AHHH!! I CAN"T WAIT!! Anywho, YEAH!! SOMEONE FINALLY CAUGHT ON TO THE PHONES!! I thought no one would catch the thing that everytime they almost kissed the phone went off..GO YOU!!lol, I'm glad you find my story amuzing!
I hate this chapter... it's short and stupid
" What do you want to do?" Lily asked. James, Siruis, and her were sitting in a circle on the floor. They were all fanning themselves with paper fans they made. It was hot outside, every fan was going on in the house. Lily was wearing jean shorts along with a black tank top, with her hair in a ponytail. Siruis and James both took off their shirts, and they were both wearing black shorts. It was scorching outside.
"I don't know" Siruis replied.
"Um... we could go to the park?" James suggested.
"To hot" They both replied back.
"How about the library?" Lily asked.Then she remebered who she was talking to and threw that idea out the window.
"How about-?
"NO!" LIly and James both shouted at Siruis. The places he liked to go were he liked to go were either perverted, dangerous, or both.
"I was going to suggest going to the beach!" Sirus snapped back.
James and Lily looked at eachother, Siruis actually had a good idea for once...wow...
"Okay!" they both replied hopping up from the ground, but they went to fast and bonked heads...ow...
"Are you okay Lily?" James said graabing her by the arm.
"OW!...I'm fine, just a little bonk on the head, that's all"
" Okay, you guys go get ready I'll leave a note for Mrs.P telling her where we're going" Siruis replied.
"Wait!"Lily called
"What?'" both of the boys asked
"Why don't we invite Remus,Peter, Mary, and Alice to come along?"
"Awesome!" Siruis shouted.
"Um.. I guess.." Jame wouldn't tell anyone this but he was looking forward to just speanding time with Lily. This Summer he spent a lot of time with Siruis, (who wouldn't spend a lot of time with their best friends if they lived with them?) and Lily spent a LOT of time with Remus, a LOT(really only about five hours this Summer, but to James ,he thought it was everyday).
"Come on man! Think, Girls...swimsuits... food... PERFECT COMBINATION!!"
James laughed, "I guess I'll call everyone..."
"Thanks James, I have to do my hair and stuff" Siruis called as he ran upstairs.
"Yeah, thanks James, I'll go make some lunch, so we don't have to buy the expensive food they sell there" Lily said with a smile going to the kitchen.
"Well here goes calling" James said as he dailed Alice's number...
"Hello?"
"Um.. hey.. is Alice there?"
"This is she"
"Uh.. hey this is James-"
"OH MY GOSH!! THE JAMES IS CALLING MY HOUSE!! AHHH!! OHMYGOSHOHMYGOSHOHMYGOSH!!I CAN'T BELIEVE IT!! AHH! OF COURSE I'LL GO OUT WITH YOU!! AHH!! I KNEW YOU LIKED ME I COULD TELL IT IN YOUR EYES THE MOMENT WE MET!!"
James made a horrified face.. alice and him... shudder..
"Actually I was calling to invite you to the beach with-
"AHHH!!" ALice interuppted again, "THAT SO ROMANTIC FOR A FIRST DATE! I REALLY THOUGHT YOU HAD A THING FOR LILY, BUT I GUESS YOU WERE JUST TRYING TO GET MY ATTENTION THROUGH HER!!I CAN TOTALLY TELL THAT SHE HAS A THING FOR REMUS, AND HE LIKES HER TO.. MAYBE WE CAN LIKE DOUBLE DATE!I CAN'T BELIEVE THIS IS HAPPENING! I MEAN-"
This time James interuputed " NO! WITH LILY, SIRUIS, REMUS, PETER, AND MARY! GET IT OUT OF YOUR SICK MIND THAT I LIKE YOU! I'VE LIKED LILY SINCE THE MOMENT I LAID EYES OM HER NOT YOU! I'VE TRIED TO GET HER ATTENTION, BUT YOU MAKE THAT VERY DIFFICULT, WHEN YOU WON'T EVEN LET ME TALK TO HER!"
James had no clue why he yelled at her, I mean she was a nice girl. Deep down though James knew what made him mad... Remus and Lily, everyone thought they were perfect for eachother. James knew he should bow down gracefully, but he couldn't. Yet he told, that he liked Lily to Alice... A.K.A Gossip Girl, everyone at Hogwarts would know about his crush by tonight, great..
"oh.." Alice whispered
"Oh Alice, I'n so sorry! I didn't mean to yell at you."
"It's fine, really I should know better than to have a crush on the most gorgoues and popular guy in the school.."
"I'm sorry"
"It's okay, I'll get over it"
"Well, do you still want to go to the beach?"
"HECK YEAH!!" Alice's spirts piped up, "I can see the most gorgeous guy without a shirt on, I wouldn't miss it for th eworld!"
James laughed, "Okay well got to go"
"Oh yeah, Bye!"
"Bye" with that James hung up the phone.
James decided that he would also invite Frank, he was just going through a break-up with Macy. He thought those two would get along perfectly, like macaroni with cheese, or Kool with Aid. Without the other half, it just wasn't the same. He'll have to ask Lily if she would think ALice and Frank would be a great pair, if she had time after talking with Remus, the genuis, the mastermind, the guy who had Lily's heart.. hmm...
Lily was changing when she remembered about Alice, today was her birthday James said he was probaly going to call her first so she decided to pick up the phone and to wish her Happy Birthday, surely James wouldn't mind if she interuppted in the conversation.
She picked up the phone she had in her room and put it to her ear,
"THAT SO ROMANTIC FOR A FIRST DATE! I REALLY THOUGHT YOU HAD A THING FOR LILY, BUT I GUESS YOU WERE JUST TRYING TO GET MY ATTENTION THROUGH HER!!I CAN TOTALLY TELL THAT SHE HAS A THING FOR REMUS, AND HE LIKES HER TO.. MAYBE WE CAN LIKE DOUBLE DATE!I CAN'T BELIEVE THIS IS HAPPENING! I MEAN-"
That all Lily had to hear. She out the phone down, James liked Alice. I eman that would make since they both like Quidditch, they both liked to draw attention to themsleves, and the both like Transfiguration. Lily could see how they liked eachother.
Lily, then felt something cool against her cheeck.. tears. Who was she kidding? Lily heart was ripping in two, She thought maybe he like her, biy was she wrong. He was just using her to get to Alice! How could she think that possible he might like her? She even gave him her locket that she cared so much about!
She stomped downstairs to see James sitting there calling someone,
" I think that she really liked me so I thought if you go to the beach today, it would get her mind off of me"
Frank said something.
"Okay, I'll talk to you later, bye" James hung up the phone.
How dare he! Lily thought. How dare he try to hook me up with FRANK!! Lily always thought Frank and ALice would go good together, NOT Lily and him.. Yuck!
"HOW DARE YOU!" LIly screamed.
"What?" James asked.
"Did you ever consider my feelings? hmm... maybe I didn't think that way. I'm going to tell you the truth, okay? Eveything you guys talked about, ever think of taking in my oponion James? Hm?! Guess what I've got news for you, my feeling for you are the exact OPPOSITE of what you think of me."
James was astounded, Lily didn't like him. She liked Remus... James felt as if the world was crashing down on him.
"I'm not afraid to admit it" Lily added looking up at him.
"Lily don't make this any harder... "James whispered.
"HEY GUYS ARE YOU READY!!" Siruis said hopping down the stairs. What a sight he saw... tears were running down Lily face and James looked like he was five and his goldfish had just died.
"What happened down here?"
THey both ignored him and went on..
"SO you hear dthe whole conversation?"
"I heard enough to know what your feelings are dealing with me!"
"Lily, I'm sorry"
"Save it" Lily said as she clomped up to her room to get ready for the beach. James went and sat and the couch and put a pillow to his face so no one would see the tears rolling down his eyes.
"Do you want me ot finish callign people?" Siruis asked him.
James nodded his head.
Today was going to be H-E double hockey sticks.
" What do you want to do?" Lily asked. James, Sirius, and her were sitting in a circle on the floor. They were all fanning themselves with paper fans they made. It was hot outside, every fan was going on in the house. Lily was wearing jean shorts along with a black tank top, with her hair in a ponytail. Sirius and James both took off their shirts, and they were both wearing black shorts. It was scorching outside.
"I don't know" Sirius replied.
"Um... we could go to the park?" James suggested.
"To hot" They both replied back.
"How about the library?" Lily asked. Then she remembered whom she was talking to and threw that idea out the window.
"How about-?
"NO!" Lily and James both shouted at Sirius. The places he liked to go were he liked to go were either perverted, dangerous, or both.
"I was going to suggest going to the beach!" Sirius snapped back.
James and Lily looked at each other, Sirius actually had a good idea for once...wow...
"Okay!" they both replied hopping up from the ground, but they went to fast and bonked heads...ow...
"Are you okay Lily?" James said grabbing her by the arm.
"OW!...I'm fine, just a little bonk on the head, that's all"
" Okay, you guys go get ready I'll leave a note for Mrs.P telling her where we're going" Sirius replied.
"Wait!" Lily called
"What?'" both of the boys asked
"Why don't we invite Remus,Peter, Mary, and Alice to come along?"
"Awesome!" Sirius shouted.
"Um.. I guess.." James wouldn't tell anyone this but he was looking forward to just spending time with Lily. This summer he spent a lot of time with Sirius, (who wouldn't spend a lot of time with their best friends if they lived with them?) and Lily spent a LOT of time with Remus, a LOT(really only about five hours this Summer, but to James ,he thought it was everyday).
"Come on man! Think, Girls...swimsuits... food... PERFECT COMBINATION!!"
James laughed, "I guess I'll call everyone..."
"Thanks James, I have to do my hair and stuff" Sirius called as he ran upstairs.
"Yeah, thanks James, I'll go make some lunch, so we don't have to buy the expensive food they sell there" Lily said with a smile going to the kitchen.
"Well here goes calling" James said as he dialled Alice's number...
"Hello?"
"Um.. hey.. is Alice there?"
"This is she"
"Uh.. hey this is James-"
"OH MY GOSH!! THE JAMES IS CALLING MY HOUSE!! AHHH!! OHMYGOSHOHMYGOSHOHMYGOSH!!I CAN'T BELIEVE IT!! AHH! OF COURSE I'LL GO OUT WITH YOU!! AHH!! I KNEW YOU LIKED ME I COULD TELL IT IN YOUR EYES THE MOMENT WE MET!!"
James made a horrified face.. Alice and him... shudder..
"Actually I was calling to invite you to the beach with-
"AHHH!!" Alice interrupted again, "THAT SO ROMANTIC FOR A FIRST DATE! I REALLY THOUGHT YOU HAD A THING FOR LILY, BUT I GUESS YOU WERE JUST TRYING TO GET MY ATTENTION THROUGH HER!!I CAN TOTALLY TELL THAT SHE HAS A THING FOR REMUS, AND HE LIKES HER TO.. MAYBE WE CAN LIKE DOUBLE DATE!I CAN'T BELIEVE THIS IS HAPPENING! I MEAN-"
This time James interrupted " NO! WITH LILY, SIRIUS, REMUS, PETER, AND MARY! GET IT OUT OF YOUR SICK MIND THAT I LIKE YOU! I'VE LIKED LILY SINCE THE MOMENT I LAID EYES OM HER NOT YOU! I'VE TRIED TO GET HER ATTENTION, BUT YOU MAKE THAT VERY DIFFICULT, WHEN YOU WON'T EVEN LET ME TALK TO HER LET ALONE FLIRT!!"
James had no clue why he yelled at her, I mean she was a nice girl. Deep down though James knew what made him mad... Remus and Lily, everyone thought they were perfect for each other. James knew he should bow down gracefully, but he couldn't. Yet he told, that he liked Lily to Alice... A.K.A Gossip Girl, everyone at Hogwarts would know about his crush by tonight, great..
"oh.." Alice whispered
"Oh Alice, I'm so sorry! I didn't mean to yell at you."
"It's fine, really I should know better than to have a crush on the most gorgeous and popular guy in the school.."
"I'm sorry"
"It's okay, I'll get over it"
"Well, do you still want to go to the beach?"
"HECK YEAH!!" Alice's sprits piped up, "I can see the most gorgeous guy without a shirt on, I wouldn't miss it for the world!"
James laughed, "Okay well got to go"
"Oh yeah, Bye!"
"Bye" with that James hung up the phone.
James decided that he would also invite Frank, he was just going through a break-up with Macy. He thought those two would get along perfectly, like macaroni with cheese, or Kool with Aid. Without the other half, it just wasn't the same. He'll have to ask Lily if she would think Alice and Frank would be a great pair, if she had time after talking with Remus, the genius, the mastermind, the guy who had Lily's heart.. hmm...
Lily was changing when she remembered about Alice, today was her birthday James said he was probably going to call her first so she decided to pick up the phone and to wish her Happy Birthday, surely James wouldn't mind if she interrupted in the conversation.
She picked up the phone she had in her room and put it to her ear,
"THAT SO ROMANTIC FOR A FIRST DATE! I REALLY THOUGHT YOU HAD A THING FOR LILY, BUT I GUESS YOU WERE JUST TRYING TO GET MY ATTENTION THROUGH HER!!I CAN TOTALLY TELL THAT SHE HAS A THING FOR REMUS, AND HE LIKES HER TO.. MAYBE WE CAN LIKE DOUBLE DATE!I CAN'T BELIEVE THIS IS HAPPENING! I MEAN-"
That all Lily had to hear. She out the phone down, James liked Alice. I mean that would make since they both like Quidditch, they both liked to draw attention to themselves, and the both like Transfiguration. Lily could see how they liked each other.
Lily, then felt something cool against her cheek.. tears. Who was she kidding? Lily heart was ripping in two, She thought maybe he like her, and boy was she wrong. He was just using her to get to Alice! How could she think that possible he might like her? She even gave him her locket that she cared so much about!
She stomped downstairs to see James sitting there calling someone,
" I think that she really liked me so I thought if you go to the beach today, it would get her mind off of me"
Frank said something.
"Okay, I'll talk to you later, bye" James hung up the phone.
How dare he! Lily thought. How dare he try to hook me up with FRANK!! Lily always thought Frank and Alice would go good together, NOT Lily and him.. Yuck!
"HOW DARE YOU!" Lily screamed.
"What?" James asked.
"Did you ever consider my feelings? hmm... maybe I didn't think that way. I'm going to tell you the truth, okay? Everything you guys talked about, ever think of taking in my opinion James? Hm?! Guess what I've got news for you, my feeling for you are the exact OPPOSITE of what you think of me."
James was astounded, Lily didn't like him. She liked Remus... James felt as if the world was crashing down on him.
"I'm not afraid to admit it" Lily added looking up at him.
"Lily don't make this any harder... "James whispered.
"HEY GUYS ARE YOU READY!!" Sirius said hopping down the stairs. What a sight he saw... tears were running down Lily face and James looked like he was five and his goldfish had just died.
"What happened down here?"
They both ignored him and went on..
"SO you heard the whole conversation?"
"I heard enough to know what your feelings are dealing with me!"
"Lily, I'm sorry"
"Save it" Lily said as she clomped up to her room to get ready for the beach. James went and sat and the couch and put a pillow to his face so no one would see the tears rolling down his eyes.
"Do you want me to finish calling people?" Sirius asked him.
James nodded his head.
Today was going to be H-E double hockey sticks.
I know a short chapter, but my birthday is today yeah.. big bad 14, anywho I have to paint my room and clean which took ALL weekend, and then I have to go to Tyler's(a friends) birthday party.. I have a big room... dark aquaish blue, bold lime green, and a touch of burnt orange... trust me it looks kewl.. also, I didn't update cuz my beta went on vacation and couldn't edit my story..
Anywho, the locket Lily gave James- the outside there is an imprintment of a stag, I forgot to mention that..I'm stuck.. what do you think should happen at the beach? Do you think Peter should come? After the beach do you think I should move on, and go to them going to Hogwarts? Tell me people, what do you want to happen in the story? I'm trying to use a lot of your people's ideas, so review!
CARING IS SHARING!... so share your ideas by reviewing if you care about my story even a teensy bit! Come on for a birthday present!