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WOHOOOOO! CHAPTER TEN!
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The gray and white cat looked down at the endless expands of swirling water. Its spray shot in the air every time a wave hit the rocks soaking the cats pelt.
Shivering, he looked down again and felt pride raise in his stomach.
I'm here! He thought thrilled for a second but it was dampened at the thought his littermates dare...
The one to swim across the expanse of water,
The sun drown place.
Their mother had often told them about the place when they were young kits in the nursery. She would tell them of its beauty and of its wonder.
His littermate, FLUFFYJOHN(the tom had no idea why his mother named his brother that) had dared him soon after to go find this sundown, I mean sun drown, place and swim across it.
Now PINK FLUFFY UNICORN DANCING ON RAINBOWS was the type of cat that took everything seriously. He would do every dare and belive in everything that anyone told him. Even from the most evil cat he had ever seen-coughBrokenstarcough- who told him evily that to sun drown place as in the opposite direction in which he came from.
It only took him 56 moons but he had finally found it.
I bet you can't swim from the sun drown place to the other side! FLUFFYJOHNS sneering voice rang loudly in his ears as he slowly made his way down to the water.
Don't be a mouse-brain. That's impossible for anyone to do. His mother had said as she had push the two kits off of her. Especially a little one like your brother.
He had spent 56 moons of his life trying to find the sun drown place. 5 on the way towards it when he met the clans. 20 when Brokenstar told him to go the wrong direction. And 31 going back to it.
I can do it! He thought fluffing up his gray and white fur.
"I'm PINK FLUFFY UNICORNS DANCING ON RAINBOWS and I can do it!" The tom yowled jumping into the water.
He was instantly caught by a huge wave. Swallowing mouthfuls of saltly water, he was submerged under the icy swirl. Seconds later he reappeared and gasped for breath. Then he hit the rock and then it was dark.
FUFFLYJOHN was sitting on top of the cliff face wearing sunglasses and eating popcorn. "YOU HAVE FALLED!" There mother, FRYINGPAN yelled looking down were their son had disappeared.
This was clearly not a normal family. There names say it all.
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Okay guys, this is just a bonus part because this chapter was so short( sorry about that)
This is when we fed Firestar waffles. (hayjay5304 and Foxleap)
Firestar blinked open his eyes making out fuzzy images. Where am I? He thought blinking trying to remember what had happened the night before. Something about waffles, and ninjas, and ducktape.
Firestar looked around the blackness of his den feeling very uneasy. He had had a strange dream where there were ninja cats and Spottedleaf screaming at him to stop sleeping.
Shifting his gaze at the entrance of his den, he could make just make out the faint starlight. Then suddenly two shadows fell infront of the faint starlight blotting it out. The shadows in the shape of two cats.
"What the msnshsjbshsuu" Firestars mouth was covered by something the stuck to his fur.
"Say nothing and no one gets hurt!" The she-cat hissed.
The pair of blue eyes flashed gleefully. "I've always wanted to do this!" Jayfeather exclaimed happily. His own medicine cat had betrayed him! Thing something heard contacted with the back of the ginger cats head and he collapsed, knocked out.
A gray and white cat entered the room followed closely by a bright ginger tom. Both were carrying the dreaded food. The most terrible and scary thing in the world of the clans. They had waffles.
"Hey Firestar! Im hayjay5304! Prepare to die- um, I mean eat waffles!" The gray and white one exclaimed dangling the dreaded waffle in front of the Thunderclan leaders face. Firestar tried to scoot away(as he was tied up with ducktape on chair) but failed and fell flat on his face. The other ginger cat, which he soon recognized as Foxleap, pulled the chair back up and put the waffle on Firestars face.
The ThunderClan leader squealed like a kit. hayjay5304 walked up to him and shoved the waffle into Firestars mouth and forced him to sallow the terrible thing.
Firestar died.
~~~~~~Please don't hurt me! I'm an innocent line break!~~~~~
"No! Please don't sent me back there!" The ginger tom pleaded bowing in front of Bluestars feet. The bluish-gray she-cat looked at him sympathetically.
"I'm sorry but your not all the way dead yet!" Spottedleaf yelled and pushed him back into the living world.
"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!"
"WE WILL BE BACK WHEN THERE ARE MORE REVIEWS!" hayjay5304 grinned at the Thunderclan leaders fearful face.
"I'm the waffle bringer!"
Sunmist: hope you guys liked that! Lol
Softballstorm: your the new waffle bringer!
hayjay5304: prepare to met your doom Firestar!*holds out another waffle*
Foxleap: there's more where that came from!*pulls out a huge refrigerator filled to the brim with waffles*
Firestar: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!(I'm just gonna stop now...)
Graystripe: um...
Foxleap:...
Jayfeather:...
Softballstorm:...
Sunmist:...
Foxleap: what am I then?
Sunmist: the crazy one!
Foxleap: YAAAAAYYYY!
Jayfeather: don't forget to review, favorite, and follow! Every one review equals one waffle force fed to Firestar!
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And thanks to hayjay5304 for letting me put you in in the story :)
Have a great day/night!
~Sunmist