Story:
A Body for Carrie by InvaderZIM
Star Rating: 3 out of 4 stars.
Review: I can't honest;y say I want to say it was good. It was over exaggerated, but had an idea that was a was probably done before, and has no point of being here. But, I have to say, this isn't a romance; it's a dark comedy! Let's begin:
We have a story that gives info that we already knew on Carrie. We are brought in on a normal day and hopefully she can get over her feelings of a body to just getting one. Things don't turn out the way we hoped for her.
I have to say the idea was redundant, self-centered, obnoxious, and dumb: And it worked! This story has SLAPSTICK in the mind of having what we thought we want, and have bad things happen to us. The idea worked and had a center of exploring, but romance wasn't in the cards. The grammar is actually decent, but it was OVER-exaggerated! (Like that) and I feel that it really got nowhere but distraction and this weird hype of chance.
I did like the fact it was able to pull off laughs for me and continue a story that was just a girl who is being slapped across the face since she thought it wouldn't hurt. We have Carrie in a hilarious role that is too good to be true. I have to say that I like this story when it was just bad, but it was good. If I had to pick if it was good, I would say it. What I don't have an answer for it is whether or not I want it continued. It seems to have this weird aftertaste as if it were bad.
Summary: You want to give Carrie a body, then get ready for the results of a bad life. We have ourselves a story that kicked us, but made us watch it on TV and laugh at our pain. In a way, the author has put Carrie as a symbol of us. We have to be careful for what we wish for, we just might get it.
~ I'm Fan Fiction Critic/Reviewer Henry Peters