A/N: Okay…so I am UBER nervous about this. I have NEVER written anything like this so I'm shaking in my boots….for serious!

Anyways….I emailed a few of you to ask opinions. So I decided we would be from Bella's pov here….I think it will work…..I hope it will. bUt we get some Jazzzy later promise.

But I don't own anything….ughhh….but I wish I could…..just for a little while.

Previously on GBWOWL:

Bella was in tears and in my arms as soon as the song ended, "Let's get outta here Cowboy, I think it's time you claimed what is yours."

Chapter 10 The Major's Girl

Bella POV:

I was nervous…..okay I was beyond nervous. Jasper was an experienced, beautiful, and a totally built vampire and I was just a weak little virgin human. I hated this. I wanted more confidence. We were walking back to the castle and I caught Jasper looking at me out of the corner of his eye, I guessed he was monitoring my emotions.

"Bella…we don't have to…" he started.

"Jazzy….you and I both know we do….it's needed and wanted…well…unless you don't want me?" I asked him warily.

"You silly…gorgeous girl…of course I want you!" He said picking me up and spinning me in a circle.

He put me down and we walked the rest of the way in silence. I guessed Jasper was trying to let me calm myself. When we reached my room….I sat on the bed and kicked off my boots. I wasn't sure what we were supposed to do. Should we just strip our clothes off and go at it? Should I wait for him to start….should I start?

Jasper still hadn't said anything….but had laid down on the bed with his arms behind his head. "Sooo Jazzy…." I started as I climbed on top of him straddling his waist, "Wanna do something? You know…play cards….yatzee…..anything?"

He just looked at me and smiled, "Oh darlin' we're gonna play alright…" and he rolled us over at vampire speed so that he was on top of me.

"Now this….is how we are going to do this. I am in control. I will always be in control. I want you to stand up so that I can get you outta that pretty little dress okay?"

I noticed that he had slipped into the Major as soon as I climbed on top of him. He felt I was challenging him. It was time for him to claim me. There may come a time when my Jazzy will be the one to love me but right now…this is where the Major shows who's boss. So I stood up and got to the middle of the room. I kept my eyes on the floor…I knew I was only to look at him if he wanted me to.

"Oh my mate….you know how to please me already" he said as he started to kiss on my shoulders. I felt him reach the zipper to my dress and pull it down. I started to feel self conscious and of course he picked right up on that.

"Isabella…I don't like what I am feeling from you….you are gorgeous and made for me….it only matters how I see you…do you understand?"

"Yes Sir" I breathed out. I felt my arms fall from covering my chest to down my sides.

"Now my mate….I can get a good look at you. You are beautiful…." I felt him appraising me and I felt like a piece of meat…but I was his piece of meat and that's really all that mattered. I knew to stay quiet throughout unless I was asked a question…but I wanted to know what he was doing.

"Hmm…Isabella…I want you to close your eyes and count out loud until you reach 50 and when you do you may open your eyes….do you understand?"

"Yes sir" so I did as I was told and started counting. I felt wind blow pass me and realized he must be doing something at vampire speed. As I reached 50 I opened my eyes and what I saw made me want to cry. Jasper had covered the room with candles and put rose petals on the bed.

"I wanted to make your first time memorable, so even when you are changed this will be a memory that sticks out and you can keep it."

I wanted to say thank you, I wanted to hug him, but mostly I wanted to please him. But I knew I couldn't speak, so I just sent him all my feelings, the gratitude, the love and the longing and the want. I felt like I was out of control. I wanted him so badly yet I couldn't do anything yet.

"Isabella….this is the last time I am going to ask you this, once we start we cannot stop you do understand? Are you sure you want to do this? We can wait until another time"

"No Major please! I belong to you! I want everyone to know it. Please….please claim me now."

"Oh my sweet girl…you please me so and yet I have barely touched you. Now come my mate. I want you to sit on the edge of the bed." he said as he patted the spot.

I did as I was told but Jasper scooted me back until I was in the center and he sat in front of me. He started kissing along my neck and collarbones…then he pushed me to where I was laying down….he trailed kisses down my breasts until he reached my belly button. He looked up at me and said, "Sugar…I may be claiming you but I'm going to love you all the same….and I want my mouth on every inch of your body."

As he said that I felt my panties moisten even more. I wanted him and I wanted him bad. I felt the growl on my thigh as he kissed his way down. I knew he could smell my arousal. He kept kissing his way down the one leg and up the other….never pulling his mouth from my body…as he moved up he trailed his tongue to the next spot. I needed him so badly, I started to rub my legs together to get some sort of friction. As he came back up my leg…he trailed his fingers over my cootchie. It felt so good but I needed more. I bucked my hips involuntarily at him. Slowly…ever so slowly….he entered one finger….it didn't hurt….I was just so…I couldn't describe it. I felt the muscles in my stomach tightening as he moved his finger slowly in and out but I wanted more. He entered a second finger and I about came unhinged. I felt the desire running through me….and the coil in my stomach was threatening to break. I wasn't sure what was coming next but I knew it would be good. He kept stroking inside of me and I felt it then…the release. I never felt anything like that in my life…but I wanted to again. I tried to stay quiet but I couldn't as the release came I yelled his name.

"Major…what was that…if I may ask" I said as I blushed. I never knew you could feel anything like that.

"Of course you can my innocent little angel. That my dear was your first orgasm…how do you feel?" and I could feel the smug smile on his lips.

"Oh wow…that was….I never felt anything like that!" I couldn't control the need for more. The need to make him feel that way too. And he picked up on it.

"Isabella….you naughty girl…what am I going to do with you….I feel your want….I feel your lust…but then there is something else…would you like to tell me?"

"Major…I would like…." I couldn't say it. I was embarrassed. I was afraid.

"What is it sugar…come on you can tell me" he said as he stoked my cheek following the blush that had appeared.

"I want to love you like you loved me….and….more…."

"So you want to please me?"

"Yes sir"

"Are you asking permission is this what is going on?" he asked like it was something new to him. I forgot he wasn't used to getting things his way.

"Yes sir…I know not to touch you or speak unless you allow me…so Major…may I please you?"

"You may" and he allowed me to pull both of his shirts off as he kicked off his pants and boxers. He laid down where I once was and pulled me to be straddling him again. I could feel his erection on my butt. I started to wiggle and he growled, "Isabella.." he started but I ignored him. I followed the same path he took kissing on his neck….nibbling on his ear…..down his chest. Once I reached his hips…I noticed the defined v that was formed there….I wanted to lick it…so I did. I ran my hand along his toned abs and I felt my self getting aroused even more by the low purr he had in his chest. I scooted back some more so that I was between his legs….I slowly reached my hand up and touched his erection. He growled. "Was that wrong?" I asked trembling.

"No…do it again." he said through clenched teeth. I could tell he was holding back but wanted to give me this. So I rubbed my hand down his length….up and then down again going a little faster a little tighter…..as I rubbed him up and down I talked myself into the next step. I started to kiss my way up his length, but when I went to put him fully in my mouth he stopped me. "Sugar…you don't have to do that…it's…" I stopped him right there.

"It's what Major? A way of showing you that I will please you any time any where how ever you wish? Will you stop trying to fight who you are and let me do this!" I yelled at him. His eyes got darker, but I knew it was from lust not anger. He was turned on by the fact that I knew him so well. So I huffed at him and went back to what I was doing. I slowly ran my tongue down his erection and then closed my mouth over him. I felt him purring with delight.

"Oh my sweet Isabella…what you do to me….I can't wait to be inside of you." he said as I took him fully in my mouth. "Isabella…I want you to stop now okay? I want to be inside of you…now.."

I knew that was an order so I took him as far as I could one last time. He growled, but I knew it was for a good reason. He rolled us again at vampire speed so he was back on top of me.

"Thank you my mate…for wanting to please me" he said as he kissed my face and down my neck again.

I still didn't say anything. I was awaiting instructions. My parents didn't get to this part with me…they said he would tell me what he wanted…so I waited.

"Isabella…..this is going to be okay. I promise. What is going to happen….when I enter you….I will reach your barrier….normally it would hurt a woman…but seeing as I am an empath…I can take away your pain and replace it with something else. Would you like that?" he asked…stroking my cheek.

"Yes sir…I would as long as it doesn't bring any pain to you." I said back honestly. I didn't want to cause him pain. I would take it.

"Oh sweet girl. It won't hurt me, I promise. I love how you want to take care of me too. Now….after I enter you….and you are adjusted…we will make love of course…but when we climax together…I will bite you… I will not insert any of my venom. You must stay very still when this happens okay? And with that mark…you will be claimed as my mate." he sounded so loving…so kind….so not like the Major I had read about. I was confused.

"What has you confused sugar?" oh I loved that name

"I just….I didn't think this was supposed to be a loving act? I thought you were supposed to….take what was yours and not worry about me." it sounded stupid. And I felt like a bitch.

"I love you Isabella….I have never taken the time with anyone else like this. You are my mate…you needed to understand…plus this is your first time. I will not let it be vicious….now let me love you like I want."

And he did. He entered me without any pain. As soon as I was "adjusted" like he said I wiggled my hips at him. He thrust into me harder and I moaned. Then I put my hand over my mouth it complete mortification. He stopped and whispered in my ear, "Oh my dear…I do love the sounds you make. I want to hear them, I want ever vampire in this castle to know what I am doing to you and I want them to know you are mine."

Just him talking to me like that made me moan again only this time I said his name. it was a breathy, husky like, "Jasper" but that urged him on stronger. He started to pound hard and that was just want I wanted….I wanted that feeling again…."Oh Jasper please" I yelled at him when he slowed down. I needed more but I wasn't sure how to get it, I wasn't beyond begging.

"Oh Isabella…I know what it is you seek. Don't worry I will give it to you. But you feel so good….I don't want to stop don't you understand…..when it happens…we stop and this ends. I don't want it to end. Oh my sweet mate….I'm going to cum now….and I want you to too can you?"

I responded back with a, "oh yes Jasper just please don't stop….please make it happen again….oh my god harder please" I was begging and he loved it. I opened my eyes just in the right moment. As he thrust into me one last time, and my coil in my stomach broke, he yelled out, "I love you" then "mine" and bit into my neck. It didn't hurt…if anything it brought me more pleasure. I felt my body still shaking with the effects of our love making. I felt him pull away….kiss the mark and then grab my cheek. He was back to my Jazzy now and I was glad. I don't know how much cuddling the Major would like.

"Bella…..are you okay? Did I hurt you?" he said as he climbed out of bed to find his clothes.

"No Jazzy….I'm wonderful. I've never felt better." I stayed laying in the middle of the bed, in my post orgasmic bliss. I never wanted to move from that spot.

Jasper was just giggling at me. He threw my back my panties and his grey t shirt. So he still had his wife beater on with his boxers…yumm that was sexy.

"Bella….calm down….you need to rest." dag nabbit. Ruining my plans.

So I muttered on the way to the bathroom…"stupid beautiful vampire gives you a little taste and then doesn't want anymore what a butthead."

And I sauntered away shaking my booty at him.

Jasper POV:

I watched her walk to the bathroom and I couldn't believe what just happened. I expected when the Major claimed her for it to be animalistic and horrid for her, which I suspected she did to. But the Major loves her too, so it was a loving, caring experience. I had never felt anything like her. She was so warm and tight my god I thought I was going to bust as soon as I entered her. I loved how innocent she was, when she first orgasmed. She didn't know what had happened. I couldn't wait to teach her things. Oh geez I never expected her to give me a blow job…I mean women in my day didn't do that kind of thing….but she was eager and wanted it too so I let her…and I sure wasn't complaining. Even for the first time it was one of the best things I had ever felt.

She came back from the bathroom wearing my t-shirt and snuggled into my side on the bed. "I love you Jazzy….thank you for tonight." and her eyes started to fluttered closed. I kissed her forehead and said, "Good night my angel, I love you, and thank you for being mine." I held her and sporadically through the night someone would come in, first it was Peter and Char…checking to see if she was alright….I nodded at them and they exited quickly. Rose stopped by whispering, "is she okay?" I just nodded and held her closer. I didn't want to let go. But as the morning came I knew she had to wake up. I knew the girls were looking for some "girl time" and I guess I had to do the "locker room talk" with the guys. I really didn't want to but I knew Emmett would bug me until I did.

"Bella sweetheart….you have to wake up now" I whispered in her ear.

"Hmm Jazzy lovin's so early in the morning." I could feel the desire growing around her.

"How about a shower and some Jazzy loving" I suggested.

She squealed and ran towards the bathroom. "Come on Jazzy. I'm waiting!"

Oh geez I created a monster!

Bella POV:

A shower, some Jazzy lovin' and an hour later I was getting ready for my "girl time" with my ladies.

I was brushing my hair when Jazzy came up behind me. He moved my hair to one side and kissed the mark on my neck. "I love you" he whispered. I turned around…stood on my tip toes and began kissing him. Then the interrupting pixie had to do her job. "Oh no Bella come on we are waiting! And "Jazzy Lovin" gross" and then she danced out of the room. Jasper and I laughed and we walked hand in hand to the "girlie room."

" I don't want to go Bella.." he pouted.

"Me either Jazzy….let's do this quick and then we can get back to each other okay? I love you" I told him wrapping my hands around his waist for a hug.

"I love you too sweetheart" and then he was off. I felt my chest starting to burn. I wasn't sure what it was but it hurt.

Mama came out into the hall and said, "Bells….you good?"

"Mama….it hurts?" I started to rub it hoping it would stop.

"I know baby…..he'll be back soon."

"Is that why? Because he's gone?"

"Yeah baby it is…it'll be okay…come on….let's chat."

The girls started in on me almost immediately.

"Bella…come on you have to give us something!" Rose yelled.

"You want me to fill you in on my first ever sexual experience?" why were they doing this? I was mortified. It was a beautiful thing and i didnt want to share it with anyone.

"Come on Bella you tell me yours and I'll tell you mine." Alice giggled.

"Um Alice…I'd rather you didn't tell me ANYTHING you and my Jazzy did." That just grossed me out.

"Bella…seriously are you okay? He didn't hurt you?" Mama is such a worry wart.

"Mama…." I drug out her name, "I'm fine…really…he was…wonderful…"I felt my blush coming around, "can we please talk about something else?"

We sat around watching girlie movies and I was eating junk food. We laughed…we…well I cried…All of a sudden Alice had a glazed over look on her face. I started to ask what was wrong, but Rose cut me off, "she's having a vision."

"Bella…get Jasper now!" Alice screamed

"Alice what's wrong?"

"Bella…just go! Hurry! You have to get him before he does something stupid!"

I took off running…following the pull in my heart….until I came across Jasper and what I saw was not what I expected.

Jasper POV:

Leaving Bella hurt. Literally. Physically. Mentally and emotionally. I hated it. I reached the "guy" room and Emmett clapped me on the back, "Jasper man….how's it…come on….tell us about the human."

I growled low in my chest…"She has a name."

"Dude calm down I was just kidding. I love me some Hells Bells." he had his hands up in surrender.

"Sorry….I just….I'm uneasy without her." I kept rubbing my chest. For some reason it hurt….I didn't like it.

"Jasper…its fine…it's the mate bond….its just because you guys are apart….once she gets back you will feel better." Carlisle told me, "She is okay right? No injuries?"

I scoffed, "Of course she's not hurt. She left me with a smile on her face"

"Oh yeah we heard all about that "Jazzy Lovin" Alec piped in.

"Okay enough of that, she is my daughter we are talking about." Peter said.

We sat around talking for a while…the guys wanted details but I was going to share. We were laughing at Emmett's bad attempt to imitate Bella's moans from last night when Aro came in, "I let Edward go Major Whitlock."

"You did WHAT!" I roared at him.

All of a sudden Bella came barreling around the corner screaming, "Major stop!"

I hadn't even realized I was in Major mode. And I was about to attack a Volturi King!

"Isabella….come here….now!" she came to my side and the pain in my chest lessened exponentially. "Do you question me and my orders?" I asked her slowly.

"No sir. I just didn't want him to punish you. I don't know what I would do without you." she whimpered.

"You think they could take me down? You doubt my abilities?" I was getting more angry by the second. I needed away from her, away from everyone. I knew it would hurt more to be away from her.

"I just don't want the whole guard to attack you Major. Can't you understand…no matter what friendship I have with Jane, her loyalty to her Master comes first so please don't make me watch you wither in pain from her. Please I beg you."

It seems she needed me as much as I needed her. But I still should get away…but could I get away without her? Or should I take her with me? I took a few steps from her, leaving without a words when she fell to the floor in sobs screaming, "Don't you leave me Jasper Whitlock! Don't you dare!"

I whipped around and looked at her. She had tears running down her face and she was grabbing her chest. My mate was in pain. And I had caused it. I grabbed her up in my arms and ran out to the pond away from everyone else. I set her down in the grass and uprooted a tree. I bashed rocks to dust all within her sight. She wasn't fazed….it didn't bother her….if anything she was turned on by my animalistic nature. "Something you would like to say Isabella?"

"No sir."

"Your emotions say other wise." I taunted.

She looked down and blushed. I loved it. "Isabella…." I taunted her. I ripped my shirt from my body and I felt her lust double. "Sweet sweet Isabella….what am I going to do with you,"

"Anything you want Major…I am yours" she responded and it was the perfect answer.

"Exactly! You are mine to bend to my will hmm…" I was dark and sinister in this moment and I knew it. I had no right to be near here yet I couldn't tear myself away.

"Major….are you alright?" she asked full of concern.

"Of course I am Isabella…I have all I need with you. Will you let me have you…right now right here?" I asked hoping she would say no. I wouldn't be able to control myself and I might hurt her.

"Whenever, however, wherever you want Major….I already told you that." and she wasn't scared…not one bit. She trusted me beyond any reasonable doubt, yet I didn't deserve it.

"Strip" I ordered.

And she did, faster than any human I had ever seen.

"Now my sweet Isabella….I want you on your hands and knees….are you ready for me? Are you wet already for me? Hmm my dear? It is for me correct?" I was egging her on to tell me what I wanted and I hoped she would give it to me.

"Of course Major. I'm always ready for you and you are the ONLY one I would ever want to be wet for. I'm yours Major, I belong to you! Now take me and prove I'm yours!" she screamed on her hands and knees looking over her shoulder.

And I did. I fell down behind her and slid inside her, she was right she was dripping wet for me, apparently the animal in me made her as horny as the caring loving man in me. I loved it. And I took her. It wasn't gentle, it wasn't sweet. I pounded into her with as much force as I could without breaking her in half. She was screaming my name egging me on telling me to go harder and faster. And then she looked back over her shoulder and yelled, "come on Major is that all you got I said harder, so fuck me!"

I couldn't take it….hearing her talk like that…I thrust into her harder than I was three more times and emptied my seed within her at the same time I felt her walls clamp and I swore I saw stars. I had never climaxed that hard ever. She fell to the ground and I rolled next to her. I kissed her mark on her neck, she liked it earlier and I liked knowing it was there. She rolled to face me and said, "Hey Jazzy nice to have you back. Did you have a good time as the Major?"

"Bella…you shouldn't be around me when I'm like that….its dangerous."

She scoffed at me and said, "I was asking for it Jazzy…really…it was incredible."

She sure knew how to make my ego inflate. I gave her a cocky smirk and she just hit me in the chest with her arm with her cast on it.

"Jazzy….can I ask you something?"

"Anything Angel"

"When you left me with the girls…did you….were you…did it hurt?"

"My chest…I'd never felt anything like that." and I never wanted to again I added in my head.

" I didn't like it….but when I came to find you it was like I could follow the pull…it was crazy. Jazzy what are we going to do about Edward."

"Bella…I want to track him….and kill him."

"You can't do that Aro said so….what if Demetri tracks him, and somehow he leads you to where Maria is. Then you guys can get some recon or something." I loved hearing my woman talk strategy. "Jazzzy focus! What if we used Leila! She could shift into someone…and get us information…right?"

That seemed like a good plan…."Bella….you're a genius…Come on I need to talk to your dad."

So we were off to plan a war strategy against the biggest bitch I'd ever met, my creator, the scum, and the man who was after my Bella. Things were about to get nasty.

We got back to the castle and Peter was waiting for us, "Major...we have a problem...someone just gave us a live view of what you and my daughter just did by the woods."

Someone was there...while I was having sex with my Bella? They watched? Recorded! And sent it to our families to watch as it happened! Bella was in tears and mortified. I wouldn't have that. "Peter I want to know who did and I want to know now. I'm tired of this shit."

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