Yes, it's true, I'm sucky at updating! Anyway the story is coming to a close soon, so thanks for all the reviews!
Chapter 10: Unfold
"DADDY!" Luna screamed, just as Gibbs fell, a bullet hole in his chest. Then the un-sub grabbed Luna and knocked her out.
"Owwww….." Luna sat up. Her head was spinning wildly. Then sitting up, she remembered the tracking device and turned it on.
"Are you alright?" A voice said. Luna jumped.
"Who-who's there!" She called, scared. Luna looked into the darkness seeing nothing. Then a shadow moved, sending her heart into a thumping frenzy. The shadow moved closer. She moved away.
"N-no! St-stay away f-from me!" She backed herself into a wall.
"Hey, don't be scared. I'm not going to hurt you. My name is Spencer Reid." The shadow (Reid) sat in front of her. "Sorry if I did scare you."
"Oh! You're the FBI guy!" Luna said relieved, sort of.
"The FBI guy?"
"Right, sorry. Um, my name is Luna. My dad is Agent Gibbs, NCIS."
Reid was startled, "Did McGee make it back?"
"Yeah, he made it back. I'm not sure about any details because I'm just a…" Luna searched for the right word, " … volunteer on this case. I didn't work the whole thing."
"Then why are you here?" Reid questioned.
"Well, because… because I was supposed to be a trade off to get you back. Then NCIS would find me."
"Our teams are still trying to find me, how would they find you?"
"Tracking device, but I think he took mine…" She quickly added in cause the un-sub was listening to them.
With Gibbs
The van sped away, leaving Gibbs bleeding to death on the pavement. Once the van was out of sight, Tony ran over.
"Boss, they left." Gibbs grunted, pulling himself off the ground. He yanked off his shirt, and undid the bullet proof vest. Following Tony, he claimed into the NCIS spy van. (A/N: Sorry, I don't know what it is called)
"Damn, this doesn't feel right," Gibbs scowled, "I can't believe we didn't tell her!"
Flashback
"Agent Gibbs, may I talk to you in private?" Hotch asked. Gibbs nodded, leading him to the elevator.
"Ok, talk."
"This un-sub isn't going to follow through with his deal."
"What?"
"Most likely he is going to take your daughter and try to kill you. This is my reasoning for placing the tracking device in her bra. In order to rescue them, you will have to get shot."
"Bullet proof vest, I get it."
"Not just that, you cannot tell Luna."
End Flashback
"Boss!" Ziva called, "we have a location!"
*sigh* The end, so far….
Man I know I suck at updating, but The next two chapters will be the last. :( Please review!