So quick authors note! So I have been going around and editing some grammar, spelling, and POV mistakes that I missed during my first publication so if you noticed that some of the content was different than that is why. But I decided to take the time out of my completely hectic schedule to address this WONDERFUL review I just received.

You are aware that it is Apollo's chariot that he uses to rise and set the sun. Like Artemis has her chariot, so does Apollo. If you recall The Titan's Curse, they road in it and Thalia crashed it in the water. Please learn your mythology and correct your mistakes. When I read your summary I almost smacked myself for your stupidity. Dagger, really. Apollo doesn't even use a dagger he has a bow. That's why one of his attributes is the God of Archery. Urgh.

(Also the Heroes of Olympus sucked in the end. Rick only did it to please fans instead of caring about giving the story the ending it deserves. He didn't give no consequences. He made the villian weak and beatable (Honestly. If they actually fought the first born of Chaos, do you think they would have really one without a struggle. Nope. That charmspeak madness was bullshit.), they treat Apollo like an idiot (which he's not, he's more suppose to be more like Zeus according to myth. He's calm, and easily angered when insulted.), and made him scared. This isn't a god who is suppose to get scared. For crying out loud, he went right up to Zeus and killed his cyclopes that forged his bolt... *seethes* I'm still writing my later of complaint to him and his editors.)

Hi. Here is how I am going to begin my reply to this.

There needs to be a question mark at the end of your first sentence. Starting a supporting sentence with 'like' is not grammatically correct. Urgh isn't a word. "He didn't give no," is a double negative, therefore, redundant. Villian is spelled wrong. Honestly shouldn't be capitalized. 'First born' should be spelled first-born. There needs to be a question mark after struggle. 'Nope' is not a complete sentence. 'Charmspeak' should be two words. I don't even know why you put a parenthis at the end of bullshit. 'Apollo like' needs to be Apollo-like. Remember when saying something looks like a certain thing, we add a hyphon. There shouldn't be a comma after your description of Apollo. Letter is spelled wrong. You used the incorrect verb form of 'suppose' and you put a parenthese at the end of your review without a starting one to support it. On top of that, this entire thing is awkwardly worded and hard to get through.

*Gasping breath*

If you are going to argue with a literature analyzis student, you are going to write like a literature analyzis student. That was painful to read.

Now that that is out of my system, I would like to point out that this is a fanfiction. A fanfiction. Also, a lot of the things in this story are accurate. I also don't care if Apollo uses a bow. Why would I care about that? As for slapping yourself after reading my summary, honestly I wish you would have.

Second of all, nobody cares about your shitty opinion about how Blood of Olympus ended. One thing you should know is that in the real world, not everything ends in a huge, dramatic, drawn out episode. Some things are over as quick as they begin and that is what makes it all the more tragic.

Another thing, one of the great advances in modern day technology is if you don't like something, you can walk away from it. Holy shit. Who thought of this?

I hope you spend more time on your complaint letter to Rick Roidan than you did on this. Which will probably get thrown straight in the trash, because reading your review made me want to drink cyanide.

Thanks for all the other lovely reviews guys! I try to answer the ones that aren't guest as much as I can!

Chapter eight should be out tonight.