Hello again.
Aug. 6th 2018
I've been working steadily on the re-work of this story. I'm going to give you some updates so that you'll know whether it's something you're going to want to stick with or not. I'm thinking that it will be a story told in two arcs that are fairly self contained. The first arc will be finished by the end of August. It will need to be proofed and polished. I'll need to find a beta reader for that part. I'm fairly confident that I will release it before the second arc is finished. At worse, it will have a fairly good conclusion so that the reader won't feel like they were left hanging.
Details so far:
Ninth Doctor/Rose/Jack
Post Season Two with some changes, most notably, Rose didn't lose hold of the lever and Jack was not left behind.
Same subject matter but significant changes to the circumstances. There's more set up to the story and therefore a lot more substance and tension to drive the plot forward. I've gotten better at writing too. I hope.
