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Guest (Chapter 9): That was partially the idea for the Powerpuff Girls story, but the setting of the story would take place more in the canon universe if you will, just that the PPG would be older.
Zer0the0mega108 (Chapter 9): Lol, glad you it.
Strike the Blood (Chapter 9): Yeah it was a fun little idea that I had in the back of my mind for some months, maybe longer, now.
Not a bad idea, pretty much the same story between Shazam and Black Adam though I don't really see how the rest of DXD verse gets involved...
Interesting choice for Freddy Freeman as the base model for the OC.
Silver crow (Chapter 9): I was gonna use the Phoenix ritual as the catalyst for the Hellfire Club takeover, everything else I like lol.
I don't know about Selene bumping into Josiah in any case as you seem to keep forgetting the ages of Josiah, Emma, Jean and Scott; the latter two were were about 10 years old when they joined Xavier, Emma was probably a teen or late teen when she discovered her powers, and the biggest one is Josiah as Xavier and the Phoenix have a discussion at the hospital as Josiah is a newborn. So right there is a bit of a consistency issue since either the Phoenix will have to teleport Josiah somewhere else (which would present an issue to said family unless the Phoenix just mind controls them) or Xavier will take him in. Point being, in either case it'll be hard for Selene to "just bump" into Josiah without either Xavier's knowing and being rather protective of his students or some other reason. Which brings me to the very first comment you wrote for this chapter, the only thing I can think of that'd make sense would be if Josiah/Phoenix made a telepathic contact with Jean and Emma (kinda like a date website for the mind lol) then when the girls come to the X-Mansion, Josiah has faces to those names (well, maybe the astral plane would supply those faces but you get the gist).
Pretty fun idea with Miss Sinister, I'm on board!
There is also the notion of conquest that the New Gods may not be totally fond of (since that's more or less what Ashra is doing) for the Divine Krypton Empire, which could tie in some fashion to Darkseid or maybe even the Old Gods...
Oh... so you were talking about the human form of the Ultimates Betty Ross this whole time...
Understood for the whole Kazuki thing.
Interesting notion with Hera and the other goddesses using Ajax as their champion.
Well, come to think of it I don't really see why the Phoenix would really say anything about Ercole and Scott as the Phoenix would probably be locked in Jean's mind by this point.
Thanks, and what do you think about the backstory of Tau Rato being a descendant of Brianna from KOTOR II? For future Star Wars stories, I'm gonna try with various types of weapons for the OC's (saberstaffs and the Temple Guard pikes most likely the most used). Well, the martial arts the Imperial Guards used is called the Echani art... Also thanks for the names lol.
I like the idea of Arne getting the sword then during the feast, he sneaks off once he notices that the Ladies Three are missing... finding them in his bed.
Harking back to Betty Ross here, why her Ultimates human form? Wouldn't it be easier to have her Human form still be Earth-616 appearance since her Hulk form is going to be the same anyway?
Arne's "fight night"... aren't you being clever lol. But sure I can add Lorelei to the fun lol.
I have one other guilty pleasure I've been hiding...
Not a bad thought with the Spider ladies there, I like it.
Though the mind crush will be the one thing I'll say no to since Xavier is going to definitely question Josiah about the sudden amount of wealth (which is going to be hard for Josiah to really explain those companies are still internationally and worldwide) and if Xavier finds out about the "mind crushing" of the Homo-Sapiens (mutants controlling humans...) then that could spark something (even with the Phoenix around, my point is still relevant).
Chaos Sorcerer (Chapter 9): Oh, interesting idea with the Crystal... though I was thinking that the Crystal would be the Kingdom Heart (Heart of all Worlds).
Glad you like the Prime idea. I already figured that his Force Speed aura would have gold lightning, but thanks for the suggestion.
For the Odinson story, he can't be the Odinforce because Odin IS the Odinforce (he, along with his two deceased brothers, were fused together so without Odin there is no Odinforce; it would be called something else since it would be a different person).
The Aeolus story isn't a full DC/Marvel crossover, it only would have certain elements of Marvel in it. So mutants like Magneto and Psylocke would not be in here, same with Taskmaster. Dr. Strange is a possibility but not guaranteed. I do like Solaria being on a key line for mystical energy, as it would make sense.
That seems to be in the works for the White Scarab, the part time Leaguer bit. I don't think the Scarab would have any reason to create particles from another multiverse. I think the Scarabs are designed to be something similar to the Bleeding Edge armor of Iron Man. The Scarab will be a female A.I. Axel will be about 15 years old.
Genosha will already be created by the time Ercole is born so no need to find a safe haven or attack Apocalypse or the Hellfire Club. This will be set in the Earth-616 universe. Yes, Ercole will have his own team.
I haven't read the Mutant-Inhuman War but I do know the outcome, so I'm a little... neutral... on the subject.
The Celestial Omega mutant idea is already similar to my Homo-Caelestis story.
Lol, it's part of my charm of this stories XD.
Um, Doctor Strange at his most powerful is at Multi-Universal while Galactus is Multiversal at his peak... but your right about Dormammu though lol.
I'm still taking votes, so thank you for that.
I don't see how that's any different from his style to my style, it's more or less the same... the only difference is the slow build (which there is also in my stories) except that the open relationships are already confirmed usually by the first sex scene...
Story ideas:
Gary Stu (working title; DC or Marvel or X-Overs): This is a parody of a parody of the One Punch Man series...
Shut up...
Anyway, our esteemed OC here, Gary Stu, has done the rigorous training to become a superhero: situps, pushups and drinking plenty of juice. Now with all this power, his drive to become a hero trickles downward and decides to continue living his regular life (using Uber as his main job since he doesn't want to spend the WHOLE day in bed; only most of it).
Technorganic (working title; Transformers): My other little guilty pleasure idea...
Taking place in the Transformers Prime and Transformers Animated cartoon universes, the power and strength of the Autobots and the Decepticons are more in align with their comic counterparts (ranging from Planet to Universal, and a bit above that).
So our story begins with Royce Adams undergoing a procedure- the mixture of flesh and Cybertonian technology (fairly similar to Sari Sumdac from the Transformers Animated series).
...And that's about it lol, part of it I have figured out, the other half I want to keep it a surprise.
Below are a list of names I thought would suit for a technorganic Cybertonian:
Stormcycle
Zephyr
Sunburst
Shadewire
Crossflare
Influx
Aerostorm
Hyperline
Ares
Ember
Star Saber
The Hero of the Stars (Star Wars): Pretty much in the plot of the SWTOR lol, but here our journey across the beautiful stars is told through the eyes of a young Mandalorian Knight by the name of Aiden Eos. Bounty hunter, assassin, slicer, charmer, lady killer... and much more... a man who can do anything for the right price.
The story begins-
The Great Hunt begins. While the Sith Empire and the Galactic Republic scheme against each other, a bloody contest rages in the frontier systems.
Mercenaries from across the galaxy compete for the privilege of entering a dangerous manhunt where they must capture or eliminate the most notorious and elusive targets.
In the polluted swamps of Hutta, a tough young Mandalorian Knight teams with an aging bounty hunter to secure an invitation to this deadly struggle for fortune and glory...