Wahoo next chapter, tell what you think of the story so far and how I can improve it.
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Link started to awaken from his unconsciousness, yet his eyes stayed firmly shut. He felt like he was been pulled along a bumpy road, he could hear people talking around him. He couldn't remember what happened after he got to the house, perhaps they had got a cart? And they were now riding happily to the next destination. His eyes slowly fluttered open.
He was wrong, terribly wrong.
He looked round to see his friends tied up, each with a look of terror on there face. Shiro was bruised and bloodied, there must have been a fight, the same with Brac and Grogg. He looked round and saw two people he had never met before. They appeared to be a couple, either that or they were practicing a play.
"Don't worry. My love, these vile people could not harm someone as beautiful as you" the man with brown hair complimented
"If from anyone else's mouth I would not believe it, but I do, as you say that it is true" the woman with red hair in a white dress said back. Link could see nick in the corner of his eye gag at these remarks.
"Link"
Link turned to the red haired girl who said his name. "Yes Romani?" he asked. She looked at him with her deep blue eyes. "I'm scared" she whispered, he reached for her hand and stroked it in a soothing manner and stroked it. "Don't worry we'll be alright" he gave her a reassuring smile, she was the only person out of the group link could relate to as she was the only one his age. She smiled back, but her eyes still showed fear.
"Yes I love you my queen" the strange man continued to talk to the woman. Zubora had had enough of this, "ah shuddup ya' love obsessed prats" Granny, being the only one untied, covered Nicks ears.
"Shut up all of you!" A Gerudo riding a horse called out to them "pitiful slaves" she spat.
"Excuse me? We are not your slaves" Nick said.
The silk clad woman looked at him and with ease jumped off her horse onto the cart, pulling her scimitar out of its sheath and pointed it to the boy's neck.
"Do you want to die measly child" tears started to form in the boys eyes. Brac glared at her "how dare you even speak of harming an innocent child!" he called out with unknown courage, her gaze turned from the boy to the man. She sheathed her sword, then raised her foot and sent a sharp kick to his face. The team gasped. "Arrogant bastard"
She got back to her horse. The group gave the poor carpenter a sympathetic look.
"Thankyou" Nick whispered. Brac looked at the boy next to him "you're my hero" Brac smiled at this.
Link turned to get an idea of where they were going. He could see a beach in the distance, they were taking them back to the fortress.
Link let go of Roman's hand "I just need to do something" he whispered so no one could hear him. He attempted to set himself free of the ropes that binded him. They hadn't taken his magic pouch, maybe there was something in there. He reached into it imagining an object that could help him now.
He imagined the bow, he couldn't fire it tied up. Then the bombs, that wouldn't work. A powder keg, pfft. Maybe an arrow would work. Pulling out an arrow he attempted to cut the ropes.
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The same Gerudo, who had guarded the cart, looked at the green clad boy. How had that dirty child taken on a whole group of Gerudo? She looked at him closer, was he struggling. She had better check this out, after what happened last time; they couldn't risk him getting free.
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The Gerudo on the other cart. Was looking at Link, had she seen him cutting the rope. He tried to make it more discreet.
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The boy had just looked her right in the eye, his eyes where like the eyes of a beast. His eyes showed shock his struggling stopped a slightly, whatever he was doing he was trying to hid it. He needed to be stopped now!
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The woman drew her blade of prepared to jump to the prisoner cart. Links eyes widened, he wouldn't be able to cut these ropes in time…
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Yeah another cliffhanger, sorry about this cliffhanger been so short, and tell me did I get the father-son relationship with Brac and nick right? Tell me who you want to survive, and just to let you know, the turtles in the next one, you know who you are. And also, this will have slight Romani/Link in it, for you people who don't like this, don't worry, there wont be much of it, just small bits every few chapters.