I got many reviews and they all wanted another chapter so here's one!
Loren and Eddie arrived at their spot but when Loren wants to get out of the car Eddie grabs her arm and pulls her into his lap.
Loren: Do I ever get rid of you?
"No" says Eddie before pulling her into a sweet kiss that soon became more passionate. Eddie asked Loren for entrance by licking her bottom lip but Loren doesn't open up, instead she pulls back.
Eddie: What's wrong?
Loren (looking down): I still feel kinda bad for doing this to Melissa and lying to her. Maybe we shouldn't do this.
Eddie: Loren, please don't do this. I think it's really sweet that you put others above yourself and that's one of the reasons I like you. But please for once do what's best for yourself (pouting) and for me?
Meanwhile at the Tate house
Nora (yelling): Melissa, there's someone on the door! Could you please open it for me, I'm making dinner so my hands are all dirty!
Melissa (yelling): Sure! (opening the door) Hey Ian, what are you doing here?
Ian: Can't I suprise my girlfriend whenever I want?
Melissa: Of course you can... as long as you brought me flowers
Ian shows her a bouquet of roses he had after his back.
Melissa (squealing): Ian, they're beautiful!
Ian: I'm glad you like them. So, you wanna go out tonight? Eddie's dad has this real cool club and I wanna take you to it
Melissa: I'd love to, I'll just go ask my mom
Nora: Sooooooo, that's your boyfriend?
Melissa: Yes and mom?
Nora: Yeah?
Melissa: Can I please please pleeeeaase go out with Ian tonight? He want to take me to Max's club. Please?
Nora: Well... okay than. But it's a school night so be back at eleven.
Melissa (kissing Nora's cheek): Thanks mom, you're the best!
Loren (sighs): Well, okay. I'll see how things work out with us but I really have to go now. Bye
Eddie (kissing the top of her head): Bye
Nora: Loren, where have you been?!
Loren: Oh, I found a quiet spot and I was just clearing my head a little bit
Nora: Well, that's okay but let me know the next time you do that. Okay? I was worried about you.
Loren: I'm sorry mom, I'll tell you next time. Where's Melissa?
Nora: She's out with Ian to Max's club. You can go too if you want?
Loren: Thanks but I think I'm gonna get some homework done
Ian and Melissa were taking a drink when a drunk Tyler walked up to them
Tyler: Hello Ian, good old pal. I must say, beautiful lady you brought with you tonight
Ian: Go away Tyler, you're drunk
Tyler: No, I think I'm gonna stay a litlle bit longer. I want to get to know you're lady a little bit better. I must say that you're one lucky man Ian. I mean, look at that beautiful ass of hers.
Ian (angry): Don't you dare look at her ass again.
Tyler: Or what? You're gonna hit me?
Melissa: Tyler go away. I know what you did to my sister, how dare you do that to her. She has been through a lot in her life and the least you could do is treat her right
Tyler: What do you mean? I didn't do anything
Melissa: I know, that was the problem and don't you dare look at my ass again cause I don't like you... at all
Tyler (flirty): Well that's to bad cause I do like you and I like your ass even more
Ian (angry): That's enough!
Ian punched Tyler in the face and they started to fight. Melissa screamed at them to stop but they didn't and before they knew it the police arrived. Tyler and Ian were put into the police car and it drove to jail with Melissa following it.
At the prison Ian and Tyler were put into a cell and Melissa talked to the police officer.
Melissa: Sir, can you please tell me what Ian's being accused off?
Police officer: They fought in a public club, other people could've get hurt
Melissa: Can I see him?
Police officer: Yes, follow me
Ian: Hey Mel. I'm sorry that I messed up
Melissa: You didn't mess up, it's the sweetest thing that anyone ever did for me
Ian: I would do anything for you Mel. You know, it's true that I didn't want a long relation with any of the girls I dated but you're special. I feel sparks when I kiss you and I never felt that with anyone else. I like you Mel... a lot
Melissa: I would totally kiss you right now if there wasn't a plastic wall between us.
I'm sorry but I have to go. My mom wants me home at eleven, I'll visit you tomorrow. Do you think you'll get out soon?
Ian: I hope so
Melissa: Me too, bye
Ian: Bye my love
Melissa walked into the house and saw Nora and Loren sitting on the couch.
Melissa (sobbing): Ian is in jail
Loren (shocked): What?!
Nora (shocked): What happened? Sit down and tell us sweetie
Melissa (sobbing): Well, we were at the club and really having fun. But then Tyler came in and started hitting on me like I was a piece of meat. At one moment Ian couldn't take it anymore and started a fight with him.
Loren (hugging Melissa): Mel, that's awful. Are you okay?
Melissa: Yeah, I think so. I'm just really worried about Ian, how are we gonna get him out of there?
So, didn't expect that huh? I have a lot of ideas in my head so review and find out. Let me know if you guys want another chapter.