Silent Night, Deadly night

by AlessNox

John has returned from his trip only to find that Mary has been taken hostage by a murderer who killed in a jealous rage. He and Sherlock must save her and then try to unravel their own love triangle before it goes the same way. Finale.(This series is a rewrite of the original Moving series. The complete work can be found here: archiveofourown dot org /series/36036)

10. PostScript

This series of stories came to me slowly over the course of three years. The Moving story listed on this site is the first fan fiction story that I ever wrote and published on the web, so I left it the way it was. I found, however, that I wasn't completely satisfied with the ending, and so I continued with Underground Thoughts, Damaged, and The Runaway Pact.

Later I revisited the story and felt that I had not done it justice. I started a rewrite from the beginning on Archive of Our Own and made a modified series with the stories Moving, Damaged, Runaway pt 1, and Runaway pt 2 and ending with this story Silent Night Deadly Night. I was trying to resolve and explain the emotions better, but because the work took so long to write, I ended up with errors and inconsistencies in it.

I plan to do an editing pass to fix these problems, but I could use your help to find them. If you noticed an inconsistency from minor to glaring in the series, please leave it in a comment. If you place the word EDIT at the beginning of the post, I will know that it is a detail that needs to be fixed or modified. I need help with spelling and grammar. Britpicking,etc. Don't fear hurting my feelings here. I really want to know what worked and what didn't work. Also, if anyone would like to offer to beta this series, please contact me by PM.

Please tell me any thoughts that you might have of this series.

I sincerely appreciate all of you for reading my stories.

Thank You.

AlessNox