I have another sex scene. This is based on one of the first ideas I had when I started writing. The original story was called Keeping a Secret. In the story, boy Lynn falls for his younger sister Linka. I later scrapped it due to a lack of creative direction. This chapter is one of the sex scenes I had planned. This is also the only genderbent louds entry in The Twenty Shot. With that being said, we are halfway to the end. Once this story is done, I plan on starting Our New Family.
"Where are we going Lynn?" Linka asks. The two have been walking for half an hour. Today is Linka's 12th birthday. Lynn has been given the task of keeping Linka occupied for a few hours until the party was set up. Actually, Lynn volunteered. What he hasn't told anyone was that he has feelings for his younger sister. Funny feelings. "Don't worry, we're almost there." Lynn responded. Lynn took Linka to the arcade. Two hours of games and pizza got her riled up for her birthday.
"That doesn't answer my question."
"Fine, I'll just ruin your birthday surprise."
"Wait, no don't ruin it." Linka pleads. Lynn couldn't help but smile at her.
"We're home." Lynn says. They walk in and Lynn flips on the light switch. "SURPRISE! HAPPY BIRTHDAY LINKA!" The rest of the louds, Claire, and her moms jump out. Balloons and streamers are hung on the walls. A banner reading 'Happy 12th Birthday Linka' is hung up as well. A table full of snacks and punch is set up. And at the center of the table sits a large sheet cake with whipped frosting. Happy 12th Birthday Linka is written in cursive with pink frosting.
"Let's cut the cake and then, we'll open up a few presents." Rita says. Lynn Sr takes the cake into the kitchen. Lynn Sr lights the candles and everyone prepares to sing. "Happy Birthday to you. Cha cha cha. Happy Birthday To You. Cha Cha Cha. Happy Birthday Dear Linka. Happy Birthday to you. Cha cha cha." everyone sang. Linka joyfully blows out her candles.
After eating her birthday cake, Linka goes to open her presents. The first one she opened was from her best friend. It was an entire volume of Ace Savvy comics. Her next present came from her parents. She opened the gift and it was an old fashioned cassette player. Several of Linka's favorite songs were converted to cassette tapes came with the cassette player.
As the night went on, Linka finished opening her presents. She got a present from every one of her brothers, except Lynn. Though he passed it off by saying he ran out of money. Linka got a free car ride coupon from Loki (Wow. That's totally what a 12 year old girl wants on her birthday), a homemade dress from Loni, a ukele from Luke, a mace squirting gag flower from Lane (For those boys who can't take no for an answer), a voodoo doll from Lars (Note to self, never upset Lars), two birthday cards from the twins, since they couldn't buy anything, and a serum from Levi that he said should give Linka temporary powers. Knowing Levi, she is most likely pouring this down the toilet.
After a wonderful party, Claire and her moms went home and everyone is preparing for bed. In her room, Linka finds a note from Lynn on her bed. Meet me in the backyard for your present. Don't tell anyone, the note read. Curious, Linka walks downstairs to the living room. She walks out the back door in the kitchen. "Lynn, where are you?" she asks. Linka looks around and catches no sight of her older brother. Just when she is about to head back into the house, Linka feels a hand tap her shoulder.
"Surprise." Lynn says. Linka jumps up, slightly frightened. He grabs Linka's hand. "Your present is in the shed." he said. "Follow me." He takes her and walks her into the shed. Lynn closes the door behind them. Linka peeks around the shed, only seeing garden tools. "So, where's my present?" Linka asks confused.
"Right here." Lynn responds. He places his hand up Linka's skirt. Linka immediately swats it away.
"What are you doing?"
"I have to confess. I love you. Not just as a brother. I've been lusting for you sis." Linka cringes at Lynn's confession. "We can't date. We're related Lynn." Lynn attempts to grab her hips, Linka only steps back. "Lynn stop. We can't do this." Linka states. Lynn ignores her and keeps on trying to advance. As Linka attempts to fight him off, Lynn's erection manages to poke her in between her legs. "Wow. That felt good." Linka says. Lynn capitalizes.
"Really. How does this feel?" Lynn grabs a handful of Linka's butt. This earns him a joyful moan from his younger sister. "Good. This feels really good Lynn." Lynn takes his other hand and begins to rub Linka's clit. Linka begins to kiss Lynn. After a minute, Lynn pulls the kiss apart. Linka places her arms on his shoulder. Lynn rubs her hips in corcles.
"Linka, do you want your present now?" Lynn asks in lust.
"Yes please. I nred it."
"Okay, hold on a second." Lynn reaches onto a shelf and pulls out a bottle of lube. "You're a tiny girl Linka, so I'm gonna make this easy for you." Lynn opens the tube and squeezes a good amount onto his hand. Linka yanks her panties past her hips and down her legs. She steps out of them and kicks them to the side. Linka bends over, giving Lynn a view of her butt and pink sex. "Do you like it?" Linka asks. Lynn responds by rubbing the lube over both of her holes. He takes a little more and rund it onto the head of his penis.
"Okay sis, do you want it in the front or the back?" Lynn tells her.
"Either one." Linka replies. Lynn grabs her hips and pushes into her lubricated vagina. Linka tensed up, as even with lube, the feeling of Lynn's cock penetrating her sensitive hole stung. However it only stung for a tiny bit. Once Lynn was entirely inside of her he pulled back a bit. Pleasure filled Linka's senses as her older brother pumped in and out of her. Lynn pumps harder into his sister. Something about hearing her loud moans is really driving him crazy. Linka's breathing is beginning to tense. "Lynn, what's happening?" she asks.
"You're about to fond out sis." Lynn says. He proceeds to pump into her inner walls even faster. Linka's moaning becomes erratic. She is overtaken by her very first orgasm. Lynn pulls out and peeps outside, making sure that no one heard Linka. No one came out. Lynn closes the door. Linka pushes him to the ground. "I wanna be on top Lynn." Linka cheerfully states. Lynn grabs her hips and lowers her onto his rod. This time, he entered through her back door. Linka pins his hands down. "I got it." Linka begins to bounce up and down.
Her hands still holding Lynn's as she bounces on his rod. This time, Lynn's breathing begins to tense. "Linka, I'm close." is all Lynn could manage. Orgasm is near. Lynn manages to free his hands. He grabs Linka's butt and thrusts as hard as he could manage. Every thrust earns him a loud moan from his sister. "I'm gonna cum." Lynn shouts before shooting his cum deep into Linka's butthole. The heat overwhelms Linka and she falls onto Lynn's chest. A satisfied grin is on her face.
"Happy Birthday, Birthday girl." Lynn comments. "I love you."
"I love you too." Linka responds before falling asleep on her brother/lover.
This was originally the scene that got their relationship. I'll admit, I'm not the best writer here. And every time I update, I feel as if it could have been better. So, I'm asking you all for advice. What could I do to improve the quality of my writing? Please comment. We are halfway through the Twenty Shot. Ten chapters down. Ten to go. Goodbye and goodnight!