Vampira 1989

Love Fest: Part II

*Author's Note: Sorry this took so long. I've been pretty busy this summer helping out with my little sister's band, but I finally got a long enough break to write "Love Fest: Part II." I tried to make the chapters longer in this one and there may be some spelling or grammatical errors that I over looked before publishing (I noticed this in "Love Fest" and I deeply apologize).

*Author's Note 2: Incase it has been a while since you've read the first part (or if you haven't read the first part) here's a short recap. Melanie is the new girl at Zim and Dib's high school and Dib has fallen for her. Zim believed he hated her at first like he hates all humans, but after she put on her "special charms" he was swept away in a fit of passion. Dib followed Melanie to Dib's to spy on Zim and make sure he wasn't going to perform any experiments on her, but, well, he caught them in a rather awkward position… Also, the Tallest (or the All Mighty Red anyway) have been watching due to a transmission Zim was sending them at the moment Melanie made her move.

Anyway, here's "Love Fest: Part II" and I hope you enjoy it. Oh, and please feel free to leave comments or constructive criticism. I want to be able to improve as a writer, so please, be honest. Thanks! ^^

Chapter 1: Dib's Turn

Dib carefully climbed down from his hiding place in the series of pipes to the floor. When he looked up, he was face to face with Gir. He jumped and bit back a shout of surprise.

"What are you doing?" he hissed, trying to steady his racing heart.

"Filming a porno!" Gir yelled. Dib felt like running as Melanie and Zim looked up.

"Dib!" Zim shouted, jumping to his feet. "What the hell are you doing here? Were you spying on us?"

"NO!" Dib practically squeaked. "I…uh…was checking on her! On Melanie! I care about her and I wanted to make sure you weren't going to do one of your funny experiments on her!"

"You care about me?" Melanie piped up. Dib and Zim turned their attention to the girl. She was holding up her dress as a cover for her naked body, but she was smiling like her old self.

"Yes," Dib admitted, his voice softening, slowly approaching her. "And I don't believe Zim made love to you the right way."

"WHAT DO YOU MEAN I DIDN'T-!" Zim started to shout when Melanie raised a hand to silence him.

"How would you make love to me then?" she asked. Her voice was so…sensual. And her face…her angelic face was twisted with lust. Melanie let the dress she was holding slip through her fingers, revealing her naked body. Dib was already hard again. He was right over her now, looking down at her. He got down on his knees so he was on the same level as her.

"Like this," he whispered, his voice husky as he pulled her into a sweet, but passionate, kiss.

"WOOHOO! MORE PORN!" Gir screamed. Melanie laughed, but Dib ignored the robot. He kissed Melanie again, her lips tasting sweeter than honey. She dropped her dress and slid her hands up his chest, one snaking around his neck and twirling his hair between her fingers while the other pressed against his back between his shoulder blades, pulling him closer to her. He felt himself growing hard when her small breasts pressed against him. He stripped off his clothes quickly and felt a surge of pride at the approving grin Melanie gave him as she stared at his member (eleven inches in length and four inches in girth) {and just incase you didn't read the Author's Note, they're about 4-5 years older than they are in the series}.

"How do you want me?" Melanie asked. Dib couldn't figure out how she could look as sweet as an angel, yet as seductive as a demon at the same time; all he knew was that at this moment he really didn't care because it was turning him on even more.

Dib kissed Melanie sweetly, but passionately, on the lips and straddled her, her legs wrapping around his hips as he lowered her to the floor on her back.

"Are you still watching this smut?" the All Mighty Purple shrieked. The All Mighty Red gobbled down a few doughnuts one of the crewman had delivered to him as he watched the big-headed human boy mount the human girl, ignoring the other Tallest.

'She's becoming quite popular,' he noted as he watched the two humans mating ritual. 'First Zim, now the human…what's his name? Don? Dexter?'

"Hello! Are you even listening to me?" The All Mighty Purple stepped in front of the All Mighty Red, blocking his view of Zim's "lair."

"What do you want?" Red snapped. "I'm busy!"

"'Busy' is invading other planets!" Purple snapped back. "You're watching…PORN!"

"Not so loud!" Red hissed. "They'll hear you!" The A. M. Purple stared at A. M. Red in horror.

"Great! First you're a pervert and now you're a Peeping Tom! That's just perfect! How do you expect other invaders to look up to you if you're sitting in the command center watching two humans fornicate?" Red rolled his eyes.

"Just leave me alone. If you're going to nag me at least bring me some snacks when you do." Purple looked royally pissed as he marched huffily from the room.

'He sounds like a jealous wife,' Red thought laughingly as he returned his attention to the screen.

Zim watched in agitated silence as Dib thrust his hard man meat into Melanie's wet cunt.

'How can that big-headed worm baby be bigger than me?' he screamed in his head. 'He is at least three inches longer than me! Granted, my girth is twice his, but even so!' Zim was so infuriated (and jealous) that his thoughts no longer seemed to make sense to him.

Today was just turning out worse and worse for him. First he gets blown off by the Tallest when he was trying to get Irken supplies for his latest plan to take over Earth, this human girl sneaks into his secret lair and interrupts his blueprint drawings, then after fucking him, she had turned around and started fucking his arch enemy! Right in front of him! And now he had learned that Dib's manhood was even longer than his?

Zim's internal rantings were interrupted by Gir's annoying shrieks and "whoop whoop!" noises as he filmed Dib defiling the sweet girl.

"GIR!" Zim bellowed. "STOP MAKING THOSE STUPID SOUNDS!" Gir pouted, but did not protest further (nor did he stop filming). Zim glowered at the couple, trying to block out the panting and moans. He couldn't take it anymore! He could not sit around and watch his enemy defile the young human female that he had had the pleasure of deflowering!

Zim's rage and internal ranting faltered.

'That's right,' he thought, pride swelling in his chest. 'I, Zim, had her first! All Dib gets are seconds! I took her purity! She isn't an angel anymore.'

Melanie laid on the floor holding Dib's head into her breasts as he thrust his hard dick into her pussy. She could tell he was enjoying himself from his panting and soft moans and gasps. She was enjoying herself, but not as much as with him. She glanced over at the Irken sitting on the floor Indian-style beside Gir (still filming the whole thing with his camera), sulking. Dib was sweet, but Zim was…different. He hadn't been afraid to be rough with her. He had listened to her body language and had given her what she wanted. Maybe it was an alien thing. Melanie knew this was Dib's first time (at least she assumed it was), but after her love-making with Zim, Dib's way of doing things was…well…not so good.

'I'll give him a little more time," Melanie thought as Dib kissed her neck. She felt the fire from his lips, but it just wasn't the same.

"Dib?" Melanie asked, finally having mustered up the courage. Dib looked up, his cheeks very pink.

"Yeah?" he asked somewhat breathless.

"Um…could you…"

"What?" Dib asked, looking confused.

"Could you…" Melanie took in a deep breath to calm her nerves. There was just no easy way to say this. "Dib, could you maybe be a little more…rough…or…something?"

Chapter 2: HE WAS BETTER?

Dib stared at the sweet creature before him in horror as Zim and Gir howled with laughter behind him. She wanted him to be rough? She seemed like the gentle type to him! He couldn't help but watch as the image of her being perfect and loving everything he did crack, just a little.

"Do you want me to be rough with you?" he asked, trying to understand exactly what Melanie was asking of him.

"Well, I'm not sure," she admitted. She was blushing and looked uncomfortable, making her look adorable. "Maybe not rough, but there's just something…missing." Dib nodded slowly as he took all of this in. Melanie had liked the way Zim had made love to her better. She would prefer to be with the Irken than him. Dib gazed into Melanie's chocolate-brown eyes, determination coursing through his veins.

'I'll just have to try harder,' he decided silently as he slammed his lips down on Melanie's causing her to give a sound of surprise. He put as much passion as he could muster into that single kiss, holding it for as long as he could. After what felt like centuries, he pulled away and looked into Melanie's pretty face. Her eyes, once shinning with innocence and happiness, had been clouded over with lust. She didn't speak. Instead, she pulled him into another hard kiss, sending shock waves through his entire body. Dib returned the kiss and moved his lips away from hers to her neck. His hands moved to her ears which he gently brushed with his finger tips. He grinned into the nape of her neck as he felt her shutter and give a soft moan. He nibbled and sucked her neck as he massaged her ears. His cock had grown hard again and he was happy when he noticed that she was growing very wet. Dib began to thrust, slow, but deep. Melanie moaned louder. Her hands moved to her breasts and she began to rub them. Dib slowly moved his hands away from Melanie's ears, letting his fingertips lightly brush her ears, neck, and shoulders as he cupped his hands over hers. She slowly slid her hands out from under his and leaned back, her hands behind her, as Dib began fondling her breasts. She practically shrieked when he squeezed her breasts hard and thrust his hard cock deeper inside of her at the same time.

"Better?" Dib whispered into her ear. Melanie nodded, seeming to be enjoying herself too much to actually form words.

'Shit!' Zim thought, feeling uneasy. He couldn't pinpoint the exact emotion he was feeling the strongest. There were too many! 'Dib's rebounded and is pleasuring her!'

He didn't want to watch, yet he couldn't bring himself to look away. Zim sneered when he saw Dib nibble on Melanie's ear lobe and causing her to cry, "Ooooh!" Zim had to admit that for being inexperienced and a human Dib knew how to use his hands. He ogled the two humans as Dib lowered his head from Melanie's earlobe to her breasts. He took one of Melanie's erect nipples into his mouth and bit it. Melanie shrieked. She grabbed Dib's head, moaning deeply as he thrust his cock harder and faster into her pussy.

'I never thought to do that. Females on our planet only use those for nursing. I never believed that they would be a tool for her pleasure as well.' Zim watched, his intrigue causing him to keep watching, but his anger and jealousy were still boiling like lava deep inside him.

Dib moved his right hand down to Melanie's loins to her pleasure spot (Zim was not sure what this was called on humans, but he had quickly learned that it was just as sensitive as an Irken's leku). Melanie cried out in pleasure as Dib stroked her pleasure spot. She was panting heavily and her moans were becoming more frequent. Zim knew that it wouldn't be long before she would cum.

The All Mighty Red sipped his soda, continuing to watch the human girl and boy fucking. The atmosphere of the command center was rather awkward ever since the All Mighty Purple had returned with Red's snacks and had slumped down in the chair beside him, glaring at him the whole time.

'What the hell is his problem?' Red thought in aggravation. 'So what if I want to watch some live porn? It's not like anyone will actually complain. The only one who is upset about this whole thing is him.' He glanced over at the A. M. Purple. Purple's glare had not faltered and he was still slumped down in the chair beside him, arms folded. His eyes were boring holes into Red and it was really starting to bother him.

"What?" he snapped. "I know you want to say something to me, so say it!"

"You're a pig!" Purple spat emphasizing every syllable. He seemed to want to make sure that Red could hear the venom in his voice.

"Because I take pleasure in seeing other people getting laid?"

"You know damn well what I mean! You're misusing Irken technology!" Red groaned.

"Excuse me for wanting a little entertainment in my life! It's not like we're getting laid anytime soon. Being the rulers of an empire is a fulltime job. We have no time for personal affairs!" Red sighed, trying to calm his frustration with his associate.

"I haven't been laid since Operation Doom I," he explained to the All Mighty Purple. "This is the closest I'm probably going to get to that for a long time. I know it's been longer since you were laid so you can't tell me that you're not turned on by this."

"No!" Red smirked when he heard the defensive tone in Purple's voice. "It's disgusting! So many germs!"

"No wonder you don't get laid…" Red grumbled, turning back to the screen.

"DIB!" the human girl was screaming.

"DAMMIT! YOU MADE ME MISS THE BEST PART!" Red thundered, sending a death glare at Purple.

"Idiot," Purple muttered so quietly Red almost didn't hear him. Red narrowed his eyes further in suspicion at the other Irken Tallest who was looking very bored. "The boy isn't finished. If he isn't finished, she will climax at least once more before he does." Red stared questioningly at Purple for a moment before turning back to the screen. The humans hadn't stopped! All Mighty Purple was right!

'How did he know when he wasn't even watching? Could he really get all of that just from listening?' Red pondered.

Dib was thoroughly enjoying hearing Melanie scream his name in climax. This caused him to only thrust harder. He felt like he was going to explode at any given moment. His climax was near. To make things better, Zim looked extremely jealous! He had been glaring at Dib so hard it seemed that he was hoping he could make Dib's head explode with his mind!

Dib listened to Melanie's body language, her gasps and moans as he was bringing her to yet another climax. She pushed her head into his chest, kissing him. He moaned. She moved her mouth to his right nipple and bit it hard. Dib cried out in pain. Despite the pain it brought him even closer to his climax. Melanie shoved him hard onto the floor and was humping him wildly. Dib was no longer doing any of the work but it still pleased him. Within seconds he felt as if his loins had just exploded as he came inside of her. Melanie came moments later and climbed off of him, lying next to him on the floor, panting.

"Was that okay?" Dib asked once he'd caught his breath. Melanie rolled onto her side so she was facing him and kissed his cheek.

"It was wonderful," she said breathily. "Zim was really good. I mean REALLY good! But you were so…passionate! Zim didn't have as much passion as you did." She sat up enough for Dib to see her face.

"You really love me, don't you?" Dib felt himself blush and he nodded slowly. Melanie kissed him lightly on the lips and cuddled beside him.

'GOD DAMN IT!' Zim screamed internally in outrage. 'DIB WAS BETTER THAN ME, THE ALL POWERFUL ZIM?'

"Awww, someone's jealous!" Gir teased in his ear turning the video camera on him. Zim tried to punch the robot, but Gir flew up into the air, laughing hysterically.

"GIR!" Zim hollered. "Give me that camera!"

"NO!" Gir screamed back, zooming around the lab as Zim chased him. "I'm gonna sell the video and make a fortune! WOOHOO!"