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Chapter 9

Claire and Susie came over and they did some of my make-up. I just decided to keep my brown curls. They applied some mascara, and eye line. Plus my eye shadow. "You looked good." Susie said while Claire nodded her head.

"Here are your clothes. Wear these shoes." They threw what I was wearing at me. I went in my bathroom putting on my strapless blue tie dye shirt. I put on my white shorts. I put on the light blue converse they threw at me.

I looked pretty cute. I swear I might wear these clothes for every date I go on. I walk out of my bathroom.

"Oh my god! You look so amazing." Claire exclaimed. I smiled at her.

There was a knock on the front door. I walked down to the front door. I opened the door. It was Jacob. "Why the hell are you here?" I asked.

"Your father told me to come here." Jacob said and I hugged him. "You looked really pretty. So who picked out the outfit?" He asked.

"Susie and Claire. They said I had to get ready." I said. He smirked a little. "Are you jealous?" I asked.

"Yes." He replied quickly. "Why did you say yes to the date?" He asked.

"I said yes because I better let those wolves have their fun. Plus I knew Seth was not expecting an answer and I thought it would be fun to just have fun." I said truthfully. He just stared at me.

"Jacob." My dad snapped. "Here now." He hissed. "What did you do to her?" He asked.

"I talked to her and she hugged me." He said the truth.

"Uh…" I stared but Seth was at the door. "Bye. Have fun I guess. SUSIE AND CLAIRE I AM LEAVING!" I yelled.

They both came down laughing. "Have fun on your date. Oh hi Jake." Claire said leaving out the door with Susie. Jake just waved. I walked out the door and followed Seth.

"So where do you want to go?" Seth asked. He was letting me pick. I had no idea were I wanted to go. "What do you think?" He asked.

"The carnival that is about an hour away." I said randomly out of my mind. It was saying in on the news sometime when I heard it and it was open today or yesterday. "So lets go to it now." We got in the car. "Do you know how to drive?"

"Yes I just don't have license. But tell me the truth. Why the hell would you say yes? I thought you wouldn't answer. I was just doing it for a certain reason." He asked.

"I said yes so the werewolves could have there fun. I didn't really want to stay home. Plus this isn't really like a date. It is more like get together friend thing. But why did you ask me except the werewolves told me to?" I asked.

"No reason. Just because the werewolves told me too." Seth said while I laughed a little. "I don't really have another reason. You know I don't love you like Jake does. But you really meant that. When you said I love you for that and hugged me. You really meant that as a brother thing."

"Why the hell wouldn't I?" I ask. "You are the next closest werewolf to me. You are like my brother I always wanted. But I love Jacob. But I didn't mean to get pregnant with him. I was drunk." I say.

We talked about a lot of things that best friends would do. Or brother and sister would talk about. "We're here." Seth said finally. I was getting carsick. It was about 6pm. It closed a 11pm. We can leave at that time and get home at 12am.

"Okay let's do…" Seth said. "Why did we go to a carnival when you're pregnant?" He asked me.

"You asked me were I wanted to go." I reply. "Plus I am strong enough. Remember what I am. Let's do bumper cars." I say.

We were running all over the place. I pulled Seth all over by grabbing his hand while we just laugh and talk. I felt like I was six years old again. Aunt Alice use to take me in the summer every Saturday.

Around ten o'clock we go on the Ferris wheel. We both sit across from each other. "This was really fun. I have to get out more often instead hanging out with a bunch of werewolves." I say. Seth smirks.

The wind started blowing and it made me shiver. "I had fun too." Seth admits. I forgot a jacket. Now I was freezing. The wind was cold. We were going up and down and soon there was a sudden stop.

We were at the top. "Are you cold?" He asked. I nodded yes and moved towards him. He was so warm. My ice cold skin went away in soft warm skin.

"What the hell happened?" I asked.

"I think it broke down." Seth replies.

Seth's Pov~

Her skin was ice cold but soon after about ten minutes her skin was warm. The Ferris wheel was broke down and we were at the top.

Why couldn't we just jump? Oh yeah it is too much of a risk for the humans to see us. I wish it was just us two and we could do anything. Be our true monster you could say. But this is a carnival.

"So what is there to do now?" I ask. She just looked at me like she had no damn idea.

"So..." She begins. "Tell me the story of the newborns like a newborn Bree." I didn't know much but I knew some.

"Well they were trying to kill Bella your mom." I began the story. "To let you know I don't know much. I was up in the mountains with Bella and Edward. But they were fighting down there.

"But…" I didn't know what to say next. "What the hell do you want to know?" I ask.

"I wanna know what happen in the mountains and Bree." She answers.

"In the mountains it was silent. I was sort of that back-up protector." I began. Plus who the hell was Bree? "Edward and Bella were talking about there favorite moment because last night it was pretty cold. So Jacob had to go in there and be her space heater. That would have made Edward top ten least favorite things with Bella." Nessie smiles a little.

"What happen in the morning?"

Nessie's Pov~

Jacob sleeping with my mom, but she was cold and Jacob was there to warm her up, so I can forgive him for that. "What happen the morning?" I ask.

"Well you know Edward and Bella are discussing there top ten moments. Edward knew Jacob was listening. He said he was getting married to Bella. Jacob left while Edward had to go get him. Bella had to give one good reason why she wanted him to stay." He stopped.

"Tell me the good reason." I commanded.

"Bella kept saying you are too important to me. I need you. Jacob kept saying no good enough. Your mom said kiss me. Jacob looked stunned. He went over and kissed Bella. Then a guy named Riley came over. Victoria came. I and Edward killed them both." He said. "I don't know who Bree. Ask your parents about that."

Without thinking I went closer to his lips. Our lips were about to touch but Seth turned his head away. I blush a little.

The Ferris wheel started moving again. We got off and headed to the car. I and Seht walk into my house.

"Least Seth brings my daughter home at a reasonable time." Dad says.

"Dad, Jacob always brings me home at this time." I say. "Who is the hell is Bree?" I asked.

"LANGUAGE RENESMEE CARLIE CULLEN!" Dad screamed. "Who the hell did you hear Bree about? How do you know about the newborns?" He blasted questions at me while my mother rushed into the room.

I knew I had to tell them.


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