Dear readers. My grade card unexpectedly was out today. Guess what my math teacher put in my grade card.

Mathematics: Effort: C

: Homework: D

What happen next? My parents were angry as hell; no excuses allowed. I will have a lot of shits to do from here on.

First order: I am forbid to touch my laptop until I finish math mock exam with B or higher. The mock exams is in mid of November.

Second: I will have extra math lesson everyday starting from October 1st. Unlike the first order, I will still continue to have lesson even after I pass mock exam.

You can guess what sort of other shit I have to do. Wonder why thai parent are so strict? All parents care about these days are competition between their child and other's child! Making sure their kid can compete with other kids nationwide. Check if there child can make other feel like a fool in front of the teachers. Fuck yeah!

I'm sorry, very very sorry. For the next two month I won't be updating nor writing anything. I will try my best in the mock exam, try to get an A, after passing is begging them to let me out from the math lesson. I will sure to update as soon as I can.

altenativefuturefan27:

SOOOOOOOO COOL BADASS
THE BEST FANFIC I EVER READ NOW ISSEI WILL CREATE A CHAOS
Ideas
Make him King and commander of Strayed Devils
And make him eat Devils to freakout the devils
note
Sorry if my grammar is bad but i am excited the Best story i ever read updatesoon

Me: Sorry to ruin your wish. Really sorry.

Kireas:

I know that it has been a while since you posted this chapter but I thought I'd review anyway, hopefully you do read it, if not, then it can't be helped.

The concept which your fanfic is based on is interesting, though the reason for the cause is too far-fetched. The "trigger", if you will, for the predecessors attempt at brainwashing the current Sekiryuutei into going Juggernaut is that the current host would have to be experiencing the extreme of an emotion, be it strong desire for victory, strong greed, etc. Ise's feelings at that time would have been more like of, "Oh what? So someone got hurt and somehow it's MY fault?The hell did I do?"-type of feeling. It's a mix of confusion and guilt at the same time but nothing so extreme to the point where it warrants a brainwash.

From here on out, what I'll be talking about is the mechanics of the system in the HSDD world and the logical occurrence of events so if you didn't really take that into consideration, then please ignore the wall of text below.

The phenomenon of the destruction of the area upon activation of Juggernaut Drive is similar to what you see in Dragonball Z when someone transforms into a new form, the way the crater just cuts into the ground like hot knife through butter with the transforming person at the center of it. The author of the HSDD novel should be a huge fan of the DB series considering the fact that he has actually referenced it a few times directly and indirectly. In the event of the scenery changing caused by the J-Drive transformation, it's the latter.

There are two problems here, the first one is something that can happy, albeit it having a really low chance, but not impossible. The second one is something which would not happen unless events prior to the start of this fanfic would be different from the original.

Anyway, lets address the first problem first. I can not see how Gremory and Sitri would have enough time to react to transformation of J-Drive and reduce the damage caused. Plus, it has been stated by Vali that the transformation itself could easily blow half, if not the entire town which the cast is living in, away. While the school does have barriers protecting it, anything protected by some form of a shell or armor, be it in real life or in the 2D-verse, have the same general weakness. Said protection is useless if the attack comes from within. Granted that he could've went berserk in the club room and that the Gremory group was able to stall for time and someone went to get Rias, Akeno and Sitri group in there and transfer him right in the nick of time the moment he went berserk, hence, the minimal yet devastating damage caused. Far-fetched but not impossible.

Now, to the next problem. Sekiryuutei/Chichiryuutei/Oppai Dragon/Hyoudou Issei, is essentially a household name in the Underworld. Even if he was in J-Drive form and caused damage and maybe even killed a few people, I'm pretty sure it wouldn't have warranted him to be addressed as a stray. For one, he did not leave his master's side nor declared any intention to do so. Nor did he attack his master or attempted it. Considering the fact that the current Yondai Maou have taken a huge liking to him, mainly Sirzechs and that he has the final say in most things, he would've probably had Gremory group and others act as a subjugation force to calm him down, and then when things settled down, it would've been water under the bridge.

From what I can tell, you may have been rushing the opening. Understandable, since everyone wants to write/read the part where the action is at, no one needs the boring everyday life stuff, we want the GOODS! But the starting is required so as to foreshadow and set things in stone for the action scenes. They are only that good because the lead-up to it was good.

Anyway, I have ranted on enough, next review will probably be at your latest chapter and cover the entire thing as a whole. Of course, with all that I have said, this is ultimately your fanfic, your world and therefore, your rules. OOC and some OP at times is fine since it allows the character to be seen from a different angle, but it would be nice if things were done in ways so that it would be more of, "This is something that can possibly happen", instead of making it feel forced.

Me: Lol, sorry. I'll be sure to clean all this mess up when I pass mock. Thanks for pointing things out! In fact, rant all about the bad point in my fic! I will read all comment and fix things up!

Guest:

Nice chapter, is the person that walked in and collapsed a guy or a girl, cause it might seem to be a spelling mistake.

Me: He's a guy, sorry. It is my spelling mistake, partly due to me reading IS and considering a Charl as a character in my fic. Scraped though.

warriorseadra:

Interesting, although not much happened, I still wonder who this person that just came in is. I'm a bit confused by Ise's personality, mainly why be mad at the the govnor and maou? Will he be mad at everyone from his past life? I thought he just didn't like that no one one from his little group understood his feelings. If anything, that commercial shows that they still trust him. As for the secret, doesn't he trust his new comrades that he's keeping it a secret?

Me: Not really, more like he don't wanna cause an uproar or boast his power. 'To fool your enemy you must fool your allies first'. Think of it like this. But thank you for pointing this out. My bad and my mistake.

Kire98:

As awesome as expected! continue!

Me: Sorry to ruin your hope, Kire98. But I'll continue as soon as I can. Thank you for all of your review!