HEY BOYS AND GIRLS!!!!!!! HERE IT IS!!!!! THE CHAPTER MOST OF YOU HAVE BEEN WAITING FOR!!! "YUKI AND TOHRU'S NIGHT OF ROMANCE!" (as said by Ayame :P) hehe I'm really nervous about putting this here since it's my first time..haha I'm a virgin doing this. lol ok well enough of my chit-chat. I am have happy to present chapter 10!!!! hope you like it!!!!

WARNING: LEMON! AKA SEXUAL CONTENT!! BLAH BLAH BLAH...IF YOU'RE NOT INTO THE HORNY DETAILS AND STUFF THEN I SUGGEST YOU WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER...BUT IF YOU LIKE ALL THE LOVE MAKING THEN GO AHEAD AND READ!!! WHOOO! (haha i'm hyper...can you tell:D XD)

Chapter 10. Caressed by Moonlight

The drive home was annoyingly quiet for Yuki. It was an odd sort of quiet, the kind of quiet that still had noise in it and yet there was still silence. He hated this. The uncomfortable silence that was hovering in the air like a thick cloud of smog.

He felt uneasy.

He had wanted to spend alone time with Tohru, but the fact that they would now be alone the whole night hit him like a ton of bricks. It wasn't a bad thing though; having Tohru spend this time with him had been a recurring thought, some what of a fantasy he'd been having for the past few days. The thing that made him so nervous was that there were many things that could happen between the kiss of twilight and the caress of dawn.

Not only that, it had been such a long time since he'd been intimate with Tohru. The first and only time had been the night she left, and he could hardly say that they actually knew what they were doing. There was a sweet awkwardness the night that they made love for the first time, and he was afraid that same awkwardness would still be there and he really didn't want to deal with that feeling again.

In truth, he really didn't know if he could truly romance Tohru again. To be so comfortable with someone usually took time.

Yuki began to think back to the last four years and not once during the time Tohru had been gone had he made any attempt to be with another woman. Sure there had been many beautifully females who made it clear to him that they were available, but every one of them was turned down by him. He couldn't risk them finding out about the curse. At least that's what he told himself. In all reality, it was that he was still in love with Tohru and always would be.

He looked at her from the corner of his eye, sitting across from him in the passenger's seat of his car. All he could glimpse was the side of her pretty face; she was looking out the window intently, not seeming to notice the choking tension in the vehicle. She looked lovely, of course, still dressed in that perfect sparkling turquoise dress he had bought her.

He sighed. He wanted to break the silence, but when he would open his mouth to speak, nothing would come to mind and he would inevitably close his mouth to continue driving in the annoying quietness.

They were more than halfway home now. 'Thank goodness,' he thought to himself. They were driving on a street near his apartment. It wasn't long before he turned the corner to his street and parked the car in the driveway.

Yuki helped Tohru out of the car, giving her his hand to step out. He smiled nervously at her for a brief moment before they walked to the front door. It took him a while to open the door though because his hands were a damp with sweat.

Finally they were in the apartment. He flipped on the switch to the living room light, making his eyes take a while to adjust to the sudden brightness of the room. He was still holding on to Tohru's hand, and it wasn't until he looked at her that he let it go.

She was looking at him with a subtle smile, her face beaming up at him gorgeously.

"Yuki, I just want to tell you once again how wonderful tonight was. I loved every moment of it," she said, her face glowing with happiness. He had made her happy tonight. That was better than anything he could imagine at this moment.

He smiled back at her. "I'm very glad you had a great time. I was nervous that you wouldn't like everything that I planned for you tonight." His voice showed a relief in it that Tohru seemed to catch.

"No," she said quickly, still looking up at him, "every thing was just… perfect," she finished with a whisper. She slowly stepped closer to him, their bodies facing each other, only an inch apart. He was only a couple of inches taller than her since she had high heels on, their faces were nearly leveled.

Looking up at him she let out a small sigh, as if that one movement had been somewhat of a challenge for her. He continued to look at her, watching the way the light made her gleam with so much beauty, as if she were some sort of unnatural being that was putting a charm on him.

She looked deep into his eyes, searching for something. Did she want him to kiss her at this moment? That wouldn't be a bad idea though. A kiss was an easy way to avoid the silence that had gone on all throughout their drive home. Maybe he should give it a try? He thought to himself, debating the possibilities.

Deciding what to do, he lifted his right hand, placed it in the small of Tohru's back and calmly pulled her close to him, pressing her body against his, quickly getting rid of the little inch of space between them. He looked at her; her eyes grew wide at the unexpected movement. Uncertainty soon crept into him. Maybe she didn't want him to kiss her or hold her like this. Maybe this was all too sudden.

His head was immediately filled with worries.

But his doubts went away quickly after he looked deeper into her eyes. They stared back at him strangly. They were the same kind of eyes she had given him the night he saw her in her night gown, filled with a burning desire.

Her eyes were begging him now as he looked at her; they were urging him to kiss her. A thought came to mind that if Tohru wasn't the way she was— polite and somewhat shy—she probably would have made the first move herself, but she wasn't so forward. Well, in her own way she was being forward, but she wasn't so bold as to just grab his head and bring his lips on to hers in a crash of heat. No, that wasn't how Tohru was, but he certainly wished that was so.

The little image in Yuki's head gave him a tightened sensation low in his stomach, making him close his eyes and let out a long sigh. When he finally opened his eyes he found Tohru staring at him still, but her face was full of concern now.

"Yuki, are you alri—"

It was at that moment that he leaned in to kiss her, stopping her from finishing her sentence. His mouth catching her slightly parted lips in a sensuous kiss. His hands pushed on her back, pressing their bodies even closer. All the while her hands rested on his sides, grabbing fabric from his jacket, not quite sure what do to do with them. He kissed her with all the passion that he could, his tongue licking across her soft, soft lips, asking her to open her mouth more to let him in. She willingly gave in, parting her lips to let their tongues meet for the first time.

He swirled his tongue in her mouth, the wetness and heat of the kiss gave him another sensation low in his belly, causing him to moan deep in his throat. Tohru stopped grabbing the sides of his jacket and slid her hands onto his chest. She soon began to unbutton the jacket from bottom to top, slow and calm; his heart beat faster and faster with every button that she undid. Once she was done, she slid her hands up to the collar and slipped the jacket off Yuki's shoulders, never letting the kiss break off. The jacket fell to the floor in a quiet motion. Without delay, her hands went up to the back of his neck while her tongue danced delicately with his.

Yuki's hands shortly found themselves along the sides of Tohru's waist; the bodice of the dress was tight on her, making her waist even tinier than usual. He broke the kiss now, taking a breath of air. His lips slowly started to make a trail of kisses from her mouth to her cheek, then slowly down to her long and slender neck, switching from side to side so as not to leave any part left untouched by his lips. She gasped as he kissed the place on her neck where it meets the shoulder; he sucked lightly on it, making sure not to leave any kind of marking on her perfect pale skin. Her hands played through his soft hair, twirling it through her fingers. Yuki soon started to lift his head back up to Tohru's face, and rested his lips softly on hers, her eyes half closed, half open as if she had just woken up from a dream.

"Yuki," she whispered against his mouth, letting her warm breath breeze across his lips. The word was simple, but she said it with such yearning that that one small word made his insides twist with desire. He had to have her, he had waited for far too long, and his body ached for her, ached for her touch and kisses all over his body. But he couldn't rush her; he couldn't do that to Tohru. She was the mother of his child; he couldn't just treat her like some sort of sex toy. He had to ask if this was going too fast for her. He had to know now because he didn't know what he would do if they continued and then she unexpectedly told him to stop. He didn't think he'd have such control over himself if she told him to not go on with it at the brink of their passion. Even at this moment he didn't know if he had control over himself to not rip off her dress and take her right then and there.

No, he had to know at this moment before they continued with anything.

He tried to calm his breathing before he spoke, his mouth still pressed lightly on hers. "Tohru, do you want this?"

"Yuki, what do you mean?" she asked almost innocently, though it was hard to think of her as innocent anymore.

He swallowed hard before asking again. "Do you still want me…even after all these years?" He questioned softly, still holding her against him, her arms wrapped gracefully behind his neck.

He waited patiently for her response, taking in all that was happening to their bodies just by being so wonderfully close; he could literally feel her heart pound against his chest, her breathing, fast and steady.

"I still want you…I always will…Yuki, I love you," she answered tenderly. Her eyes slowly closed just as she pressed her lips against his in a tender kiss. It was sweet and so full of love...

"I love you, Yuki….I love you…" she mumbled in between small kissed that she placed on his lips.

"Tohru, I love you too…" he replied as well, thankful that after all these years he had not waited for her in vain.

This time she was the one whose tongue was asking for entrance, and this time she was the one who drew their bodies together in a tight embrace. The kiss began to heat up once more, sending shivers down Yuki's spine. Before it got too out of hand Yuki broke the bond once again. He looked at her; her lips were already swollen and her cheeks flushed, he guessed that he must have looked the same way. Her hair had fallen out of its bun, and was now draped around her face and shoulders like a curtain of soft brown waves.

She looked very erotic.

"Would you like to go to my bedroom?" he asked a little too eagerly. She nodded with a small and slightly seductive smile before he scooped her up in his arms and walked them both to his room.

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They were in Yuki's room now. It was dark and only a pale light from the moon could be seen from his only window. Tohru was in Yuki's arms still. He had carried her in his arms all the way from the living room and was now making his way to the bed.

She looked at him closely. The moonlight danced on his face, making him glow with a radiance she had never seen before. All the while the sparkles from her dress added a dash of bluish-green color to them both, making even her look inhuman as she glanced across the room to a mirror.

He set her down gently on the edge of the bed. He looked at her then put one knee down to kneel on the floor. She looked at him quizzically, not quite sure what he was up to. For a moment she thought he was going to propose to her, but he merely glanced down to her feet and she soon realized what he was about to do. She still had her high heels on and he was going to take them off for her. 'How sweet,' she thought awkwardly as he took her left foot in his hand and began to undo the strap, sliding the shoe off her foot.

"Thanks," she said, trying to hold off a giggle as he touched the bottom of her foot. He soon took off the other shoe and placed them neatly underneath the bed. Yuki smiled at her and then kissed her on her lips, bringing a rise of feelings deep within her body.

He held her elbows now, making her rise off of the bed to stand up with him. His hands left her elbows to embrace her body and settle on her back. The zipper was in the back and she wondered if he was going to be the one to undress her or if she was going to have to put on a show for him. She was hoping that he was going to be the one to do it. She was still kind of nervous with being provocative.

To her luck, Yuki found the zipper and began to unzip the dress…very, very slowly. Her heart raced as he deliberately touched the unclothed skin as the dress began to open from the back. A sigh came out of her once he finished. They were still kissing passionately as he did all this.

He pulled away from her once the zipper was all the way down, her body free of the tightness around her chest and stomach caused by the dress. Soon she found Yuki giving her wet kisses from her neck, to her shoulders, then over the tops of her breasts. The kisses were soft, making her want more. It had been too long a time since his lips had caressed her body in such a way. She loved every moment of it, but she suddenly remembered something.

The scar on her body.

She had gotten so caught up in the heat of the moment that she had forgotten that Akito had left her body with a terrible mark that would never go away. She didn't want him to see it, but she couldn't just keep it from him. If she was going to be with Yuki then he had to know about the scar, even if she didn't like it. She had to tell him about it.

"Yuki, wait," she said just before he was about to slip off the dress. He gazed at her, a look of confusion written all over his handsome face. He was probably thinking that she didn't want to be with him, but that was far from the truth.

"What's wrong, Tohru? Did I do something wrong?" he instantly questioned, his purple eyes searching her teal ones with an eager look.

"There's something I have to tell you," she replied, strands of hair fell down her face, creating a thin veil over her eyes.

"What is it?"

"Yuki, you remember when Akito cut me right?"

"Yes. I remember. What about it?"

"You see, it left a scar on my body…a really bad one. A-and I'm afraid you might think its…its hideous," she finished sadly, her eyes still hidden from him. Yuki lifted Tohru's face with his hand and looked deep into her eyes, a tear gleamed on the corner of her face and he wiped it off with his thumb.

"Tohru, nothing Akito did can change my mind about you," he whispered in her ear before he leaned in to place a light kiss on her lips. This somewhat reassured her, but she was still afraid of what he might think when he saw the mark.

After a couple of seconds, he placed his hands on the sides of her dress and slowly started to pull it down. Tohru had put her hands over his as an attempt to stop him, but he kissed her she reluctantly gave in and let him continue. As he slid the dress down her slender body, he kissed the skin that was gradually being exposed. He kissed the tops of her breasts first; a lacy, pale pink strapless bra covered her. It was then that he saw the first glimpse of her scar. She knew it because the scar started in between her breasts.

Yuki seemed to stay in that spot for a while; she looked down at him to see that he was looking at the scar carefully. He raised a hand to it and gently glided his finger over the raised abrasion. The moment his finger touched the damaged skin she jumped. There was a sharp pain that coursed through her from head to toe at that moment. She closed her eyes, her hands bawled up in fists; she felt like she was going to cry out in pain. His touch hurt her for some reason. The scar had never reacted to touch before. This was something new and scared her very much.

"Did I hurt you?" he asked strangely. She nodded, not quite sure if her voice worked at the moment due to the sudden pain.

"Has it always hurt?" he asked, looking at her with worried eyes now. She shook her head at the question. She quickly began to feel uncomfortable, as if she were at the doctor's office, being examined for something.

There was a look of thought on Yuki's face before he continued to glide his finger over the scar for a while longer, each touch sending that sharp pain through her. She was about to tell him to stop when his finger left the mark. She opened her eyes. He kissed the scar lightly, but it didn't hurt, which was a big relief since the pain was beginning to become quite unbearable.

It wasn't long before Yuki pushed the rest of the dress down her stomach, still kissing every part of her that was slowly unraveling before him. He continued to kiss the scar as well, leaving a wet streak on it with his tongue. Tohru gasped a little as he went lower and lower down her body. He was soon kneeling in front of her again; his head reached up to her lower abdomen, her matching lacy pale pink panties were exposed now.

He stared up at her. Looking at her like a prize he had just won. The desire was etched in his face and it made her get hot just by having him look at her in such a way.

Yuki helped her step out of the dress; she held onto his shoulder to keep from falling over as he slipped the gown from under her.

Now she was just in her underwear, standing before him. She felt a slight shyness creep over, so she wrapped her arms under her breasts, covering up most of the scar, which ended at the top of her navel.

Yuki was still clothed, and she didn't quite think it was fair that she was the one baring it all while he stayed in the comfort of his suit. Her thoughts were quickly pushed away as he grabbed her waist and pressed his face against her stomach. She gasped at his abruptness. He started to glide his hands on either side of her and shower her body once again with a trail of kisses until he landed on her lips. His mouth crashed into hers, his tongue immediately seeking entrance into her mouth. Without a second thought, she let his tongue slip into her, sending that chill of pleasure up and down her spine. His hands rested on her hips, caressing her skin with his finger tips, gliding up and down her sides.

It gave her goose bumps. Something then came over her. The desire she had in her was now ready to come out. She needed to feel his skin against hers, to feel more chills run up and down her body. It was like a wakening occurred deep inside her, telling her what to do and how to do it.

Frantically, she reached for the buttons on his vest and started to undo do them. In a matter of seconds the vest was off. Then came the white dress shirt underneath it, she unbuttoned that one was well. Last was an undershirt, which she lifted up over his head and threw it across the room, finally exposing his bare chest.

She looked at him from his slightly muscular shoulders, down to his toned chest and stomach.

Tohru ran her hands across his chest, and continued to kiss him. She slid her hands all along his upper body, his breath coming out in long sighs.

His hands were running up and down her sides still until he finally slipped his hand over her left breast, bra still on. A whimper came out from her as they still kissed.

Yuki began to knead her breast; her nipple erect due to the stimulation. His other hand found the small of her back to press their lower bodies together. He had done it on purpose because she could now feel his erection through his pants and the thin cloth of underwear she was wearing. They both let out a moan.

He was hard against her…very hard.

Yuki switched hands so now he could play with the other breast. She could feel the heat rising against their bodies, the pleasure that was surging through her.

He was guiding her to the bed, his hand still placed on her breast as he kneaded it and their lower bodies still pressed together like glue.

The backs of her knees were the first thing to touch the bed. She stopped the intense kiss to sit on the bed and climb backwards on it. Yuki followed in pursuit, crawling slowly after Tohru like an animal hunting it's pray. His eyes were fiery with want—with lust.

His pants were still on so when Yuki finally reached Tohru to carry on with the kissing and touching and everything in between, she grabbed the button and zipper of his pants, undid them and pushed his black pants to his knees. He took them off in that instant and threw them across the room.

Tohru was leaning on the pillows at the head of the bed, looking at Yuki in the beautiful light of the moon. He was basically naked except for the boxers he had on.

She reached out for him to come into her arms. When he was finally close enough, Tohru grabbed him from behind his neck. She dragged his body down on top of hers, almost causing him to crush her. She didn't mind though, all she wanted was that body of his to come crashing into her, not just on her.

Yuki kissed her neck now, and once again his hand found the pleasure of her breasts, this time he pushed the bra upwards to release her breasts, freeing them of the cloth.

He kneaded and caressed it with his hand, pulling and tugging at her hard nipple. A sound came out deep within her throat. Not even she recognized it, but knew it was she who was making those small sounds of satisfaction.

He persisted with all this until his mouth found the mounds of her flawless breasts. He flicked his tongue around her left nipple, his mouth wet and warm against her skin.

She squirmed with delight, his mouth going to her right breast as his hand went to the left one. He licked and tugged at the nipple gently with his teeth. Her body arched towards him, trying to get more of him on her, more heat to satisfy this unbearable earning for him.

He looked up at her for a moment, watching as her body quivered under his touch. She could tell by his face that he was thinking of something, and then his face went back to her chest, continuing to pleasure her. He then put one of his hands behind her to undo the bra. It unhooked easily and he pulled it from her chest, leaving her naked except for her panties.

Yuki picked up his body with his hands resting on the sides of her head, almost as if he was going to do a push-up with only his upper body. He gazed at her body hungrily. Soon his hand left the side of her head. He placed it over her face, starting at her forehead, then down the bridge of her nose, over her lips, then to the side of her neck, making its way to her chest, gliding slowly over one of her hard and erect nipples, soon over her flat stomach, careful not to touch her scar. His hand then went to the edge of her underwear. The whole time she tried to control herself, his touch was driving her insane.

He continued looking at her then he lowered his head to her chest once again to play with her breasts. It was then that she felt his left hand slipped under her panties and down to where all the heat seemed to be rising from. She gasped as his fingers searched her. Her wetness let him slid into her easily. His finger searched deep inside, while his mouth groped her chest.

At last his finger found what he was looking for; her clitoris was large and engorged with heat, he touched it tenderly, making her writher and twist in the absolute bliss. He kept the spot under his finger, touching it softly for a moment then fast, and then slow again. He was playing with her, making her want to scream in unbearable and splendid pleasure.

Soon she couldn't handle it anymore, she needed to feel him with her hands, grope his body the way he was doing hers. Out of nowhere she took hold of his head and brought it up to her lips. He stopped touching her and adjusted himself on top of her, letting their lower bodies fit together like some sort of key in a lock. His erection almost dug into her underwear; she cried out at the feel of him.

Suddenly Yuki got up from her body and rested beside her, his hair beginning to drip with beads of sweat. He looked down at her before he reached for her panties and pulled them down her legs with such vigor that she thought that he had literally ripped them off.

He was kneeling beside her now, his body gleamed with sweat and she could see the bulge of his underwear at grown larger. She looked at him with an animalistic glare. Without another thought, she reached for his underwear and pulled them down, revealing his enlarged sex; ready to be sheathed by the warmth within her own body.

She was ready for him; she wanted him to fulfill the need that had been mounting in her since they started. She needed his body inside her and she needed now.

Seeming to understand the look that she was giving him, he braced his nude body on top of hers and quickly plunged deep within, every inch of him sliding inside, filling up the space within her, and making her scream out, half in pain, half in pleasure.

He stayed still for a while, letting her body adjust to the width and length of him. It hurt, since she had not had intercourse for a long time. But the pain quickly subsided and she kissed his mouth to let him know that she was ready for him to continue.

He slowly started to slide in and out of her, sending those surges of pleasure through her body again; finding a steady rhythm between both of their bodies. She grabbed his buttocks, encouraging him pushed further in.

Their rhythm began to speed up to an intense pace, her legs wrapped around his waist, holding him to her. She cried out as he went faster and faster, hitting a spot in her body that made her shiver with each thrust he made.

Sweat dripped off their bodies and the light of the moon gleamed off them with and ethereal beam.

Yuki screamed out as he pushed harder and harder, his eyes closed shut, seeming to enjoy the blissfulness of their actions. Their bodies glowed even more with the moonlight.

Soon, Tohru noticed that the light coming off Yuki's body was not the light of the moon, but something much more bright and unearthly. The moonlight seemed to have been coming from inside him and she looked at her hand to notice that a glow was emitting from her as well, but her's was different, it was amber; it was as if he was the moon itself and she the sun.

With each mount of pleasure their light grew brighter and brighter until the room was beginning to fill with the mixture of lunar and fiery light.

Yuki had opened his eyes now and looked around them; the glow of her body reflected off of his eyes, making his purple eyes look like bright lavender flowers in bloom.

"Tohru, what's happening to us?" he asked breathlessly, his speed beginning to diminish as he began to notice that his body glowed as well.

"I don't know, but don't stop, Yuki- don't- stop-" she pleaded, her voice just as breathless as his. Their lights growing even more radiant.

At that he pushed harder and faster until they both screamed; his body grinding hers into the bed.

The heat rose more from her and she could feel the heat rise from him as well, as if it wasn't just their skin that was emitting warmth, but something contained by them that was giving off a fiery heat.

The pleasure was so intense, it was almost like pain, and Tohru could feel the heat grow more and more with each thrust into her body, their screams filled the room just like their light. She could feel Yuki's heart beat in sync with hers, a hard, fast pounding against her own heart; their bodies seemed to mend together, both their lights flickering against each other like blue and yellow fire. Soon the lights joined as one, and the blue and orangey colors canceled out to be just a single intense white light, coming from them both.

The intensity was so immense that Tohru knew she could not bear it any longer. Suddenly her body gave in, the bright light burst from their bodies like a collection of different colored firecrackers; her body released its tension, warm juices flowed out of her and down hers and Yuki's legs. Yuki released soon after, crying out her name; his own warm liquid filled her body just as hers left.

Yuki collapsed onto Tohru, the glow from their naked bodies was beginning to fade into the darkness and the true luminosity of the moon filled the room once again. They gasped for air, trying to relearn how to breathe. Yuki nuzzled his head between her neck and shoulder. Tohru encircled him in her arms; he was still hidden inside her, and it felt comforting to be able to hold him in such a way, to be able to let him rest inside her, which was something they had not been able to do before due to the curse.

She sighed into his damp hair, breathing in his scent, memorizing the form of his firm and sweaty body against her own.

It was just like heaven.

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Yuki rested on Tohru still. Their breathing was now slow and steady and they were locked together in a very close and intimate embrace, his sex still enclosed by hers.

Their skin glowed, but very dimly and he wondered what was it that had made them shine so brightly. Had there been some sort of spell put on them to experience such intense bliss? He didn't know, and at this moment, it really didn't matter to him. All he could think about was the warmth of Tohru's body against his and the feel of her from the inside. And whatever it was that that made them glow like the sun and the moon would be dealt with later…maybe in the morning, if he could find the will power to leave Tohru's arms.

He touched her cheek with his finger tips. The light from within his skin danced with what was left of hers.

"You look so beautiful like this," he whispered softly. She smiled weakly at him, her eyes looking at him drowsily.

He stayed like this, on top of her, wrapped in her arms, but he knew his body was too heavy for him to just stay on top of her, so he reluctantly pulled himself out of her body and settled on his side, curving his body against hers.

She watched him as he left her body, her face showed absolute satisfaction.

Before finding a comfortable spot next to her, Yuki pulled the covers over he and Tohru, the light from them had completely gone away now.

Yuki spooned her; their nude bodies pressed lightly together, his arm draped over her waist. Within a couple of minutes he could hear Tohru breathe deeply as she fell fast asleep against him. He kissed her neck, making her stir a bit, and then settled against her to sleep as well.

Before sleep completely took over him he thought to himself, thinking how wonderful it would be to have Tohru like this in his arms, for the rest of his life.

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