Hey guys. It's been more than 3 years since I've touched these fics. I'm sorry to say that I haven't been updating in a while, but incase you don't know, I have returned to fanfiction, though on another account of mine, DarkLordMist.

You see, I have 3 accounts on this, DarkLordMist, and Twilexia. ElementalMist was my first stint on from about 2003-2004, in which I wrote my first fics, including this one. I think my name was Shadow's Survivor back then, but then I had it changed to ElementalMist.

Then, for some reason I started a new account, and during then I was called Demon's Soul of Baer. Kind of weird, it made no sense. Then I had that name changed to DarkLordMist.

Finally, two years later, in the beginning of 2007, I tried to get back to with Twilexia. But that didn't go too well, I wrote some fanfictions that weren't too good.

So now, I decided to return to my DarkLordMist account, and work on some new stories. I will be transferring this one as well as my other stories onto that account, first deleting them here then adding them there.

But before I upload them again, I WILL be editing them heavily, especially this one… I reread this one the other day and I was pretty weirded out about some of the stuff I wrote. I read a review and laughed – it was pretty harsh, but I agreed with the guy…

"This story should be entitled self indulgent peice of crap, cause thats all it is. You take every possible chance to enhance your ego, "Can you beleive i thought of that?" well it's not hard to string 5 words together to create what you interparate as a deep and meaningful quote.
Your style of writing is harsh and blunt, and not in a good honest way that clears though crap to tell the truth. I mean in an almost illiterate way. In a way that shows you have a limited vocabulary and limited talent. You repeat the same words over and over in the same chapter and hardly use any adjatives at all. You say stupid things like "crying emotionally", i dont know any other way to cry. Why does one cry if not to express emotion? You state the obvious like that, numerous times, and it me off. You say "he felt worlthless because thats what he was told he was", well how about exploring that deeper? If this was to be a philisophical story, it definetly failed. Give me something real to read, not the rambalings of a try hard writer desperate for attention! Your stroy is ment to be full of angst, i havent read that! Nothing in this story has struck me, nothing is heart braking, or emotional, or even remotley angsting. It portrays nothing which is the worst thing for a story to be read as.
In short it's not a story worth reading, i could have told you that from the very first chap, but i kept reading to see if it ever improved. your writing resembles that of a mislead 12 year old, wanting so bad to be a deep person that you write crap stories about crap where you develop crap characters and a crap plot! Every inch of pain in our lifes makes us that much of a deeper person, and adds that much experience, flaws, and perfection to our beings. It gives us our complexaties and individuality. You ovbiously have neither or else you would have written a better story. Or perhaps your just that bad.
A story that you tried to write about pain, and suffering came out like a bad after school special. Improve drastically, or start putting warnings up about how poorly it's written, for i pity the next person to stumble unfortunelty over it."

Whew, an angry man. Help me God.

I was a pretty bad writer then, and I must admit pretty pathetic. But I still wonder if my story sucked so bad then why did a lot of people read it? It must have been sort of good. Which is why I'm not completely giving up on this story. Which is also why you will probably see me post this story under my account DarkLordMist, which will be I promise you, edited and definitely a lot better.

So Thanks if you've stuck with me all this time, I'm hoping to update soon, but if you get a chance, check out my other stories on and soon, hopefully, I will start working on this one!