Hi Guys, and welcome back to Chapter 10 of Now the Commoner. Umm, prepare yourself for this chapter, it's rated M for a reason. Benlos is back!
Christmas Break-17th December Ben's POV:
I woke up early this morning. My train down to Auradon City was at 8:00am, and I was excited to see everyone again, especially Carlos. We have been talking like mad, and we were starting to get close again. I didn't want to rush anything, so I tried to keep the flirting on the down low, but that didn't stop him. I left the apartment at 7:00am, giving me time to check in at the station, and get a good seat on the train. However, when I arrived at the station, I got some bad news.
It had been snowing all night, and all the train lines had been completely covered. People were out shovelling the snow off of the tracks, but they had all of Auradon to do, so it was going to be at least a couple of days. They had arranged for us to get a coach, but really it wasn't much of a swap. The train ride took 6 hours, and that's when it was going over 100mph for half of the journey. With a coach capped at 70mph, it was going to take about 8 hours to complete the journey, in normal weather conditions. With all the snow as well, it was easily going to be a 10 hour journey. I was determined not to let this stop me however. I booked onto the first coach heading back, which was at 8:00am, and send a message to the group chat, updating everyone on what would happen.
B: Hey guys. I hate to be the bearer of bad news, but my train has been cancelled. I've booked onto a coach, leaving at 8, but it's easily going to be a 10 hour journey. Hopefully, I should get to Auradon City by 6 this evening, but I don't know for sure. Will keep you up to date.
As I expected, Carlos was the first to respond:
C: Ah, that sucks. At least you can still come down to see us. Text when you are getting to the bus station, and we will meet you. Stay Safe, and keep us updated.
Evie responded next,
E: Yeah, that sucks. Like Carlos said, we'll meet you. At least we are spending the whole of Christmas together. See you later
All the following messages followed a similar pattern, from Doug, Lonnie and Jane. I downloaded some apps onto my phone, and had already downloaded some books, movies and TV shows onto my tablet, so I was set for the 10 hour coach ride. It reached 7:50am, and they started to usher people onto the coach. I was sneaky, and decided to sit by the window, but I placed my bag on the seat next to me, hoping no one would sit there. Luckily they didn't, so that meant I could put my legs up, and relax for the journey. I started my first TV show, one of the science fiction shows Carlos raved on about. It was about a man that got super speed from a particle accelerator explosive. I wasn't too keen on things like this, but Carlos said that I'd enjoy it.
2 and a half hours later, and 3 episodes in, and I was hooked on the show. It helped that the main character was cute as hell, but the show itself was really good as well. I decided to watch another episode, but I wanted to enjoy this with Carlos, so I stopped myself from going further. I watched that episode, and decided to read one of the books that I had bought. This one was about a world where districts had to place people into some sort of games to the death. Everyone on the internet has been raving on about it for a few years, so I decided it was finally time to read the books.
I read the book for another 2 hours, until I felt the coach coming to a stop. Then a voice came over the tannoy. "This will be the only chance to stop. We are about half way through the journey, so if you need to buy some food do so now. We will not be stopping again." I haven't realised how hungry I was until now, so I decided it was best to get some food. We were given half an hour to get some stuff, and it was 12:30pm by this point. I went to the nearest shop, to grab myself a sandwich and that. Luckily I took everything with me, otherwise the situation could have been made so much worse.
Without realising, I had spent quite a while choosing what I wanted. As well as this, the queue was long, so I just lost track of time. When I realised what time it was, 1:05pm, I ran outside to see the coach driving off. 'Well, fuck' was the only thing I could think to myself. I was currently stuck at a service station, still five and a half hours out from where I needed to be. I rang the coach company, and they said that they advised the next coach to stop at that station, and that I would be able to board that one, no problems. They said it was only 10 minutes out, so it wasn't too long of a wait. I sent Carlos a private message, explaining:
B: Hey, slight change of plan. I didn't get back on my coach in time, and it left without me. I'm getting on the next coach, but it's going to add about 30 minutes to an hour onto my journey. Will keep you updated. Xx
As usual, he was quick to respond.
C: What are you like, followed by the crying laughing emoji. See you in six hours I guess. Xx
Luckily, the next coach did arrive on time, but I still had to wait another half an hour, so the passengers of this one could get some food. I was lucky enough to get a pair of seats to myself again, and this time, I remained on the coach for the entire stop. The coach left the service station at 1:45, and I was on my way once again.
I continued to read that book on the way back, finishing the first one in the series, and it was really good. I didn't want to move onto the second one straight away, so I decided to watch a film. It was about a bunch of humans colonising and mining an alien world, which the natives were not happy about. Anyway, one human has to try and negotiate with the locals, but instead he falls in love with one of them, and helps them fight the humans in the end. It was good, but god was it long. T
he film was 3 hours, but it did keep me occupied for half of my remaining journey. The remainder of the journey, I just did odd bits and bobs. I continued one of the stories I was writing for a bit, had a short nap, and listened to some music. When I was about 20 minutes out, I text Carlos letting him know. Returning Auradon City was nice, especially when it had snowed.
I finally arrived at the bus station at 7:30pm after a whopping 11 hour and 30 minute coach journey. Luckily, the traffic wasn't bad, so I wasn't delayed any further. I got off the coach, and saw Carlos and Evie waiting for me. Carlos spotted me and came running up to me, before pulling me into a huge hug. He looked up at me, and we both leaned in to the most passionate and deep kiss ever. We both fought for dominance, and just like the old times, I came out on top. Evie just stood there and looked at us.
After about a minute or two of making out, I pulled back, and said "Hi" blissfully.
"Hi" was all he said back, whilst Evie just tutted and rolled her eyes at us. We made our way back to the house, and started to cook some dinner. I was starving by this point. I was eating snacks the whole way back, but the only real meal I had was breakfast this morning.
We cooked some food, and chatted for about an hour. I caught them up on everything that was happening, and how uni was going, and the two of them did the same. Evie said she was getting on well in Business, learning the best ways to set one up, and how the financial side of it works. Carlos was doing really well in engineering, learning about what materials worked best for what project… But he was enjoying it, and that's all that matters.
I told him about how I watched that TV show he recommended, and how I thinks it's good, so we decided to sit and watch it together. We started from where I left off, and spent the next hour and twenty mins watching it. That was two episodes worth. He was about to stick on the next one, but he could see me yawning, and I have to admit, I was pretty tired. It had been a long day, and travelling really takes it out of you.
We decided to call it a night, and I started to set up the couch ready for me to sleep. The whole situation became very similar to the second night on the isle, when we moved into Cruella's room. He had noticed that I was shuffling pillows around, and just watched me for about 5 minutes. I think he was enjoying the power he had over me. I finally spoke up. "Well, goodnight. I'll see you in the morning" which caused him to chuckle.
"Ben, you can sleep in my bed tonight if you want" and I decided to see how far I could take this.
"But, where would you sleep?" I asked, with the snuggest look on my face. He caught on fairly quickly and started to toy with me. He unbuttoned a few buttons of his shirt, and got really close to me, so much that we were crouch on crouch. He was moving slightly, rubbing his dick onto mine through our trousers.
"Well, that is a good question Ben" he said, trailing his hands down my body. I could already feel myself getting hard, so he had achieved what he wanted. He slowly stepped away from me, and finally said. "I guess you're right, see you tomorrow" smirking back at me.
"Why you little…" I joked to him, following him up the stairs. Boy he was good at leading me on. I walked into his bedroom, to see him in nothing but his pants. He walked up to me once again, and pulled me into a deep kiss.
I fumbled, shutting the door behind me, and making sure to lock it, before pushing him into the bed. I took my shirt and pants off, and dove on top of him. We locked lips into another deep and passionate kiss, before I started to trail some kisses down his neck. I sucked and bit at it, causing him to moan, and he was showing no signs of stopping me. After leaving a fairly large love-bite, I turned my attention to his nipples. I used my hand of his left one, whilst using my mouth on his right one, tugging, and nibbling at it, his moans continuing. "B-Ben" I could hear him moaning my name, only turning me on more. After his nipples had become red, I trailed kisses down the rest of his body, exploring every crevice in his six-pack. I finally reached the waist band of his pants, and looked up at him.
My eyes were met with his deep chocolate ones, and he just nodded, giving me the go ahead. I played with his dick, through his pants at first, trailing the outline with my mouth, causing him to moan louder and louder. I eventually pulled out his rock-hard member, and gave it a few playful tugs to toy with him. He was already rolling his head back in pleasure. Before I started I said to him "I picked up this little trick", grabbing the base of his dick. I knew this would stop him from cumming, and make the whole experience more pleasurable.
I slid my tongue from head to base of his dick, and could already taste his slightly salty pre-cum. I took his dick in my mouth, only a few inches at first, before taking the whole lot, feeling it hit the back of my throat. He moaned louder "Oh Ben, I missed your mouth so much" as I bobbed up and down. I felt his hands grab my hair, forcing me down onto his dick, faster and faster. "Ben please" he begged "I need to cum", but I held strong continuing to bob up and down. He tried to remove my hand, but I swatted away every attempt, I was in complete control.
I eventually took pity on him, as he continued to beg my name "Ben". I removed my hand from the base of his dick, and picked up the speed, bobbing up and down faster and faster. Within seconds he yelled "Ah fuck Ben" and came into my mouth. I managed to swallow the whole lot, before taking his dick out of my mouth, and pulling him into a deep kiss, allowing him to explore my mouth. With all his force, he flipped us, so he is now on top. He started to trail down my neck, going straight for my sensitive spot, and forming a love-bite there, and he then travelled down my six-pack, straight to my dick.
He pulled my pants straight down, grabbed the base of my dick, and says "Karma's a bitch" before starting to bob up and down. I knew he was going to drag out like I did, and boy was I right. After about a minute of sucking my dick, he took it out his mouth, and started to lick my balls, causing me to moan "Carlos." I shoved my dick back into his mouth, and forced him down onto it, like he did me. I start to beg him "Please, Carlos" as I desperately need to cum. He let go of the base of my dick, and with one thrust into his mouth, I came. He swallows most of it, and I pull him into a deep kiss, tasting my own cum in his mouth. "I…want…you…to…fuck…me" I heard him pant between breathes.
I flipped us over once again, and he pulled out some lube from his bedside table. I slick up one of my fingers, and trace it around the rim of his hole. I use my other hand to toy with his nipple, tugging it, and use my mouth of the other one. "Ben Please" I heard him beg, and decide it's time. I pushed one finger into his hole, and circled it. Carlos moans in pleasure, so I quickly slick up another finger, and push that in as well. I reached as far as I could, and I knew I had found his prostate when he screamed.
I pushed another finger into his hole, making it as wide as I could. I continued to toy with his prostate and nipples, causing Carlos to roar in pleasure. "Ben, fuck me now, no more teasing" I heard him demand, and I was happy to comply. I got a condom, and rolled it down my hard length and slicked it up, before slowly pressing it against his hole.
I slowly started to push inside, and Carlos moaned louder with pleasure. "Faster" I heard him command, and I start to thrust into him with some pace. "Oh, I missed your tight ass so much Carlos" I moaned, thrusting into him faster and deeper each time.
"Oh, Ben. I missed your dick stretching my ass" he cries back. I continued to thrust into him, picking up a nice rhythm as i did so. I would start thrusting into him hard, before making my movements slow and sensual, before quickly returning to pounding into him. I must have lasted a couple of minutetes before blowing my load, screaming his name as I did "Oh, Carlos". I could see he is close to cumming as well, so I stroked his dick three times, as well as still pounding into him, causing him to cum all over my chest.
I collapse on top of him, covering him in his own cum as revenge. "Fuck…that…was…good" I panted, trying to get my breath back.
"Yeah…it…was…amazing" he pants back. He pulls me into a deep kiss for several minutes. We pulled back to breath, and out of Carlos, tying the used condom before throwing it into the bin. After a few minutes, we have both regained our breath. Carlos peeks out the door, and sees that Evie's door is shut. We both made a quick dash for the bathroom, and took a shower together, washing all the sweat and cum off of each other.
After about 10 minutes of showering, we made our way back to Carlos' room, and start to snuggled with each other. "God, I've missed this" I heard him say, and I responded "Yeah, me too. Night C", before we fell asleep in each other's arms.
So, I hope you enjoyed this chapter. Ben's Christmas plans were almost ruined, but luckily he made his way home for the holidays, and shared a passionate session with Carlos. Hmm, I wonder where it will go from here? I will alert you guys now that this story is on its way out, with only 4 chapters remaining, but I am working on story's to replace it.
I am writing what is technically a sequel to this story, but I'm not going to lie to you, I haven't worked on it for ages now, so it's no where near done. Other stories I am writing have been on my mind, so I might upload one of those, instead of the sequel, but who knows? I mean, I have a month to finish it, so it might be done by then.
I will see you guys on Monday for the next Chapter of WILTW. Until then, TTFN :)
