Oh my gosh I'm so happy!! Well not as happy as I'm going to be but yea here is what my good reviewer
Frog lady sent me and she's the only one so far who's reviewed me for the contest so get reviewing ppl
cause if frog lady keeps this up you guys you're not going to win a character in my story!!! Ok here's
what she said:
"I know you're trying your best so for once I'll do a review that doesn't look
at the bad stuff, so here goes, I love the style, zest and humor you've written this story with. It doesn't
matter if the characters are OOC as long as they're written in an appealing
way. The sudden change from shy Inuyasha to, err, horny Inuyasha made me
laugh! Miroku and Sango were also hilarious this chapter! I'll think of something else next time I review.
After all, I want to win that contest!"
See? She's interested!!! Lol so here it is the next chapter to add on to Inuyasha's weirdness!!!! Lol!!!!!!!!
Also before I forget new rule to the contest if I write a new chapter for the contest you can't write a review
for the chapters for the contest if you're trying to win the contest so don't try to be sneaky!!!
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Chapter 10 (Chapter 2 of the contest)
Inuyasha walked out of the auditorium holding his nose considering he obviously broke his nose and
walked to his truck got in thinking, God where did she learn to hit my damn nose is broken, she's hot and
fights like a man hmm that makes me want her more!! Crap I don't want to want her she broke my nose!
He arrived at the hospital and told the doctor he ran into a pole at work (I haven't given him a job yet
though!) they actually believed him and he got home and of course his mom bought that story…she
hasn't realized how changed he actually is yet however Sesshamaru grabbed Inuyasha's ear and
dragged him into Sesshamaru's room. "Ok bro tell me seriously what happened! Are you doing drugs?
cause hiding them from mom isn't going to be easy believe me her senses are better than they look!"
Sesshamaru said throwing Inuyasha on the bed while he stood in front of him, "It's not drugs bro this
happened because I tried to get what I can't have with Kagome…" Inuyasha said and Sesshamaru's
eyes widened and he walked around his room for about a minute then he sat next to Inuyasha laughing
and saying, "Kagome did that to you and you where even dumb enough to even try and get Kagome the
same chick who I…" Sesshamaru stopped, got up, and left the room with Inuyasha right behind him.
"What did you do bro sleep with her?" Inuyasha was just joking until he saw his brother stop when
Inuyasha said sleep, and then Sesshamaru turned around and said, "Yea I did but it was before I started
dating Rin I swear it was actually the day of my first date with Rin, we both met at a party and hit it off in
the master bedroom. Later we decided to be friends it was weird but it wasn't her first time but it was
mine, except when I had sex with Kikyo at the homecoming game!" Sesshamaru laughed with Inuyasha
and they did their secret handshake walking down the hall talking about the weirdness of Sesshamaru's
past. At that same moment the two were jumping in their truck to drive to the mall, Kagome and Sango
where doing a modeling job for Victoria secret in the mall where they were in the windows showing off the
sexy underwear. They were allowed to talk as long as they looked sexy and adorable, they get paid $20
by the hour so it's worth the people they know asking them questions about their jobs!! "So he seriously
did that!?!" Sango asked making a call me sign to the hot guy that had just walked by the store, "Yea I
think I broke his nose though so I feel somewhat bad but it was self defense when he's harassing me in a
freaking auditorium!" Kagome said posing against the wall trying to look as sexy as possible hoping to
see some serious eye candy. Then around the corner came Sesshamaru and Inuyasha gawping at the
sight of how sexy Kagome and Sango looked. They knew that they had to pretend to not care who the
two of them where because every customer could leave a tip. (There's a sign on the window that says:
Come in and leave a tip for these sexy models if they're sexy enough for you) Kagome nodded to Sango
and they started acting sexier, making the boys turn on quicker than what the girls expected. Kagome
liked the glass seductively and was rubbing all over the glass while Sango was doing a lap dance against
the wall. Inuyasha and Sesshamaru wanting so badly to be in there with the girls but they weren't even
think of leaving a tip until they heard Miroku's voice behind them saying, "Inuyasha! Why didn't you call
me when you found them!!?" He ran to the window with his hands out as if he was trying to reach what
was on the other side of the glass teasing him. Sango went over to where Miroku was and did a
seductive dance against the glass, while Kagome rubbed her front side against the glass making
Inuyasha's eyes go wide. Miroku suddenly wiped around and said calmly, "Let's go donate a tip to these
beautiful pieces of art before I break the glass with my ego and let's give the tip fast!!" He ran inside while
the two followed slowly and Kagome and Sango came out of the model box to change into their next
costume which was the Christmas based type underwear, once in their outfits they went hiding in boxes
that were taken out by two of the workers. The girls could hear the announcement that Santa (a guy
dressed up ) was going to get presents from Victoria secret in 5 minutes. Knowing the perverts in this city
the girls knew that there was going to be quite a crowd (ok here is the deal the two only work at Victoria
secret for the money!!) When the music started they heard the fake Santa say on his microphone, "Ho ho
I wonder what the good little girls from the land known as Victoria secret left for me?" Kagome and Sango
popped out of their boxes and Kagome sang "Hey Santa what you doing? Oh yea checking that list to see
who's naughty or nice…" Kagome and Sango walked around the stage and then Sango stood next to
Santa and sang, "Hey Santa look you did something wrong!!" Kagome walked over and snatched the
fake list and sang, "How in the world did you ever think that girls from Vitoria secret land could ever be…
nice!!" The girls sat Santa down in the big red chair and sat on one leg and Sango on the other leg!! "As
you can see you big ball of fluff we nowhere near anything close to nice we're very, very naughty!!" the
girls sang while giving him a lap dance seductively. The crowd was going crazy, then Mrs. Clause came
out in a naughty outfit but it looked terrible on the old lady!! Kagome and Sango Screamed and covered
their eyes falling off Santa's lap as the Mrs. Clause crawled across the stage floor making the cried act as
though they were dying!! Kagome and Sang jumped back into the presents as Mrs. Clause and Santa
Make out as they walked off stage, then they stood up slowly hoping the evil sight was gone. The crowd
went crazy as the girls took a bow got back in the presents and Santa sneaked on stage and took them
off stage!! After the show Kagome and Sango changed back into their normal clothes and collected a pay
check each of $1,896!!! Kagome jumped on her motorcycle when Sango was picked up from the mall by
her mom thinking, this money is so worth the stupid things that happen in my life!!When she got home
her mom was standing in the kitchen cleaning the table and Kagome then realized that it was 11 pm. She
shrugged at her mom when she gave her a questioning look since Kagome had obviously lost tract of the
time at work. Kagome put her helmet on the table and walked into her bedroom and got changed while
listening to the radio and looking at her schedule for next week to work at Victoria secret. Then she went
to bed wiped out from all the dancing and singing at work and not to mention the fact that it was 11:30 pm
and she got that morning at 4 am. (not for work!!) Kagome went to bed and at that same time Inuyasha
was searching all the night clubs in the city knowing how big of a party girl Kagome was to find her and
give her a bigger tip!! They eventually gave up around 3 am and went home and went to bed hoping
Kagome would be working at the mall again.
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Yeah I'm done finally because I'm ready to get the contest really kicked off!!!!!!