Dragonball SS: The Renahm Saga

Episode 52

Mind Control

On the last episode of Dragonball SS Goten and Krillin began their fight, but before they began to even make one move, they stared each other down looking for an opening for ten whole minutes. While this was going on Vegeta and Piccolo began to talk about Gendella and Rayne, but stopped to move to a safer location so they wouldn't risk being over heard. Meanwhile Uub and Super Buu had woken up, and Yamcha, Goku, and Kibitokai went to go check on them.

Goku, Kibitokai, and Yamcha had just entered Uub and Buu's room.

"Hey Goku," Uub said.

"Hey Uub," Goku replied.

"You guys feeling any better?" Yamcha asked.

"Yeah," Uub said. "I still feel a little weak though."

"Yeah, same here," Super Buu said.

"So who's fighting now?" Uub asked.

"Goten and Krillin," Kibitokai said.

"Uub, Buu," said Goku. "I have some very big news."

"What is it, Goku?" asked Super Buu.

"Yamcha, why don't you tell them," said Goku. "You were the one fighting him."

"Okay," Yamcha nodded. "When I was fighting with Pintar something happened."

"What?" asked Uub.

"Hold on. I'm getting there. Pintar somehow was able to control his ki and was actually pretty strong. He wasn't to tough though. I'm sure he would be a good match for Chioutzu, but an easy match for Videl. I beat him pretty quickly, but then he tried to destroy the stadium. Vegeta stopped him just in time. Right afterwards he exploded like an invisible ki blast hit him. We think Renahm somehow took control over his mind."

"Wow," said Uub. He was at a loss for words.

"The battle between Krillin and Goten is going on right now and it seems pretty even," Goku told them. "But once Goten goes Super Saiyan Krillin will be no match for him, and then you will be up. He nodded at Super Buu.

"Hey Goku do you know what happened to Buu?" Uub asked.

"No, I don't, but I think Supreme Kai knows."

"Yes I do know," said Kibitokai.

"Please tell us," said Uub.

"I was already planning on it."

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(A/N for all to read: When you are done read the bottom notes. They are extremely important!!!!)

Goten tried to hit Krillin with a flying kick, but just in time he sidestepped it and sent an elbow to Goten's head. Goten flew forward and put both hands on the ground. He pushed off with them, flipped twice in the air, and landed with his back to Krillin, at the edge of the ring. Krillin knew that this was his chance and took it. He flew at Goten and threw a punch. Unfortunately for him Goten was ready and dissappeared.

"Darn it another afterim- guh!" Krillin was hit by Goten's elbow and shot to the ground outside the ring. Before he could think of anything else to do he shot out ki blast after ki blast towards the ground to stop himself. Goten saw this and tried to kick Krillin, but Krillin turned around and shot a ki blast, hitting Goten in the face. Goten was sent flying back onto the ring, skidding on his back. Krillin landed and watched Goten quickly get up. The fight was in his favor and he wasn't going to lose it. He shot out ki blast after ki blast at Goten who could only guard himself by crossing his arms over his chest. Krillin knew that if he continued this for too long he would run out of ki and be too tired to fight anymore so he stopped. He was hoping that Goten was unconscious, but his hopes were turned down. Instead he saw something very bad, bad for him at least. Goten was a Super Saiyan, and didn't have a scratch on him at all!

"Heh," he laughed.

"No... no," Krillin said worriedly.

Goten charged at Krillin at high speeds and hit him with an elbow in the gut.

"Yay, Goten!" shouted Valese.

"Go get him son!" Chi-Chi cheered.

Krillin flipped over in the air just in time to dodge an oncoming punch by Goten. Goten quickly turned around and shot three ki blasts at Krillin. He had no time to dodge and was hit by all three. Krillin was sent spiraling into the air. All he could do was hope he could stay in this fight long enough to wear Goten out. Maybe then he could win.

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"Okay this place is fine," said Vegeta. "I doubt they will hear us here."

Piccolo nodded. "So what do you think we should do?"

"I don't know really," Vegeta replied. "I was thinking that we maybe could kill them before they can do any further harm."

"You would be disqualified, Vegeta," Piccolo said.

"Would you be quiet! It's just a tournament! These people could kill innocent people. It's not safe with them around."

"Besides we don't even know how strong they are," Piccolo said. "We should wait until the end of the first round of the tournament. Then we'll know their power. Buu is fighting Gendella next. He will have to make him show their true power. Then later Dabura will fight Rayne and he will hopefully be strong enough to make him show us his true power as well."

"Yes, but Buu is probably still tired. Meaning Gendella might not have to use his full power on Buu."

"Majin Buu is a very strong fighter. Even if he is tired I still think he will defeat Gendella no matter how tough he is."

Vegeta nodded. "You may be right Namek, but we can't tell for sure."

"We'll just have to believe in him then."

"NO GET AWAY FROM ME!" Piccolo heard a noise far away, but thanks to his Namekian ears, he could hear it anyway.

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"The reason that Super Buu fainted after Uub took his power was because he couldn't control how much power he gave to Uub. Uub should have been much stronger than Android 17, but he wasn't because his body wouldn't have been able to handle all of that power since Super Buu is so much more stronger than Uub. Super Buu still had a lot more power, but the sudden drop in it made him lose consciousness. I don't know if he'll be able to win against Gendella in this state if my guess is correct about Gendella and Rayne."

"What do you mean Supreme Kai?" Goku asked.

"I can sense evil in Gendella and Rayne, and after seeing Pintar I'm almost sure of it."

"How strong are they?" Yamcha asked.

"I don't know they are incredibly good at masking their ki."

"Then we'll just have to beat them like we did with Kyanaka," Uub said. "Afterall we couldn't sense his ki level either."

(Episode 8 after Kyanaka interrupted Goku and Vegeta's fight)

"Who are you?" shouted Goku. "Show yourself."

"I hope that he is no enemy," thought Piccolo.

"All right," said the voice. "I am Kyanaka." He had a big muscular body and his skin was all blue. He had long purple hair that went down to his ankles.

"He's not that strong," said Goku. "He's only about as strong as Chioutzu, and he doesn't even fight anymore.

"Yes I can sense it to Kakarot," said Vegeta.

"How was your attack so strong Kyanaka," asked Goku. "Are you hiding your energy?"

"No," answered Kyanaka. My energy is impossible to read." He laughed.

(Back to Episode 52)

"Yeah, but we could actually sense his ki a little," said Yamcha. "This time we can't sense their ki at all."

"That doesn't matter," said Goku. "It's not like just because we could sense a little bit of his ki we could sense how strong he is. It is pretty much the same thing."

"Yeah I guess you're right," Yamcha said.

"Anyway," said Goku. "I'm sure Super Buu can beat him. Afterall he is one of the strongest Z Fighters."

"Yeah," Uub nodded. "You can definitely beat him Buu!"

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Piccolo and Vegeta had reached where the noise came from. Piccolo had told him everything he had heard. "Please, leave me alone!" the voice said.

"Sorry, said another feminine voice. "You now belong to Master Renahm.

Suddenly there was a flash of blinding light, and then everything was silent.

Vegeta grabbed the doorknob and threw the door open without thinking.

"Vegeta, no!" Piccolo hissed, but it was too late Gendella and Rayne had noticed them. Trell was with them now too.

"What's going on?" Vegeta asked.

"I guess we're found out," said Rayne, the woman.

"Yes, by the Saiyan prince and the Namek," said Gendella. "What an annoyance."

"So Trell is with you too?" Piccolo asked.

"Yes a new addition to our party, Pintar was with us too until he lost to that weakling, Yamcha," Gendella said.

"Now that you know about us I guess we can't allow you to live," Trell said.

"I guess not," said Vegeta. "Let's fight somewhere else, away from here."

"Wherever you want to die is fine with us," said Gendella. "Rayne, I'm gonna sit this one out."

"Sure," she replied.

"No way!" shouted Piccolo. "You will fight us here and now!"

"Sorry but I can't my fight with Buu is coming up soon."

"Leave him be," Vegeta said. "Super Buu will destroy him anyway. For now we'll kill the woman and save Trell."

"You can try," Rayne said with a grin. She threw a ki blast at the ceiling making a hole. She flew out followed by Trell, Piccolo, and Vegeta.

"Now to defeat the Saiyan boy, Goten," Gendella said. He walked to the waiting room.

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"AH!" Krillin yelled in pain as he was hit into the ring floor for the umpteenth time. He was lucky to still be in this fight. He got back up but was instantly hit in the side of the head by Goten's elbow. He fell to the ground this time he wasn't going to get up.

"1... 2..."

Suddenly he hear a voice in his head. "Would you like to beat this Saiyan?" The voice sounded so calm.

"Yes," he thought back.

"3... 4..."

"Yes, most people would," the voice was so serene, so peaceful.

"5... 6... 7..."

"How would you like me and my master help you. He is very generous and kind." Krillin couldn't help but calm himself. The voice was so soothing.

"8..."

"My master's name is Renahm." Renahm! Oh no! Krillin knew that this was bad, but he was to calm to fight it.

"9..."

Krillin shot up and holding his head. He was screaming in pain. "GET OUT! GET OUT! STOP IT!"

"Don't fight it," the voice said, trying to relax him. "It will soon be over. You will possess even greater powers than the boy... and his father. Think of what you could do with that strength."

"NO... I... WOOOOOOOON'T!" Krillin was on the ground holding his head.

"Oh my," said the announcer. "What's happening to Krillin."

"STOP! GET OUT!" he screamed again. "AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!"

The announcer walked up to him. "Krillin are you alright?" he asked.

"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!" he continued to scream. His ki aura sent the announcer flying into the arena wall knocking him out.

"Krillin you have to stop this!" shouted Goten. "What's going on."

Suddenly Krillin stopped screaming. "You will die... Saiyan."

Goten's eyes widened. Krillin had an evil look on his face.

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"This is far enough," Rayne said.

"Fine," Vegeta replied. "Piccolo you take Trell I'll take the woman."

"Fine with me," said Rayne. "Go get him Trell!" Trell flew at Piccolo and started throwing rapid punches. Piccolo blocked them all and kneed him in the gut. He followed up with a backhand to the face. Trell flew back by Rayne. Piccolo threw off his turban and cape.

Rayne and Vegeta flew at each other throwing rapid punches and kicks at each other. Both dodged each others attacks.

Piccolo flew towards Trell. "You must stop this! You are being controlled by Renahm."

"Renahm doesn't need to control me. He is a great master."

"Fine if you won't listen to me then I have no other choice than to fight you." Piccolo stretched out his arm and grabbed Trell. He brought him closer to him and hit him in the head with his. Then he elbowed Trell in the face sending him flying.

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"Goku! Something's wrong with Krillin!" Android 18 shouted as she bursted into the room.

"What!?" he shouted.

"He said he was going to kill Goten! What's going on?"

Goku looked at Kibitokai. "Renahm!" Goku nodded and they all ran out of the room including Buu and Uub.

Krillin has his mind being controlled by Renahm. Is this what Gendella said when he said that he would destroy Goten? Meanwhile Vegeta and Piccolo are fighting Rayne and Trell. Will the Z Fighters save Krillin and Trell, or will they be defeated by Renahm's mindslaves.? And will Vegeta and Piccolo win? You don't want to miss the next episode of Dragonball SS!

A/N: Now that was one good chapter! I was thinking of making a regular old tournament at first, but then I thought that would be boring. I then decided that Gendella and Rayne would fight as Renahm's fighters. I never thought of mind control. Then I thought of Pintar being controlled, then Trell, and finally Krillin. If you ask me this is much more exciting than a normal World Martial Arts Tournament.

Another A/N: I am going to have a contest. All you have to do is write, in a review, what your favorite fight of Dragonball SS has been. From the Kyanaka Saga to the Renahm Saga. I have every fight, all 45 of them on my account profile and a brief description of them. In five descriptions I have top five battles of SS. If you pick them I won't neccessarily pick you. I want why it is your favorite fight too. It doesn't have to be a whole paragraph. If you want it can only be a few sentences. Some fights are non acceptable because they are to short, or the really don't have any effect on the series at all. If they are it will say Non Acceptable in parantheses. There is a prize too! Yay! Prizes! There are 2 prizes one is first prize. The winner of this gets to read my chapters in advance, tell me what they liked and disliked, suggest what they want, get sneak peeks of upcoming sagas, and they will answer questions about my story I send them. Like if they think I should do something. 2nd prize gets: a sneak peek of sagas to come, and questions of what I should do, and they will also get chapters in advance(every once in a while, 1st gets all of them!) Please do this contest. As I said before all 45 fights are on my profile page. If no one new reviews the winner will be Ryan-the-Author, who reviews all my chapters. You guys can't let him win! (no offense Ryan :-) So please review and prizes await! Keep reading!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11