I need a beta, I also would like constructive criticism, and for all of you to wear your seatbelt.
Xavier's POV
I woke when Nex started shaking me violently. "If that's how you're gonna wake me up, I might start waking you up earlier," I threatened. My alpha tensed up before growling at me. "Don't threaten my sleep or I'll threaten your tamings, reducing time allowed to spend on each girl a week and lowering their pleasure thresholds. They would pass out the second you attempted foreplay, and I know how you like it wet and long," she said before straddling my groin. She was right and I didn't challenge her on it. I gave in and she looked as though she just won the lottery. She began gloating. "Ah, silly Nex, I'm not the only one who enjoys tamings," I said, running my index and middle fingers along her jawline. "I can withhold tamings just as good if not better than you can. You stop gloating and get off me, and I won't withhold your tamings. You stop gloating but don't get off, five minute max tamings for you, and I'll leave you wet, horny, and unsatisfied. If you get off, but keep gloating same response. If you don't do either, I ball you for a week, no taming cycles, no taming, no battles. Understood?" I asked. She shut up and nodded before getting off me. I got up and patted her head. "Good girl, now what was so important you had to wake me?" I asked. My alpha paled and pointed behind me. I looked behind me to see a Dark Queen. Instead of running, I balled Nex. "Hello, is there something I can do for you?" I asked. "Why yes, there is dear," she said, her voice reminding me of someone, but I couldn't put my finger on who. I racked my memory and found that voice. "Aunt Cherryll?" I asked. The Dark Queen took me into a hug. "Why yes dear, word has reached the Orange Islands of a hero who single-handedly took down a Widow, would that hero be you dear?" She asked. I just grinned and let my alpha back out. I explained who the Dark Queen was and she calmed down a bit. "I do apologize or scaring you earlier, I just couldn't help myself," my aunt apologized. "Don't apologize, I try to do the same to master, but it doesn't work," Nex told my aunt. "It's because as a Witch you were too cute, as a Sorceress, you were too short, and now, you have too much sex appeal to be scary," I told my alpha before gently pecking her on the lips. She blushed as my aunt cleared her throat. "Anyway, here," she said, handing me a stereotypical gift box. I tore it open to find a pokeball. "What?" I asked no one in particular. I took out the ball and threw it into the air. The girl that came out appeared to be a Jokette so me and my alpha tried to book it. "Relax, she's not a Jokette. She's a MaryAnn Drew," my aunt said while grabbing my head so I stopped moving. My alpha stopped in her tracks and warped extremely close to my side. The MaryAnn Drew began walking over to me. "You're saying this is the one who saved Cerulean? That's a laugh, piece of shit doesn't even have a championship under his belt," she said in a snarky tone, but rather than slap her like my alpha wanted, I took to laughing. When I finished, the girls in the room just stared at me. "Sorry, I just never thought of it hard enough to laugh like that," I explained. "I wasn't even trying to kill it, I just had my alpha shoot off a magic bolt into its mouth to look like we helped. It was actually quite the sight. The beast just looked confused before its humanoid torso popped like a balloon, and the spidery parts just collapsed," I said before punctuating it by breaking into laughter. "I like this guy!" The MaryAnn Drew shouted before joining me in my fit of laughter. My alpha face palmed as my aunt warped home. When I finally stopped laughing, I attached her ball to my belt. This was going to be fun.
I was wrong, so very wrong. I hadn't realized that the next day was April 1st. It was fucking chaos. I woke up covered in honey and surrounded by Tittos pretending to be my girls. When I finally got up, I threw the Tittos out the window, and headed downstairs. There I took the final step down the stairs, and got a bucket of feathers and a bright red glove stuck to me. I was then shoved by the still unnamed MaryAnn Drew and fell on my face into a yellow paper cone. "Really, this is nothi..." I didn't finish before about 7 CatGirls and a Pumara fell from the ceiling. I was chased around the house by them, before I took out my blade. I turned around to fight, but rather than CatGirls and a Pumara, there was 3 Mantis. I put my sword away, and just passed out. When I woke up, I checked my dex. I was out for nearly 24 hours. I was in fresh clothes and the MaryAnn Drew was sitting in the corner with a 'dunce' cap on. She turned around when she heard me stirring. "MASTERS AWAKE!" She called out before turning back around. Not even a minute passed before my harem burst through the door. "Are you okay?" Nex asked before hugging my face into her breasts. I nodded and she let me free. I gasped for air before Ursula tackled me. "Oh, master, you're alright. I wanted to punish the Jokette by cutting her limbs off, but my sisters wouldn't let me," she then flipped us and warped our clothes off. "Punish me for failing you master!" She begged as she tried to sheathe me in her folds. I got off of her and got redressed. "No, if I'm punishing anyone, it's going to be Alice," I told my harem who just looked confused, "that's what I'm calling the MaryAnn Drew," I explained. My harem nodded and left the room. "Alice, here, now!" I ordered. She reluctantly left the corner. I took the dunce cap off her hat that I didn't even try to take off due to certain rumors and the MaryAnn Drew dex entry. I had her strip the rest of her clothes and I slapped her across the face. "I was fine with CatGirls and a Pumara, BUT THREE FUCKING MANTIS!" I screamed and slapped her again. She just took them slaps head on. "Look, I get that your evolution line likes pranks, but putting my life in danger is too far!" I began lecturing, it was going to have a long day.
Nexendia's POV
When me and my sisters exited Master's room, Master's Mother approached us. "Is he alright?" She asked. I nodded and headed downstairs. "BUT THREE FUCKING MANTIS" I heard master scream. Venus and Star looked scared. "Is Master going to take it out on us?" Venus asked. "I doubt it, but if he does, I'll take it. I'm the alpha, and I can take it. If he gets too rough though, I might tag Nuar in as she doesn't feel pain," I assured her. If this is going to be an annual occurrence I would leadn to take it, I just hoped it didn't come to that.
Xavier's POV
After I finished punishing Alice and putting her away wet, I headed downstairs. My girls all looked over to me, scared, other than Ursula, who was highly aroused. I fingered her through her clothes as I explained I wasn't upset with my girls. They all sighed in relief, again, other than Ursula, who came on my hand. I licked my hand before I sat down on the recliner. Alice came downstairs and slapped me. "Putting me away dry wasn't very nice," she said before Nex shot her off her feet with a mana bolt. I simply sighed and I balled Alice. "Nex, you didn't have to shoot her," I said calmly and kissed her forehead. "But thanks anyway," she blushed and I headed into the kitchen. Nex followed and I went to make myself a sandwich but she slapped my hand. "My job," she said and made me a sandwich. I didn't question it and ate the sandwich. It was delicious. I praised her and her eyes lit up. "Is it that good? Do I get a taming because of it?" She asked with a spark in her eye. I patted her head and nodded. She got excited and after I finished my sandwich, she jumped me on the spot. She warped us out of our clothes and put her breasts in my face. I took her left nipple into my mouth and tweaked her right. She gave a loud moan so I flicked my thumb over her clit. She gasped out from that and started grinding her wet cunt against my groin. It rapidly hardened against her, but before she cold sheathe it in her folds, I flipped her around so we were in a 69 position. I licked around the rim of her cunt before flicking my tongue across her clit. Afterwards, I quickly entered with my tongue and probed around her cunt, looking for particularly sensitive places. I found one rather close to her entrance, and poked at it with my index finger while still tasting around her insides. I decided I'd be a little adventurous and shoved a finger in her ass. I decided I could do one better and grabbed a nearby rather phallic looking stone and carved it to be extremely phallic. I then pushed it into her ass. She yelped out in pain as I did. She came quickly after that, all over my face. I lapped up as much of it as I could, the rest splashing onto my chest. She was nearly out of it and I needed release. I flipped her end-over-end and removed the stone dildo. I quickly replaced it with my cock. I thrusted in and out, beginning to increase in speed, when she came again. I laid back and let her do me Cowgirl. She was quite good at riding Cowgirl, and came rather fast. I passed out along with my alpha in a heap on the floor after dressing both of us. When I came to, Nex was spooning me and Alice was glaring at us from across the room. My alpha woke up soon after me. "So you fuck her into unconsciousness after leaving me dissatisfied. That's fucking fair," she griped. I walked behind her and grabbed her tits through her shirt. "That's because you were being punished for leaving me to die yesterday," I replied snarkily. She used her Breasts of Steel technique and I quietly complained. Nex crossed her arms under her breasts and pouted at the fact she wasn't the one getting attention. Since Alice wasn't wanting to cooperate, I moved behind Nex and started playing with her tits. She stopped crossing her arms under her breasts and grabbed my wrists, showing me how she wanted to be groped. "Cause that's fair! Leaving me mid grope for another girl," she said and stormed out and I finished up with Nex. I gave her a peck and headed to the living room. Ursula, Nex, and Alice were good on tamings for a while, but I still had the rest of the harem to deal with. I was either going to love, or hate today.
Tamer: Xavier
Titles:Widow Slayer (Pallet,Viridian,Pewter,Cerulean,Fuschia,Cinnibar)
Harem:Nexendia (Nex) Arch-Mage level 55 ~ Alpha
Noire Demon-Goddess level 54 ~ Beta
Star StarLady level 53
Venus Milotit level 53
Ursula DarkLady level 53
Nuar Damsel level 50 ~ Non-Combat
Alice MaryAnn Drew level 50
Cerise MechDoll level 50
MARYANN DREW, the M.A.D. Pokégirl
Type: Very Near Human
Element: Magic/Psychic/Dark
Frequency: Extremely Rare (Who's nuts enough to slap an Angel Stone on a Jokette)
Diet: Human-style, presumed also to feed on laughter
Role: entertainers, clowns, expert victims
Libido: Average to High
Strong Vs: Ghost, Poison, Psychic
Weak Vs: Bug, Fighting
Attacks: Cry, Teleport, Tackle, Telekinesis, Wrestle, Quick Attack, Flash, Blur, Slash, light spellwork, Permeable, S.E.P., Breasts of Steel
Enhancements: Enhanced Hearing and Eyesight (x8), Agility, almost totally fearless, intelligent
Evolves: None
Evolves From: Jokette (Angel Stone)
MaryAnn Drews are perhaps the reason Jokettes are so nervous around Celestials. Like a Harlequin's exposure to a Mana Crystal, a Jokette's exposure to an Angel Stone opens her mind to a life-changing, cosmic revelation. She suddenly realizes that the Universe is a vast, uncaring place. The difference is the MaryAnn Drews do not want to share this information. They cherish others' ignorance of the Truth, and will do much to distract others with humor. They retain the Jokette's love of practical jokes, however they prefer humiliation and degradation to killing. Unlike the other tricksters, they don't trust others to appreciate their jokes, they are their own favorite victim, with Harlequins and Jokettes as a close second. E.g., A dozen people will walk through a door, the MaryAnn Drew will be the one who gets the bucket of whitewash on her head, the one she secretly put there. And they can look absolutely miserable better than any other Pokégirl. They will often use the Cry technique when they fall victim to their own or another's joke, people will either immediately go to comfort her, or laugh cruelly at her predicament. This is fine with a MaryAnn Drew. Physically, they still have the chalk-white skin, green hair, and blood-red lips. A notable difference is the appearance of black teardrop-shaped marking under one or both eyes, as if they were eternally crying. They are still capable of the large, frightening grins, they also can frown pathetically to nearly the same extent. They retain the comically large breasts and revealing, purple clothes, they often add to their costume top hats or elaborate headdresses that they cannot release. While they can take them off their heads, the hat won't stop touching some part of their body unless physically wrenched off by someone else. Even then, it will be a struggle, easier to tear her arm off, rather than the hat sitting on her palm.
MaryAnn Drews will use their abilities to defend their Harem-sisters and Tamer, they prefer to use Permeable in preference to other defenses and attacks, and will often leap into the middle of an enemy formation and release their stored attacks. They also enjoy using Breasts of Steel, enticing a foe in with their huge, soft breasts, then grabbing and slamming a foe's head against her suddenly rock-hard breasts.
The MaryAnn Drews has an unusual Feral state. When Feral they often sit in one place, and watch the world go by. Without physically attacking them, getting them to react is almost impossible. In Harems, they have one serious drawback, they will attach themselves to the biggest 'stick-in-the-mud' in the Harem, a Pokégirl who takes herself or the world too seriously. The MaryAnn Drew will try desperately to convince that Pokégirl to assist her in her pranks, driving their convert to distraction. She will also share the blame for pranks with this target, even if the other Pokégirl had nothing to do with the prank. Like the other evolutions, April Fools Day is a day of insanity, but she will seek out and prank any Trixies, Harlequins or Jokettes she can find, in preference to other breeds. It can be safely said, the other prankster Pokégirls are not fond of being one-upped, or being the victim, rather than the victimizer.
Permeable: An odd variant of Phasing. When the using Permeable, the attack strikes the target and remains stuck within the target, without damaging them or delivering any effect, other than walking around with an arrow through her head or a firebolt through her chest. The effect lasts for five (5) minutes and the user can either dissipate the attacks safely, or hold them at full force. After this five minute period, she can take three minutes to harmlessly dissipate any retained attacks, without them going off, or she can release them to let them fly off in random directions, or she can let them affect her normally.
No attacks of any kind are possible while this defense is active, nor during the dissipation time, and the released attacks cannot be reaimed. Nor can it be activated again for five minutes after shut down, although the three minute dissipation period counts as part of the recycle time.
All forms of attacks can be restrained this way, except a physical blow (punch, kick, etc.) Weapons can be held, e.g., A Magic Punch could be retained, a Comet Punch could not, however, Elemental Blades and Elemental Blades Mk II can be retained, as can any other weapon from swords to gunfire.
The danger in punching or kicking a MaryAnn Drews using this technique, is that breaking her concentration will result in a random release of the attacks she has restrained, like punching a live grenade, it doesn't aim, but you're closest. Likewise, if the MaryAnn Drew is still in the radius of a released attack, she will be affected normally.
Typically, the only thing a MaryAnn Drew will do when using this technique is stagger around, intercept more attacks, and proclaim her impending demise. She cannot use any other attacks and will rarely use other abilities or defenses. It should be noted that any Pokégirls engaged (enemies or allies) who are given the choice in their targets, will shoot her in preference to anyone or anything else on the field.
Therefore this technique is banned in League-sponsored matches, unless the MaryAnn Drews is actively participating in the match (as combatant, not a bystander or reserve) and the judges typically suspend any time-limits restrictions for the duration.
MANTIS, the Man-Eater Pokégirl
Type: Near Human Animorph/Metamorph (Insectoid)
Element: Bug
Frequency: Not Rare Enough (Extremely Rare)
Diet: Live, wriggling meat (Mainly human males, but also bird, lizard, frog, and bug-type Pokégirls)
Role: Assassins, Torturers, Executioners
Libido: Very High
Strong Vs: Dark, Fighting, Ground, Plant, Psychic
Weak Vs: Fire, Flying, Rock
Attacks: Slash, Carve, Cut, Parry, Deflect, Sword Dance, Megaton Kick, Slash Wave, Spincut, Confuse, Broken Castle, Weapon Guard, Weapon Repel, Zanmato
Enhancements: Enhanced Strength (x10), Enhanced Endurance (x5), Enhanced Speed (x7), Enhanced Agility (x6), 2 extra arms with razor sharp serrated sickles on them, light shape-shifting, wings for high velocity jumping
Evolves: None
Evolves From: None
Bounty (for confirmed kill): 4,000,000 SLC
Bounty (for reporting sighting getting out alive): 500,000 SLC
Recommendation if you see one: Have a strong warrior-type or fire-type ready to fight. Otherwise, evacuate at once if at all possible, where there's one there's almost always more.
We all know Sukebe took ideas for his Pokégirls from both old legends and pop culture in his era. However, there was one old series of Legends that we all wish he'd never heard about, the legends of the Tang-Yin. For it was from these grim tales that the most dreaded Pokégirl ever was birthed, they were meant to be the bane of the men who aided women like Linda McKenzie...the Mantis.
The Manti were the most dreaded Pokégirls that any soldier had ever faced in the Revenge War. However, any of the few survivors would have told you, it had nothing to do with their looks. Standing a towering 7 feet tall at the on average, the Mantis Pokégirls were veritable giants. They appeared as attractive humans at first, with long flowing hair coming in a veritable rainbow of colors. Their eyes were often a hauntingly beautiful red, their hair dark as the night, a starch contrast to their pale skin with plump C-D cup breasts. However, they were limited metamorphs. When their prey would get close enough, they sprang, twin lethal scythe-arms sprouting from their shoulders in a flash, they'd skewer, slice, and slash their target without mercy. These scythe-arms are double jointed, allowing them to be moved freely with surprising speed and precision and are usually held in a position of prayer when active, yet not in use. Extending from the base of their spine was a short insectoid 'tail' with a solid stinger on the end, from the shoulders down to the tip of this 'tail' were hardened wings. They are not strong enough for true flight, but more than enough to allow the Mantis to leap incredible distances at amazing speeds. They hard two primary forms, their 'normal' form, which they could only be in while Tame, something that's become nigh impossible now.
Their other form, however, was truly a terror to behold. Their once dainty feet replaced by strong and lethal talons, beautiful and prominent breasts shrunk and replaced by muscle, velvety skin hardened into potent armor. The Mantis' 'Battle mode' is truly something to fear. They could kill a platoon alone normally, in this form it'd take a battalion just to take one down and have a survivor. Now 7 feet tall is the smallest recorded sighting of one in her battle mode, they become as terrifying as they acted. Their eyes become a solid color and 'bug out' to a disturbing size, long antennae growing from their foreheads, and their wings also taking on a hardened blade-like quality.
In combat Manti like to make the best of their surroundings. They liked to sneak attack their quarry, often attacking from the treetops above or sneaking in via the use of their metamorphic techniques to give them a sort of 'mobile camouflage.' In battle their scythe-arms were their key weapons, whether a sneak assault or a front-line charge they always preferred to rely on their scythe-arms and sword-based attacks. They would often leap straight into heavy close-combat with their intense long-range jumps and dive in fighting, swinging their scythe-arms with a fervor rarely seen in even the most violent of a Gynadose's rages. What made this grim sight even worse was that Manti almost NEVER fought alone. Wherever they went, litter-mates of Manti always fought as a team, often making a particularly enjoyable battle a 'family outing' for them.
While their combat style was vicious, what they were most famous for was their sexual appetites. Frequently, they would take victims off and rape them, forcing them to erection with their human hands and taking what they wanted from them. And then once they had gotten off, the Mantis would then start eating their victim alive, usually starting with the genitals, the victim screaming in agony as the Mantis stripped his body of all his flesh. It's said that the only way to know if a Mantis had bonded to you from one of these incidents, is that she'd either let you live, or kill you quickly. No one's been willing to test which of these is the true outcome of bonding to a Mantis.
The soldiers of the Revenge War learned the hard way on a Mantis' Feral State. The mantis' Feral state is mild enough so that they'd know to hide from the potential threat that humans and Tamed Pokégirls now represented, thus they went into hiding and tried their best to keep their movements secret. A few were found shortly before the first Widow was sighted, and the first Pokégirl bounties were made. That bounty was subsequently increased, as Manti seemed to have developed a taste for bird, insect, frog, and lizard-type Pokégirls as well, great piles of bones being found in Manti lairs. However, it should be noted that Manti rarely, if ever, stay in one area for more than a year, two at the longest. The reason is because they apparently know that if they're in the same spot long enough, then sooner or later they'll be discovered.
As if things couldn't get worse about these deadly Pokégirls, it seems more and more are working for the Limbec Pirates. Information revealed by a Pirate who went legit revealed that Mephaesta, who'd grown fond of the vicious man-eating warriors, had begin to recruit them en-masse to work as torturers, executioners, and Assassins for the Limbec Pirates. Apparently both sides of this arrangement enjoy it greatly. This caused the already high bounty on Manti to increase even further for the sake of safety.
In recent a raid on a Limbec Pirate lair, a particularly fat, Snorlass-sized Mantis was found in the base's dungeons, alongside several hundred bones. DNA testing later revealed that these were all Tamers, Pokégirls, and civilians who had disappeared in the last few months. Before the Mantis was put down, a psychic probe revealed that all those she had eaten were somehow connected with anti-Threshold and anti-Feral research. The Mantis knew nothing more than that, she simply ate whom she was sent. This has led security to be increased around those facilities and for the family members of those involved.
There's rumors of a sub-breed of Mantis, commonly called the 'Praying Mantis' by those few who've seen one. There's little to go on other than they seem to be more intelligent and in control of their instincts than the 'normal' Manti.
Thanks to the obvious facts, as there's no confirmed cases of Taming a Mantis Pokégirl and surviving, let alone capturing it, thresholding into one, whether naturally or by force, is impossible. Thank the gods above.