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BPOV
Eliminations were not fun. The thought process was impossible.
I sat at the antique desk in the library and drummed my fingers on the desk. As crazy as it was, I really didn't want any of them to leave. I already had two names crossed off, because they could not get picked.
Stupid Camille wouldn't even tell me who she had picked for immunity. I was 99.9 sure that it was Theo, but I couldn't be sure.
My eyes lingered on the last name. There was something about him that I loved. The ease that I felt around him. He had tried to take advantage of me twice though, which I didn't appreciate.
Natasha, one of the camera women, told me it was elimination time.
I slowly walked into the main lobby, and I almost tripped over my long dress. It was long, flowy, and black, with white polka dots, and a red sash at the waist.(PIC IN PRO)
This dress, Amy, the wardrobe specialist, had helped me design myself. Natasha held my hand and pulled me along the hallway. We must be extremely late. I got there and saw all 9 men standing by each other.
EPOV
I heard her heartbeat, and smelled her freesia smell get closer, and closer, until she stood in the doorway.
She looked beautiful as always, her smooth velvet skin looked a little redder than usual. She was blushing I presume.
She always did that, and though I had to admit that the pooling of blood in her cheeks was appetizing, I could not ever imagine hurting her.
She was so beautiful, and precious, that I couldn't imagine ANYONE hurting her. Something weird inside me wanted to kill anyone who was going to hurt her. Jacob Black for example.
I wanted to kill Jacob Black. He acted so innocent. In fact, his thoughts were always consumed by fantasies of him and Bella.
Man, she looks amazing in that dress, I just wish that I could rip it off with my teeth-Jacob
I wished I could shake that thought out of my head.
However, even though he was terrible to her, Bella seemed like she still liked him, like there was something inside of him that was good.
I tried to ignore Jacob and Embry's sick thoughts, and I focused on Bella. I still couldn't read her thoughts, which was something that I found extremely odd.
I watched Camille stride over to Bella, and tell her that Theo was the immunity. Camille was a vampire. She could see the future, like Alice, but she could see whoevers, and how they would turn out.
Camille spent 3 hours of makeup everyday, just to make herself look like a beautiful human.
From what I could tell, Seth imprinted on Camille.
I glanced at Theo in my peripheral vision. He was looking at Bella with such love in his eyes. Bella liked him, but I wasn't sure how far that went.
Bella would actually be a lot better off with someone like Jacob or Theo. But I really liked her.
BPOV
I walked in and looked at all the amazing looking boys. Edward looked the most perfect though.
I looked at the bucket of red roses. The gold one was pointing out of the top. I agreed with Camille's choice of the immunity, which was weird, because we rarely agreed on things.
Soon enough, I heard the annoying theme music.
"Hello everyone. There are 9 contestants left, but only 8 roses. First off, is the immunity." I said slowly.
"The immunity goes to...Theo." I said, a grin creeping onto my face. He came up to me, and carefully took the rose. I looked into his blue eye, and his green eye. He was just so beautiful.
Theo looked like he was in this for more than love though. I could still remember the shrewd way he'd looked at me after our first kiss. He looked like that wasn't enough, like he wanted to throw me on top of the desk, and do me right there.
I looked at the 7 dudes in front of me.
"Edward." I called. I watched as he walked gracefully over to me, and kissed my cheek lightly. Edward made me feel so whole. He took his rose and walked back.
"Seth." I still liked Seth, he was really nice and handsome. The only issue was the way he looked at Camille. It was like, he liked her or something. I couldn't handle that.
"Eric."
"Tyler."
"James."
I called, until only Jacob and Embry were left.
"Now, do you two know why your here?" I asked.
"Yes." Jacob said, incoherently.
"Nope." Said Embry, popping is p.
"Jacob your here because you made me take to much alcohol, then forced me too kiss you, knowing that I couldn't try to get away." I glanced at Edward, who looked like he wanted to stab Jacob.
"Embry, your here because you don't really make an effort to talk to me." I explained.
"The person I wish to keep however is.. Jacob. Because Jacob, I really feel like you could be nice if you tried. Embry, I'm not too sure."
Embry came up to me and embraced me tightly, then kissed both of my cheeks.
Jacob just stood there, looking stunned. I handed him his rose, and kissed his lips ever so lightly. Then, I pushed him back to his spot.
When I started to leave, I was sure that Jacob would try something. Instead, Edward beat him to it.
"Hello my Bella." He said softly.
"Hey Edward."
"That dress looks absolutely stunning on you." He said, smiling.
I just gaped at him.
He leaned in and kissed me like I never had been kissed before. It probably lasted about 10 seconds, and when he broke off I was gasping for air. He just laughed his soft satin laugh, and disappeared.
I went back to my room, and found a note under the bedside table. It must have been wedged under the alarm that I threw.
Mia Bella,
I hope that you are alright. Jacob seemed to really hurt you. I didn't do anything to you if your wondering, just saved you from a night that could have turned extremely miserable, and it could scar you. I love you.
Goodnight Love, Edward
After reading the note, I cried myself to sleep. How could a person that I just met a few days ago already love me this much? It was truly a mystery.
All that I could remember before falling asleep was, I love you too Edward.
AWWW! How was that for some adorable fluff?
PS: I triple checked this chappie, so I hope that there is no mistakes. Also, if someone could leave in a review how to make the whole PM thing work, I would appreciate it.
Till next time,
Tara