INTERMISSION # 2
Hello again. Time for another Intermission. I just uploaded the 8th part to the fanfic. I have gotten some great reviews and messages on it. It was enough to make me want to keep writing! Though I vowed to do this for me, it's nice to see other people enjoy it
Now, no one sent me any questions, so I'm gonna go over some stuff I've been thinking about. Firstly, I want to point out that I will not be going into detail about the shooting even. The catputre the flag part in the movie. I feel like that would mostly be focusing on Tris and I want to shy away from that. You will see in the future why I chose not to [FORSHADOWING!]
I will probably be making the fear part only one chapter. I know it's a very important part, but again, that is another Tris moment. Four will be with her mostly and I don't want to change that. I'm still putting together what he fears will be. I will put in one of mine just to give it more realism. Any other suggestions? I'm open to feedback
Gwen, or Lil Tank, has changed since we last talked. After writing the part with the original Tank, I realized that they had the same name. That was bad planning on my part. I don't think they ever said her name in the movie. So I played it off. Made her Lil Tank and the other Big Tank. Though, not many people call them that. Her friends, for the most part, will call her Tank. Instructors, so that they can tell the different, put the Big or Lil part in it.
The change in Gwen's character was to give her less goody goody qualities. To she has anger and fear and can worry. You can be kind and still hold those other emotions. I also made it so she had less training because… I'm not good at writing those parts. By taking her out the ranking, I don't have to focus on that. I feel like if she wasn't part of the medic parts, she should become Factionless. She would not have won her fights the same way. She would become afraid to fight for a while until the fight or flight senses kicked in and she became more ruthless. Going for harder punches and really trying to knock out her opponent. But I didn't want her to be that angry. I think it all equals out in the end. And it will help develop her for how she will be in the future [MORE FORSHADOWING!]
I think a lot about how she will be in the future. How she becomes more mature. He and Tris will be different yet the same as the story goes. It shows my feelings toward Tris as a character. Honestly, not a huge fan of her, but she grew on me. I have this strange dislike for female characters, but she was different. She wasn't expecting people to save her. She wasn't this great fighter in the beginning either. She worked hard and failed, but still rung through. I like that. Still, there are things about her I don't like, especially in the last Allegiant move [WORST ONE OUT OF THE BUNCH] I'm still excited to see how it all ends in the last movie though. Gotta see it through
I can't wait to talk about love interests. It was hard to pinpoint who it was going to be. At one point, it was going to be Al. But I knew that I couldn't have them fall for each other and then have him kill himself. That would put a sour mood on Gwen, which isn't good. Eric was a possibility. Be to her like Four was to Tris. Giving Gwen special training and being nicer to her. But I didn't want a copycat relationship. And it won't be a made up character either.
So, look forward to the future Chapters. Again, if you have any questions for me about anything, please feel free to ask. Even if it's about the plot. You can ask specific question and I will answer, spoiling it for you. I don't mind doing that. But it might change if it's something in the distant future. Thank you so much for reading and I hope you guys have a great day!