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Tobias POV
I walk out of the hospital room, to see that the only one there is Christina, holding the Frappuccino Tris wanted.
"Can I go in and give her this?" She asks, pointing to the coffee filled drink.
"Whatever," I mumble back, and walk out of the hospital in silence, until I get to my car and my phone rings. I look at the screen, and Zeke's face comes up on caller ID, so I answer it and get into my car.
Hey man (Zeke)
What do you want bro? (4)
Christina told me you walked out, not seeming to care about anything? What's up? (Zeke)
It's my fault. Her fainting is my fault. The only way to prevent it from happening again is for us to break up. (4)
Are you being serious? You guys obviously love each other! Don't break her heart now! Or else you're gonna regret it. And besides. How is any of this your fault?
She fainted because of stress. Stress that was given to her because some idiots at school want me. If I leave, she won't be threatened anymo-
She'll have a broken heart man. And so will you. Don't give it all up because of a couple haters!
Bu-
No buts. You are going to go into that hospital
How do you know I'm not in the hospital anymore?
That's not the point
Are you spying on me?
Nope.
Well the-
Uriah is. Can't you see his car? But really, that's not the point right now. The point is, I don't want to see you moping around, because you broke up with the best thing that's ever happened to you. Now, go back in that hospital, and talk to her. Work it out. It really wasn't your fault. You need to stop being such a pansycake and face your fear instead of running.
I sigh and get out of the car. He's annoying, but right.
I'm proud of you bro. Text me when you're done, so you can tell me all about it.
Yeah, yeah. But tell your brother to stop stalking me.
Before he can reply, I've hung up on him, and walk back to the room she's in. I can barely see her tear stained face, hugging Christina, and it makes me break inside. I walk to the door, and knock. A few seconds later, Christina is standing at the door.
"What do you want?" She asks, hostile. I sigh, and start to speak.
"I want to talk to my girlfriend."
"Chris… Let him in. And you can go. Please. Just…" I interject.
"Go wait in Uriah's car outside. Don't worry, I won't kill her." Christina sighs, but then gives in, letting me in and leaving the room. I walk slowly over to Tris, not sure how she's feeling about me right now.
"Hey," I say when I get to her bed.
"I thought you were mute there for a second," she jokes, but it's lacking her usual umph, like she's tired, and confused.
"Look… Tris, I just wanted to say how sorry I am. I was just so shocked, and worried about you… I just don't want to lose you." She smiles when I say that, and puts her arms out.
"That's all I wanted to hear," she whispers into my ear as we embrace. I smile, and so does she.
"Have your parents been here?" She shakes her head. "Your brother?" She shakes her head again, and then frowns.
"I think my brother is coming soon. I don't know though." I nod, and kiss her cheek. Just then, my phone buzzes.
"Give me a second," I say, and press the power button to see that I have a text from Zeke.
U told her yet?
Ya. Went gr8. Is chris /w u
Ya. She got here about 2 mins ago y
Told her 2 find u. she didn't seem happy about me talking 2 tris.
Y
Tris prob told her that she thought I was breaking up w her.
Oh
Ya. Gtg bro. can I ttyl
Totally. Fill me in!
With that, I turn my phone back off, and turn towards Tris' beautiful face.
"Who was that?" She asks me, moving her hand to mine. I intertwine them before answering.
"Zeke. Wanted to know where I was, and if I was getting a ride home with him," I answer. Not a complete lie, but I could never be in Candor.
"Oh. Are you?" She asks, her smile fading from her face.
"Do you want me to go?" I ask, squeezing her hand. She shakes her head, and I smile down at her. Our beautiful moment is broken when the door bursts open. A boy in blue emerges. He's wearing black glasses, and carrying a textbook. Erudite.
"Tris? Who's this?" I ask her, kind of dreading the answer.
"Caleb? Took you long enough!" She knows an Erudite guy? How? I clear my throat, and glare at this Caleb guy. I don't think I like him very much.
"Oh, sorry Four. This is my brother, Caleb. He's an Erudite." I sigh in relief. I thought she was maybe cheating on me or something. I nod, and stand up.
"Four," I say, and extend my hand for him to shake. He looks at it with disdain, and I put my hand at my side.
"What's he doing here?" He asks Tris, as if I'm not even here.
"I happen to be her boyfriend," I answer, even if the question wasn't meant for me. Caleb seems to be at a loss for words.
"You are much too young to have a boyfriend Beatrice! Does Mom and Dad know?" I'm actually wondering about that too.
"Well, Mom must know, I mean my Facebook status is 'in a relationship', and has been for a while!" Really? I didn't know that. Wow. I need to be on Facebook more.
"W-w-how old is he?" Wow, Caleb needs some new questions. It should be kinda obvious, I mean… I go to his school for crying out loud!
"I'm eighteen," I answer, angrily. Caleb glares at me.
"I didn't ask you, now did I?" He's obviously trying to look tough, and failing miserably. I turn to Tris, and ask her a silent question: Can I beat him up now?
She looks at me as if I'm crazy. I take it as a no, and groan. I turn around and kiss Tris on the cheek.
"Get better soon, babe. I'll text you later," before walking out the door and into the open air outside. I look for Uriah's car, and find that it's now parked next to mine. I walk over, and am bombarded with questions.
"What happened?" (Christina)
"Is she mad at you?" (Will)
"Did she kick your ass for leaving?" (Christina again)
"Can we leave now?" (Marlene)
"Is she okay?" (Zeke)
"Why aren't you still with her?" Uriah.
"Calm yourselves, calm yourselves. Let me answer your questions one at a time. First thing's first. She isn't mad at me Will, just relieved that I'm not leaving her. She's fine, Zeke. Just tired. No, Christina. She didn't kick my ass for leaving, but I have a feeling you're gonna do it for her, aren't you?" Christina nods, and glares at me, and I sigh. "Anyways, I'm not still with her because her brother came, and I decided to leave, but I told her I'd text her later. As for what happened, we made up, her brother came, and I left. Now, last, and least, Marlene?" She looks at me, bored. "Who barfed in your breakfast this morning? You're being a real bitch about all this." She blushes, and looks at her lap. Then, I get a crazy thought.
"You're not jealous, are you?" She blushes even more, and I'm starting to feel like my suspicions may be correct.
"Marlene? You have no reason to be jealous. Would you like to be stuck in a hospital for three days, nothing to do, bored out of your mind? Waiting for a friend, or a family member to come say hi, and then have to watch them leave, your only company the nurses?" She shakes her head.
"Didn't think so. If I were you, I'd go apologize to Tris." She nods, and gets out of Uriah's car, and runs to the hospital door.
"You didn't have to be so mean to her Four!"
"Really Uriah? You didn't see how she was treating Tris. Why don't you go comfort your girlfriend then? See if we care." Thank you Christina! Uriah just sighs and leans against the seat back.
"Sorry guys. I overreacted. And… Thanks Christina. You're right. I didn't see how she acted, so I shouldn't just assume Tris is in the wrong." Christina nods at him, and I get in my car, and turn on my phone. I turn to messages, and open the one with TRIS as the contact.
4-Hey babe. Ur bro still there?
T-naw, thank the world. Mar is tho. Wen am I gonna see u next?
4-how about… 10 mins?
T-how is th possible? U liv like 20 mins away
4-im in the parking lot /w the others.
T-ohhh sure come on in, but visiting ends in half an hour.
4-k see ya in 10 luv ya
I look into the other car, before opening the door to mine, and stepping back outside.
"See you guys in about ten minutes. I'm just going to go say good night." I start to walk away, and just before I'm out of ear range, I hear someone, probably Zeke or Uriah yell out.
"Don't forget to use protection!" The others laugh, and I roll my eyes. What would I do without my friends? My dumbass, dickhead friends.
Sorry, the endings kinda cheesy, but hey! I was in a cheesy mood. I'm starting to write a Paper Towns story. Do any of my readers like Paper Towns? It's by John Green. If you like Paper Towns, do you think you'd read it? (My story) It's about how I imagined Margo spending her time in Agloe.
R&R
Stay Dauntless,
~Cat
