A/N: LOLZ, Chapter X sounds like some bad horror flick. So gaiz this one is a smutchap. I know, I know, breaking the rules, but the next one is a plotchap. It was necessary for the flow of the story! Sorry this is late, that horrible homework beast has been after my brains! I got my revenge though by writing these chapters in the middle of class. D
Enjoy you wonderful, talented sexalicious people you!
Chapter X
Daniel woke in the darkness between night and morning to see Walter, backlit by the open bathroom door, watching him. He was balled up on the other side of the bed, freckled arms wrapped around his legs and chin pillowed on his knees. Hesitantly, the redhead offered him a shy smile and Daniel felt his breath quicken.
"What's up?" Daniel asked, hefting himself onto an elbow and hissing as his ribs protested.
"Could I try something?" Walter's voice was so quiet it was almost inaudible; the tips of his ears were pink.
"Sure," Daniel agreed, knowing there was an excellent chance he'd regret it later.
Walter rocked forward onto his hands and knees and scuttled across the bed. He slid the duvet aside from Daniel's naked body and slowly lowered himself until his shallow breathing was raising goose bumps on Daniel's hips.
Cautiously, Walter kissed the skin at the crease between hip and thigh, his tongue flickering out for a tickling taste. Daniel was watching so intently that, more than once, he forgot to breathe.
Walter shifted, sliding in the "v" created by Daniel's legs and smoothing his hands over the heavy thigh muscles. He contemplated Daniel's cock for a moment and then looked up at Daniel shyly.
Walter was, by no stretch of the imagination, a handsome man. But just then, blue eyes wide and nervous, freckled cheeks flushed and dry lips parted, for that single moment, he was gorgeous.
"I don't know how." He admitted fearfully.
"It's fine," Daniel assured him, trying very hard not to go mad with anticipation.
Like someone sipped over-hot soup, Walter took the head of Daniel's cock into his mouth.
"G-good," Daniel choked out. "Use your tongue…watch the…o…the teeth." Walter might not be tall or charismatic, but his mouth was hot and his tentative touches were driving Daniel wild.
Daniel knew he would not be hard if it were a woman kneeling between his legs, and he wondered if he'd be hard if it were a professional male whore who knew exactly was he was doing.
Rorschach would not know what he was doing.
Walter took more of Daniel's straining cock into his mouth, grazing it with his teeth a few times.
"S'okay…" Even as squeezed his toes in pain, Daniel was actively holding back shouts, "the vein…on the bottom…your tongue –Ah!" he gasped as Walter found the vein and ran his lips and tongue along it.
There was pain smoldering in his thighs, Walter's nails had compulsively dug into the skin as he worked. Dan would've said something but then Walter's tongue ran over his slit and he decided it wasn't that big a problem. Or, he would've decided if his brain were working at all.
Walter had begun to jerkily bob his head and Daniel used his last ounces of focus to sit up and watch him. Instantly, his mind threw the image of shifting blots on white latex over Walter's face and Daniel panted a warning, Walter picked his head up, but even without the hot mouth around him, Daniel was gone.
What.
Rorschach's limbs shook like frightened rabbits. His mind, so orderly and focused, had been flipped and spun beyond recognition.
Rorschach!
Nite Owl, Daniel, had called his name.
Wants…me, his partner. How long?
Why?
He straightened, producing his hat, face, coat and suit from behind a dripping dumpster.
What does he want you to look like, it wasn't a question, more a pathetic musing, not stupid, ugly, poor, dirty Walter Kovacs.
Walter surfaced violently and Rorschach clenched his face protectively to his chest as white vomit spattered on the alley's splintered concrete.
Rorschach worked out of Walter's clothes and started to struggle into his pinstriped suit. He wandered until he found a mugging and leapt upon the thug, hitting harder and harder, trying to banish the cold, numb shock in his chest with warm spots of guilty blood.
Nite Owl wants-
Never good enough.
Lust, want…
Disappointment.
HEY, GAIZ! DO THESE TAKE UP TOO MUCH ROOM? SHOULD I SWITCH TO EMAIL RESPONSES? IT'S GENERALLY EASIER FOR ME TO RESPOND TO THESE ALL AT ONE TIME, BUT THE SHEER VOLUME OF FEEDBACK FROM YOU SEXY, SEXY CRITICS HAS MADE ME WARY ABOUT RESPONDING TO THEM WITHIN THE FIC. IS THIS OBNOXIOUS OR DO YOU NOT MIND? THANKS! ~PIGGY
Responses:
TwistedRoot: Ah! You read my story! Please do not think less of your beta for writing filthy, awful smut. : Can't wait for your next chapter!
: You'll have to wait and see. ;D
coconutgrowl: Your point inspired a scene in the next chapter. Frozen peas FTW! I do so love your reviews. Poor Daniel and his numerous bruises. :/
Keep No Secrets: Chapter after next is gloves time!
MK08: Yeah, when Rory jumps out of the window in either the comic or the movie I always drool a little. :FFFF
Raven Aorla: Patience is a virtue, my dear. ;3
ChibiPencil: 3
Altariel-Jaina: I'm still kind of guessing the reactions myself. Hopefully I can pull it off half convincingly. :
Dharja: I made not one but two Rorschach Easter eggs and a Daniel egg to go with them. It's pretty sick how deep this addiction runs. *noms cookie*
TheOriginalSheElf: When I started this I would've said NO but now…now I really want to see Rorschach during smexing time. 8O Probably the best I could hope for, in character, is Rory fluff, though. I'll see what I can do. ._.
Wol Lo: Patience, dearie. ;3
FairCritic: I like to think Rorschach respects Daniel, although he doesn't lovers him like Walter-poo. I'll try to show that more in further chapter. Thanks for your reviews. :D
.apart: Thank YOU for being so nice! *wipes eyes with tissue*
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