It had been around half an hour and Maddie was almost done with her first surgery and all of the others were just talking about random things when Susan said "I think I will take Lucy to bed and tell Caspian what's happening then I shall come back" the boys nodded and Susan picked Lucy and went to put her to bed.

It had been another fifteen minutes and one of the nurses came out and said "we were able to do all of the surgeries in one so you can come and see her now but the doctor has something to tell you" they nodded and went in the curtain to see Maddie still on the bed and the doctor with a sad look on his face.

"doctor, what's wrong" Edmund asked "well it seems that Maddie may be in a coma, we have tried many different things but she won't respond to them but I think if you guys tried it may work" the doctor said "I shall leave you now, call me if you need me and if she wakes up make sure that she doesn't stand or sit up" the doctor added and walked off.

Peter sat at one side of her bed, Edmund sat at the other side and Susan sat at the end of her bed "guys we need her get her to respond to us" Susan said "okay, Maddie if you can hear me squeeze my hand" Peter said, him and Edmund are holding Maddies hand, and was waiting for Maddie to squeeze his hand but after five minutes of waiting nothing happened.

"please Maddie we need you" Edmund said almost crying along with everyone else, they waited another five minutes and nothing happened and they all just came to the conclusion that she was in a coma after about twenty to thirty minutes of trying and they all were silently crying.

It was strange. Maddie could hear everything that Peter, Susan and Edmund were saying but could only se white and couldn't move. She heard Peter asking her to squeeze his hand but as hard as she tried she just couldn't. She tried over and over but nothing would happen.

Then she heard a voice "hello, brave one" and she recognized that voice as aslan "hello aslan, what is happening?" Maddie said in her mind "you are almost in a coma my child" aslan said "oh, is that why I can't talk or move" Maddie said "yes, but I think that you have stayed am very proud of you so you will not be in a coma you just won't wake up yet" aslan said "thank you so much aslan" Maddie said "no problem my child but I must go now, don't worry we will meet soon" aslan said, and Maddie could feel that he had gone.

Maddie decided to try one more time to squeeze Peters hand she tried so hard and it worked she squeezed his hand, not tightly but just as much as she could and she was very happy

Thank you for reading. Sorry this chapter is extremely short.

Hannah x