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Percy's POV:

While I was walking to the archery tent I got hit on the back of my head and I blacked out.

When I woke up I saw that I was chained to a wall.

The chains were glowing and celestial bronze.

"Well, Well, Well look who finally woke up" someone said.

I tried to focus on the person but my vision was blurry so all I saw was Blond hair, Blue eyes, and a scar.

I took a guess and said in a hoarse voice "Luke?"

"Hmm looks like you finally got something right." Someone else said.

"What the fuck" I said, "Where am I!"

"Oh don't worry your gonna have a great vacation God of Elements." Luke said. "Oh and don't even try escaping, the chains are inescapable."

I growled at him in a dangerous way that made him flinch a little bit.

Than I figured out that the other person was Annabeth and I said, "Why am I not surprised?"

But Annabeth just yelled "BRING HER IN."

2 monsters kicked in a girl with auburn hair and grey eyes and a lot of bruises.

"Artemis?" I said.

She looked at me with sad eyes and nodded.

Annabeth and Luke walked out the door and yelled, "Happy torturing!"

After a few minutes 2 more people were kicked in from monsters'.

Both were Goth and had well… black hair and pale skin.

They were both unconscious and on the floor.

After a half an hour later the Goth people woke up and looked up confused on the middle of the floor.

Artemis was on my shoulder sleeping.

"What's going on?" The guy said looking around.

"Milady?" The girl said.

"Thalia?" I question/ said.

"Percy?" Thalia (At least I think it's her.)

"Thalia?" the guy said.

"Oh hi Nico" The girl said simply.

"Ok so Thalia, Nico, Artemis, and I are trapped here?" I Asked.

"Well duh were right here." Nico said.

"Jeez lay off man."

"Couldn't you guys just teleport back?" Thalia said to us.

Artemis just shook her head and I said "No because these stupid chains are inescapable."

"Cant you pull them out the walls?" Nico asked.

"Your so dumb Death Breath." Thalia said. "They still can't use their powers or teleport after they pull the chains off."

"Wait maybe we can."

"What?" Nico and Thalia said at the same time.

"Maybe it's inescapable because theirs like something in the wall!"

"Oh" Thalia said surprised that Nico got something right and she got it wrong.

"Here goes nothing," I said as I yanked the chains out the wall and they stopped glowing.

I imagined the chains burning without hurting them.

Third person's POV:

A millisecond later the chains were gone and the 4 were breaking out completely forgetting about teleporting.

On the way they fought some empousi, which Nico sort of feel for their charm speak.

Some Cyclopes that had Bolts, and Trident's.

After a few thousand monsters, traps, alarms, battles, and dead ends we finally found the exit. -

After running a few miles they ended up going to Starbucks.

"What drink would you like?" the girl said to Percy a bit flirty.

"Um just a ice coffee." Percy said.

"OK um, are you single?" the girl said.

Artemis started fuming clenching her hands and met contact with the girls face.

Artemis walked out the door ignoring the stares she was getting.

The big 3 kids ran after Artemis who was bolting down the block at 80 mph.

Percy then remembered he could teleport so he told Thalia to hold on to Nico's hand so he could teleport them.

Then less than a millisecond later he teleported behind Artemis with Nico, Thalia, then grabbed Artemis who was about to get out of their hands.

"Artemis" I said turning her around though she was looking at the floor.

Thalia and Nico took their hands off of Artemis and whistled casually.

Thalia's POV:

"Ok this is awkward." I whispered to Nico while watching their sudden kiss that turned into a make- out session.

"Yeah good thing there aren't a lot of people here… Actually there aren't anyone here," Nico said. "I didn't know that Artemis was the jealous type"

"Shut up Nico." I said punching Nico's arm. "He is the only guy who isn't shallow in the whole world."

"Only?" Nico asked rubbing his arm where I punched him.

"Yes only." I replied.

"Should we break them up now?" Nico asked. "It's getting a bit uncomfortable watching them"

"Yeah ok." I said.

"Do you know a way without getting injured?" Nico asked.

"Hey Artemis! Zoe Nightshade returned and I'm in love with Nico." I said.

Artemis pushed Percy off and looked around for Zoe until she noticed me laughing and frowned.

Nico was now rolling on the floor laughing ignoring the cement.

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