Ok so to all you rereaders this is the newest newest chapter. No one has read this chapter. So this is completely new and this is also where the original story Karaoke Night ended after this chapter and I was gonna start something new.
But if you all really want I will continue with it and just kinda wing it even though I know where it would go if I do continue. So!
In your opinion:
Option A) YES CONTINUE THE STORY OR I WILL KILL YOU
Option B) No just do something else
Option C) Yes continue and start something else
Or
Option D) You're a horrible writer stop writing and get off fanfiction
Personally I really hope none of you want option D other wise I will be very sad and feel unloved.
I know that I said that i was "taking a break" which i still am but i really do wanna know your opinions!
NOW ENOUGH WITH THIS LONG AUTHORS NOTE!!!!
I have no time for men. Here is chapter 10
"Will you be needing your check, sweet thing?" Nico asked trying to be smooth...and failing.
"Yup please and thank you." I responded hastily.
After he finally came back to give us our check, Nico tried once more to make a move on me, "Are you sure? I'm off in about a half hour. I'll show you some sights you ain't never seen before."
"Alright, I've heard enough. Back off waiter boy. Give us our damn check before I make you wish you were dead." Fang said venemously.
"Here's your check thank you for your time." Nico practically squealed out and took off for the kitchen.
"Wish he was dead huh? Waiter boy?" I snorted. Fang rolled his eyes and dropped some cash on the table. I raised my eyebrow at him.
"Your mom gave it to me before we left. Don't blame me." I shrugged my shoulders and stood up to walk out into the now colder October night once again and started walking back to the hotel.
In the distance we heard church bells going saying in was midnight.
"Wow it's midnight?" I asked Fang.
He stopped and turned to me. We were in the middle of central park by now.
"I think this is where the princess turns back into the unloved child." I said to him.
He smirked at me and said, "Well don't worry you're always loved by the kids and me."
We started walking again when Fang grabbed my hand as we were walking.
"Well…" I said not sure what to say, "We haven't been out this late unless we were flying and looking for our parents."
"It would seem to be that way."
We kept walking on and I knew that soon we would get to the hotel so I stopped walking and led Fang over to a bench.
"What is it?" he asked.
"Can we talk about...this?" I asked him holding up our intertwined fingers.
"What is there to talk about?"
"Well there's….I don't know."
"So you want to talk about something but you don't know what you want to talk about it?" he said smirking.
"Ok did that even make sense?" He smirked again. "But what I mean is that I want to talk about why we're gonna do this. I mean how can we do this when we have to save the world and take care of all the kids nonetheless and how is this part of the big picture and with everything that is going on I don't think I can--" Fang put his finger to my lips making me stop.
"Max you are not going to back out of this now. I thought tonight meant something to the both of us. It definitely meant something to me. I don't understand how you can look me in the eye and say that with everything going on and with saving the world that those are some of the reasons that we can not be together. It doesn't make sense."
Geez. He is on a role.
"So I need a good well developed reason about why we can not be together. And saving the world is not a reason."
Fang looked me straight in the eyes when he was saying this. They were looking at me with such a determination that I knew saving the world wasn't a reason. So when I looked into his eyes I knew that I could trust him with the truth. I knew that Fang would always be there and I knew that I needed to try and take a chance.
"Well I just—I want—I don't...I don't want to get hurt." I said not looking at him now.
"Max," Fang said lifting my face up to him, "I promised you I'd never leave you again ever."
"But for some reason that doesn't seem good enough!" I said standing up. "We never thought we were going to split up in the first place and then we did. Ari came into the picture and you just...left. You didn't care that why I took him, you just thought he was a monster. You left me, Nudge,and Angel because my brother was with us. You just decided what you want. And then you left me in the dust."
Now he stood up so he would be taller then me."I never wanted to leave. But I thought I had to. I'm sorry I didm't trust him. But Max, what is it going to take for you to realize that I will never leave you again and that you are the only one I want to be with? When will you realize that every girl I have seen or kissed was never as good as you are. Lissa was never anything to me. Hell I was glad when we left Virginia and I left her. And when I saw you kiss the wiener Sam after your date with him I wanted to go down there and punch his lights out," he said with a chuckle, "and if you thought that I felt anything for Bridget then you are completely wrong. You have always been better then them. I grew up with you. I've gone through thick and thin with you and I still do. I never want to give up on you cause I know i never will. I wish I could do everything for you. I want make sure you see the world. I wish i could just take away the past we've had but if I did I'd never love you the way i do today. I just want to hold you when you're upset and when you're in pain i want to take it all away."
Wow. He just keeps going doesn't he?
"I love you Max. I love you more then the entire world. The second the flock broke up I felt like the other half of me was gone. I know that the flock splitting up was my fault and I over-reacted but Ari is your brother and I should have been more supportive but I hated him so much that I didn't see what my actions would lead to and--" I put my fingers over his lips. This time I had to stop him.
"I understand." I whispered.
"You're my other half Max. I love you with all my heart."(A/N: I JUST COULDN'T STOP WRITING HIS SPEECH! Sorry if I went overboard. But what can you do when a teenage avian american hybrid must pour out his heart? Anyway continue.)
I just stared at Fang. I didn't know what to say to that. I mean what do you say when the ever so non-emotion, short sentence Fang pours out his feelings to you?
"I---I---" SPIT IT OUT! "I think I love you too."
"You think?" he asked his face frowning a bit.
"No, I don't think."
"Well that makes sense. You never use your brain."
I smacked his arm, threw my arms around his neck went up on my toes a bit so I was at his eye level "No I don't think I love you. I know I love you. I do love you Fang. I may not be able to make as big a speech as you but I do love you with all my heart too."
"Really?" he asked, a big smile coming to his face.
"No I'm lying just so you can kiss me again and then I can run away."
"Well I won't let you because I will chase you until you stop and I can say my entire speech, as you call it, again until it gets stuck in that stubborn head of yours." Fang leaned into me and gave me the most passionate perfect kiss I'd ever had. Even though that isn't saying much.
"I love you Ms. Maximum Ride."
"I love you too Fang."
"Always and forever?"
"Always and forever."
We kissed, finished walking back to the hotel, and went up to our floor, by the time we got to our rooms it was around one A.M.
"Let's check on the kids." I whispered.
When we went in Nudge and Angel's room they were passed out on top of the covers so we tucked them in and checked on Iggy and Gazzy. Gazzy was luckily under the covers but sprawled out over the bed and Iggy was laying on the couch; he must have been waiting up for us.
I tiptoed into the room over to him and poked his chest. Which was a bad idea for a blind kid who's been on the run for all his life because his hand whipped out and grabbed my throat.
"IGGY!" I said, my voice strained. But he didn't realize it was me yet so Fang had jump in the middle of it and pull Iggy and I apart. He pulled us out into the hall so we wouldn't wake up the Gasman.
"Max?" Iggy's sad voice said. "I'm so sorry. You just startled me and I'm so so sorry."
"Iggy don't worry. I've been through worse and I shouldn't have tapped you like that. Sorry to wake you. I just wanted to tell you we were back. Okay?"
"Okay. I'm really sorry Max."
"Iggy. Don't worry about it. I promise I'm fine.
"Alright. Night guys." He walked back into his room and locked the door behind him. Fang and I just stood in the hall for a minute taking in what happened.
"You sure you're alright?"
"I'm fine. Come on. Let's go to bed." I said starting to walk to our room. I was actually a little shook up. Iggy was so on edge, I never realize how much of a disadvantage he was at. Fang grabbed my arm and pulled me into a hug; Of course he could see right through me
"It'll be fine Max. He's more on edge now because there is always that possibility on Intex comng back." He whispered.
"I know. Let's just go to bed."
When we got in we got ready for bed and before I got in bed while Fang was getting ready I closed all the windows and locked the door to the hall except the door connected to the two boys room and ours. Then when I was done with that, Fang was done getting ready and starting to turn off all the lights and getting into bed. Which we were sharing… nope this won't be awkward.
"Max, can I actually crack the curtains open?"
"Sure."
"Fang?" I asked before he laid down. "Can I have a good night kiss?"
"As You Wish." Then he leaned down and gave me a sweet kiss. (A/N: whose seen The Princess Bride? Anyone?)
"Goodnight Max."
"Goodnight Fang."
Then I closed my eyes and felt Fang's strong arm pull me close to him and I fell asleep ready for anything.
Well there you have it. It was the infamous missing chapter. So it's finally up all you rereaders. Now be sure to tell me what I should do in your opinion.
Choose between option A,B,C, or D or just say what you feel. Thanks for all your support!
I might have a idea for where to go with this story if i ever did continue but TA DA! THE END OF IT STARTED WITH A SONG...MAYBE!