CH. 10
Woohoo, I've hit the double digit mark for my Bleach story (Awesome). Anyway I know it took me a little longer than usual to upload CH. 10. That's because the first chapter of my pokemon mystery dungeon story is up and running. So I was working on that and be sure to check it out. It's called "Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: River's Exploration Tale. Another reason is because I found this cool Mai-Hime story called "Altered Destiny" by "DarkNovelist1217". It's labeled Mai-Hime but it takes place in the otome universe, If you have an interest in Mai-hime then you should check out "Altered Destiny" because it's just plain awesome (And be sure to review that story as well). The final reason is because too many things were going on for me so it was a little hard to find time to write for you all out there. Without further ado, I present to you all CH. 10 of my bleach story. Enjoy.
Rin just sat there as he watched his close friend Seinaru wearing clothes he's never seen before along with wielding a katana that looked almost twice as big as regular one battle a giant moth like monster.
"Just what the hell is going on? I've never seen Seinaru do something like this before." Rin then looked at Tiana as he asked "Tiana, just who are you? And what is Seinaru doing?" Tiana then looked at Rin and said
"My name is Tiana Alpha." she began "I'm something called a soul reaper, but after a certain incident I lost almost all of my powers and gave them to Seinaru. So he is now a soul reaper himself." Rin then looked at Seinaru who was still battling the moth like hollow named Spirit consumer.
*KLANG, KLANG, KLANG*
"Dammit you hollow." shouted Seinaru who kept on coming at the hollow that blocked all of Seinaru's attacks. Seinaru noticed something about the hollow that he was battling after quite a few blocked attacks. "That's weird, not once has he attacked yet. He's only defending. Why is that?" Spirit consumer then blocked another attack from Seinaru with its wings and pushed Seinaru back by opening the wings that were used to block. Seinaru then quickly got traction on his feet and launched himself to Spirit consumer to try and do an attack while Spirit consumer had his wings wide open. Spirit consumer who was slow to react saw Seinaru's attempt to attack at the last second and barely had enough time to defend the attack. Seinaru swung wide at the moth like hollow, but even though Spirit consumer barely had enough time to defend due to Seinaru's quick counterattack he managed to defend himself with one of its wings at the last second. Seinaru swung his sword so hard and fast that it caused one of Spirit consumer's wings to crack and break a little bit.
"Yes, I managed to get him a little bit." Seinaru thought in his head "Just keep on charging at him like this and he won't have anything to use to defend against. I wonder why the soul reapers had difficulty destroying this hollow for 8 years." Spirit consumer looked at his cracked wing and laughed. Seinaru, Tiana, and Rin were confused why he was laughing.
"Impressive" said Spirit consumer. "I can't believe that you were able to break my wing a little bit. Normally no soul reaper could do that at all. You're only the 3rd to actually break it."
"Well that's just good to know." Seianaru thought in his mind a little sarcastically "I'm only the 3rd to chip his wing like that? He must be really that strong then." Seinaru held his sword up assuming fighting position. "Damn, all he's been doing so far is defending. Now that his wing has been chipped, most likely he's gonna go on the attack then."
"Well then soul reaper, you've proved that you're stronger than the other soul reapers I've eaten." said Spirit Consumer. He then charged at Seinaru and swung his wing at him. Seinaru managed to block the attack, but was pushed back a little bit. Seinaru held his sword up against the wing that used to attack him and was holding his ground against Spirit consumer's attack. "Now that it turns out I'll have to go on the offensive since you cracked my wing. Are you ready to die and be eaten by me?" asked Spirit consumer. Seinaru just simply smiled at the hollow.
"I'm ready for anything hollow. In fact, I'm more than ready to take on the likes of you." said Seinaru who was ready to fight. "Come at me with everything you've got Spirit consumer." Seinaru shouted who was eager to destroy this hollow once and for all. Spirit consumer glared at Seinaru with its crimson eyes and charged at him. Seinaru dodged and Spirit consumer crashed into the wall. Seinaru then ran straight to Spirit consumer and swung his sword at him. But Spirit consumer just swung his wing in defense which caused the sword to go up. Spirit consumer saw this chance and swung another wing at Seianru. Seianru tried backing away from the attack, but got cut on the leg while moving away. Seinaru saw the cut on his leg and then glared at Spirit consumer. "I have to be more careful. That wound he gave me on the leg made it to where I can't move it as well."
"That wound he got on his leg is pretty bad." Rin thought in his mind.
"Seinaru, pay attention to his eyes when he attacks so you'll know where he will strike next." shouted Tiana. Seinaru payed attention to Tiana's advice because when Spirit consumer charged at him, Seinaru saw that the attacking hollow was aiming for his injured leg by watching where Spirit consumer's eyes were looking at even though they were bug like eyes. Seianru blocked the attack easily and pushed the hollow back. Seinaru charged at the hollow that was just pushed back with its wings spread out.
*SCHING*
Seianru managed to stab Spirit consumer in the stomach. Spirit consumer shrieked in pain from the stomach wound.
"RAAAAAAAH Damn you soul reaper. I can't believe you managed to wound me like this." said Spirit consumer. But for some unknown reason Spirit consumer just laughed. "I guess I should use that then."
"What is he planning to do now?" said Seianru in his mind.
"Come to me human." Just then something jumped right in front of Spirit consumer. Seianru went wide eyed when he saw what was in front of him. Right in front of Seinaru, was his friend Rin. After Seinaru came over his shock he glared at Spirit consumer and was mad as hell.
"Damn you hollow." shouted an enraged Seinaru "Quit acting like a coward and fight me without involving innocent people like that." Seianru then faced Tiana "Tiana, what the hell happened to Rin?"
"Soul consumer has the ability to control victims that he isn't finished with yet." responded Tiana "He can use his victims as shields against attacks." "That hollow is a coward if you ask me. Truth is I fought against Spirit consumer as well and he used a woman as a shield against me. I was lucky to have been saved by my captain." Tiana then got enraged just thinking about her own encounter with Spirit consumer. "SEIANARU!" yelled a raged filled Tiana. Seinaru was shocked to hear that from Tiana.
"I've never heard Tiana like this before." thought Seianru in his mind. "But, for some reason, that shout just made me want to destroy this hollow more than ever now."
"Destroy this hollow like you've never destroyed hollows before. And also," Tiana looked at Seianru square in the eye as she said her next sentence. "Don't make the same mistake that I made when I went up against this hollow. Seianru was surprised to hear the fact that Tiana also fought Spirit consumer as well in the past. Then right after hearing that last sentence only one thing mattered in his mind right now, destroy the hollow known as Spirit consumer who acted like a coward for the last 8 years once and for all. Seianru then took a couple steps toward Spirit consumer and then stopped near Rin who was possessed.
"Well then soul reaper, what are you going do now? Your dear friend is under my con-"
*SLASH*
Spirit consumer was interrupted by the sound of two of its wings being sliced off. Spirit consumer looked behind him and saw Seinaru in the air with his sword that was covered in the hollow's blood a little bit. Spirit consumer also saw its cut off wings behind him. Seinaru looked behind him and glared at Spirit consumer. When Seinaru glared at Spirit consumer, a huge blast of spirit energy was released for a split-second, and then it went back to normal. The huge blast of spirit energy stunned spirit consumer and couldn't move at all. Seinaru didn't even waste a second when this happened. He charged at Spirit consumer a lot faster than usual and cut off the remaining two wings off of his opponent.
*SLASH*
"ROOOOOOOOAAAAAAR, CURSE YOU SOUL REAPER." said Spirit consumer yelling in pain. Tiana was just astonished when she felt that split-second blast of spirit energy emanating from Seianru.
"This feeling is just like that time Seinaru first became soul reaper." said Tiana in her mind. Seinaru then went up to the controlled Rin and looked straight into Rin's eyes. After just one look, Spirit consumer lost control of Rin and fell on top of Seinaru. "Seinaru just healed someone by using spirit energy alone. How can he do that? This isn't the first time he's done this before." said Tiana in her mind "When Seinaru first became a soul reaper, he was able to make to where the massive wounds I sustained that night didn't hurt as much just by feeling his spirit energy. Now he was able to break Spirit consumer's control by using his spirit energy alone even though he can't really control it."
Seinaru held the unconscious Rin over his shoulder and placed him down near Tiana. Seinaru then turned to Spirit consumer who has just all four of his wings. As a result, it can longer fly or defend.
"Take care of Rin." said Seianru. Tiana nodded even though Seinaru couldn't see it. Seinaru knew Tiana's response even without looking behind him. "I'm gonna do one final attack on him, and then this hollow will no longer be a threat to anyone. To humans and soul reapers." After that last sentence, Seianru charged one last time at Spirit consumer to do the final blow. Spirit consumer tried to use one more attack on Seinaru to try and get away at the last minute. Spirit consumer raised its two front leags and shot them at Seinaru. Seianru just dodged the two leg attacks and before Spirit consumer knew it, Seinaru was right in front of him. Seinaru raised his sword up high in the air, held on to the sword with both of his hands, and swung it down. To Spirit consumer it seemed that the sword was coming down extremely slow. Spirit consumer just sat there watching the sword coming closer and closer to his face.
"Curse…. You…. Seinaru." After those last few words, Seianru slashed Spirit consumer's face. Spirit consumer slowly disappeared as Seinaru walked to Tiana and Rin. Seinaru knelt down and watch Rin slowly open his eyes and said while trying to hold a smile
"You've got a lot of explaining to do you know that." Rin said weakly. Seinaru just smiled at rin as he said
"Yeah I'll explain everything soon enough."
THE NEXT DAY
Seinaru was walking to the store doing errands for his mother and he was glad that no hollows have appeared so far.
"Hey Seianru." said a familer voice Seinaru. Seinaru looked behind him and saw Rin. "Hey Seinaru, whats new?"
"Nothing much." said Seianru "I'm just doing errands for my mom."
"I see, are you free next Thursday?" asked Rin
"Yeah I am, something going on that day?" asked Seianru
"Yeah, I've got concert tickets of our favorite band and I wanted to know if you'd like to come with along with a few other of our friends. I've got an extra ticket for Tiana if she'd like to go as well. The three of us sure had a good time at the park yesterday. Who would've thought that a sumo wrestler would come charging through the park while holding chair." said Rin
"Yeah, we had a pretty good time." said Seinaru "I have to move along I'll ask Tiana if she has any interest in coming with us to the concert."
"Alright, later." said Rin as he walked away. Seianru watched Rin walk away as he thought
"Sorry for letting Tiana do this to you." said Seianru in his head.
*FLASHBACK*
"Seianru" shouted Rin "Tell what was it that you're-"
*BOOM*
Rin was blinded by an explosion and was knocked out the moment he saw it."
"Tiana, what the hell did you do?" asked a freaked out Seinaru who saw that Tiana held something in front of Rin that exploded. Tiana held a small rod that had a dangling chicken head at the tip of the rod.
"This is something called memory replacement." explained Tiana "Soul reapers usually use this when we try to cover up our tracks when either people see us or hollows so that way we can prevent an uproar with humans.
"Memory replacement?" said Seianru "So you just replaced Rin's memories with something else?"
'Yes" began Tiana "The only problem is that we don't get to choose what the forgotten memories will be replaced with."
"Wait, what?" asked Seinaru
"You'll know exactly what I mean tomorrow." explained Tiana while grinning a little bit.
*FLASHBACK END*
"Seinaru, a hollow has been spotted." shouted Tiana who came out of nowhere. Seianru who didn't complain followed Tiana to where the hollow's location was.
"Sorry mom" said Seinaru in his mind. "Turns out I'm gonna be home a little late today."
And that's the end of CH. 10. I hope you enjoyed this chapter as much as I did writing it. Once again I'm sorry for posting later than usual. The reason is on top of the chapter. Anyway, I have a little favor to ask you all when reviewing. Please comment on how I did during the battle between Seinaru and the hollow called Spirit consumer. I wanna know if I did good, bad, or maybe it was good except there were some things to work on, that sort of thing. If you can comment on the battle, that would be most appreciative. I'm not really the greatest when writing really long battles. Please Review and this is the Holy Writer signing out.