An Early Look: Alexis' Original Nightmare
Author's note: As you all know, Chapter 69 went through one of the most major changes in this entire story. As a matter of fact, Alexis' and Matilda William's nightmares were added only after the original chapter was published. Despite this, they went through many major changes.
Enjoy the original version of Alexis' nightmare, everyone.
Alexis wasn't having such a wonderful time, either. As soon as Kevin Prune's Prank Gas came into her room, she started coughing.
"M-must escape!" coughed Alexis, running towards an electronic door that Kevin suddenly closed. Alexis ran towards another one, but he closed that door as well.
Suddenly, coughing furiously, Alexis Williams collapsed on the ground with a THUMP!
"H-huh?" said Alexis Williams, opening her eyes and standing up, not knowing that she was in a hallucination.
The place that she found herself in was extremely grey and rocky, and dense fog was everywhere. She was in none other than the dreaded Minusland!
"W-why am I here?!" screamed Alexis Williams extremely scared.
Alexis suddenly turned behind her. She heard footsteps!
"Who's there?!" shouted Alexis, extremely scared.
The body suddenly revealed itself out of the fog. It was Phineas Troutbeck!
"Phineas!" shouted Alexis happily. "I'm so happy to see you!"
"Why, if it isn't Little Miss Nice Girl!" laughed Phineas Troutbeck evilly, suddenly pushing Alexis to the ground.
She got up, and Phineas started to chase her!
"Hahahaha!" laughed the hallucination Phineas Troutbeck evilly. "You'll never escape me!"
"Ahhhhhh!" screamed Alexis, extremely scared. "Oof!"
She noticed that she had ran into an extremely plumb body. The person turned around. It was Miss Trunchbull!"
"Well well, look who we have here," smirked the hallucination Miss Trunchbull. "The disgusting brat herself makes a reappearance."
"NO!" screamed Alexis Williams, running away as fast as she could from the hallucination Phineas Troutbeck and Miss Trunchbull.
"Come back here, you human trash pile!" screamed the hallucination Miss Trunchbull, running after Alexis.
"I still need to bully and push you around some more, you polite freak!" screamed the hallucination Phineas Troutbeck.
Suddenly, she saw two people- a boy and a girl- in the dense fog. They were holding hands. It was Adam Wood and Emma P. Perr.
"Well well, darling," smiled the hallucination Emma P. Perr evilly. "Why, if it isn't that disgusting human who sent us here to look for her in the first place."
"It looks like she's come back for more," smirked the hallucination Adam Wood.
"Indeed," smirked the hallucination Emma, still holding the hallucination Adam's hand.
Now, Phineas, Miss Trunchbull, Adam, and Emma were all chasing after her! Suddenly, she heard something in the near distance. As it came closer, she noticed two headlights. It was a car!
The car continued driving faster and faster, and it wouldn't stop. Suddenly, she got hit by it! Fortunately, though, she didn't get run over. Alexis look into the car, and she saw her father!
"Daddy!" screamed Alexis Williams desperately, about to cry. "Please save me!"
The evil hallucinations had surrounded her!
"Not on your life," smirked the hallucination Noah Williams evilly. "You're just a disgusting brat who should've disappeared in here in the first place! Have a fun time being a Minus, Alexis!"
Noah Williams laughed evilly, then drove away.
The evil hallucinations continued to come closer and closer to her, and even closer…
Suddenly, she felt a pinch on her legs. A Gnoolie had bitten her!
"NOOOOOO!" Alexis Williams screamed, as she looked down.
Her entire body was starting to disappear!"
"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!" screamed Alexis Williams, extremely frightened.
Then, as soon as she disappeared completely, the poor girl woke up from her fear.
"MOMMY!" screamed Alexis, banging on the closed electronic doors. "DADDY!"
Speaking of Alexis' mother, Matilda Williams wasn't doing so great, either. She was laying down, extremely scared and shivering in her nightmare.
"N-noah…!" she screamed fearfully in her nightmare. "N-no! It can't be!"
Author's Note: So, what do you think? As for Matilda's unwritten (at the time, but planned) nightmare, it would have been the same, except with only the zombie Noah, and no connection to Alexis' and Grandpa Joe's nightmares at all.
Which version do you all prefer, and why? As for me, I prefer the final version, because it's more action-packed, but that my opinion.
Stay tuned for more content from me! :D
Until then,
Gabe S. :)