To the guest that reviewed thanks. I've corrected most if not all the grammar. As for Kakarot's personality being bland, I just have one question for you how exactly do you think a born warrior would act? When I think born warrior I think Spartan and seeing as they valued strength over all I don't really see a "loud" or colorful personality as being something a warrior would embrace. For rewriting and making him a d-bag with a golden heart I think that's too light hearted for a Saiyan, gotta remember this is a race that kills and conquers planets before they talk. The reason the chapters are short is because im basing it of the original episodes so I think a 20 min episode could be made of what im writing if I added a little more fluff.
We join our neutral party driving in the desert headed towards the final dragon ball.
"I've been meaning to ask what are you guys gonna do with your wish?" Oolong asked from behind the wheel
"I'm gonnna wish for a boyfriend" Bulma said with hearts in her eye
"I don't know what I'm going to do with my wish" Kakarot said releasing a little bit of killer intent
"Woah dial that back" Oolong said as he could feel himself almost lose consciousness
"How close are we?" Kakarot asked retracting some of his K.I
"Well if we stay on this road it should take us to the dragon ball" Bulma said looking at the radar
"Alright drive faster Oolong" Kakarot ordered the pig
"Will do" Oolong said as he pressed harder on the accelerator
Somewhere in the middle of the desert
"Emperor Pilaf we are ready to go" Mai said as she pulled her car up.
"Yes, sire we are already" Shu added from his robo suit
"Well don't just stand there go and get me those dragon balls" the blue dwarf ordered
"Yes sir!" the duo shouted as they sped off towards the dragon balls
Back with the group
"Kakarot, what's the deal with the tail? Are you like half monkey? Monkey human or Human monkey" Oolong ask
"Seeing as killing you in this closed space could possibly damage the radar or kill the creator, I will spare you this time for that disrespect" Kakarot said coldly "But if you must know I'm not from this insignificant rock and I'm not one of these weak earthlings. I'm a Saiyan, one of the greatest warrior races this galaxy has ever seen."
"You're an alien?" Oolong asked
"Yes even though that concept shouldn't be hard for a transforming pig that walks on two legs in a world of human like animals" Kakarot replied
"Wow, looks like those things I had you read are paying off" Bulma said noticing the boy's increasing vocabulary
"Oolong Stop!" Kakarot shouted as the pig slammed on brakes
"What'a wrong?" Oolong asked as he turned to look at the Saiyan.
"Something doesn't feel right…" Kakarot says his instincts telling him something bad was going to happen.
"Yea why did" Bulma was able to get out right before Kakarot grabbed her and the pig and jumped from the car landing on the desert sand. No sooner than the three landed on the sand did a missile crash into the car.
"We were gonna be car roast" Oolong says looking at the burning wreckage
"What the hell is that?" Kakarot asked looking at the three legged refrigerator looking thing
"Its some type of robot or robotic suit" Bulma says looking at the robot as it landed near the car
Picking up the car the robot shakes the frame until the truck and hood pop open. Out of the truck fell, several of Bulma's suitcases. The robot grabbed on specific case
"Thanks for the dragon balls." The ninja dog said from inside the robot
"Wait I know you" Kakarot said remembering running into the ninja dog while wolf hunting.
"I remember you brat you blew up our helicopter." Shu said pointing at the boy
"I've got something else for you to" Kakarot said as he fired a ki blast at him
"Not gonna work this time. Explosive proof plate armor. See ya losers" Shu said as his robot started flying into the air
"Shit he must have a dragon ball radar" Kakarot said
"Why do you say that?" Oolong asked
"He went straight for one case." Kakarot said
"He must have a lot of money or connections" Bulma added "This radar cost me almost 200,000 zeni to make."
"Damn he's getting away! Bulma get another car I'll go trail him" Kakarot said as he flew into the air
"Ok" Bulma said as she ran over to one of her less burned suit cases
With the robot
"Mai to Shu, Mai to Shu. Do you copy over?" Mai spoke into her radio
"I copy over." Shu replied
"ETA over?" Mai asked
"T-minus 30 seconds just about to land so start the engine over." Shu said as he landed the suit
"Engine are already started just waiting on you, over." Mai informed
"Alright getting out and heading to the plan now over." Shu said right before he jumped out of his robot suit.
Flipping the switch to open the door, Shu quickly jumped in the plane.
"You got them?" Mai asked as she sped the plain towards take off
"Yea, all we have to do is get these back to Emperor Pilaf. Hurry up though, that monkey kid from that fake dragon ball report is trailing me." Shu said
"I'm not getting shot down again!" Mai shouted as she pressed on the accelerator harder
"It was so easy to get them, like taking candy from a baby" Shu said with a smile
"We are gonna get such a big raise!" Mai said with dollar signs for eyes
"Hey careful don't crash." Shu shouted
Back with Kakarot
"There it is" Kakarot said as he spotted the robot
Landing by the robot Kakarot can clearly see that no one is in there
"Damn it he's gone!" Kakarot shouted in anger. "Ki Grenade" Kakarot said as he tossed the purple orb into the robot. Firing another blast into the sky to signal to the bluenette and walking bacon where he was.
With Mai and Shu
"Emperor Pilaf! Emperor Pilaf we got them" Shu said as he ran into the Emperor
"Shu you fool shut up and hand them over." Pilaf said with drool coming out the corner of his mouth.
Shu placed the suitcase on the emperor's table
Pilaf slowly worked his hands over to the suitcase before he opened it. His eyes were greet with the site of the 5 dragon balls.
"Muahhhahhha. There here! I can finally rule the world!" Pilaf shouted in joy.
"Shu do you see that?" Mai whispered to the ninja dog
"See wha... uhoh" Shu said
"This is the best day of my life!" Pilaf shouted
"Um sire..." Shu trailed off
"What is!" Pilaf shouted, mad that his celebration was being cut short.
"Sir you only have 5" Mai said
"WHAT!" the emperor shouted at the top oh his lungs "Find that 7th dragon ball, I will not be denied my world wide kingdom" Pilaf ordered
"According to the radar its actually near us" Mai said looking at the computer
"I bet its on that brat. Remember the radar showed there were 6 balls in close proximity to each other. I bet that brat was holding one." Shu added
"Interesting i think this could work to our advantage" Pilaf said with a smirk
With Kakarot
"He's gone!" Bulma shouted the obvious.
"Thanks for stating the obvious" Oolong sarcastically said "You got any idea how long ago he left" Oolong asked
"I'd say 5 minutes or less." Kakarot said as he sniffed the air "We could get lucky if he turns around" Kakarot added
"Why would her turn around?" Bulma asked
"Because he only got the 5. I still have mine" Kakarot said holding the 4 star ball
"Thank Kami i thought they got them all" Bulma said breathing a sign of release
"So what are we gonna do?" Bulma asked
"I can smell fuel going in that direction. Along with these tracks over here. So if we get back in the car we can still find them." Kakarot said.
"Alright lets go" Bulma said as she got back in the car.
"Almost forgot. Release." Kakarot said as he robot suit exploded
"Was that really necessary?" Oolong asked looking at the smoldering wreck
"I'm going to destroy everything this dog owns for stealing my dragon balls" Kakarot said eyes filled with determination and anger
20 mins of following the gas trail.
Looking in the distance the group is greeted with the site of a massive castle.
"Wow this place is huge" Oolong said as he almost hurt his neck looking up at the castle as he parked the car.
"Looks like you were right, that dog or whoever he works for is rich as fuck" Kakarot said as he got out of the car
"This place is bigger than mine" Bulma said feeling a slightly bit jealous
"That door looks impenetrable" Oolong said looking at the 20 foot tall castle door.
"Well let's find out… Kaa…meeee…haaa…meee…haa" Kakarot shouted as he fired the purple and white beam at the middle of the door. Running the beam up and down the door the door explodes open. "Damn that's kind of a drain" Kakarot said as he was now sweating.
"Woah its dark in there." Bulma said as she looked down the dark corridor "Kakarot you go first"
"Fine" Kakarot said as he charged a ki blast in his hand as a light. "My instincts tell me to be on high alert so you two don't touch anything" Kakarot ordered
"Believe me that wont be a problem" Oolong said as he closely tailed the alien warrior
"Lets just hurry it up and get our balls back" Bulma said ash she trailed the pig
Personally i think this was a boring episode (from the anime since that's how im doing the chapter) do sorry if its boring i tried to fluff it up. But anyways please review you guys and girls i hope who did review mad me write this i did it in about a 2 days so thants for the support and since one of my classes is ending soon u can expect more frequent i get 10 new reviews i automatically start working on that story. Also pleas check out my one piece story its what im watching currently and i must say its a tier below how good dragon ball + z was/is. So please read that too.