Here is Chapter 10! I hope you enjoy it!


Chapter 10: Discovery

Car comes to a screeching halt…

Geoff: All right, we bought some time because the cops went off course.

Harold: Yeah… so how do we get into the Palace?

Duncan: Ok… I was hoping you guys had and idea.

Trent (woke up from big, alcoholic hangover): DUNCAN!!

Duncan: What? I can't think of everything.

Guys thinking… two minutes later…

Owen: Oh, I got it!

Tyler: WHAT?!

Owen: Maybe we could find some air vents to crawl through so we can locate the girls.

Geoff: Air vents?

Owen: Yeah, every place has them. We just crawl through, wait until the big boys are off to sleep, grab our gals, and leave.

Duncan: That's fine, except for one thing.

Owen: What's that?

Duncan: Your physique! How are you going to fit through an air vent!?

Owen: … Oh, right!

Trent: Now, wait, I think Owen has an idea here.

Geoff: How's that?!

Trent: We five go through the vents, but before that, we disguise Owen as a bodyguard or something. Then, I brought these walkie-talkies just in case, he can tell us when it is time to get out of the vents. Because, even if we see the guys go in to there rooms, they could come right back out for any reason and spot us.

Tyler: That's perfect! Let's do it.

Duncan: But what can we find to disguise Duncan?!

Trent: Good question.

Harold (feels something on his foot): Hey, what's this? (Picks up a fake goatee)

Geoff: What is that?

Harold: It's a goatee. But I think it's fake.

Duncan (confused): Uh, Um, okay, I do not know how that happened, but it will have to do. Owen, put this on.

Owen: OKAY!

Tyler: And turn your shirt backwards so no one will recognize you.

Geoff: Oh, and take my hat.

Harold: Okay, I think that will do it.

Trent: One last thing, (hands Owen the walkie-talkie), remember Owen, when you are sure the boys have fallen asleep, you call us and we will come down.

Owen: Got it!

Tyler: All right guys! Let's do this!

All: YEAH!!!

The boys go around the palace and they do find an air vent and they begin crawling… Meanwhile, new disguised bodyguard Owen knocks on the door…

Knock knock

Chef: Yeah, what do you want?

Owen (in his mind): gasp It's Chef! What's he doing here?! UH OH!!

Chef: Well?!

Owen (with new voice): Um, yes. I am Ow… Oscar and I have been hired to be your bodyguard for the week.

Chef: I did not order no bodyguard.

Owen: Yes, well, you see, part of the reason is my.. uh car broke down and I need a place to stay tonight. And since this is… uh the notorious Bunny Palace, I thought I would… uh be the body guard for the night. It is… uh my job.

Chef: Oh, well, in that case, I think its okay. Come on in!

Owen (in mind): Yes!

Meanwhile in the air vents, it is, in order, from back to front, Harold, Tyler, Trent, Geoff, Duncan…

Harold: I sure hope Owen got in.

Duncan: (stops)

Geoff (bumps into Duncan); Dude, what gives?!

Duncan: Guys, look!

All guys look to see that Owen has gotten in and is being escorted by Chef…

Tyler: That looks like Chef!

Geoff: No way, that can not be Chef.

Trent: Wait, look over by that door.

The guys look over to see none other than Chris MacClean come out after closing the door…

Harold: That's Chris MacClean!

Trent: So they are the ones holding up our girls.

Duncan: God, I am going to kill those two.

Tyler: Save some room for me!

Geoff: Shh, they are talking…

In the room…

Chris: So, we have a new bodyguard, huh?

Chef: Yep.

Chris: Cool. Show him his room if he gets tired. Any way, I am going to sleep.

Chef: All right boy, here is your stay for the night. And I better not hear you outside my walls or all hell will break loose. Understand?!

Owen: Uh, uh yes sir.

Chef: Good! I am going to sleep!

Owen: Good night!

Chef: Whatever (closes door to Owen's room)

Owen (emerging from his room) (sees Chef and says): Just getting… a drink.

Chef: Fine! See ya! (Closes his door)

Owen looks through the peek hole of both doors and sees both Chef and Chris are asleep…

Owen (walkie-talkie): Okay, coast is clear.

All boys emerge from the vents…

Trent: Good job Owen.

Owen: Thanks! Now where are the girls?

Tyler: I saw Chris come from this door.

Duncan: Okay, moment of truth…

Opens door to the girls room…

Duncan: YES! (goes quieter) We have to be quiet. Tyler, close the door behind you.

Tyler: (quiet) Okay (shuts door)

Geoff: So, do we just wake them up?

Trent: I think so. Because we are too tired to carry them to the car.

Duncan: Courtney?

Courtney: what?! Gasp Duncan, you are here (hugs him)

Harold: LeShawna?

LeShawna: Who there?! Harold, you came to my rescue (Hugs him tight that he nearly explodes)

Tyler: Lindsay?

Lindsay: T… Tyler! You're here. OMG! OMG! OMG!

Trent: Gwen?

Gwen: What, it's l… Trent! (hugs him)

Owen: Wake up, my little hyena.

Izzy: Wha… Owen?! You're here. YYYYYEEEAAAAHHHH!!!!!

Geoff: Shh. Bridge?

Bridgette: Geoff?! It's you! (crying while hugging)

Duncan: We're here to bust you out.

Courtney: We can't. This place is constantly being monitored.

LeShawna: Yeah, if we are caught…

Trent: Doesn't matter.

Tyler: Yeah, we are getting out one way or another.

Geoff: We ain't leaving you behind

Owen: Come on.

All the boys piggy-back the girls…

Geoff: Look, the door.

Duncan: Almost there!

Suddenly, an alarm sounds and the door is locked through a medieval gate…

All: CHRIS!

Chris: So, we have some Romeo's coming to save there Juliet's, huh?

Tyler: Give up, Chris.

Duncan: Yeah, it's six on two.

Chris: Mwahahahahaha!!!

Harold: What's so funny?!

Chris: You think you have won. On the contrary, you're about to lose, in more ways than one. (presses red button)

Girls: NOOOOO!!!!

Trent: What's going on?!

Gwen: TRENT…

LeShawna: HAROLD…

Bridgette: GEOFF…

Lindsay: TYLER…

Izzy: OWEN…

Courtney: DUNCAN…

They all show red in there eyes…

Geoff: BRIDGETTE!!! What have you done?!

Chris: It's not what I have done, but what has happened because of you.

Owen: Let them go, Chris!

Tyler: Yeah, it's us you want.

Chris: I can't. I just pressed this button for the third time. Your girls are now my mind-controlled slaves. And there is nothing you can do. Unless…

Duncan: Unless what?

Chris: Unless you would be willing to hurt the ones you love…

To Be Continued


Now that the girls are under Chris' control, will the boys survive? Can they get there girls back or is this the end? And what about the police officer who, I just heard, got back on the exit and is on there way? The answers coming soon!

Hey guys! Sorry about the long updates! I hope you liked the chapter. Don't worry, Chapter 11 will be up sooner than usual.