Midnight: Hey! :) (: Sorry about the really long wait for the update! Hey that rhymes! I'm a poet!
Sour: Shut up, you are not.
Midnight: Fine. Well anyways, I'm tired of telling you why I didn't update fast or anything, so instead...We'll just talk about crap that no one cares about! How does that sound?
Cookies: I like that idea!
Sour: You like any idea as long as it's Midnights.
Cookies: I do not!
Midnight: Yes, you actually do.
Cookies: *Gets confused look on face* *Confused look suddenly turns happy* *It's as if she forgot about that argument 2 seconds after it happened* Hey! Guess what? Everyone, I left a review on Midnights story Karma! Well actually I left 2! You guys should read them sometime! I am such a loving person! Well since Midnights the writer I am. But I really created that review, cuz Midnight, only creates THIS me in her stories! I AM my OWN person outside of her stories! And I'm just as awesome, but personally, Midnight thinks that I'm better in these stories!
Midnight: WHAT? How can you tell?
Sour: *Gives her the 'are you really that stupid?' look*
Midnight: ! I get it now! Since she isn't real in my stories, and I'm writing all her lines, that means that she knows what I think and I write what she thinks! I understand now!
Sour: *mumbles under her breath* Well, took you long enough!
Midnight: Are you calling me a retard?
Sour: Did I say I was calling you a retard?
Midnight: No! But I know you're thinking it!
Sour: True, but I never SAID it...Yet...Did I?
Midnight: I dare you to call me a retard!
Sour: You're a retard.
Midnight: Ritard? That's a musical term, Dumbass!
(Ritard, not Retard. Ritard is a musical term that means 'slow or slacking in pace' and is usually placed at the end of a song.) (I'm so smart! YAY! LOL! J (: )
10 Minutes Later
Cookies: OMG! Have you heard of that new band, Broken Ride?
Midnight: YEAH! I love them! I even have a signed t-shirt from them! My dad knows 2 or 3 of the guys in that band, cuz they work in the same place he does!
Sour: What?
Cookies: Broken Ride? Have you not heard of them? Seriously-(cut off by sour)
Sour: I've heard of them! But what I want to know is... HOW THE HELL DID WE END UP TALKING ABOUT MUSIC?
Midnight: *Whispers in Cookies ear* I won't tell her if you don't.
Cookies: *Whispers back* Ok.
Sour: Ugh! What ever! This sucks! I wanna go eat some gummy bears! In fact I will!
Midnight: We ALL will, just after we end this!
Cookies: YAY! GUMMY BEARS!
Sour: Shut up or you'll scare them all away!
Cookies: Oh yeah, I forgot about that...I really shouldn't have been trying to create that new gummy bear flavour when I blew up the basement...
Midnight: That's what you were doing? And what did you guys do to my gummy bears?
Sour: Well...She blew them up, and I TRIED to fix them. But I accidentally mutated them and now they're living, breathing, and candy cane eating...
GUMMY BEARS...
Midnight: You did WHAT?
Cookies: We mutated Gummy Bears!
Sour: Well let's just get on with the disclaimer so we can catch those gummy bears! Oh, and I forgot to mention, when I tried to fix the mutation, I accidentally made them the size of a pony and twice as vicious! PONIES ARE EVIL!
Midnight: Ponies are NOT evil! And how could you FORGET something like THAT?
Cookies: Oh, well it doesn't matter now, so let's do the disclaimer!
All: WE DON'T OWN GHOST HUNT OR ITS CHARACTERS! WE ONLY OWN THE STORY LINE OF OUR STORIES AND THE CHARACTERS WE MAKE UP! BTW WE ALSO DON'T OWN THE CHARACTERS THAT AKTAIY AND HANDSOMEANGEL MADE FOR US!
General PoV
Mai was horrified when she heard the voice. It sounded so evil. Hinata was terrified, she ran over to Mai and clasped her arm. Suddenly the temperature in Hinata's room dropped drastically, and the light flickered out. In seconds both Mai and Hinata's breath could be seen. Then a child's voice cried through the room. It said "I don't want to play anymore! I don't want to die, Shiara didn't want me to die either! She's my sister and you can't take that away from me!"
Mai felt tears running down her cheeks, the voice sounded so sad, scared and angry. But she had to get Hinata out of here, the activity wasn't violent in here, but she was terrified. Mai just had to jinx it. The door was locked.
Now the activity started to get violent. There was banging on the walls, a child's voice crying, ghostly figures randomly appearing and disappearing about the room and things were starting to touch Mai and Hinata. But worst of all, the smell of blood permeated the air.
General POV in the Basement
Things seemed to be getting worse, the spirit got more violent. It started pushing Masako and Ayako, tugging on their hair, and hitting them. All they wanted was to get out. Masako tried to cleanse the spirit while Ayako used warding magic.
Masako's cleansing wasn't working because she didn't know what was up with the spirit. Ayakos seemed to be having a little bit of effect, but not enough. Definitely not enough if the spirit can come at you with shards of glass.
It was about to cut them to bits when the basement door burst open and there was a familiar chant of (We all know monks chant so I am not going to say it.). Then the temperature went back to whatever it was before and the lights came back on.
In the doorway stood Monk, John, Naru and Lin. Faster than fast, Ayako and Masako ran out of the basement.
"Are you alright?" asked John. They just nodded. (Hey does everyone realise what just happened? Monk just saved his almost girlfriend! YAY!)
That's when a familiar (When I say familiar I mean they hear it every-well ALMOST every case) scream. Even though I think we all know who's scream it is, I will say it for the less intelligent people *Cough Cookies, Cough Cough!* It was Mai's scream. And another scream rang out, this one was a little girl's scream.
Midnight: Mwahahahaha! I made another cliff hanger! Cliff hangers make me feel soooo ALIVE! As Sour would say, it's like throwing someone off a cliff! It's a lot of fun, but the police get PO'd at you. In this case, I'm having fun leaving a cliff hanger, but all my readers will be mad! But I have news for you readers! Be mad no longer! For this was all a dupe! Yeah, that's right! It was all a prank, a trick, a joke! HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA
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Sour: Ok then... So plz get on with the story, I want gummy bears! And there are none here!
Midnight: Well whose fault is that?
Cookies: MINE!
Midnight: Well so anyways, here is the next part of the chapter!
A Few Minutes Earlier, General POV
The ghostly figures seemed to get closer to Mai and Hinata each time they appeared. They were hideous. They were all different sizes and shapes, they all seemed to have a deformation somewhere on them. Their eyes glowed red, they had long cracked nails, rotten teeth and moaned piteously as they walked. The room was loud with the moaning from the ghostly figures and from the wails of the child spirit. Mai started to feel sick, the smell of blood grew stronger and stronger.
Then suddenly there was a dripping sound and all the spirits in the room started to scream, even the child. Then Mai could feel something wet soaking through her shoes. She looked down. It was...Water? No wait...it was something worse-much worse... it was blood.
Hinata started whimpering. And Mai bent over to pick her up, but slipped in the blood. She landed with a great splash, and she and Hinata were both covered in blood. The blood didn't disappear, instead it went higher and higher. Soon it was to Hinata's knees. So Mai grabbed her hand and dragged her to the door, it was still locked, but the blood didn't appear to be escaping through the bottom of the door. That was really strange, but what would you expect? It's a ghost for god sake!
The blood was now at Mai's thighs. She was really feeling sick now. Hinata was now bawling, the poor girl was terrified. Mai was about to bang on the door, but there was a strange chilling, hiss-like whisper. And it didn't come from Hinata.
It whispered / hissed "Shiara, Shiara, Shiara...You can't fool me. You can give anyone your aura, but I know this isn't you. It can't be you, because, I can tell by your kindness, humility, and your ability to love, you are a lot LIKE Shiara but you just aren't her. It's such a shame that your gifts are about to be put to waste by your death. I wonder what I should do with the little girl. Hmm... How about you share the same fate? That sounds about fair."
The blood was now about up to Mai's belly button. Hinata had to stand on her tip toes just to keep her head above the blood. Suddenly across the room the blood bubbled. And Mai thought What is that? Oh my God! We have to get out of here!
The bubbles got closer and closer, until they were right in front of Mai and Hinata. That's when they disappeared. Mai glanced around nervously, but just then something slimy grabbed her ankle. She screamed. Then she was yanked under the blood. She heard another scream, but it had that under water sound. Then she realised it was Hinata's. But no matter how much she struggled she couldn't get out of its grip. But even if she could, she wouldn't have known which way was up and which was down. Her last thoughts before she blacked out were I'm going to die! I don't want to die! Hinata can't die! She's only a little girl! Someone, please save us! Please...save...us...
General POV, Rest of the SPR's View While Mai Screamed
"That's Mai's scream! And the other must be Hinata's!" Exclaimed Ayako. Everyone ran towards the direction the screams came from. They arrived at Hinata's bedroom.
They could hear Hinata yelling "MAI! MAI! GIVE HER BACK! LET HER GO! MAI! DON'T KILL HER! STOP-"
Her voice was cut off suddenly. Monk started pounding on the door. It wouldn't budge. Naru suddenly snapped "Do your warding chants! John spray some holy water! Hurry, NOW!"
So they immediately did what he asked, and you know what? It worked. The door opened, although they kind of wish it didn't. You know why? Well whether you know or not I'm going to tell you. Well the second they opened the door blood poured out. Their eyes went wide. That was just before they saw what was inside.
Inside was a almost totally blood covered Hinata shaking a completely bloody, limp Mai. But what really made them pause, was the fact that she wasn't breathing.
Midnight: Oh I know, it's a really scary cliff hanger! I hope you really want to know what happens next now. I gotta keep my readers interested!
Sour: Seriously shut up about that! I want those gummy bears! And I want them NOW!
Cookies: Hey! We ALL want gummy bears so let's just end this!
All: OK! Well Plz R&R! Give us ideas on what you want to happen!