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Chapter 10:

Tris POV:

I see Tobias lifted onto a gurney and into the ambulance. At any second he could die. For all I know he could dead right now. I don't know exactly where the bullet hit but somewhere near his stomach or chest. I watch the doctor's jump in and start working on Tobias before they even close the doors. They zoom off and even when I can't see the bright flashing lights I can hear them. When I can't hear them any more I sit down on the ground and put my head in my hands. The tears that I have been holding back come rushing out. I don't care that the cops or Uriah is watching me. I need to get this out of my system. I love him and he could be gone. It's like losing my parents all over again. I he is alive I tell him I love him.

I feel someone come and sit next to me and wrap their arms around my shoulders and pull me closer to them. I don't bother to look up to see who it is because I don't care. All I care about is getting Tobias back. I don't know how long I cry but soon I start feeling tired and fall asleep.

I wake up in a car my head is on Uriah's lap and he is looking down at me with concern. Thankfully I had a dreamless sleep. I sit up and realize that the car is parked in a parking lot at a hospital. I jump up and leave the car. Not waiting for anyone to do anything. I run into the hospital and right up to the receptionist.

"Hello. I'm wondering where Tobias Eaton is," I say.

"Are you his daughter?" she asks. Do I really look that young?

"No," I say. She's about to look back at her computer and ignore so I say, "I'm his little sister."

"Okay then sweet heart. Let me look it up for you. What's his name again?" the lady asks me.

"Tobias Eaton," I say and she starts typing.

"He is currently in surgery, but if you stay here, in the waiting room, then I can call you when you are allowed to see him," she tells me.

"Thank you. I'll be over there," I say and then point to an empty seat in between a girl with glasses and a guy on his phone. I go and sit down in between them. Within five minutes I'm bored out of my mind and all I want to do is leave, but I know I can't because I have to know how Tobias is. I remember when Tobias almost shot me. I couldn't live with shooting him because it would have been like shooting myself. This feeling is worse because I'm the reason he got shot. He jumped in front of me to take a bullet. I could be the reason for his death. About an hour later the receptionist comes up to me.

"Excuse me, I didn't get your name before," she says.

"Beatrice. Beatrice Prior but I go by Tris. What is your name," I say.

"Felicia. I thought you were an Eaton," Felicia questions.

"I'm his step-sister and Tobias kept his father's last name, but we like to think of each other as actual siblings," I lie.

"Well, Tris, Tobias is in critical condition but his surgery is done," she tells me.

"That's great! What room is he in?" I ask excited.

"You can't visit him until his chances of survival are better or you have to say your goodbyes," Felicia says in a gentle tone. I feel my smile leave my face.

"When do you think I can see him?" I ask in a sad tone.

"Probably tomorrow afternoon. If you give me your number I can call you when I get the "go ahead" for visitors I will call you," she says.

"Okay my number is ***-***-****. Thank you for your help," I tell her genuinely and shake her hand. I walk outside and realize that I have no clue what car I came here in or where it is. I look around and I don't notice anything that I recognize. I see Uriah get out of a run-down car that is an ugly mud color. I walk over to him and get in the car. Marlene is in the front with Will in the passenger seat looking glum and it's probably because of Heather.

"Did you see what you wanted to see?" he asks me.

"No, To-Four literally just got out of surgery and no visitors allowed until he is more stable," I tell them, but I leave out the part about the possible goodbyes because I refuse to accept it.

"He will be okay you know," Will says.

"I just want to go home," I say.

"We are staying at a hotel a few miles away," Marlene tells me. We drive to a really nice hotel that has a pool on the roof top, but I could care less. I'm only here to wait until I can see Tobias. I look at the time it's seven in the evening and the sun is just going down. The first thing we do is get two rooms one for Marlene and I and the other is for Uriah and Will. We all know that Uriah and Marlene want to be in the same room but I'm not comfortable with sleeping in the same room with anyone else but Tobias. We get room service and then hit the hay.

When we wake up I see I have a new voice mail on my phone and I get excited I hit the listen button and I hear Christina blabbing on and on about how sorry she is. I would not believe her but I believe that people dying or people in pain brings people closer together. For the next three hours we just sit and wait for some kind of news to come. Nothing comes. Until around 11 I get a call from and unknown number and immediately pick up.

"Tris?" I hear a girl ask.

"This is she," I say trying to sound professional.

"Can you come down to the hospital?" she asks.

"Yes!" I scream, "I mean, I'll be there as soon as possible."

We drive to the hospital and the drive drags by. What is a half hour drive feels like three hours. It's the moment of truth. He's gonna live or die and I'm about to find out. I can't explain how I feel. I'm nervous. I'm excited. My emotions are like the song 22 by Taylor Swift my emotions are all over. I can't pin point how I am feeling and I don't know if that is good or bad. Eventually we get to the hospital and I jump out before they can even find a parking spot. I run to the hospital and right up to Felicia.

She looks at me and says, "Tobias is in room 444."

I run away and down the hall I reach the room and open the door. His head is facing the window and he's barely moving. He looks dead.

"Tobias," I whisper. His head turns and looks at me.

"Tris," he says with a smile on his face.

I would like to create a new character as a possible love interest for Will because Heather probably won't get back togetherL. I am also deciding if I should create a love interest for Christina, but I could also make what's happening to Four/Tobias bring Christina and Will back together, so if you have any ideas for new characters or what I should do with Christina and Will's relationship leave a review or PM me J. If you are interested in creating a character give me

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