Yeaaah boiiiii!
Happy new year to you all! After I sent out my last chapter, someone sent me a review asking if I could update before next year. So I decided to challange myself, so I worked harder than ever with this chapter, it's kind of a rush job though. I just wanted to get this out before the new year. My goal was to get at least twelve thousand five hundred words for this chapter. But just to be a complete asshole to myself I wrote only twelve thousand five hundred and one words.
wOOT! How did you all like that last chapter. I just thought I get some plot in there, you know...too spice it up a bit. Well this is Chapter ten, that's all I can say.....no wait I can say more! That whole insanity concept I'm planning on sticking with it, so you can look forward to seeing Naruto go insane again. That I can assure you.
For some reason in this chapter I really wasn't feeling anything, like no ideas were coming out or anything....nothing at all. I swear I had to brain storm for at least forty-five minutes, I just had major writer's block and whatnot. But for those who wanted this chap. in time, you can ease up off me cuz i GOT it and here it is, but seriously it was a freaking hassle, I don't think that I'm ever going to update this quickly ever again. I'm just way too lazy.
On with the story
Enjoy mutha fuckas
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Sacred Mark of the Rising Kekkei Genkai
He recovers, she waits, they formulate a plan
Dust floated freely along the corridors of this castle. It was dank, dark, and medieval. Even in this castle, which by the way was huge, it stood about fifty stories high in the middle of an open plain covered in black grass. It was gargantuan, made from a strange black stone, with two spires twisting on it's left and right sides. In between those two spiraling towers was the main body of the actual castle.
One would expect a castle of this size to inhabit hundreds of people. But in fact it only held two people. And so it brings us to the two that inhabited this place, Naruto and Kyuubi.
Naruto lay on a soft king sized bed, in a large room. Next to him a large dresser, and directly across his left side was a closet. A big television was stationed in the right corner of the of the room, next to some rather large windows that allowed the graceful light of an eternal moon flow in.
"Naruto....." Naruto shifted a bit, but then went back to his dreams. "Naruto...." This time his cracked his eyes open and he let out a reluctant grunt. "Wake up."
"Huh?....wha-..where am-?" He sat upright then looked to his left to see Kyuubi standing at one of the windows, the pseudo human had his back turned to him. He leaned back on his elbows and let out a sigh. "Is this what you've done to the place...?" Naruto raised an eyebrow lazily.
"Because if it is I like it." The blond let out a small chuckle before deeply sighing again for Kyuubi did not respond. There was a brief moment of silence and for a long time Kyuubi did not say a word. He then turned his head, in order to look at Naruto, his gaze was grim.
Naruto it's my fault.... it's my fault you were like that."
"Like what?" Naruto asked suddenly. This caused great anger to well up in Kyuubi.
For a moment there was no reply until Kyuubi quickly turned around and swiped at the air. The window behind him flew open, bringing in a volatile tempest that blew wind everywhere.
"Like what? You know what I mean Naruto! It's my fault...it's my fault that you entered that state, it's my fault that you went insane!" His sharply pointed teeth were clenched in a apologetic snarl.
"Geez could you cut that out.... I really don't like that wind all in my face, and close that damn window." Kyuubi's eyes widened, his breathing was still fast but it had lost it manic tempo. Why is it that Naruto wasn't acting as he had anticipated the boy would? He expected Naruto to wake up completely depressed, but judging by his facial expression it seemed as if he didn't really care that he had just gone temporarily insane. "So are you going to close it or not?"
Kyuubiwavedhis hand, thereby making the window close itself and cutting off the gust of wind. All that was left was a low how of wind generated by the gale outside that seemed to claw at the glass.
"How can you speak so nonchalantly, do you realize what just happened?" He didn't know why the boy wasn't bothered by the information, he didn't even know why he was so angry. Maybe he was angry at himself for causing Naruto so much pain......that must have been his human side that thought that way.
Naruto shook his head. "Actually no...tell me Kyuubi, cause I really don't know what they hell is going on." He slid to the left and placed his feet on the floor. He wore no shirt and had only a pair of light blue pants on. He looked down. "What the hell...my clothes, you been messing with me Kyuubi?"
"That's not the point Naruto, you really don't remember what just happened to you?" Naruto again shook his head, he then looked around searching for something. "Your clothes are over there." Kyuubi pointed with one clawed finger at a corner of the room where his clothes hung on a steel coat rack.
"No, I don't remember anything. But I do remember feeling a certain way..... for some reason I feel weird, there's this sensation in the back of my head and it feels....chaotic. Other than that I feel fine, but seeing as how you say that I went insane.....tell me, what did happen? All remember was standing in town with Kakashi and Larxene and then....blank.....now I'm here with you."
Naruto had just finished putting on his regular black pants and was now working on his undershirt. Kyuubi walked past him, tapping him on the shoulder. "Walk with me." He said, to which Naruto just slipped on his shirt and jacket and said 'sure'.
Then they exited the room. Now they walked along the corridors of the giant castle, while walking Naruto noticed that there was a light coming from the ceiling, but to his surprise there were not lights, no torches or anything of the like. In fact one could say that the ceiling literally glowed, giving off a hypnotic white light. The many windows along the wall added to the amount of light that was in hallway, it resulted in the hallways being much brighter than one would expect for such an evil and badass castle.
"Naruto, you went insane....crazy, you couldn't even stop yourself from laughing like a lunatic." Naruto raised a confused eyebrow. "And it was all my fault."
"Why the hell do you keep saying that?" Hearing the same thing said over and over again seriously ticked Naruto off.
"Because it is my fault, when that scum Zabuza came near you his chakra touched you. It's something that only can be done with a certain demon's youkai. It's called the chakra of Konton, or the chakra of confusion. Konton was an ancient demon who was alive back when I was what you full humans would have called..... an adolescence."
"Whoa...that must have been centuries ago." That struck a nerve in Kyuubi's head.
"That's not the point!" He coughed. "Anyway, Konton was a... no...was THE demon of chaos, and his domain was in what is now the entirety of present day Demon country and present day Marsh country, Oni no kuni and Numa no Kuni. That's far from here way down south." Finally Naruto and Kyuubi arrived at a closed door that had a skull and crossbones and the kanji for training room on it.
"Training room.....we're going to fight?" Kyuubi nodded, first I'm to finish the story then I'm going to fight, seeing as how you seem completely unaffected by your breif moment of insanity then I guess it's not too much if I ask for a little spar."
"Ok...then continue on with the story." They walked through the door, the inside, wasn't what Naruto expected. It had metal walls and there was nothing in it. Except for the words, training room, painted high on the wall. A little disappointing for Naruto, he expected more but decided to address it later.
"Konton...was wild and often went on random rampages through villages far and near. He wasn't the strongest but definitely the most quick-witted clever. In battle if he wanted to he could trick you into biting off your own leg."
"Sounds like one smart demon."
"Exactly.... in fact, he was so clever that he would often trick people into fighting each other for his enjoyment, and considering the fact that many humans back then were as strong as me, you already know that those were some intense battles. Despite how strong we were, however, we couldn't hold a candle to Konton, there was also the factor of him being vastly smarter then us. Because of out de-evolved brain activity, it made it extremely easy for him to trick us and in doing that he led us into a period of what you call civil war."
"I'm guessing that he had to be stopped right?" Naruto said. Both of them had begun to stretch and flew in order to warm up their muscles and as a way to kill some time while Kyuubi was narrating his story.
"Right, so in order to do that we went to the only person we could go to......Konton's brother.......Kinkou. Konton was confusion and chaos, while Kinkou on the other hand was the equilibrium and balance. We sought Kinkou out and he helped us indeed, he succeeded in sealing his brother away in his own territory. And somewhere in the middle of marsh and demon country, that group the Saiki must have found away to alter Konton's seal and extract his chakrawithoutaffecting the demon inside."
Naruto tapped his chin. "Ok.... I guess that's how Zabuza got his power, but that doesn't explain why I went insane...as you say." He then squatted and stretched out his leg while releasing a satisfied grunt. Oh yeah that's good" He said.
"Oh yes my friend yes it does.... you didn't let me tell you the last part! The crucial thing about a demon's chakra is that it is affected by the demon's personality, that's the reason why Zabuza is so power hungry, with that amount of chakra he has become Konton incarnate. And when Zabuza approached you with Konton's chakra inside of him it affected you as well, but because of me being in you his demonic chakra went directly after you, while trying to get to me. Truly it was affecting everyone, you were just affect much faster than your friends."
Naruto stood up then bent himself backward, making another grunt. Kyuubi did pretty much the same, except he bent forward. "So seeing as how you're a demon and your chakra is so fierce that must mean that you must have pretty feral personality as well."
"Hey hey-" Kyuubi responded, "-I'm a pseudo demon. I was fully human until I was embedded with this demonic power, transforming me into the Kyuubi no Kitusune. Even then some of my human form remained, but I was unable to access it up until now. The only reason my chakra WAS so feral was because of the rage I felt when I was attacked and transformed. You know if you were to actually use my chakra every now and then you would see that my chakra has become a lot more gentle, but it's still badass." Kyuubi cracked his neck making a sound that bounced through the metal room and sent a shiver down Naruto's spine.
"Hey Kyuubi why did they have to turn you into a partial demon." Kyuubi stood up straight then pointed one finger into the air.
"Because, little one, you can't seal a human into another human....it's against Kami's law. The only way to seal something into a human with the use of a sealing technique is if that thing has demonic energy, ergo they changed me into one so that in the future they could seal me into you, at least that's how I see it."
Naruto then stood straight up...... he hopped up and down experimentally, like he had never used his own body. 'WELL that's enough story time for me...." Naruto windmilled his arm. "-Time to fight!" He went into his battle stance
"Indeed it is." Said Kyuubi as he slid into his own refined battle position.
"Hey are we really going to fight here?" Kyuubi then smiled and snapped his fingers. The words Training Room on the wall began to glow and there was a flash of light. When the bright light subsided Naruto found that he and Kyuubiwerestanding on...water! They were on top of a large lake, and out of the surface of the water protruded several hundred spikes of rock. All around them was rock; they were inside of a large crater, filled with water basically.
"Oh...I get it, a simulator." Kyuubi tapped his head and smiled again.
"Quite the sharp one we have here."
With that both Kyuubi and Naruto jumped at each other, both ready to begin their 'spar' against each other.
(Outside world)
Larxene walked into a dank room with a bucket filled with water. Inside she saw Naruto lying on the bed, unconscious. She sat on the chair next to the bed and placed the bucket directly next to her. She placed her hand on Naruto's head for about four five seconds then nodded.
"He's got fever alright-" reaching into the bucket she pulled out a rag and after squeezing it she placed it on his head. "- but why." After Zabuza left the town Naruto completely shut down. The end result left him with a dangerously high fever, Kakashi had to immediately rush him back to Tazuna's house, it was too dangerous to send him to a hospital. Right now, they weren't even supposed to be here.
Larxene let out a deep sigh, which she had been doing pretty much the entire day; what was that...sigh number ninety-nine. One more and she was in the record books. She glanced at Naruto's face...his expression: peaceful. She reached out and touched the side of his face, letting her fingers slide all the way down to his collarbone which was exposed because he wasn't wearing a shirt.
A sudden gasp came from her when she realized what she was doing and she pulled away. The was a click and the door behind her opened; in stepped Kakashi.
"How's he doing?" He asked
"Still unconscious and his temperature doesn't seem to be getting any better." Kakashi then walked over to Naruto and glanced down at him. The boy had gone through a lot in such a short amount of time, he was strong.....Kakashi wasn't sure if he would still be alive if that had happened to him.
He glanced back and saw Larxene's facial expression. "Don't worry about him, he'll be alright. Right now I'm sure he's fighting his own battle right know. (Oh if Kakashi only knew how right he was) But for now this is all we can do, we've given him everything he needs, no we wait for him to sweat in out." Kakashi took the sheets that stopped at Naruto's waist and pulled them up to his neck.
"I'm going out for a bit, if Zabuza's a man of his word then he really will come tomorrow and that happens we need to be ready. I'll be out assembling any nearby ninja who are brave enough to go against Zabuza."
"Do you need anything from me?" Larxene asked.
"No I'm alright by myself." Kakashi turned and walked out the door leaving Larxene and Naruto alone.
Larxene brought her gaze back to Naruto. "You better hurry up and get better already, we're going to need you tomorrow." She looked to her left were a dresser was placed and on top of it a digital clock that displayed the time of 8:50. She then looked out the window...... the moon shined brightly, casting a magnificent light upon Naruto that made him look luminescent, as if he glowed. It was a surprise, his bright blond hair actually looked better when it was under the moonlight, instead of the sunlight.
(Mindscape)
A large explosion occurred in the middle of a lake, spraying into the air a plume of water vapor. Two blurs flew out on opposite sides, one was black and yellow, the other was was black and red. The first yellow blur landed on the water and shot back at the red one, it bounced off of the several pillars sticking out of the water and collided into it. Both blurs crashed into the water. After a few seconds the two blurs both exploded out of the water and immediately charged at each other, exchanging blows so rapidly that it was impossible to see who was who. The yellow landed on a rock and almost as if on cue the red blur shot down on it, they stopped for a second, revealing Naruto and Kyuubi.
Both of them wore a matching pair of spitfire gauntlets. Naruto jumped back and was immediately followed by Kyuubi who slashed at his face, but Naruto dodged by ducking it and coming up with and clawed uppercut. Kyuubi stopped it by parrying it with his own gauntlet, creating a loud pang of metal against metal. He smirked.
"Naruto-kun... is that the best you can do?" He said before kneeing the boy then throwing him into a rock.
"Not a chance." Naruto said as he charged back, Kyuubi stood straight in wait. Naruto knew that Kyuubi was a smart fighter so he had to be quick about his battle tactics. He had given the fox enough power to equal a high jounin around Kakashi's level. He wanted to be a challenge and that's what was happening, everything that he had thrown at Kyuubi was either blocked, reversed or dodged.
Kyuubi stuck his hand out, and slowly beckoned for Naruto to come. "Naruto-kun, come at me with everything that you've got. I've meaning to tell you about the...modifications I made." Naruto lifted an eyebrow.
"WHAT modifications?" Naruto said before he charged in. He aim a punch at Kyuubi's face, but Kyuubi dodged by stepping to the side and while lifting up Naruto's arm he struck with a left hook.
"The ones I made to your body." He said before he struck out; Naruto countered by grabbing Kyuubi's arm but Kyuubi foiled Naruto plans when he when he felt something grab his feet. A pair of hands were locked onto Naruto's ankles.
"Fuck...when did-..?"
"Pay attention Naruto!" Naruto looked up only to be jammed in the nose by a headbutt from Kyuubi, causing him to let go of Kyuubi's Gauntlets. Kyuubi followed up then by slash to the ribs, a slash to the shoulder, then finally Kyuubi hit Naruto in the face with his elbow. The force of the blow was enough to send Naruto flying.
Kyuubi then jumped straight at Naruto, launching himself like a missile. Naruto was stiil dazed from the force of that last blow to realize that Kyuubi was now above him, coming down with a hard vertical axe-kick.
"Shit." Naruto grabbed Kyuubi foot in mid-air; he twisted around, spinning Kyuubi with him. He then pulled Kyuubi in and let go, hitting Kyuubi in the chest with a spinning roundhouse.
As they both fell Kyuubi yelled over to him. "Naruto-kun....Let me tell you what I did.....your clones I modified them so that they wouldn't disappear after just one fatal hit, but after fifty."
Naruto's eyes widened. "What...sweet, wait why?"
"So that you can train by yourself without fear of hurting anyone." Naruto just nodded before they both landed on the water feet first. "But that's not all."
"Oh really, hn, tell me." Kyuubi then shook his head.
"Beat it out of me."
"Fine." Naruto was about twenty feet from Kyuubi, so he knew that he wouldn't be able to catch him off guard with close quarters so he decided that it was time to use some far-ranged tactics. He slipped off his two gauntlets and dropped them into the water, knowing that he could not lose them in his mind.
"Oh what are we doing here?" Kyuubi said while chuckling. He did the same as Naruto.
Naruto sprung into action, with amazing dexterity he threw out three kunai at Kyuubi who dodged two of them then stopped last one by catching it. "Is this all you got?" Kyuubi taunted before he noticed that the kunai was hissing. He looked down, to see a burning explosive tag wrapped around it's handle.
"Smart..but not smart enough!" Kyuubi simply tossed it into the air; it exploded and instead of an explosion of fire there was an explosion of smoke. "A smoke...tag? I didn't even know those existed."
From afar Naruto smirked....Kyuubi was falling right into his plan. He jumped backward and landed on the spike of a rock pillar. Kyuubi's eyes narrowed. "Don't even try it." He looked up at the cloud of smoke above his head and with a burst of chakra blew it away. His eyes widened once more when he saw a single kunai heading for him through the smoke, he too slipped a kunai and threw it. But when the two weapons hit Naruto's kunai exploded into fifty other kunai all heading for Kyuubi.
"Damn..what are you trying to do... kill me with kunai?" Kyuubi, not surprisingly dodged every one of them. "I'm tired of shit!" He charged at Naruto who stood still in wait for him.
The boy smiled..."hah...fell for it!" He made single hand sign and in an instant Naruto's gauntlets, which he had dropped earlier, burst out of the water and grabbed Kyuubi by the legs, pulling him down under the water. He could see two little strings of chakra attached to them....that was Naruto's purpose for dropping them. He didn't want to abandon them in order to use kunai but he abandoned them solely for the purpose of capturing Kyuubi.
As Kyuubi was dragged underneath the water he noticed something. All the kunai that he had dodged were all around him in.... in a complete circle, they were all linked together by a single chakra string and that string was attached to the gauntlets. 'Wow I need to give Naruto more credit...he's smarter than I thought he would be. But-" He mentally sighed. '-I'm smarter."
Above the water Naruto activated his geostigma. He snapped twice, on the second snap there was a spark in his fingers. "Hm, now all I got to do is manipulate the static electricity when I snap and I should have a nice electrical current flowing. Kyuubi shouldn't be able to move right now because of the chakra string network I trapped him in." This network was something that Naruto had created. Once when he was training he discovered that if one were to send a flow of continuous chakra through a person's body, specifically their nervous system he could overload their brain function and prevent any messages of movement that the brain sent from reaching their muscles and prevent them from moving.
Because of the continuous flow of chakra this technique required it was extremely hard to maintain, but with a constant flow of chakra flowing through strings that were connected to his chakra he could stop a person from moving with having to touch them, thus leaving him free to do as he wished.
Kyuubi couldn't move, that brought a smile to his face. With a few more snaps he generated an electric current using the friction between his fingers; then he pointed it down at the water.
"Fry..Kyuubi....fry." He released from his finger a small jolt of electricity and upon contact with the water, it ..... well you know the rest. The water was electrified, sending sparks all along it's surface. It continued for five minutes and when it ended Naruto noticed that the water had begun to boil. "And fry you did" He said while chuckling a bit.
"End simula-.....!" As soon as he was about to end the training simulation Kyuubi erupted from the water, heading straight for Naruto. He then grabbed Naruto by the face and slammed him into the rock pillar that he was standing on. He didn't let go, however, still with Naruto's head in hand he threw the boy into the air.
All Naruto saw were little dots of black and white, they flashed on and off dancing before his eyes. He suddenly heard Kyuubi's voice behind.
"This isn't over until someones dead, oh and by the way....look down." Naruto did as instructed and his eyes widened when he his own gauntlets and kunai coming at him. He saw that the chakra string that they were attached to was being controlled by Kyuubi.
"Oh fuck you.....then I guess that this match is over.....I lose.
Knowing his eminent doom Naruto spun around, and placed his hands behind his head. "Hey before I get hit, tell what else did you do to me."
"Oh that's easy, I modified you body so that whenever you train in here the experience will be transferred to your actual body."
"How did you do that?"
"Oh I messed with a couple seals here and there....now I think it's time for you to wake up now......ja ne." Then Naruto turned back around and face the wall of weapons heading for him.
"Seriously.. fuck you!" Then he was hit, impaled to a bloody mess by his own weapons.
(Back in the outside world)
Naruto woke up with a gasp, like he had just resurfaced from underwater. His ear twitched when he heard a startled gasp. He turned to his right, to see Larxene with a surprised expression on her face.
"What the hell, don't do that." She screamed then punched him over the head.
"Owww, what the hell was that for?" Larxene crossed her arms.
"Hmph, that's for going crazy like that." Naruto scratched his head.
"What I-... insane? Are you lying to me?"
Larxene's eyes went wide. "Y-You mean you don't remember?" It was a good thing he didn't remember, cause if her memory served she gave him one hell of a slap. "When Zabuza came you went insane."
"Oh...that. Yeah." Larxene raised her eyebrow, scanning him for suspicion. She didn't know that Naruto couldn't remember his little freak out, really he was just going based on what Kyuubi had told him. "Well what happened while I was....-" He looked down. "- asleep?" He wasn't wearing a shirt, only a pair of his black pants. He looked out the window and noticed that it was night time. "And what happen to about fifty percent of my clothes?"
"Well..." Larxene looked away. "About the clothes thing...I kind of had to take them off you, you were getting too hot."
"Hm.... wow I didn't know you were that kinky, doing it while I was asleep? Come tell me, what'cha do?" Larxene's face was intensely blushing right now; she wore an annoyed facial expression. "Come on now tell me...you said I was-..." He stopped when he was hit in the head again by Larxene.
"Shut up, I meant that you have a fever."
"Okay that's what you meant....see you should have said that from the beginning, or maybe you were using that as an excuse to say that was hot." Naruto chuckled as he ducked another punch from Larxene.
"Namikaze....I'm going to kill you!" Naruto laughed as he jumped out of his bed, and proceeded to be chased around the room by Larxene. He back up against a wall and she tried to punch him, he ducked out of the way and her hand smashed through part of the wall.
"Hah now you're stuck...ha ha."
"Bastard just you wait, as soon as I get my hand of this wall I'm coming for you!" Larxene suddenly released a high-pitched yelp when Naruto suddenly slipped up behind her and pressed her against the wall; he slowly touched her hand and pulled it out of the wall.
"N-Naruto.....what are you doing.....!" She gasped when she felt him press up against her until her face was almost touching the wall. He closer and whispered in her ear.
"You know Lar-chan I there's this funny feeling in me right now." He made his way up to the zipper of his jacket and pulled down.
"Naruto...stop, y-you idiot." What was going on, this wasn't the same Naruto from before. She felt him continued to unzip her jacket and when she tried to stop him, he just moved her hand away. For some strange reason after that she try to stop him...it was as if she wanted it.
'What's he doing......uh... stop, I don't If I should let him do this...wait of course I know. I DON'T like him' But after all that thought, Larxene did nothing to stop him. She squeaked when she felt him reach underneath her shirt.
"Right now I don't think I'll be able to control myself, and I just can't explain it. Here's the thing."
"W-What?" She asked weakly.
"I feel, extremely attracted to you right now...I'm not even sure I can control myself."
"Ok....ok this needs to stop." He pushed her even harder onto the wall.
"Why should it?" He responded. His hand slowly began to make its way up her under shirt, going farther up and coming dangerously close to her breast. "Don't you like it?" The sound of his voice sent a nervous tickle down her spine. His hand went even further up her shirt, she could feel the tip of his finger barely tickling her.
"Stop....."
"But you don't want it to do you?" He chuckled. Her breathing got harder as Naruto fully grasped one of her breast in her hand, fondling it for a few seconds before stopping. "I didn't think so, if you really wanted me to stop then you would have shoved me off you the instant I grabbed you." Larxene's eyes widened.....he was right. She did like it, but on the other hand she didn't.
"No.... that's only because...-"
"Because you liked it...right?" Naruto asked seductively. Larxene squirmed in his grasp but Naruto did not let go. Then there was a click at the door.
"Hey...Larxene-san I-....oh crap! U-uh sorry for interrupting." Sakura walked in at the worst time possible. Larxene who pushed Naruto off of her, ran out the room, with her head ducked down.
Naruto sighed. "I was in the middle of something...Sakura." Sakura slowly backed away...not wanting to feel Naruto's wrath.
"M-My bad...It won't happen again....glad to see that you are awake." She then dashed off down the hall hoping that Naruto wouldn't follow her.
Naruto looked down at his stomach. "Kyuubi what else did you do to me?"
"Oh nothing.. nothing except....speed up the process of testosterone production in your body! Your father did say that you had to rebuild the clan right...... I'm just helping you out."
This was bad, testosterone was the primary male sex hormone and having a lot of that resulted in having increased levels of libido or sex drive. Right Naruto was a basic fucking machine, he wanted to just grab and bang every girl he saw...all because of Kyuubi. As of now Naruto was a Nympho!
"Hey this better not be permanent!"
"It's not, it'll wear off in an hour or two."
"Great, thanks a lot you fucking dick. Now I'm going to be walking around this house for and hour with a basic mental boner. Yeah that really helped me out. Now Larxene's probably going to try and kill me in me sleep....or at least cut off my-....." Naruto looked down and feared the worst, he took the absolute worse case scenario into mind. "Kyuubi...you're a sick and twisted monster."
"Aren't I?" Naruto mentally scoffed and walked out the room in search of Larxene.
"Dammit Kyuubi, do you see what you did?"
"I didn't do anything, you're the one who started groping her like that." Naruto growled when he heard Kyuubi chuckle at that comment.
"Can it you asshole." He suddenly felt something grab him around the waist. It looked like a tentacle, a black one. "Oh shit." said Naruto as he was pulled back into the room he had just walked out of. He was thrown onto the bed and the tentacle that grabbed him wrapped itself around him and the bed, promptly immobilizing him.
"A shadow?"
"Yes, a shadow." Sounded Larxene's voice from a dark corner of the room. She stepped out of the ever-shadowed corner while zipping up her jacket.
"Wow...I didn't know you could do that!"
"Well now you do.. now SHUT UP!" Naruto did as told, closing his mouth while chuckling. Then the testosterone kicked in.
"Yep that's right...I'll do whatever you want, I'm your slave." She just growled at him, her facial expression was calm however.
"She crossed her arms. "Hey about that...thing you just did.." her eyebrow twitched a little bit. "I want you to never do that again, and don't you dare tell anyone about that."
"Too late.. Sakura already saw us."
"You let me worry about that. But if you ever touch me like that again...." Naruto felt the wind of a kunai whizz past his face. "I'll definitely kill you." She scoffed and was about to walk out the room when Naruto screamed out: "wait!"
"What?"
There was a long pause. "You did like it though....right?" Her face suddenly became shrouded in red, like a ripe tomato. She forced back the urge to yell.
Instead she just said. "Just don't do it again. I'll let you off this time, you might still be crazy." She knew very well that that wasn't true.
"Ok ok, I'm sorry, won't happen again I promise." He didn't whether that was a lie or not, with this much testosterone pumping in his system, he didn't know what he would do...or not do. Still she fell for it and released him.
"Although I can't assure that in the future I will refrain from touching you."
"Yeah you will, especially if you value your little...." she looked down at Naruto's pants and immediately looked up, her face just as red as before. "Just get some rest...."
Naruto chuckled. "Yeaaaaah, big....BIG friend, eh Lar-chan? And hey what's that, a nosebleed I see....man am I THAT HOT?"
"No way... it's just a condition." She said in her defense.
"Yeah I've heard of that, it's called mass perversity."
"What you're calling me a pervert. And look, who's the one without his clothes on?"
"Good call, but who's the one that took them off?"
"You know why I did that."
"Yeah.... I know you did it because-" He stuck his finger at Larxene. "You wanted to have you way with me!" Another kunai flew past his face, and Larxene disappeared and reappeared in front of him, she leaned in, their faces only inches apart.
"Why are you acting like this, you never did this before...why now?" She asked.
"Like I said, for some reason I feel extremely attracted to you." He responded.
"That's a lie, I know that you wouldn't do anything this drastic." Pause, then Naruto let a sigh.
"Alright, you caught me...... it's because of the K-" Then it struck him, Larxene didn't know about Kyuubi. Should he tell her, if she was going to come back with him to Konoha then it would be rather stupid for him not to tell her about the pseudo demon that was sealed away in him. "It's because of...Kyuu..." Larxene thrust her finger in the air.
"What were about to say..... did Kyuubi make you do it." Naruto's eyes widened.
"Y-You already know about him... but how?"
"Damn right I know about him, how come you didn't tell me this before. And as for who told me, you can thank your trustworthy sensei. He was the one who told me, when you went insane he told me the reason why. I guess he felt that it wouldn't change anything if I knew about your demon."
"Half demon..."
"Excuse me?"
"I said half demon....he's only half demon, he's got a human side as well." Larxene just shrugged it off as irrelevant.
"Thanks Naruto-kun." 'No sweat I'll make sure that nobody refers to you as a demon ever again.'
"Anyway-" Naruto continued. "-Like I was saying it WAS Kyuubi who did this to me. While I was shut down as you say, he decided that it would be kind of cool to speed up my testosterone production and get me like this. He's increasing my sex drive right now."
Larxene raised an eyebrow. "So you're saying that Kyuubi is making you...horny."
"Yeah...pretty much." He nervously chuckled. "I know it sound like complete bullsh-.."
"Fine, I believe you." Boy that one left Naruto blinking pretty fast. "It sounds like complete bullshit.... but I'm willing to believe you this one time."
"That's it..? Nothing else, You're not mad or anything?"
Larxene shook her head. "Nope."
"Oh.... that kind of sucks though....are you sure you're not mad?"
"Yeah."
"You sure?"
"yeah."
"You sure you sure?
"Yeah I'm not mad."
"Ok... but you know what I did back there was pretty-" He was met with a punch to the head.
"I'm not mad, so shut up and go to sleep before I get mad!"
"Okay...jeez." He got back under his sheets before mumbling something about abusive woman, which made Larxene ask "What was that?"
"Nothing." He responded.
"Good." She clapped her hands together, wiping them clean of nothing and walked out the door. Although Naruto didn't see smile on her face when she closed the door or hear her giggle halfway down the hall.
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Momochi Zabuza was officially considered unstable....there was seriously something wrong with him. After he had come back from the town he basically went mad...again. He kept blabbering on about fighting someone..like Hataye or Ahake or someone with a name like that. It was seriously starting to worry Haku, it all started when that mark appeared on his forehead.
Haku sat in the room of a local hotel. The name of the place escaped her, it was the place Zabuza told her to go to... when she asked whether or not he would come too he just laughed and ran off talking about how he was going to fight someone and kill them.
She sighed. "At least the bed's comfortable. "She said while rubbing the soft linen of the her satin bed covers. She stood up and walked over to the doors that led to a balcony. She went outside and leaned over the rail and looked at the sky, she let out a loud high-pitched whistle from her lips. Seconds later that whistle was returned by another, but this one sounded less artificial, more animal-like. Haku held out her arm and surprisingly the same falcon from before landed directly on it.
"There you are." She stared into it's peircing glare, comforted by it fiery eyes. For some reason this falcon kept clinging to her. It stayed with her even when Zabuza was around. Even now when the manager of the hotel said that animals were'nt allowed and Haku thought that she would have to let her go right there, the falcon still found a way to get to Haku. Haku had decided a long time ago that she would keep this bird of pray as a pet. "Good girl."
The bird ruffled her feathers together and released a squeak from its beak. "Shall we go inside.... Tomo?" Tomo was the name she had given the bird. It meant a follower or companion. Tomo just dipped her head down, a bird's version of a nod. It was strange it seemed that Tomo seemed to understand human speech, for every time Haku spoke to her and asked a yes or no question Tomo would either dip her head or shake it, much like humans.
She walked inside with Tomo perched on her arm and closed the door behind her. She looked around. "Where can you sit down?" She noticed a small pole with a flag that had the kiri symbol on it jammed into the wall. She went over to it and ripped off the kiri flag and tossed it to the ground, she then let Tomo perch herself atop of the flagpole. "You can sleep there for now." Tomo just sat there, flicking her head in a multitude of directions, much like a bird would do.
Haku then walked to another door and opened it, the bathroom. It was shower time for her, she had been through too much crap today and it was about time that she finally washed it all off. She walked in but stopped when she heard the flapping of wings go past her ear, she looked up to see Tomo fly past her face and into the bathroom. The peregrine flew around in circles until she finally rested on a sturdy towel rack.
"You want to come in?" Tomo let out a high whistle and dipped her head. "Fine... but only because you're a girl falcon." Haku then closed the door behind her and fully stepped into the bathroom. It was quite large actually, must have been the master bathroom or something. She walked up to the sink where there was a giant mirror posted on the wall and slipped of her kimono.
With a sigh she was finally out of her clothes and was now naked, staring herself down in the mirror. She then began to unwrap the bandages that held down her breast, She had initially put it there so that it wouldn't reveal to others that she was a girl. But she also realized that taping back her chest helped in battle, it got them out of the way...so to speak.
With her chest out she looked at each boob with and inspecting eye, then grabbed them both. A sudden image of Naruto's smiling face entered her head. "I wonder whether or not he likes girls with C-cups." She said to herself as she gave her breast another experimental squeeze. Then she remembered the girl Naruto that was with, Larxene, her bust size was around C as well if not slightly bigger than Haku's.
She then heard the screech of Tomo on the towel rack. It was like the bird was bashing her for her dirty thoughts that they both knew she was thinking. "Oh can it Tomo." She said as she slid open the glass door of the huge walk in shower. She turned on the water, warm.
She leaned over onto the wall. Now was her time to think. 'Zabuza-sama is going crazy. What can I do. If I don't help him now he's going to get himself killed. But what can I do?'
She stood like this for a few seconds letting the sounds of running water sooth her. What could she do to get rid of that mark of his forehead? Killing him was out of the question, and even if killing him wasn't as ludicrous as it sounded how could she? The guy was a basic war machine, she couldn't hold a candle to Zabuza right now.
Then it hit her, that guy. That person from the Saiki, Marlucia! It was him who did this to Zabuza, it was all because of him. He was the problem and he was the one that needed to die. She knew who needed to be killed, the question was....how was she supposed to kill him? If he could give Zabuza this much power than imagine the type of power he must have had...but still he was the one who had to die. She would make it a goal of hers to get rid of him.....or die trying. (50 cent sucks)
She stood up and faced the water head on and let it run along her face, she closed her eyes. This life was a life that she didn't like, but since she was with Zabuza-sama she could bear it. She had always wanted a more...stable life but staying with Zabuza didn't allow for that.
Her eyes snapped open. "I can still have that type of life..." she then thought about the offer that Naruto-ku-....Naruto had presented to her. What if.....she took it? Surely that meant a better life, but what about Zabuza-sama. She wanted to go but she didn't want to go without Zabuza.
'I don't know how I'm going to save Zabuza-sama.' She thought to herself. 'By what I've seen Marlucia isn't interested in Zabuza-sama, he wants something else. And it must have something to do with that copy ninja, what was his name....Kaka....kahashi, arashi....no no.....um Kakashi!' Haku let out a mental gasp. 'Marlucia is after Kakashi...that must be it, he must want his sharingan.' She didn't really no much of Kakashi, hell to say the least she barely knew anything about the man, but what she did know was that he was THE copy nin; the non-uchiha that possessed the sharingan. How he did, she would never know.....or never care.
That was what she had to do, find Kakashi..... she found him and she found the answer....according to her theory. Letting the water hit her for the final five minutes, she turned off the faucet and stepped out and grabbed her battle kimono which she had neatly folded on the toilet seat. She slipped them on, not before re-taping her chest with bandages, and went over to the balcony and opened the door. Tomo flew through and landed on the rail, she too stood on the rail. She took out from the inner pocket of the kimono her white hunter nin mask and slipped it on.
"Keep up, eh Tomo?" The falcon just dipped it's head and screeched loudly, Haku then jumped off the rail into the nighttime sky quickly followed by Tomo. The darkness shrouded her from view as her and her bird were gone in pursuit of Hatake Kakashi, the copy nin.
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A lone silver-haired man stood on top of a platform, surrounded by a mob of people. That man was Kakashi and the mob were ninja who Kakashi had gathered up in hoped of formulating a plan, just in case Zabuza was not defeated. He was in a heavily lighted area that was filled with the incandescence of street lights and random lanterns.
He pinched his nose, perturbed by the many yells and shouts of the other nin.
"Who the fuck are you come here and try to lead us?"
"Yeah, fuck off you one-eyed prick! And while you're at it get down from that platform."
Honestly Kakashi was getting fed up with all these rude comments and what annoyed him even more was that they were made by mostly Chuunin and New Jounin. Some of the older Jounin in the crowd just stood there, they knew who he was.
"Shut up...all of you!" Kakashi yelled out making his voice boom out promptly silencing everyone. "You're ninja for Kami's sake, shut the hell up and act like it! Now I guessing that you al heard that announcement made in the center of this town yesterday."
"Shut the hell up." Yelled some one from all the way in the back of the crowd, obviously a coward. Kakashi decided to leave it on un addressed.
"Anyway..I gathered you all here to ask you this one question: who is willing to fight with that man? There was no reply... "anyone...anyone at all?"
Another voice sounded in the background. "Why don't you fight him you jerk?!"
"Because I already did, twice and I'm going to do it again." This comment caused a series of murmurs and 'no ways' to occur in the crowd. It seemed like the majority of the nin didn't realize who he was. "Good, now like I was saying; who alongside me, is willing to go up against Momochi Zabuza?" This comment caused a series of gasps to occur.
"What the demon of the mist? Hell no nobody who's in their right mind would want to go up against him!"
"I would, and you should too if you're not cowards!" Suddenly Kakashi felt a presence appear next to him, he turned around to see a white mask.
"You...!"
The masked person raised their hands up in defense, it was that same masked hunter-nin who took Zabuza away last time. "I mean you no harm....Hatake-san." The person knelt down. "But I'm am in dire need of your assistance."
"Hatake.." said a voice from the crowd," you mean Hatake Kakashi? The copy-cat ninja...oh shit sorry, I didn't know who you were!" This made everyone else nod in agreement and add in their own personal apologies. Kakashi waved it off and turned back to the masked nin.
"Anyway what's this about my help. You attacked me so why should I?"
"Because..I think I know how to get Zabuza to go back to normal." Kakashi raised an eyebrow.
"Fine let's go..somewhere else......" He turned to the mob of shinobi. "Uh.....never mind...your assistance will no longer be needed." He scratched his head sheepishly before turning back and disappearing along with the hunter-nin.
They reappeared on top of a building, about a mile from where the mob was. It was still within eyesight however, as Kakashi could still see the ninja all beginning to walk away, they looked like tiny ants.
He turned to the hunter-nin. "First off, who are you and who are you to Momochi?"
The hunter-nin sighed heavily. "M-My name is Haku, I'm a Hunter nin and am originally from Kirigakure no Sato."
"Fine, you know who I am already so tell me...what's this plan of yours...oh and what's up with the bird." Kakashi said, as Tomo had just landed on Haku's shoulder without her so much as glancing at it.
"Oh...her name is Tomo, she's my pet falcon...she's not dangerous. But going on to more pressing matters, I think I know how to get Zabuza-sama back to normal. You may not know this but the reason for Zabuza's transformation is-"
Kakashi cut her off. "-Is because of a man named Marlucia Zerbast a member of a group of collectors called the Saiki. Zabuza called him and his current form is the end result."
"Okay then I guess that you do know. But my theory is that If we defeat Marlucia then Zabuza will return to normal, I think the only reason Marlucia's here is because he's after you...more specifically your sharingan."
Kakashi's eyes widened, but then settled down as he chuckled. They stood face to face to each other. "No no, you're only half right... he Is after a kekkei genkai, specifically a doujutsu." That information made Haku feel a little better, she knew that Marlucia wasn't after her, seeing as how her kekkei genkai wasn't a doujutsu. Then if not her and not Kakashi...then there was only one other person left. "He's going after the kekkei genkai of one of my students." Kakashi said.
"Naruto.." Haku said in a low whisper.
"What was that?" Kakashi asked.
"Nothing, so who's this student of yours?"
"His name is Naruto Uzumaki, he's the real objective here. Marlucia is using Zabuza as a puppet in order to get to Naruto. Rest assure Zabuza had free will but deep deep down it's real Marlucia who is pulling the strings, he's the one in control right now."
"Hm...then that means, if we must defeat Marlucia then we first have to lure him out, but right now Naruto is the only type of bait that is available."
"Actually no Naruto is currently incapacitated at the moment, and until Zabuza looses that weird chakra Naruto cannot by any means be around Zabuza."
"So how can one lure Marlucia out? Without Naruto I doubt that Marlucia's going to come out." Haku crossed her arms and turned, her mask being instantly illuminated by a pale moonlight.
"Naruto's our only option." Kakashi said.
"What will happen if Naruto get's to close?"
"He runs the risk of going insane, when Zabuza showed up in town earlier today, Naruto practically went berserk and after that he shut down. I can't tell you the reason why so don't ask."
Damn, he knew exactly what she was going to ask.... oh well on to the next question. "Ok then if Naruto is on the battlefield and he goes insane, at that moment, I'd guess that Marlucia would come out and try to take Naruto away."
"My thoughts exactly-" Kakashi said and placed one hand in his pocket, "-If he's smart then he would have obviously planned to take Naruto when he was most vulnerable, and that's when Zabuza steps in. That weird chakra of his is the key to Naruto's vulnerability, obviously distance is a factor as well but that's not needs to be focused on. It'll be stretch but if we can lure out Marlucia out and defeat him right there then Zabuza's mark will disappear and along with that his demon-like chakra, thus curing Naruto of his insanity."
"Yeah that makes sense."
"Hey, why is it that you are so interested in helping us?" Kakashi suddenly asked bringing his gaze onto Haku.
That one caught her off guard, she really wasn't expecting him to ask that type of question. Haku sayed silent for a moment and then said. "Because there IS a bounty on his head and I doubt that I'll be able to bring him in if I fight him in that state. This isn't for your sake but for my own."
"Fine...that seems like a believable reason."
"Good, then where shall this take place?" Haku asked in a very professional tone.
"At the unfinished bridge near the edge of town." Haku nodded. "It'll take place tomorrow by noon." Of course Haku already knew when it was going to happen.
"Fine, then I'll meet at the bridge tomorrow, when you see me do not acknowledge me, I'm just the hunter-nin who was tracking down Zabuza." Kakashi nodded and in a flash of mist Haku was gone.
Kakashi then sighed. "Oh boy this is going to be one hell of a fight." He then jumped off the roof heading back to Tazuna's household.
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"Ahhhh....I-I'm.....s-sorry...Larxene-san, I-I didn't ...m-m-mean too! It won't happen again." Sakura said as she was back up into the wall by Larxene.
"Oh really, what exactly was your reason for walking in there...huh?"
Sakura looked to her left then to her right, and clenched her teeth. "I just wanted to check up on him...and see why Kakashi told us not to go in there." She said nervously, the chuckled a bit.
"Hmph, I don't believe you I'll let you go for now but if you ever mention anything about what you saw to anyone, then your done for!"
Sakura violently shook her head up and down in agreement. "Y-Yeah you're right, I won't say anything and I'm sorry that I walked in on you...I didn't realize that you and Naruto were....." she blushed. "-in the middle of something."
"We weren't in the middle of anything!" Sakura cringed out of fear and nodded her head again. The pink-haired girl then placed her hands together in an apologetic way.
"Sorry." Larxene scoffed and turned away from Sakura, leaving the girl to slid down the wall petrified. It was not until Larxene had disappeared from view did Sasuke walk down the hall to see Sakura in her current state.
"What's up with you?" He said with his hands in his pockets, Sakura looked up at him, her eyes as big as basketballs. She was googly eyed and whimpering.
"Sasuke-kun." He raised an eyebrow. "I'm scared!" She then lunged for Sasuke but fell when he moved out the way. "Sasuke-kun" She then dashed at him.
"Hey...hey, what are you doing, ahhh get away!" Sasuke said as he ran down the hall, followed by Sakura.
"Sasuke-kun help me...Naruto's girlfriend is crazy!"
"If you need help then why are you chasing me?" He yelled while turning the corner. Sakura followed after him but when she turned the corner she came face to face once again with Larxene, Sasuke was already down the hall. Larxene's arms were folded and her eyebrow twitched rapidly.
"You said I was Naruto's...what."
"Heh...I said...." Sakura then spun around and sprinted back around he corner, but she once again came face to face with Larxene. 'My Kami this girl's fast!'
"Now like I was saying before.... what did you just say? As a matter of fact don't tell me, just run." Sakura just nodded dumbly and headed off in the opposite direction. Just turned around and walked the other way and went down the stairs leading to the kitchen. There she saw Kakashi sitting down, leaning back in his seat. He looked pretty tired.
"Kakashi-san, any luck with gathering shinobi?" He tilted his head forward lazily, and shook his head.
"Nope... it seems like the ninja here are all cowards."
"No luck huh?"
"No.. but I did run into an interesting character while in town. A hunter nin, she said she wanted to join with us in trying to defeat Zabuza. But She discovered that it wasn't Zabuza that we need to defeat but it is in fact Marlucia who needs to be killed. That way we can get Zabuza out of that form and she can take him in for the bounty on his head."
Larxene leaned on the table Kakashi was sitting by. "But I know how Marlucia is, he's not the type of person to just be there at the start of a fight, he bee the one to wait until everybody is at their most vulnerable point, then catch them off guard and take what he wants and just leave."
"Yeah, we both guessed the same, so in order to kill Marlucia we need to lure him out and in order to do that we need bait."
"And what exactly is the bait.....?" Larxene said fearing the worst.
Kakashi sighed but sat in his seat and rested his elbows on the table. "Unfortunately we don't have another choice....we need to use........Naruto." Larxene's eyes widened, what was Kakashi thinking, they couldn't use Naruto as bait!
"That's insane, almost as insane as Naruto will be if he gets anywhere near Zabuza. Have you forgotten that Zabuza's also going to be on there?"
Kakashi shook his head. "No I didn't, and as crazy as it sounds Naruto is the only option we've got here. Look Marlucia's after Naruto, that we already know and you yourself already said it that Marlucia's the type of person who strikes when someone is at their most vulnerable point. Well if he sees Naruto going crazy then he'll obviously come and try to take him away."
It made sense, but the thought of seeing Naruto like that again was just a little bit too much for her. "I know but that's still not a good idea." Kakashi shook his head.
"It's the only idea."
"No it's not......instead of Naruto send me out there. They think I'm dead and I'm sure that Marlucia will try to kill me if he sees that I'm alive."
"And what if he does kill you, if he wants to then he will kill you. And then what...it's just me, that hunter-nin, and an insane Naruto."
"I know but....what if Naruto actually ends up going permanently insane?" Larxene then sighed.
"Do worry...he won't and the plan will work we just need to carry this out with expert precision."
"It won't work..."
"Hm....what?"
"It won't work....I don't think you know how strong Marlucia is..." Then Kakashi chuckled.
"No I don't think you know how strong I am." He gave her a disarming eye smile and then stood up and began to walk away.
"B-But...what about Naruto?" Kakashi stopped. "What about him, how do you think it's going to be like for him?"
"I'm afraid....that I can't answer that Larxene-san." He then continued on to go upstairs and into his room in order to get some sleep.
"Heartless bastard." Larxene said before she too walked upstairs. On the way to her new room she past Naruto's room which was her old one. She cracked open the door and poked her head inside. "You better be ready for tomorrow you perv." She whispered. Naruto slightly shifted but soon he remained still.
Larxene then closed the door and went to her own respective room.
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(Mindscape)
"Hey Kyuubi....... what was I like when I went insane?" Naruto and Kyuubi sat in two comfortable plush chairs decorated with crimson linen. They were now in what Kyuubi labeled as his room in Naruto's mind. It was the same room Naruto had come to after his fight with Marlucia.
"Damn...what you were like....well you were crazy for one."
"Oh funny, really give me some detail."
"Alright, well your mind was extremely chaotic at that moment. You wanted to fight, basically that insanity turned you into a basic fighting machine. Plus you could stop laughing! I mean Kami, how much can one dude laugh. You were like a hyena out there."
"Really....hm, everything just went black for me, it was like I floating around in nothing but darkness." He shifted around in his seat and stared at the fireplace directly to his left and Kyuubi's right.
"So how did you like the hormone upgrade I gave you?"
Naruto growled and flicked a kunai at Kyuubi's head, hitting him directly on the forehead. "That was not funny in the least bit you asshole."
With a grunt Kyuubi pulled the blade out of his forehead. "Ow...damn you didn't really have to do that did you?"
"Yeah I did." Naruto watched as the wound on Kyuubi's head simply regenerated, new skin and bone replacing old skin and bone. "If ony that wound was permanent."
"Oh you don't really mean that."
"Fuck yeah I do! But still it was pretty fun to see that look on Larxene's face when I grabbed her." He chuckled a bit. Kyuubi suddenly sat up.
"UH-OH what's this....? Did Naruto-kun actually like touching Lar-chan...does he actually like her? Then it seems that I didn't even have to butt in after all!"
Naruto cocked his head to the side. "Tch, don't get your hopes up you perv."
Kyuubi just chuckled loudly like Naruto had just made a joke. "I'm not a perv, I'm just heavily concerned with how you rebuild the Namikaze clan."
"Tch, yeah like I said you're a perv." Naruto said. His expression then got serious. "But Kyuubi, seriously, if I go insane again I want you to retain my memories for me and show them to me just in case I forget."
"Why..?" Kyuubi asked.
"Simple..." Naruto said, "-...because I want to know what it's like." Kyuubi gave Naruto a look that made the blond boy shift in his seat. "What...what the hell are you looking at?" Kyuubi just shook his head and smiled.
"Damn you know I don't know how you can say such things so easily. So let me get this straight you want to know what it's like to be insane?"
"Correct, you hit the nail right on the head. I want to know."
"You know I'm just going to stop right here and not tell you how weird that is."
"Hey what may be wierd for you can be opportunity for me." Naruto responded.
"What type of opportunity can arrive in a scenario like that, your going to be fucking insane." Kyuubi said. "But whatever, I'll do it if you seriously want to figure out what it's really like." He snapped his fingers and seemingly from nowhere a bottle of vodka appeared. He took a deep swig. With a satisfied grunt he said, "when you come back here again come to your memory banks and that's where you'll find the memories of your insanity."
"Glad you could help me out Kyuubi." Naruto said while standing up to leave.
"Yeah yeah, just get out, I want to go to sleep now."
"Fine." He said as he opened the door. "I wonder what's going to happen tomorrow..eh Kyuubi?" He laughed as Kyuubi just waved him off.
Naruto wondered though, why did he want to feel insanity, why did he want to know what inner chaos was like? To Naruto's surprise he was immensly aroused at the concept of feeling literal madness. But All he could do was wait, and who knew maybe he would go looking for Zabuza tomorrow?
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Yes I'm done with chapter ten. I'm kind of bouncy right now since it's new years eve today. Let me tell you that this was THE most annoying chapter to write! Ahh.....seriously this chapter's about as pulled out the ass as humanly possible. I can tell you how much random shit I was just throwing in this, like the whole Haku-Kakashi interaction was complete bullshit! It literally took me ten minutes to come up with that one. I can honestly say that for this chapter I was making a whole lot of crap up as I went....then wham bam, this is the result. Tell me how I did and don't be afraid to be brutally honest.
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Summary:On the day of sealing a Different Aftermath took place in order to prevent a future of desurction. Now with his family, bloodline, and his partner the Kyuubi Naruto will face off against his sworn enemy...His Brother. Naruto/Hinata Harem NarutoxBleach cross
Naruto - Fiction Rated: M - English - Adventure/General - Chapters: 5 - Words: 27,129 - Reviews: 31 - Updated: 12-25-08 - Published: 5-17-08
This guy had a great story going on here, but the problem is that it's not getting that much publicty. Damn...so I want you to go onto his story page...because he's badass. And here's the thing he's a better author than I am, he has not one but two stories with more review counts than this one so check out this story. But don't forget who you're loyal to...if you stop reading my story I'll........never mind.
Second one: The New Hokage Of Konoha:By Narutak
Summary:When Naruto comes back to the village he tells Tsunade he wants to become hokage but she says he has to fight her again so read the book and figure out what happens in the will be surprised to see a character in my story.
Naruto - Fiction Rated: T - English - General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 845 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 12-18-08 - Published: 12-18-08
He's pretty new at the whole fanfic thing and he's only eleven years old. As you can see the story is pretty staightforward so you don't have to ask what its about. He's not getting that many reviews so I decided to help him out. Go to his story page and tell him what you think, and like you do with me try to be brutally honest but not to the point that your reviews become insults. He's only a kid!
Ok that's all I wanted to say and Happy New Year!
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