Journey to top them all-Kanto Arc

by StoryGuy960

Ash is starting his journey a little later in life and this version is much more intelligent and starts with a new pokemon besides Pikachu. Smart Ash who is much more mature than the anime and he is going to catch a variety of pokemon. My first fic so give me your opinion He is going to be traveling solo except for his pokemon and some pokemon will be a little more custom.

10. Review Corner

Review Corner

Hey Guys, this is unfortunately not a chapter but I am working on the next one now too. I will be going over a lot of the most recent reviews and give some shout outs to the more positive ones I've gotten and try to address the ones that were negative.

You guys should see some of them. A couple are pretty intense.

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Cucked Again (Funny name, I love it)- Thanks for the awesome review man. You're great. And I will continue to write to the best of my ability.

Pokemon Warrior 12345- I'm glad you like that he caught Abra and thank you for busting my ass for the spelling mistakes. I did go back and fix them when you pointed them out. Some writers would get mad at that but I actually appreciate the notification of a mistake. I'm glad that you did. Point out any others that you might see.

Armorshippingfan- Thank you for sticking with the story. You were the first to review and you've read each chapter and told me what you think about each chapter. I'm glad that you like the story and I'll do something for you. Tell me what your favorite non-legendary pokemon and I will try to work it into the story for him to maybe catch if he hasn't already.

NinjaFang1331- Thanks for reading the story man. I'm glad you are enjoying it. I like how you have a review for every chapter.

Thor94- Thanks for reading the story and I am sorry that you don't agree with some things in the Ajay chapter. I understand that he's different in the anime but I personally never like him at all. He was much too cocky for my liking and just rubbed me the wrong way. So, I changed it from the anime to reflect the fact that I do not like Ajay. Sorry you do not agree and I hope the rest of the story is better for you.

Most Recent Guest Review on Chapter One- Holy Shit. I'm sorry that you don't like the fact that he didn't get one of the starters at the beginning of the story but your reaction was a little over the top. I know you will likely never see this due to the fact that you've declared that you will not go any further and that the story is "Fucking stupid" (Direct Quote) due to the fact that I didn't do it your way. Goodbye and good riddance.

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So there's the review Corner, tell me any ideas you guys have and any comment you have for me. I should have the next actual chapter out within a couple days.