Chapter 10
(Christmas Special: Part Two)
Early Morning on Christmas Day. Maria and Mack exchanging Gifts, People Caroling to others, and the Makeo Family ready to open gifts...except Alex. Lillian came downstairs last and shook her head. "He is really crying about the gift. Maybe we should just open ours for now?" Takara offered, still sadden from midnight. Parth sighed and they continued with the gift opening. Takara already did hers and rushed upstairs again with Alex's gift. She opened his door and asked quietly "Are you awake? I came to give you your gift." but Alex grunted. He turned over and replied "Let me see." sitting up. He opened her gift to him, picking up the last Issue of Law of Mahna. "I can't believe it's almost over. And I enjoyed the series." Takara commented, looking at Alex's straight face. He put it down and said "Thanks a lot." and placed his head back down on the pillow. "Alex? Please come downstairs? I want to spend Christmas with you...Or was I a naughty girl this year for Santa?" she said in a sad tone. He shook his head and said "How about we go for a walk in the snow today? Will that work?" getting his shirt on.
"Okay mom. Alex is taking a walk with me. Sorry we can't stay." Takara yelled out as she got her snow gloves. She picked up her ear muffs but then felt Charlie on her hair. He was wearing a hand made sweater from Lillian to come with her. Alex then took Takara's hand and walked outside, Charlie on her head. Charlie squeaked and shook from the cold, then Takara put him in her coat to keep him warm. "Say Takara? I'm sorry for acting so stupid. It was just hairpins after all." Alex's tone was lightening up and much happier. "Good. Now you just smile and walk with me." Takara grinned and walked along. Takara brushed her hands along the railings covered in snow and looking out at the beach. She noticed a certain area having two snow forts across from one another, children having a snowball fight with them. "That looks fun. Let's play with them Alex!" she said with joy, running to one of the forts. Alex heading to the other one.
"Okay mister. We have to grab that red flag and bring it back here to win. If you are hit by a snowball, you have to come back to the base and wait ten seconds. If you are hit while carrying the flag, you drop it and come back." one boy was explaining while packing snow. Alex felt confident with a simple task. He grabbed one snowball and dashed out to the other side. He was dodging the snow with ease and snatched the flag. Alex was almost home free, till he was hit in the back. He looked behind him after dropping the flag and noticed Takara with a smile and a few snowballs hovering around her. "I thought it was just arm throwing!" He yelled with playful tone. Takara responded "Well you know I am half Gardevoir! I have no real psychical strength!" throwing another at his chest. "Now you sit out for twenty seconds!" she laughed.
The fight lasted for about thirty minutes till the kids were called in for lunch. The winner was Takara's Team. They teased and taunted each other while making a pass by Maria's home. They pinged in at her gate and were escorted inside. Maria ran down the stairs and hugged Takara with a smile. "Hey Takara! How was Christmas for you? Where are the pins?" she asked them. Takara pulled away and explained "The pins broke cause Alex slipped on the ice.". Maria felt bad and offered to give him the money back, but they denied. "Hey, why not join me and Mack in the new Media Room he help set up?" She offered but Takara declined. "We only wanted to check in. You two spend the time alone." a grin on her face as she walked out the door.
The two went back home around Dinner time and sat down to eat. A very nice meal indeed. Then they relaxed in the T.V room before Parth explained that he was going to take Lillian to a hotel in Jubilife City for three days. Leaving Takara and Alex alone. Takara had many plans to spend time with him, but Alex was tired. "Alex? Are you going to keep me company?" She asked, worried. Alex shook his head "I am sorry. I am so worn out from the snowball fight and walking around the city. Tomorrow, we can go shopping." Walking upstairs and crashing on his bed. He looked at the ceiling of his room and thought to himself. "I am so sore. But I can finally relax. I just hope Takara is fine.". Soon, a knock came on his door. "Alex. I want to give you your present." She said on the other side. Alex raised an eyebrow. "Wasn't the Manga my gift?" he questioned as he opened to Takara wearing a Santa outfit and blushing. "N-no. This is the true gift." she fumbled a bit with her words, walking up to Alex. He was speechless. Alex backed up and fell backwards on his bed, Takara giving a couple kisses. "Takara! I- We- but-" Takara shushed him, with some sort of longing in her eyes. "Alex. I am not asking for that. I just want you to...Please me." her face hiding in his chest. "Come again?"
Takara got up and spread herself on his bed for him, tilting her knees inward. "Play with me...Alex." She said, embarrassingly. Alex smiled and said "Sit on my lap." bringing Takara over to him. She sat on his lap and relaxed on his chest. Alex held her in place with one arm and used his free hand to begin playing with her chest in a smooth motion. Takara began to shudder and bit her lower lip. "Are you truly sensitive? Then how about this?" Alex grinned, pinching her nipple through the shirt. She reacted with a shriek as her breathing became heavy. "A-a-alex..." She tried to say, biting her finger and giving some squeaks. Alex let up and moved his other hand down a bit more, lifting the bottom of the skirt and feeling her panties. The second he touched her, she started to breath and pant. Alex could feel her panties already wet and said in her ear. "Are you this wet already?" kissing the side of her neck. "S-shut up..." Takara could barely say anything while Alex moved the panty to the side, sliding one finger into her slot and slowly thrusting it in and out of her. Takara's body began to quiver as she placed a gentle hand between her legs. Suddenly, Alex moved her lightly on his bed on her back. He slowly unstrung her top and removed her panties. "Alex?" Takara panted with wide eyes. He then opened her vagina and started to eat away. She arced her back and was yelling in pleasure, screaming his name. "Takara. You taste just like how you look...Milky and Sweet." Alex whispered and continued to lick her down there. Takara was now reaching the limit, Biting the tip of her finger and with one loud yell she climaxed and collapsed on his bed.
Takara was placed in Alex's bed as he put on his sweat pants to sleep in. As he was about to enter his side, he noticed a box on the night table with a letter that read "To you to give to Takara Makeo. You have been a good boy this year." with no name. He opened the gift and to his amazement, the hairpins were just as they were before they broke. He looked up at the window and quietly said "It couldn't be..." before hearing a faint "Ho, Ho, Ho!". He slipped into bed and pulled Takara close to him. "Guess 'He' saved my ass. I owe the Fat Guy one." Alex thought and slightly kissed Takara's lips once again. She then muttered in her sleep "That's my...Poky, Alex." as Alex grinned and fell into his dream world.
Merry Christmas and remember:
No matter what gift you give to the person you love,
The true gift is being there at his or her side,
Through Thick and Thin,
And even in the end.
Your lover is Priceless and should be Cherished.
Commentary for the fans about my past Entries:
Oh god, Looking back at what I started with...i was so Stupid! That and I was a 14 year old who was just trying to kill time in life between real life, Games and whatever else. In the beginning, Parth was going to be a normal trainer and finds Lillian beat up in the wild. Then as I went with that Idea, I though it felt a bit too much like "Chobits" where Chi was found wrapped up with the trash and was taken home.
Looking as how each character talked I found it confusing now more than ever. Plus my spelling was Atrocious, I though I was looking at a 5th grade report.
Parth's past was not explained to Great Detail so I went back and added more to the old past.
He was a Trainer and Parth's mother (still nameless) did not like her husband being a trainer at all. When she had Parth, his Father tried to come visit and be with him, but with the world so full of Pokemon, he chased after his dream and was never heard from again. The letter he would receive later should of said "Do not worry about being a trainer son. It's not easy and you are always away from the ones you love. Keep living with your mother and keep her happy." or along the lines.
When some more drama action came, I was getting lazy and used stupid words. Also I felt as if I should of introduced Sara a bit better from the start instead. The 7th chapter made no scene at all and I though of adding Police walking in and then seeing Lillian a good reason to run instead of some trainer. So that was my bad.
As I looked through the other chapters, I saw near the end it was getting better but still had that age 14 format. The last chapter could have been better and the first part is begging for a remake that may never come due to other series.
The Second chapter however, Bigger step and made Lillian look a bit more 'Sexual Deviant' than 'Helpless Princess'. It made me shake my head at the direction she was going and it was hard to change Mid chapter. I then introduced more on Derek and his Real Role but I wish I explained WHY he was in Team Rocket in the first place. Well I could of added that he was just a normal grunt at first before finding Lillian as a Ralts Injured by Murkrows. She would then be tested as soon as she reached her Kirlia era and so on. I also feel bad that the Frostlass I introduced (Who is a lesbian for some reason) was meaningless at first but then remembered she is a one time character like in some shows. Example: There are some one time characters in Trigun and we never hear them again but we see them. I apologized for this Mind Fuck and making some people go "What happened to the Frostlass?"
Near the end of the second Fiction, I heard people hated how I ended on a dark note with Parth in Jail for a crime that went Guilty instead of Plea of Insanity. Yes, He snapped and killed Two Criminals but I tried and explained that the Jury was corrupted with money and he served years he was never meant to serve at all. I was going to add an even darker tone where Lillian did get raped but I though and said "Why hurt her even more? She just had a baby and having her getting defiled in front of Parth would lead to an even worse outburst". So now you have his bloody Pummel image.
The two should have been in the Third person but I was trying something new in my life so It was an experience.
And for my Top 3 scenes:
3: The Sniping Wedding (When they get close enough, they were both shot down and fell into each others arms. That is what I wanted to imagine)
2: Lillian's Letter. (the Name of the story is in it and gives it a nice cliche ending to that area)
1: Alex laying the smack down on the old Maria. (I do not care what anyone says, a Man pushed to the point where he would say something like Alex said to Maria is scary and standing up to himself. Even if he bashed her with the truth about fifty times on the head and pierced her heart with Ten swords.)
But it's not the end! Oh there will be more. Will there be Drama? Will there be more Romance? only time will tell.